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Labyrinth of Labyrinths #1
Alloria
Perhaps the night they celebrated Alloria’s tenth birthday was not the correct time for Thomas and Bessy Merryweather to reveal that they were not actually her parents. Perhaps they should have told her years before how they discovered her in the cellar of their cottage, bare-footed and clutching under her arm a rag-doll she called Saphjrina. Perhaps they shouldn’t have hidden away for seven years the amulet she had around her neck, with the promise of gifting it back to her when she reached the age of ten. Had they told her sooner, had they told her when she was less spirited, she may not have ventured into the cellar with her friend Nat and discovered how the amulet opened up a mysterious labyrinth. Had they kept it from her altogether, their lives would not be in danger; their lives may not have, but the plight of an entire planet would have been.
449 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 1, 2013
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About the author
David Staniforth
8Ìýbooks221ÌýfollowersI’ve been inventing stories as far back as I can remember (mostly to keep me out of trouble), but began writing seriously after finishing an English studies BA as a mature student. My writing is influenced by so many things: a love of reading all genres; films; music; raising my two daughters; hill walking; and much, much more. I tend to take all I know, throw it into a setting and see what comes out.
My first four books were all fantasy, but then a new story entered my mind that insisted on being a psychological thriller. Just like raising children, a story insists on being what it was always meant to be: Characters will behave as they want, and plots will demand to go in a certain direction. All I do as an author is transfer their antics into writing and then release them into the world to see what readers make of them.
I have more fantasy tales to tell and more thrillers too. I can’t promise all readers that they will like my stories, but I can promise one thing: I will never publish anything that I haven’t thoroughly enjoyed myself.
My first four books were all fantasy, but then a new story entered my mind that insisted on being a psychological thriller. Just like raising children, a story insists on being what it was always meant to be: Characters will behave as they want, and plots will demand to go in a certain direction. All I do as an author is transfer their antics into writing and then release them into the world to see what readers make of them.
I have more fantasy tales to tell and more thrillers too. I can’t promise all readers that they will like my stories, but I can promise one thing: I will never publish anything that I haven’t thoroughly enjoyed myself.
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June 18, 2016
Thank you, David Staniforth, for gifting me a copy of Alloria in exchange for an unbiased review.
I am a diehard thriller fan. I could easily stick my head in the thriller section of the library and never emerge. On the other hand, I would hate to miss anything else out there that I might really like. For that reason, I am challenging myself to read a book from every genre to ensure myself that I am not unfairly condemning everything that is not a thriller. The most difficult tasks in completing my challenge are to get through a fantasy title and a dystopian book. These particular genres fill me with dread.
I picked Alloria as my fantasy read as it has a terrific cover (painted by the author himself), a great title, and the blurb sounded interesting. Much to my surprise I found myself absolutely captivated by this book! There is so much to like about it. Firstly, Mr. Staniforth is an elegant writer. His prose is lilting, melodious, poetic and so expressive. Oh, you might think his descriptive passages are tough to plow through. On the contrary, because his prose is clean. He paints a picture so clearly and so simply, yet so beautifully. I never felt dragged down while he set a scene.
Secondly, I loved, loved, loved the colorful characters, especially Ally, Nathan, and Bainberry. The villains are deplorable (which is good). I liked the way Mr. Staniforth infuses the story with gentle humor befitting his characters.
Thirdly, the plot is nicely complex and is both fascinating and heartfelt. The fantasy scenes are bewitching. There are strong elements of action, adventure, and intrigue, and even a love story. The love story is that of Ally and her family and friends. In fact, Ally’s magical skills are driven by love, a very endearing plot point. There is also plenty of high suspense and multiple thriller-worthy scenes that had me on the edge of my chair. The last half of the book was downright unputdownable, and I could not fly through the pages fast enough.
What is there not to like? Well, I was not always sure what world Ally was in during her extensive travels, but I chalk this up to the genre, and it really did not bother me that much.
I am highly satisfied with how the book ends, though not all plot points are neatly tied up with a bow. This is NOT a cliffhanger; I despise cliffhangers! What there is though is a clear opening for the adventures to continue, and that delights me.
Alloria is a real hidden gem. I strongly recommend it to all readers who love a good story, whether they think they like fantasy or not. I cannot wait for Alloria 2. And that’s the truth, Mr. Staniforth!
5 well-earned stars.
I am a diehard thriller fan. I could easily stick my head in the thriller section of the library and never emerge. On the other hand, I would hate to miss anything else out there that I might really like. For that reason, I am challenging myself to read a book from every genre to ensure myself that I am not unfairly condemning everything that is not a thriller. The most difficult tasks in completing my challenge are to get through a fantasy title and a dystopian book. These particular genres fill me with dread.
I picked Alloria as my fantasy read as it has a terrific cover (painted by the author himself), a great title, and the blurb sounded interesting. Much to my surprise I found myself absolutely captivated by this book! There is so much to like about it. Firstly, Mr. Staniforth is an elegant writer. His prose is lilting, melodious, poetic and so expressive. Oh, you might think his descriptive passages are tough to plow through. On the contrary, because his prose is clean. He paints a picture so clearly and so simply, yet so beautifully. I never felt dragged down while he set a scene.
Secondly, I loved, loved, loved the colorful characters, especially Ally, Nathan, and Bainberry. The villains are deplorable (which is good). I liked the way Mr. Staniforth infuses the story with gentle humor befitting his characters.
Thirdly, the plot is nicely complex and is both fascinating and heartfelt. The fantasy scenes are bewitching. There are strong elements of action, adventure, and intrigue, and even a love story. The love story is that of Ally and her family and friends. In fact, Ally’s magical skills are driven by love, a very endearing plot point. There is also plenty of high suspense and multiple thriller-worthy scenes that had me on the edge of my chair. The last half of the book was downright unputdownable, and I could not fly through the pages fast enough.
What is there not to like? Well, I was not always sure what world Ally was in during her extensive travels, but I chalk this up to the genre, and it really did not bother me that much.
I am highly satisfied with how the book ends, though not all plot points are neatly tied up with a bow. This is NOT a cliffhanger; I despise cliffhangers! What there is though is a clear opening for the adventures to continue, and that delights me.
Alloria is a real hidden gem. I strongly recommend it to all readers who love a good story, whether they think they like fantasy or not. I cannot wait for Alloria 2. And that’s the truth, Mr. Staniforth!
5 well-earned stars.
August 26, 2017
A nicely written, easy to read children's fantasy, it reminded me a little of . The simplicity of the dialogue and the age of the main characters aims it straight at children, but there is plenty in the book for adults as well.
I enjoyed the characters, the story and the idea of the Labyrinth. Well worth a read.
I enjoyed the characters, the story and the idea of the Labyrinth. Well worth a read.
December 10, 2015
Some people who know me know that I'm not someone who wanders into the fantasy genre, if ever. The occasional tale was read as a child but certainly nothing as a 'grown up' reader. With this knowledge I was set a challenge by friends to read this book and admittedly approached it with some trepidation.
So, in I went... and... I was pleasantly surprised by this book! Trust me, no one is more surprised than I am!! At first I struggled to get into the story as it seemed a bit of a slow start but as it progressed I found myself being drawn more and more into this fantasy tale, reading at many more opportunities than I was expecting to.
From the blurb we know that Alloria accidentally enters a labyrinth with her young friend, Nat. And then goes on a journey to try and find her way back to her parents. What follows is a story of discovery, enchantment, magical powers, and a quest like adventure through different lands. I felt that the story had influences of Tokein, Blyton and even Dickens as it ventured through the emotional journey Alloria found herself on. For me, the absolute strength of the book are the characters. Beautifully depicted and drawn to life as Alloria and Nat are we also meet fellow leads Ymarid and Bainbury. Quite a large cast of characters are present and all are fully fleshed out and wonderfully described from the lesser, walk on parts to the dark and sinister baddies. Such is the power of the descriptiveness I was actually revolted by a couple of them, Glebester being the main one that springs to mind!. Yuucckk!!!
Whilst Alloria is probably aimed at a younger market it works very well as an adult read. It's not too deeply entrenched in fantasy land with names impossible to pronounce and placement descriptions that leaves the mind boggling! If anything reading this actually made me appreciate how difficult it must be to write within this genre. To make something believable out of 'totally made up' with no parameters and restrictions must be incredibly challenging making this a more appreciative read as it was pulled off exceedingly well here.
I was more than impressed with Alloria as a fantasy read. The writing is of a high standard; engaging, thrilling without losing pace of flow in the storytelling. Would I read the follow up to this book as a non fantasy reader? Yes, I probably would and trust me that is a MAJOR achievement on the author's part for this crime fiction junkie.
My thanks goes to friends that recommended this book to me and I shall echo that recommendation to lovers and non lovers of fantasy alike. I would also like to thank the author for my copy too - for the brilliant storytelling and for taking me down a road I would never really have ventured down - if not for a little persuasion!
Take a punt folks, you won't be disappointed!
So, in I went... and... I was pleasantly surprised by this book! Trust me, no one is more surprised than I am!! At first I struggled to get into the story as it seemed a bit of a slow start but as it progressed I found myself being drawn more and more into this fantasy tale, reading at many more opportunities than I was expecting to.
From the blurb we know that Alloria accidentally enters a labyrinth with her young friend, Nat. And then goes on a journey to try and find her way back to her parents. What follows is a story of discovery, enchantment, magical powers, and a quest like adventure through different lands. I felt that the story had influences of Tokein, Blyton and even Dickens as it ventured through the emotional journey Alloria found herself on. For me, the absolute strength of the book are the characters. Beautifully depicted and drawn to life as Alloria and Nat are we also meet fellow leads Ymarid and Bainbury. Quite a large cast of characters are present and all are fully fleshed out and wonderfully described from the lesser, walk on parts to the dark and sinister baddies. Such is the power of the descriptiveness I was actually revolted by a couple of them, Glebester being the main one that springs to mind!. Yuucckk!!!
Whilst Alloria is probably aimed at a younger market it works very well as an adult read. It's not too deeply entrenched in fantasy land with names impossible to pronounce and placement descriptions that leaves the mind boggling! If anything reading this actually made me appreciate how difficult it must be to write within this genre. To make something believable out of 'totally made up' with no parameters and restrictions must be incredibly challenging making this a more appreciative read as it was pulled off exceedingly well here.
I was more than impressed with Alloria as a fantasy read. The writing is of a high standard; engaging, thrilling without losing pace of flow in the storytelling. Would I read the follow up to this book as a non fantasy reader? Yes, I probably would and trust me that is a MAJOR achievement on the author's part for this crime fiction junkie.
My thanks goes to friends that recommended this book to me and I shall echo that recommendation to lovers and non lovers of fantasy alike. I would also like to thank the author for my copy too - for the brilliant storytelling and for taking me down a road I would never really have ventured down - if not for a little persuasion!
Take a punt folks, you won't be disappointed!
October 31, 2016
Dear reader,
Those who know me or have read any of my reviews on this forum will undoubtedly testify to me being a loyal and devoted historical romance,crime and mystery lover.
Indeed,I like nothing better than losing myself within the covers of books in these genres and will happily spend hours thus employed.
Therefore it will come as a huge surprise to see a review in the fantasy/adventure genre being penned by me!
Let me explain! When I was offered this book as a gift in return for an honest review,I admitted to the author,David Staniforth,that I wasn't a fantasy fan.
He openly acknowledged such but because a GR friend had read and loved it,I accepted the book,decided to read it with an open mind,while also having an 'opt out' clause, where we both agreed that I would put it aside if it wasn't to my taste.
Oh! What an adventure lay ahead!
This wondrous tale centres around Alloria,a ten year old child,who recently discovers that she is not the natural daughter of the parents who have reared her for the past seven years.
Gaining possession of the amulet she was found with so long ago,she and her friend Nathan discover a tunnel in the cellar that leads to another world,populated by witches,wizards,magical powers,potions and wonders the logical mind cannot fail to take issue with!
There they meet Bainberry,whose staunch support,loyalty and friendship see them navigate the perilous journey back to the only home Alloria has ever known.
On this torturous trek,we are privy to the bonds of friendship,the universal ties of kinship and the unmistakable love that unites people,be they blood related or imperfect strangers.
We learn of Alloria's parentage,and discover the mystical and magical powers she seemingly has over life and death itself,both in the other world and this new world that she is forced to dangerously and ponderously navigate.
Dear reader,this was a most beguiling tale!!
I was hooked from the first page,enraptured by the very fast paced,thrilling,angst filled, magical adventure that saw me navigating the treacherous journey along with the main characters!
I kid you not! I traversed the dangerous mountain trail,ate the disgusting stew,was privy to the dastardly plans being plotted by Yrion's self selected guardian and heaved a huge sigh of relief when ........
Well,to divulge further details would simply spoil the surprise,and yes,I was very much surprised at how much I loved this story!
David Staniforth is a master storyteller. He has that unique ability,that surely all authors crave,to create characters that you cannot fail to respond to.
Indeed,under his careful stewardship,you find yourself empathising with them,advising them on how best to free themselves from their latest bind and then happily celebrating their lucky escape from whatever peril lay before them!
This author has a beautiful way with words.
He takes his pen and with an undeniable eloquence,paints a highly descriptive visual picture,his words so carefully chosen that they cannot fail to delight the imagination of any reader,be they a die hard crime aficionado like me,or a fantasy enthusiast!
Highly recommended to readers of all genres!
My sincere thanks to David Staniforth for this gift!
Those who know me or have read any of my reviews on this forum will undoubtedly testify to me being a loyal and devoted historical romance,crime and mystery lover.
Indeed,I like nothing better than losing myself within the covers of books in these genres and will happily spend hours thus employed.
Therefore it will come as a huge surprise to see a review in the fantasy/adventure genre being penned by me!
Let me explain! When I was offered this book as a gift in return for an honest review,I admitted to the author,David Staniforth,that I wasn't a fantasy fan.
He openly acknowledged such but because a GR friend had read and loved it,I accepted the book,decided to read it with an open mind,while also having an 'opt out' clause, where we both agreed that I would put it aside if it wasn't to my taste.
Oh! What an adventure lay ahead!
This wondrous tale centres around Alloria,a ten year old child,who recently discovers that she is not the natural daughter of the parents who have reared her for the past seven years.
Gaining possession of the amulet she was found with so long ago,she and her friend Nathan discover a tunnel in the cellar that leads to another world,populated by witches,wizards,magical powers,potions and wonders the logical mind cannot fail to take issue with!
There they meet Bainberry,whose staunch support,loyalty and friendship see them navigate the perilous journey back to the only home Alloria has ever known.
On this torturous trek,we are privy to the bonds of friendship,the universal ties of kinship and the unmistakable love that unites people,be they blood related or imperfect strangers.
We learn of Alloria's parentage,and discover the mystical and magical powers she seemingly has over life and death itself,both in the other world and this new world that she is forced to dangerously and ponderously navigate.
Dear reader,this was a most beguiling tale!!
I was hooked from the first page,enraptured by the very fast paced,thrilling,angst filled, magical adventure that saw me navigating the treacherous journey along with the main characters!
I kid you not! I traversed the dangerous mountain trail,ate the disgusting stew,was privy to the dastardly plans being plotted by Yrion's self selected guardian and heaved a huge sigh of relief when ........
Well,to divulge further details would simply spoil the surprise,and yes,I was very much surprised at how much I loved this story!
David Staniforth is a master storyteller. He has that unique ability,that surely all authors crave,to create characters that you cannot fail to respond to.
Indeed,under his careful stewardship,you find yourself empathising with them,advising them on how best to free themselves from their latest bind and then happily celebrating their lucky escape from whatever peril lay before them!
This author has a beautiful way with words.
He takes his pen and with an undeniable eloquence,paints a highly descriptive visual picture,his words so carefully chosen that they cannot fail to delight the imagination of any reader,be they a die hard crime aficionado like me,or a fantasy enthusiast!
Highly recommended to readers of all genres!
My sincere thanks to David Staniforth for this gift!
May 2, 2015
Special thanks to David Staniforth for providing his novel, Alloria, in exchange for an honest review. I have read it in anticipation of beta reading his follow-up novel in the near future.
David Staniforth has written a fine cast of characters, a wonderful adventure, and a magical allegorical saga of friendship and commitment. You don’t read fantasy? Rules were made to be broken. Really.
A little bit C.S. Lewis, perhaps a little bit Tolkien, David Staniforth’s Alloria is a fantasy tale of a young girl, who on her tenth birthday discovers that she is not who she thought she was. Her mama and papa tell her that they found her in the cellar, and try as they did for many weeks to find where she came from, they were unable to learn where she came from, so they raised her and loved her as their own.
That girl, Alloria, and Nathan, her best friend, were exploring the cellar that same day and suddenly found themselves not in the cellar, but in a strange land. They met a man called Bainberry � “Bane� � and soon come to trust him despite his scarred appearance and enormous size. In fact, they trust him so much that when they return to Alloria’s home and find her papa seriously wounded and her mama gone, they go back to find Bane to help them.
So begins their adventure. There is much to learn for both Ally and Nat (Bane thinks Ally is calling him “gnat� � I love that!), and much of the journey is difficult. Along the way, the bonds of friendship and love grow stronger among the three as they become guardians for one another and feel each other’s pain.
The characters are written with care, affection, and lots of heart. I love Bane, and the children are great, especially because they develop and mature. There are bad guys too, and not only can we visualize them because of the precise descriptions we are given (particularly the slimy, despicable Glebester Reibnach), but we shudder at their presence because the evil they exude is palpable. As in the Harry Potter stories and many other books that appeal to both young and adult readers, there is a classic conflict between good versus evil.
What would a fantasy novel be without magic? Alloria has good magic, of course, and it has bad magic. Alloria learns that she has magical powers; what I thought was really marvelous was that Staniforth allows her to discover and harness her magic through her emotions of love, anger, and fear. She draws strength and courage from wooden figurines that Papa carved for her, and the magic force comes through the amulet that came to her from her birth father, the First Wizard.
There is also magic in Staniforth’s prose. His descriptions made me see, feel, and smell every bump in the road and hunger pang along the way. He has woven a beautiful, tender story about the love of parents for children, a leader for his people, and friends for one another. He had me under his spell from beginning to end, and I was sorry to come to the end, like waking up from a mystical dream.
Alloria may be an fantasy novel about a labyrinth, an epic journey to find one’s true home, but it also has lessons for any time, place, or genre: Don’t ever give up. Don’t judge a book by its cover (or a man by his appearance). Family. Loyalty. Honor. Love. Give fantasy a chance, especially Alloria.
5 Magic Stars!
David Staniforth has written a fine cast of characters, a wonderful adventure, and a magical allegorical saga of friendship and commitment. You don’t read fantasy? Rules were made to be broken. Really.
A little bit C.S. Lewis, perhaps a little bit Tolkien, David Staniforth’s Alloria is a fantasy tale of a young girl, who on her tenth birthday discovers that she is not who she thought she was. Her mama and papa tell her that they found her in the cellar, and try as they did for many weeks to find where she came from, they were unable to learn where she came from, so they raised her and loved her as their own.
That girl, Alloria, and Nathan, her best friend, were exploring the cellar that same day and suddenly found themselves not in the cellar, but in a strange land. They met a man called Bainberry � “Bane� � and soon come to trust him despite his scarred appearance and enormous size. In fact, they trust him so much that when they return to Alloria’s home and find her papa seriously wounded and her mama gone, they go back to find Bane to help them.
So begins their adventure. There is much to learn for both Ally and Nat (Bane thinks Ally is calling him “gnat� � I love that!), and much of the journey is difficult. Along the way, the bonds of friendship and love grow stronger among the three as they become guardians for one another and feel each other’s pain.
The characters are written with care, affection, and lots of heart. I love Bane, and the children are great, especially because they develop and mature. There are bad guys too, and not only can we visualize them because of the precise descriptions we are given (particularly the slimy, despicable Glebester Reibnach), but we shudder at their presence because the evil they exude is palpable. As in the Harry Potter stories and many other books that appeal to both young and adult readers, there is a classic conflict between good versus evil.
What would a fantasy novel be without magic? Alloria has good magic, of course, and it has bad magic. Alloria learns that she has magical powers; what I thought was really marvelous was that Staniforth allows her to discover and harness her magic through her emotions of love, anger, and fear. She draws strength and courage from wooden figurines that Papa carved for her, and the magic force comes through the amulet that came to her from her birth father, the First Wizard.
There is also magic in Staniforth’s prose. His descriptions made me see, feel, and smell every bump in the road and hunger pang along the way. He has woven a beautiful, tender story about the love of parents for children, a leader for his people, and friends for one another. He had me under his spell from beginning to end, and I was sorry to come to the end, like waking up from a mystical dream.
Alloria may be an fantasy novel about a labyrinth, an epic journey to find one’s true home, but it also has lessons for any time, place, or genre: Don’t ever give up. Don’t judge a book by its cover (or a man by his appearance). Family. Loyalty. Honor. Love. Give fantasy a chance, especially Alloria.
5 Magic Stars!
May 19, 2017
I loved this book and that's the truth 😂. It's 3:30 am right now I am going to be so tired but I had to finish this book. I don't want to spoil it. If you like fantasy full of magic and adventure this is the one. This book will haunt me for life and I know I'll read it again. Great news though the adventure isn't over. Best book I have read in years.
May 8, 2015
Thank you very much David M.Staniforth for giving me this amazing book to read in exchange of an honest review!
I give it 5 stars and i would've given it more if i could!
I was already predisposed toward this book, read a lot of good reviews about it, but i didn't expect that i'll love it this much!! It's easily the best book i read this year, and the best fantasy i ever read!
I enjoyed the story a lot, with many unbelievable adventures full of magic! The characters were fascinating, especially Nathian and Bainberry, this one is my favourite!! Even the evil characters were fascinating, so vivid!!
Many scenes were really touching and i felt like part of them!
and as the end drew close, i found myself holding my breath many times, waiting for what will happen next, imagining how it will all end!
It was really an outstanding fantasy, that made me feel the magic of a nice story :)
I wish we had such a Labyrinth, wouldn't that be just Great!!!
Well, i'm already waiting for the next book and the next adventure of Alloria and her friends :)
I give it 5 stars and i would've given it more if i could!
I was already predisposed toward this book, read a lot of good reviews about it, but i didn't expect that i'll love it this much!! It's easily the best book i read this year, and the best fantasy i ever read!
I enjoyed the story a lot, with many unbelievable adventures full of magic! The characters were fascinating, especially Nathian and Bainberry, this one is my favourite!! Even the evil characters were fascinating, so vivid!!
Many scenes were really touching and i felt like part of them!
and as the end drew close, i found myself holding my breath many times, waiting for what will happen next, imagining how it will all end!
It was really an outstanding fantasy, that made me feel the magic of a nice story :)
I wish we had such a Labyrinth, wouldn't that be just Great!!!
Well, i'm already waiting for the next book and the next adventure of Alloria and her friends :)
June 18, 2013
I come to the end of another Staniforth novel and find myself once more hopelessly in love with the characters and hoping for more.
Alloria is a beautifully rich novel that follows the title character, a young girl, and her friend and guardian, Nathan as they are unexpectedly thrown into another world � a world of magic and monsters and dark powers � and forced to undergo a perilous journey to return to the parents she loves, who are in mortal danger back home. They are aided by Bane, a character who could easily become a contender for my favourite fictional warrior.
This could so easily have been just that, a standard swords and sorcery book and been a good book for it. Instead Staniforth weaves in a much deeper emotional level to the story, as Alloria grapples with who she is and where she belongs. I also like the richness of the setting in this book. People from different districts had distinct dialects and customs and, despite being set in a world where magic is possible, it all felt very believable. For example at one point, a few weeks after having her long hair cut short Alloria puts a necklace on and automatically goes to sweep her hair back, before realising she doesn’t need to, and it brings her a moment of sadness. The small details like this one � knowing that a young girl would be sad about the loss of her long hair, the changing of dialects and accents and landscapes, that make this stand out from other fantasy novels I have read. Even during a Gutterwraith attack, or while battling dark powers it feels very real.
The relationship between the two children is beautifully written, as is the development of trust between the children and Bane. Even the “walk-on parts� were well-rounded, full characters, easy to fall in love with. I hope I’ll soon meet lots of them again. I think this may be the first in a series � there are one or two story arcs that I feel could be further explored, and the ending would suggest more to come (fingers crossed), but it stands nicely on its own and is well worth a read.
Alloria is a beautifully rich novel that follows the title character, a young girl, and her friend and guardian, Nathan as they are unexpectedly thrown into another world � a world of magic and monsters and dark powers � and forced to undergo a perilous journey to return to the parents she loves, who are in mortal danger back home. They are aided by Bane, a character who could easily become a contender for my favourite fictional warrior.
This could so easily have been just that, a standard swords and sorcery book and been a good book for it. Instead Staniforth weaves in a much deeper emotional level to the story, as Alloria grapples with who she is and where she belongs. I also like the richness of the setting in this book. People from different districts had distinct dialects and customs and, despite being set in a world where magic is possible, it all felt very believable. For example at one point, a few weeks after having her long hair cut short Alloria puts a necklace on and automatically goes to sweep her hair back, before realising she doesn’t need to, and it brings her a moment of sadness. The small details like this one � knowing that a young girl would be sad about the loss of her long hair, the changing of dialects and accents and landscapes, that make this stand out from other fantasy novels I have read. Even during a Gutterwraith attack, or while battling dark powers it feels very real.
The relationship between the two children is beautifully written, as is the development of trust between the children and Bane. Even the “walk-on parts� were well-rounded, full characters, easy to fall in love with. I hope I’ll soon meet lots of them again. I think this may be the first in a series � there are one or two story arcs that I feel could be further explored, and the ending would suggest more to come (fingers crossed), but it stands nicely on its own and is well worth a read.
July 23, 2014
Alloria, like all good fantasy novels, weaves its spell from the first few pages and draws the reader into the story. A lost child or children struggling to find their way back home has been the starting point for many stories but David Staniforth has succeeded in creating a new twist on this story and the plot races along. Alloria the eponymous heroine is a sassy and vivacious 10 year old who is at first slightly contemptuous her youthful companion,the older and more wordly wise Nathan, who tries to protect her as they travel through the strange new world they have somehow emerged into. Mysteries abound. Central to them all is the question "Who is Alloria ?" And what is the significance of the amulet that she carries having been given it by her presumed parents only hours before the story opens?
This is no lightweight story. It is many layered with some truly gross and malevolent characters snaking through the story. Magic too becomes increasingly significant as the story proceeds. Stanniforth encourages us to ponder what is the nature of magic and explores ideas of love as powerful magic. Although the story is brought to a satisfying close there is clearly much more to learn of Alloria and her family and companions. I hope that David Staniforth keeps his promise to the reader to tell us some more of Aloria's adventures.
This is a first novel, I believe and as such I was aware of some jarring notes in the story. I felt that the author had maybe not lived quite long enough with some of his characters to be certain of how to describe their responses or comments at times. Some characters were definitely under developed and this meant it was hard for the reader to really get inside their skin. But really these criticisms are minor compared with the overall impression.
David Staniforth invited me to read Alloria and write a review. I began the book enthusiastically enough but got distracted by other things and ended up reading piecemeal. Now I have finished it, however, I find I really want to read it properly.... For me.... Not for a promise. Having begun the book again today I find it to be MUCH better than I initially thought and am noticing all kinds of things I did not notice first time round. It is the sign , I think , of a good book that it will stand many re readings and remain fresh with new discoveries within.
Aimed at 9-10 year olds and up this novel should please fans of Philip Pullman, CS Lewis, Susan Cooper or Ursula LeGuin . In some ways the novel harks back to an earlier less sophisticated style of children's writing than seems to by typical of much of the YA fiction around. Alloria and Nathan are naive and innocent characters, willing to trust and take risks but also courageous and not blind or uncompassionate to the various sufferings they encounter along the way.
As childhood often seems to be under attack on many fronts I hope that Alloria can go some way to redressing the balance in favour of innocent fantasy with no hidden agenda attached.
This is no lightweight story. It is many layered with some truly gross and malevolent characters snaking through the story. Magic too becomes increasingly significant as the story proceeds. Stanniforth encourages us to ponder what is the nature of magic and explores ideas of love as powerful magic. Although the story is brought to a satisfying close there is clearly much more to learn of Alloria and her family and companions. I hope that David Staniforth keeps his promise to the reader to tell us some more of Aloria's adventures.
This is a first novel, I believe and as such I was aware of some jarring notes in the story. I felt that the author had maybe not lived quite long enough with some of his characters to be certain of how to describe their responses or comments at times. Some characters were definitely under developed and this meant it was hard for the reader to really get inside their skin. But really these criticisms are minor compared with the overall impression.
David Staniforth invited me to read Alloria and write a review. I began the book enthusiastically enough but got distracted by other things and ended up reading piecemeal. Now I have finished it, however, I find I really want to read it properly.... For me.... Not for a promise. Having begun the book again today I find it to be MUCH better than I initially thought and am noticing all kinds of things I did not notice first time round. It is the sign , I think , of a good book that it will stand many re readings and remain fresh with new discoveries within.
Aimed at 9-10 year olds and up this novel should please fans of Philip Pullman, CS Lewis, Susan Cooper or Ursula LeGuin . In some ways the novel harks back to an earlier less sophisticated style of children's writing than seems to by typical of much of the YA fiction around. Alloria and Nathan are naive and innocent characters, willing to trust and take risks but also courageous and not blind or uncompassionate to the various sufferings they encounter along the way.
As childhood often seems to be under attack on many fronts I hope that Alloria can go some way to redressing the balance in favour of innocent fantasy with no hidden agenda attached.
September 22, 2016
I have been dragging my heels reading this and now I am sorry I did. It was a wonderful story. At first I was put off by some of the names because one of the reasons I don't usually like fantasy as a genre is because I need to be able to visualize the setting (no problem here), and pronounce the names and places in my mind, That really changed when I wrote the author who is a friend on Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ and he gave me a heads-up on the names. I think one thing that slowed me down was that I am spoiled. Most of what I read I listen on audio as a I read. What got me over my hump was a group on Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ where we did reading sprints. Suddenly I couldn't put the book down.
I loved Bain, Ally and Molly. (loved the way Molly talked) and got disgusted with Glebester. I liked Ally's sense of love and compassion and thought it was cute that she named all the animals. Bain really taught Ally and Nathan some good lessons.
I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
I loved Bain, Ally and Molly. (loved the way Molly talked) and got disgusted with Glebester. I liked Ally's sense of love and compassion and thought it was cute that she named all the animals. Bain really taught Ally and Nathan some good lessons.
I am looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
May 11, 2013
"Anything worth having takes time and effort."
"While ever there's a glimmer of hope, you should never give up."
On the night of Alloria's tenth birthday she discovers that there are many things she had not known, about herself and the world around her. (1) The people she has lived with all these years are not actually her parents, they found her in the cellar of their cottage, her only possession a rag doll. (2) The amulet that her 'parents' have given her opens up the secret and mystical labyrinth in their cellar, which she and her best friend Nat waste no time venturing into. (3) She has a grand and amazing destiny awaiting her, if she has the courage to believe in herself and those she loves. Although all these facts are unknown to her before this night, she will need to come to grips with this newfound knowledge and find the strength that lies in the heart of herself, if she wants to survive.
*sighs happily* What can I say about this book? Well, basically, it was simply incredible. It takes two genres that I love (fantasy and young adult) and melds them together in a beautiful way that was not only thrilling to read but just plain downright fun!
There were honestly so many things I enjoyed about this book that I hardly know where to begin. First of all, the characters are three dimensional and very well fleshed out. They have slight issues and flaws, but they are so lovable and empathetic that you find yourself rooting for them the whole way through. Speaking of characters, have I mentioned how much I love Bane? No? Well, he is AMAZING! So stong and sweet! You'll see what I mean when you read it for yourself! ;)
Also, I love the storyline and the way that it flowed very smoothly. The characters went from one scenario to the next in a way that made me feel I was right there, experiencing it with them! Oftentimes in fantasy stories you may find the same tired tropes used over and over. Not here folks! Prepare yourself for a fun, fresh, truly unique story.
I think however the aspect of this book that I enjoyed the most was the use of description. There was a lot of it, but not too much that it bogged the story down. But it was so lush and descriptive I really felt like I was seeing what they were seeing, tasting what they were tasting, hearing what they were hearing; and a few times I actually stopped after reading a particularly beautiful section and went back and read it over just to take it in more thoroughly.
This book is a rare treasure and I highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys fantasy stories!
This review can also be found on my blog:
"While ever there's a glimmer of hope, you should never give up."
On the night of Alloria's tenth birthday she discovers that there are many things she had not known, about herself and the world around her. (1) The people she has lived with all these years are not actually her parents, they found her in the cellar of their cottage, her only possession a rag doll. (2) The amulet that her 'parents' have given her opens up the secret and mystical labyrinth in their cellar, which she and her best friend Nat waste no time venturing into. (3) She has a grand and amazing destiny awaiting her, if she has the courage to believe in herself and those she loves. Although all these facts are unknown to her before this night, she will need to come to grips with this newfound knowledge and find the strength that lies in the heart of herself, if she wants to survive.
*sighs happily* What can I say about this book? Well, basically, it was simply incredible. It takes two genres that I love (fantasy and young adult) and melds them together in a beautiful way that was not only thrilling to read but just plain downright fun!
There were honestly so many things I enjoyed about this book that I hardly know where to begin. First of all, the characters are three dimensional and very well fleshed out. They have slight issues and flaws, but they are so lovable and empathetic that you find yourself rooting for them the whole way through. Speaking of characters, have I mentioned how much I love Bane? No? Well, he is AMAZING! So stong and sweet! You'll see what I mean when you read it for yourself! ;)
Also, I love the storyline and the way that it flowed very smoothly. The characters went from one scenario to the next in a way that made me feel I was right there, experiencing it with them! Oftentimes in fantasy stories you may find the same tired tropes used over and over. Not here folks! Prepare yourself for a fun, fresh, truly unique story.
I think however the aspect of this book that I enjoyed the most was the use of description. There was a lot of it, but not too much that it bogged the story down. But it was so lush and descriptive I really felt like I was seeing what they were seeing, tasting what they were tasting, hearing what they were hearing; and a few times I actually stopped after reading a particularly beautiful section and went back and read it over just to take it in more thoroughly.
This book is a rare treasure and I highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys fantasy stories!
This review can also be found on my blog:
September 21, 2016
David Staniforth has certainly shown what a talented Author he is, with writing such fabulous books across different genres. This is a wonderfully entertaining Fantasy novel, that took me on a quite a journey through different worlds. Alloria Habalan originally turned up in the Merryweather’s house when she was 3 years old with an Amulet, which allowed her to travel from another world through a Labyrinth into their cellar. Thomas and Bessy became her parents for the next 6 years, and named her Ally Rose Merryweather. Then it wasn’t until her recent birthday that they gave the Amulet back that she arrived with. So Ally and Nathan use the Amulet to enter the Labyrinth, which takes them through to another world. By sheer coincidence they run into Ally’s real father’s guardian - Bainberry Roadin. He’s a giant of a man/beast and when he learns of Ally’s real identity, he does everything he can for her. As her real father Ymarid Habalan is the first and most powerful wizard, Bane is sure that Ally must have hidden powers. Nathan and Ally are definitely going to need Bane’s help when they go back and find Thomas has been severely injured, and Bessy taken by something or someone. With dark wizards running around they are going to have to be very careful. Her brother Yrion has Glebester Reibnach plotting with him to replace his father as First Wizard. Glebester initially fools Yrion into believing that all he wants in return is to be able to travel home and around different worlds as he pleases. However it doesn’t take long for Glebester to show his true colours and show his evil and manipulative side. Ymarid is worried about his wife Ilia as she has come down with the fever that is killing all the people. Even though she’s a Healer trying to help the sick with potions, it didn’t prevent her getting sick. If Ally is going to help, then she’s going to have to find and get used to using her powers as quickly as she can. The characters are so diverse and interesting, and the Author keeps you guessing on what’s going to happen from one moment to the next. This is a wonderful piece of writing, and I would certainly recommend it.
March 12, 2013
This charming fantasy tale is the story of a 10 year old girl named Alloria and her friend Nathan who get lost in a labyrinth between worlds and come out somewhere they don’t expect. They meet a fearsome looking man, become captured by a wizard who drains his power from children and they manage to help Alloria’s adoptive parents who have been attacked and left for dead. There is magic here and strange creatures, some helpful, some vicious. I enjoyed the ‘quest� style tale and following the story from one world to another.
David Stanforth has a way with words and some of his descriptions of the worlds his creations inhabit are absorbing and inspiring. He can draw an attractive character who is overwhelmingly ugly, yet his baddies are totally obnoxious. One, Glebester, is so vile I shudder when reading the wonderful descriptions. I’ve always had a soft spot for fantasy and I love the fact that Alloria’s power is described as coming from the love she received growing up. You can feel her caring and the strength she and others draw from it. It brings up the old nature/nurture question as Alloria inherits from one set of parents but is brought up by another. It’s a great concept and I know that the end of the book will not be the end of the series! Great. Bring it on!
David Stanforth has a way with words and some of his descriptions of the worlds his creations inhabit are absorbing and inspiring. He can draw an attractive character who is overwhelmingly ugly, yet his baddies are totally obnoxious. One, Glebester, is so vile I shudder when reading the wonderful descriptions. I’ve always had a soft spot for fantasy and I love the fact that Alloria’s power is described as coming from the love she received growing up. You can feel her caring and the strength she and others draw from it. It brings up the old nature/nurture question as Alloria inherits from one set of parents but is brought up by another. It’s a great concept and I know that the end of the book will not be the end of the series! Great. Bring it on!
April 14, 2013
Rated *It was amazing* 5-stars
Why you ask? Because it was TRUELY amazing!!
I could probably sit here and describe every emotion i felt while reading this, but unfortunatly i dont think goodreads will allow as many words.
The story follows a young girl by the name of Alloria and her best friend Nat. They go on a magical journey through the labyrinth and meet a whole host of interesting and wonderful people.... ok and some right horrible ones aswell.
My favourite? BANE!! He is the gentle giant everyone wishes they knew.
The writing style is fantastic, you really get to know the characters and you wind up really caring for them. Your truely brought in and immersed into the world, so much so, i didnt want to leave! That brings me onto my one and only downer... i want a part 2 now!! :) haha. Its going to be a killer waiting for it, but i will, for as long as i need to.
Amazing book.... & thats the truth ;)
You can also find my reviews here:
(tho they are alot more colourful)
Why you ask? Because it was TRUELY amazing!!
I could probably sit here and describe every emotion i felt while reading this, but unfortunatly i dont think goodreads will allow as many words.
The story follows a young girl by the name of Alloria and her best friend Nat. They go on a magical journey through the labyrinth and meet a whole host of interesting and wonderful people.... ok and some right horrible ones aswell.
My favourite? BANE!! He is the gentle giant everyone wishes they knew.
The writing style is fantastic, you really get to know the characters and you wind up really caring for them. Your truely brought in and immersed into the world, so much so, i didnt want to leave! That brings me onto my one and only downer... i want a part 2 now!! :) haha. Its going to be a killer waiting for it, but i will, for as long as i need to.
Amazing book.... & thats the truth ;)
You can also find my reviews here:
(tho they are alot more colourful)
September 8, 2013
The novel was sent to me by the author for an honest review
Well what can i say other than I loved it :D
First off personally,it takes some time for me to really get into fantasy. I have no idea why maybe its because of preference but that's the way it is except for this book.
This epic story is about a young girl Alloria who discovers she is not actually the real daughter of her parents. Along with her friend Nat, she goes in this journey where she discovers not only her heritage and her responsibility but also the strength love can give and to never ever lose hope.
I admit though it did start slowly for me but once got into it, I really enjoyed the story. I loved Alloria, Nat, and Bane. Alloria most especially for being so lovable and resilient. Also,definitely loved the relationship that Ally and Nat had. It kind of reminded me of how my best friend and I were when we were young.
I have a feeling that this is a trilogy so I'll anticipating for a sequel that's for sure :D
Well what can i say other than I loved it :D
First off personally,it takes some time for me to really get into fantasy. I have no idea why maybe its because of preference but that's the way it is except for this book.
This epic story is about a young girl Alloria who discovers she is not actually the real daughter of her parents. Along with her friend Nat, she goes in this journey where she discovers not only her heritage and her responsibility but also the strength love can give and to never ever lose hope.
I admit though it did start slowly for me but once got into it, I really enjoyed the story. I loved Alloria, Nat, and Bane. Alloria most especially for being so lovable and resilient. Also,definitely loved the relationship that Ally and Nat had. It kind of reminded me of how my best friend and I were when we were young.
I have a feeling that this is a trilogy so I'll anticipating for a sequel that's for sure :D
April 6, 2017
Pleasantly Surprised!
Not my usual genre. I expected this to be geared for a much younger reader because of the age of the characters. I was very pleasantly surprised by the ingenuity and flow of this story!
Recommend for readers of all ages!
Not my usual genre. I expected this to be geared for a much younger reader because of the age of the characters. I was very pleasantly surprised by the ingenuity and flow of this story!
Recommend for readers of all ages!
February 10, 2017
What a lovely story. Engaging characters & an exciting adventure, with lots of clever & original ideas. Thoroughly enjoyed it & will be reading the next book very soon!
July 31, 2013
I was sent a copy of this book by the author David Staniforth to read and review, let's just say I loved it so much I bought my own copy and got my friend to do the same.
The book starts off with this little girl 'Alloria' the namesake of the book and her friend Nathan travelling through a labyinth beneath their cellar. Alloria is able to do this by the power of a medallion given to her by the parents who claim she came to them with it at the age of three.
Throughout the book, we go on a journey with several different characters giving us their pursepectives on events which are all tied together. I loved that the villians were given as much space in the book as the main heros, by doing this Staniforth gave us so much depth and insight to form our own conclusions and keep us guessing. He still kept us on our toes though as there were surprises at every corner making this book thoroughly enjoyable.
My verdict;
A must read if you're into fantasy...Actually even if you're not this book will definately hold your attention, as there's romance, mystery, a little bit of horror, supernatural...the works.
Out of ten I'd definately give this book an eleven, the only bad thing is....I want more but will have to wait for the second highly anticipated book continuing Alloria, Nathan and Bane's adventures.
The book starts off with this little girl 'Alloria' the namesake of the book and her friend Nathan travelling through a labyinth beneath their cellar. Alloria is able to do this by the power of a medallion given to her by the parents who claim she came to them with it at the age of three.
Throughout the book, we go on a journey with several different characters giving us their pursepectives on events which are all tied together. I loved that the villians were given as much space in the book as the main heros, by doing this Staniforth gave us so much depth and insight to form our own conclusions and keep us guessing. He still kept us on our toes though as there were surprises at every corner making this book thoroughly enjoyable.
My verdict;
A must read if you're into fantasy...Actually even if you're not this book will definately hold your attention, as there's romance, mystery, a little bit of horror, supernatural...the works.
Out of ten I'd definately give this book an eleven, the only bad thing is....I want more but will have to wait for the second highly anticipated book continuing Alloria, Nathan and Bane's adventures.
July 22, 2014
After reading (and loving) the series by the same author () I bought this book and I wasn't disappointed.
Alloria is the kind of fantasy book that I love, there's magic, intrigue and secret connections bonding certain people together, all woven together to make a wonderful story which is light hearted in feel yet gripping. It didn't take me long to finish the book once I had started, right from the beginning I was able to empathise with Alloria and Nat as well and even Bane didn't take long to win my heart. There were moments where I feared for the characters and moments where I smiled and silently cheered for them.
I can't wait for the next in the series and although I wish that I had read this book sooner the teasing hints left towards the end of Alloria make me glad that I didn't or I would just have to wait longer for the next installment, it can't come quick enough I want to know more about Xsanderumn,the Labyrinth and the other worlds beyond!
Alloria is the kind of fantasy book that I love, there's magic, intrigue and secret connections bonding certain people together, all woven together to make a wonderful story which is light hearted in feel yet gripping. It didn't take me long to finish the book once I had started, right from the beginning I was able to empathise with Alloria and Nat as well and even Bane didn't take long to win my heart. There were moments where I feared for the characters and moments where I smiled and silently cheered for them.
I can't wait for the next in the series and although I wish that I had read this book sooner the teasing hints left towards the end of Alloria make me glad that I didn't or I would just have to wait longer for the next installment, it can't come quick enough I want to know more about Xsanderumn,the Labyrinth and the other worlds beyond!
August 21, 2015
This book was very charming, and a great story. I will definitely look for the next two installments as they come out, because I'm invested in the characters. I got the paperback edition from Amazon, and fair warning there are quite a few typos, and one area where text appears to have been cut and pasted on another area of the page. I have heard that many of these have been fixed in the digital edition.
One critique: The end felt very rushed to me. Ymarid's reunion with Alloria was like "Oh yay! You're back. Sure I'll take you back into danger and look for the people who raised you instead of me." He thought she was dead, so I expected more of a revelation. I guess he saw her coming because of magic, but at the beginning of the book we get full chapters devoted to Ymarid's POV. I think what it comes down to for me is that the reunion would have been better done revisiting his perspective once before the book ended.
Like I said, I was really invested in the story that was created. I just think that it could be vastly improved with one or two more pre-publication readings to catch some of the little things, because they take me out of the story, and the characters are developed well enough that you want to stay engrossed in them the whole time.
One critique: The end felt very rushed to me. Ymarid's reunion with Alloria was like "Oh yay! You're back. Sure I'll take you back into danger and look for the people who raised you instead of me." He thought she was dead, so I expected more of a revelation. I guess he saw her coming because of magic, but at the beginning of the book we get full chapters devoted to Ymarid's POV. I think what it comes down to for me is that the reunion would have been better done revisiting his perspective once before the book ended.
Like I said, I was really invested in the story that was created. I just think that it could be vastly improved with one or two more pre-publication readings to catch some of the little things, because they take me out of the story, and the characters are developed well enough that you want to stay engrossed in them the whole time.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 13, 2015
A perfect beginning for a great story!
With Alloria, you enter in a world of magic you 're eager to know better. What impressed me is that you don't need to be a child, a young adult or an adult to appreciate the story.
You follow two children lost in a world they don't know or understand, who are desperate to find a way back to save their love ones. A beautiful adventure with brilliant characters.
Moreover it is really well written!
To be honest I can't wait to read the rest of it. It's well written and the characters are really interesting.
I warmly recommend it
With Alloria, you enter in a world of magic you 're eager to know better. What impressed me is that you don't need to be a child, a young adult or an adult to appreciate the story.
You follow two children lost in a world they don't know or understand, who are desperate to find a way back to save their love ones. A beautiful adventure with brilliant characters.
Moreover it is really well written!
To be honest I can't wait to read the rest of it. It's well written and the characters are really interesting.
I warmly recommend it
September 26, 2014
What a wonderful fantasy tale, It has all the right elements woven together to enchant and engross young readers and those who are young at heart!
Lovely characters, some beautiful descriptions, surprises and of course magic.
Look forward to the next in the series.
Lovely characters, some beautiful descriptions, surprises and of course magic.
Look forward to the next in the series.
April 5, 2017
“Alloria� blends magic and mystery into an imaginative and entertaining adventure that begins on Alloria Habalan’s tenth birthday when she’s given an amulet by Thomas and Bessy Merryweather, the only parents she’s ever known who found her wandering in their basement alone, barefoot and clutching her rag- doll Saphjrina seven years before. Upset about the news that they aren’t her real parents and wearing the amulet they’d kept hidden, she ventures into the cellar with her friend Nathan to discover a mysterious labyrinth that takes them to a magical world where she meets a scarred giant called Bainberry (Bane) Roadin only to return home to find her father badly injured and Bessy missing.
Fearing for the lives of her parents Alloria and Nathan retrace their steps through the labyrinth looking for help from Bane only to begin an adventure that’s fraught with perilous danger as they journey to Xsanderumn to find her natural father, the powerful wizard Ymarid.
David Staniforth brings to life a magical world where its inhabitants are dying of a deadly fever and where the First Wizard’s daughter disappeared years before with a powerful amulet that can unlock a mysterious labyrinth with passages to other worlds. The intensity of the main plot is heightened when Ymarid having lost his daughter and with his wife deathly ill decides to pass his mantel of office as first wizard on to his son, using his magic to infuse a replicate amulet and save his world unaware that an evil conspiracy brews.
Fast-paced as events unfold and the fate of Alloria’s parents lies in the hands of a wizard determined to die to save his world, the action intensifies as Alloria, Nathan and Bane struggle to reach Xsanderumn facing guttwraiths, an evil kidnapper and sorcerer as well as the outcome of a dangerous prophecy. The suspense escalates as Alloria’s magic awakens and Nathan’s warrior skill develops as the three companions bond. This is a story filled with underlying themes like the power of love, not judging others and believing in yourself, bringing warmth to an adventure already filled with a large dose of humor.
David Staniforth has not only created a captivating tale that keeps you on the edge of your seat until the end but packed it with complex, realistic and unforgettable characters like ten-year-old Alloria Habalan a spirited and compassionate young girl who is determined to save the lives of the parents who raised her. Three years older Nathan Shenton is a level-headed, adventurous and self-sacrificing orphan who’s already connected to Alloria emotionally as her guardian, although his skills develop under Bane’s tutelage. Bainberry (Bane) Roadin Ymarid’s former Guardian, a skilled warrior who’s unattractive and fierce in appearance can be terse which masks a loving, amiable and kind nature. Ymarid Habalan Alloria’s natural father is the wise, duty-oriented and powerful wizard who will sacrifice his life to save his world. These main characters fuel the story with excitement, intensity and high-energy although it’s the evil, cold wizard Vrengia, the cruel, hard and abusive Mistress Prakket and the manipulative and conniving Glebester Reibnach who add a dark chill.
“Alloria� is another thrilling, creative story by this talented writer and I look forward to reading the next chapter in the “Labyrinth of Labyrinths� saga.
Fearing for the lives of her parents Alloria and Nathan retrace their steps through the labyrinth looking for help from Bane only to begin an adventure that’s fraught with perilous danger as they journey to Xsanderumn to find her natural father, the powerful wizard Ymarid.
David Staniforth brings to life a magical world where its inhabitants are dying of a deadly fever and where the First Wizard’s daughter disappeared years before with a powerful amulet that can unlock a mysterious labyrinth with passages to other worlds. The intensity of the main plot is heightened when Ymarid having lost his daughter and with his wife deathly ill decides to pass his mantel of office as first wizard on to his son, using his magic to infuse a replicate amulet and save his world unaware that an evil conspiracy brews.
Fast-paced as events unfold and the fate of Alloria’s parents lies in the hands of a wizard determined to die to save his world, the action intensifies as Alloria, Nathan and Bane struggle to reach Xsanderumn facing guttwraiths, an evil kidnapper and sorcerer as well as the outcome of a dangerous prophecy. The suspense escalates as Alloria’s magic awakens and Nathan’s warrior skill develops as the three companions bond. This is a story filled with underlying themes like the power of love, not judging others and believing in yourself, bringing warmth to an adventure already filled with a large dose of humor.
David Staniforth has not only created a captivating tale that keeps you on the edge of your seat until the end but packed it with complex, realistic and unforgettable characters like ten-year-old Alloria Habalan a spirited and compassionate young girl who is determined to save the lives of the parents who raised her. Three years older Nathan Shenton is a level-headed, adventurous and self-sacrificing orphan who’s already connected to Alloria emotionally as her guardian, although his skills develop under Bane’s tutelage. Bainberry (Bane) Roadin Ymarid’s former Guardian, a skilled warrior who’s unattractive and fierce in appearance can be terse which masks a loving, amiable and kind nature. Ymarid Habalan Alloria’s natural father is the wise, duty-oriented and powerful wizard who will sacrifice his life to save his world. These main characters fuel the story with excitement, intensity and high-energy although it’s the evil, cold wizard Vrengia, the cruel, hard and abusive Mistress Prakket and the manipulative and conniving Glebester Reibnach who add a dark chill.
“Alloria� is another thrilling, creative story by this talented writer and I look forward to reading the next chapter in the “Labyrinth of Labyrinths� saga.
November 7, 2019
We go on a journey of magic adventure and suspense with Alloria and Nathan - and also Bainberry who is a Human/Giant/Ogre but likeable and looks after the children and tries to lead them to the world of Xsandurum were Alloria is originally from. Their journey is full of trails that's all I'll say because I don't want to give anything away!
I always enjoy stories of other worlds and portals and other dimensions, in this case its a Labyrinth.
This is a story of friendship, love, magic and bravery, just my sort of novel as well, so I new I would enjoy reading it. I'm looking forward to following the characters in the second novel which I think will be set in Xsandurum.
It puts me in mind of the Northern Lights trilogy only because it involves children and other-worldly magic. This would also in my opinion make a fantastic film or series.
I always enjoy stories of other worlds and portals and other dimensions, in this case its a Labyrinth.
This is a story of friendship, love, magic and bravery, just my sort of novel as well, so I new I would enjoy reading it. I'm looking forward to following the characters in the second novel which I think will be set in Xsandurum.
It puts me in mind of the Northern Lights trilogy only because it involves children and other-worldly magic. This would also in my opinion make a fantastic film or series.
March 26, 2017
This was a delightful read. A fresh fantasy that could be read by younger readers. the main character are quite young. the story has many twists and flows very well. I am now reading the second book.
June 18, 2017
I can appreciate the fantasy and the fact that the book is well- written and this is why it is a four star book. I have out grown my fantasy years.
June 14, 2013
'Never let doubt creep in Ally, not for one moment. Even when all looks to be lost wrap up all your despair, all your anger, all your sorrow, all your grief and use them to fuel your determination. Remember, a battle is not lost until you give up the fight.'
MY OPINION
I'm so grateful that I was given this book to read in exchange for a review. From the first chapter, I was drawn into the story of Alloria. She reminded me a lot of Lyra in the His Dark Materials Trilogy with her vivacity and her spirit. Alloria is full of love for her friends and her family, and even those that she's only just met. She shows such kindness towards people, always putting others before herself, standing up for people in need, comforting them when they need it most. Alloria is one of the many reasons that I found this book so enjoyable.At the start of the book, she appears to be quite cocky, she seems to like showing off, which was still enjoyable to read. But what I enjoyed most, was how, as the story progressed, Alloria grew with maturity, she grew up very quickly and accepted the responsibility that she was born with.
Nathan is a fantastic character. He's so full of love for Alloria, and it really shows. He feels her pain, and knows when she's in danger, and is always there to protect her. He rushes to her side when she needs him, and I thought that their relationship was incredibly beautiful. They teased each other; Alloria calls him a coward, and he refers to her as 'Grot Queen', but you know that there's a lot of mutual love between them, and it makes for extremely enjoyable reading.
Bainberry is another great character. He loves Alloria and Nathan, and takes great care of them. He takes them under his wing, protecting them both,and teaching Nathan to defend himself, and train for his role of Alloria's Guardian. Bainberry fights for the children, he never gives up, and he guides them through the most dangerous journey of their lives.
I really loved this book. I loved all of the characters, that were supposed to be loved, and hated all of the characters that were supposed to be hated. They were very well written, and described so well that I could imagine what they looked like in my head. I could also imagine the settings of the book, as if I'd seen them before, since they were so elaborately described. This book just goes to show that you should take a chance on a self-published book. You never know what kind of Magic, Adventure and Action you'll find.
THE AUTHOR
I'm very grateful to for giving me this book for free, in exchange for a review. I can't wait for the next part of Alloria's adventures to be published. And I can't wait to get stuck into another book of David's, , which I've also, very kindly, been given a copy of in exchange for a review.
A fantastic book, I'm so glad I took the opportunity to review it, and that's the truth!
MY OPINION
I'm so grateful that I was given this book to read in exchange for a review. From the first chapter, I was drawn into the story of Alloria. She reminded me a lot of Lyra in the His Dark Materials Trilogy with her vivacity and her spirit. Alloria is full of love for her friends and her family, and even those that she's only just met. She shows such kindness towards people, always putting others before herself, standing up for people in need, comforting them when they need it most. Alloria is one of the many reasons that I found this book so enjoyable.At the start of the book, she appears to be quite cocky, she seems to like showing off, which was still enjoyable to read. But what I enjoyed most, was how, as the story progressed, Alloria grew with maturity, she grew up very quickly and accepted the responsibility that she was born with.
Nathan is a fantastic character. He's so full of love for Alloria, and it really shows. He feels her pain, and knows when she's in danger, and is always there to protect her. He rushes to her side when she needs him, and I thought that their relationship was incredibly beautiful. They teased each other; Alloria calls him a coward, and he refers to her as 'Grot Queen', but you know that there's a lot of mutual love between them, and it makes for extremely enjoyable reading.
Bainberry is another great character. He loves Alloria and Nathan, and takes great care of them. He takes them under his wing, protecting them both,and teaching Nathan to defend himself, and train for his role of Alloria's Guardian. Bainberry fights for the children, he never gives up, and he guides them through the most dangerous journey of their lives.
I really loved this book. I loved all of the characters, that were supposed to be loved, and hated all of the characters that were supposed to be hated. They were very well written, and described so well that I could imagine what they looked like in my head. I could also imagine the settings of the book, as if I'd seen them before, since they were so elaborately described. This book just goes to show that you should take a chance on a self-published book. You never know what kind of Magic, Adventure and Action you'll find.
THE AUTHOR
I'm very grateful to for giving me this book for free, in exchange for a review. I can't wait for the next part of Alloria's adventures to be published. And I can't wait to get stuck into another book of David's, , which I've also, very kindly, been given a copy of in exchange for a review.
A fantastic book, I'm so glad I took the opportunity to review it, and that's the truth!
June 9, 2015
I fell hook line and sinker under Alloria's spell and already I miss her from my life. I can't put it simply enough I love this little girl.
The story starts with Alloria on her tenth birthday. The day everything changes for her. One of her birthday presents is an item being returned to her with the truth of who she is. This little girl isn't of this world, she was born to other parents and mysteriously turned up in the cellar of Thomas and Bessie.
Not knowing she was from another world, not even knowing there are other worlds out there, Thomas went out to every nearby village looking for anyone who may have lost a daughter. The fact that she turned up in their cellar and not at their door mattered little as that was unexplainable just the fact she was there mattered. After not finding her father or mother they decided to take care of her themselves. They called her Ally Rose and they truly loved her.
Given the circumstances and the randomness for where Alloria could have found herself she was insanely lucky. It wasn't until that day on her tenth birthday she had any clue these were not her parents, but they too weren't to know that giving Alloria back her pendant set off a chain of events that in many ways were predetermined, but also would determine if she could save her own world.
You can tell straight away just how much David loves his characters they make you smile due to the care and attention he has paid them throughout the book. Equally though you know when he's written a baddy as they are vile, cruel and in some cases grotesque, but even then they are so evilly described you can't help but want to hurt them before they hurt Ally, Gnat or Bane. The only character I wasn't sure of straight away was Ally's true father, he was harder to read, mostly due to not having a lot of time in the books in comparison to his daughter and the others, plus I had read another review that mentioned a wizard stealing essences or stealing powers or essentially stealing and hurting children. I didn't read the review properly after reading that bit and when Alloria's father was with orphans I was like NOOOOO your Alloria's dad. But he was not the wizard the reviewer spoke of and by the end of the book you knew him to be a good man, however every man can change and there's nothing to say he won't be one of them.
The beginning of the book starts on a simple quest, get Bane and save Alloria's father, Thomas, before setting off to find and save her mother, Bessie. Her quest became longer as it became obvious going the way they came would not be safe. It wasn't till they arrived in Fareflax that the tale turned dark and that is will I will stop this part of the review.
Alloria and Nat's relationship is great, I could read about this pair going through adventures with Bane for a long, long time. I loved how Nat became Alloria's gaurdian and when Ally's powers showed themselves properly it showed us this girl has huge potential. Who knows what she could do when she grows up. She's 10 at the start of the book and 11 at the end but this girl has a long tale still to be told with plenty of adventures as we walk with her and watch her become the first, first wizard that is a woman. Her power is off the charts, but more importantly she has a heritage of hundreds of people looking out for her in the form of the amulet. Not only will no harm come to our little Ally but she will do incredible things. I wouldn't be surprised if she has several prophecies waiting to come true about her and the incredible things she will do.
A truly well deserved 5 stars for David M. Staniforth. So much so that I can't help myself I have to read another of his books and hope to read the same love and devotion to his characters as I got out of Alloria. Alloria will be with me forever as the bravest ten year old who didn't know who she was. Thank you for giving me the gift of this little girl I wish I was.
The story starts with Alloria on her tenth birthday. The day everything changes for her. One of her birthday presents is an item being returned to her with the truth of who she is. This little girl isn't of this world, she was born to other parents and mysteriously turned up in the cellar of Thomas and Bessie.
Not knowing she was from another world, not even knowing there are other worlds out there, Thomas went out to every nearby village looking for anyone who may have lost a daughter. The fact that she turned up in their cellar and not at their door mattered little as that was unexplainable just the fact she was there mattered. After not finding her father or mother they decided to take care of her themselves. They called her Ally Rose and they truly loved her.
Given the circumstances and the randomness for where Alloria could have found herself she was insanely lucky. It wasn't until that day on her tenth birthday she had any clue these were not her parents, but they too weren't to know that giving Alloria back her pendant set off a chain of events that in many ways were predetermined, but also would determine if she could save her own world.
You can tell straight away just how much David loves his characters they make you smile due to the care and attention he has paid them throughout the book. Equally though you know when he's written a baddy as they are vile, cruel and in some cases grotesque, but even then they are so evilly described you can't help but want to hurt them before they hurt Ally, Gnat or Bane. The only character I wasn't sure of straight away was Ally's true father, he was harder to read, mostly due to not having a lot of time in the books in comparison to his daughter and the others, plus I had read another review that mentioned a wizard stealing essences or stealing powers or essentially stealing and hurting children. I didn't read the review properly after reading that bit and when Alloria's father was with orphans I was like NOOOOO your Alloria's dad. But he was not the wizard the reviewer spoke of and by the end of the book you knew him to be a good man, however every man can change and there's nothing to say he won't be one of them.
The beginning of the book starts on a simple quest, get Bane and save Alloria's father, Thomas, before setting off to find and save her mother, Bessie. Her quest became longer as it became obvious going the way they came would not be safe. It wasn't till they arrived in Fareflax that the tale turned dark and that is will I will stop this part of the review.
Alloria and Nat's relationship is great, I could read about this pair going through adventures with Bane for a long, long time. I loved how Nat became Alloria's gaurdian and when Ally's powers showed themselves properly it showed us this girl has huge potential. Who knows what she could do when she grows up. She's 10 at the start of the book and 11 at the end but this girl has a long tale still to be told with plenty of adventures as we walk with her and watch her become the first, first wizard that is a woman. Her power is off the charts, but more importantly she has a heritage of hundreds of people looking out for her in the form of the amulet. Not only will no harm come to our little Ally but she will do incredible things. I wouldn't be surprised if she has several prophecies waiting to come true about her and the incredible things she will do.
A truly well deserved 5 stars for David M. Staniforth. So much so that I can't help myself I have to read another of his books and hope to read the same love and devotion to his characters as I got out of Alloria. Alloria will be with me forever as the bravest ten year old who didn't know who she was. Thank you for giving me the gift of this little girl I wish I was.
February 21, 2017
"Never give up Ally, not until every ray of hope has gone." A simple quote, but one that fuels this entire story. The fundamental message to never give up hope, even in the darkest of times, is a powerful one. That, and the message that love is more powerful than the blackest evil.
While innocently exploring a secret labyrinth in their cellar, Alloria and Nathan are pulled into an incredible adventure that changes their lives forever, and causes them to question everything they know about reality. Desperate to return home and save their loved ones, they encounter creatures they thought only existed in fairy tales, and monsters they had never before imagined. They make friends, enemies, and bring light to the darkness during their journey, creating a non-stop adventure, and a book I could barely put down.
With the main character being ten years old, I was expecting it to be more of a middle-grade fantasy. It's not, at all. These kids are flung into a world of danger, pain, love, and brutal honesty that makes for an incredible story. David Staniforth's unapologetic writing is refreshing, and brought an awesome sense of realism and genuine danger to the story. I loved watching little Ally conquer so many obstacles, and become the foundation for what I'm sure will be an incredible leader during this series.
Overall, I loved this book- the way it was written is fantastic. While reading, I was completely enthralled, biting my nails and laughing out loud, both worried an excited for Ally, Nat and Bane. When I wasn't reading, I was thinking about it, and planning when I'd be able to sit down and dive into this adventure again. I am excited for the sequel, and can't wait to see what happens next!
I would recommend this to any fantasy fan- you won't be disappointed.
*I was given a complimentary eCopy of this book, from the author, to read in exchange for an honest review.
June 23, 2015
This book is enjoyable as a children's fantasy, with engaging characters and an interesting premise of a labyrinth joining worlds. It has positive themes of friendship, courage, and self-discovery. The magic in it is of the kind that is a rare talent that some people have and is therefore limited by how strong a person's gift is and how well he or she understands how to use it. Other than that, it's not clear if it has rules or limits. The plot isn't a standard quest, but it is a journey, searching for something, though the exact goal is a little unclear to the characters. There are more books in the series, and the end of this one definitely leaves unfinished business that will presumably be taken up in the next book.
The editing unfortunately was not at a very high standard, which detracted from my enjoyment. Mostly this involved small editing glitches � wrong word, extra word, missing word, etc. In one place a character had a different name. The biggest problem was a significant error in continuity: a character appears who turns out to be the daughter of another character and it's obvious that the other character was supposed to have mentioned her, but there is no such mention. (I went back to be sure I hadn't missed it.) I give the author three stars for what is otherwise an admirable effort.
The editing unfortunately was not at a very high standard, which detracted from my enjoyment. Mostly this involved small editing glitches � wrong word, extra word, missing word, etc. In one place a character had a different name. The biggest problem was a significant error in continuity: a character appears who turns out to be the daughter of another character and it's obvious that the other character was supposed to have mentioned her, but there is no such mention. (I went back to be sure I hadn't missed it.) I give the author three stars for what is otherwise an admirable effort.
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