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The Initial Insult
Welcome to Amontillado, Ohio, where your last name is worth more than money, and secrets can be kept� for a price.
Tress Montor knows that her family used to mean something—until she didn’t have a family anymore. When her parents disappeared seven years ago while driving her best friend home, Tress lost everything. She might still be a Montor, but the entire town shuns her now that she lives with her drunken, one-eyed grandfather at what locals refer to as the “White Trash Zoo,� � a wild animal attraction featuring a zebra, a chimpanzee, and a panther, among other things.
Felicity Turnado has it all � looks, money, and a secret that she’s kept hidden. She knows that one misstep could send her tumbling from the top of the social ladder, and she’s worked hard to make everyone forget that she was with the Montors the night they disappeared. Felicity has buried what she knows so deeply that she can’t even remember what it is� only that she can’t look at Tress without having a panic attack.
But she’ll have to.
Tress has a plan. A Halloween costume party at an abandoned house provides the ideal situation for Tress to pry the truth from Felicity � brick by brick � as she slowly seals her former best friend into a coal chute. With a drunken party above them, and a loose panther on the prowl, Tress will have her answers � or settle for revenge.
In the first book of this duology, award-winning author Mindy McGinnis draws inspiration from Edgar Allan Poe and masterfully delivers a dark, propulsive mystery in alternating points of view that unravels a friendship... forevermore.
Tress Montor knows that her family used to mean something—until she didn’t have a family anymore. When her parents disappeared seven years ago while driving her best friend home, Tress lost everything. She might still be a Montor, but the entire town shuns her now that she lives with her drunken, one-eyed grandfather at what locals refer to as the “White Trash Zoo,� � a wild animal attraction featuring a zebra, a chimpanzee, and a panther, among other things.
Felicity Turnado has it all � looks, money, and a secret that she’s kept hidden. She knows that one misstep could send her tumbling from the top of the social ladder, and she’s worked hard to make everyone forget that she was with the Montors the night they disappeared. Felicity has buried what she knows so deeply that she can’t even remember what it is� only that she can’t look at Tress without having a panic attack.
But she’ll have to.
Tress has a plan. A Halloween costume party at an abandoned house provides the ideal situation for Tress to pry the truth from Felicity � brick by brick � as she slowly seals her former best friend into a coal chute. With a drunken party above them, and a loose panther on the prowl, Tress will have her answers � or settle for revenge.
In the first book of this duology, award-winning author Mindy McGinnis draws inspiration from Edgar Allan Poe and masterfully delivers a dark, propulsive mystery in alternating points of view that unravels a friendship... forevermore.
372 pages, Hardcover
First published February 23, 2021
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Mindy McGinnis
30books4,220followersMindy McGinnis is an Edgar Award-winning novelist who writes across multiple genres, including post-apocalyptic, historical, thriller, contemporary, mystery, and fantasy.
While her settings may change, you can always count on Mindy’s books to deliver grit, truth, and an unflinching look at humanity and the world around us.
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September 24, 2023
**4.5-stars rounded up**
When they were kids, Tress Montor and Felicity Turnado were best friends. Now frenemies would be the most accurate way of describing their relationship.
Tress has an axe to grind with Felicity. She wants answers to a long-standing mystery and believes Felicity has them.
When the girls where in the fourth grade, Tress's parents disappeared late one night while driving Felicity home from their house.
Felicity was found bruised and bleeding at the side of the road, while Mr. and Mrs. Montor were never seen again.
After that, Tress lost everything. With no parents, and no one else stepping forward, she was forced to move in with her drunken grandfather at what the locals call the White Trash Zoo.
There are animals that Tress helps to feed and care for. A zebra, an ostrich, an alligator, a panther, among other things, but her life is extremely hard.
Tress is not cared for as a child should be and becomes a social pariah at school. Literally abandoned by the entire town, she has no one to advocate for her.
Felicity feels guilty for all that has happened to Tress in the aftermath of her parents disappearance. Part of her wants to comfort and care for her ex-best friend, but she doesn't dare. What would people think?
Felicity keeps her true thoughts tucked deep inside her, like she's been taught, all whilst exuding that Queen Bee attitude everyone expects.
She's rich, beautiful, popular and has a secret way to suppress all her negative thoughts and emotions.
Tress has had enough of the Felicity Show, so she develops a plan to get what she wants out of her.
It involves an abandoned home, a crowded costume party, a coal chute, a lot of bricks and some mortar. Felicity is going to talk, one way or another. Tress has nothing to lose.
Alternating between Tress and Felicity's perspectives, this novel follows the girl's friendship from the start to the present, and through the various stages in between.
Both girls keep a lot of things to themselves. There is anger, guilt and plenty of low self esteem to go around.
This story is extremely heavy. There is a ton of baggage between these two girls. Even when they aren't the ones doing things to one another, they are there to bear witness.
They've been intertwined in one another's lives for a long time. As a Reader, you can feel the weight of that history. It's tangible.
I found this entire story to be twisted, unique and completely engaging. Once I started reading, I could not put it down. It's just so well written.
I know that this story will not be for everyone, but I think the people who are going to enjoy it, are REALLY going to enjoy it.
McGinnis was not afraid to go dark and stay dark; just where I like it. There is not one moment of lightness in this novel and I was here for it.
I cannot believe how this one ended up. The final few scenes, my word!
Thank you so much to the publisher, Katherine Tegen Books, for providing me with a copy of this to read and review.
I really, really enjoyed this and cannot wait to see how this duology turns out!!!
When they were kids, Tress Montor and Felicity Turnado were best friends. Now frenemies would be the most accurate way of describing their relationship.
Tress has an axe to grind with Felicity. She wants answers to a long-standing mystery and believes Felicity has them.
When the girls where in the fourth grade, Tress's parents disappeared late one night while driving Felicity home from their house.
Felicity was found bruised and bleeding at the side of the road, while Mr. and Mrs. Montor were never seen again.
After that, Tress lost everything. With no parents, and no one else stepping forward, she was forced to move in with her drunken grandfather at what the locals call the White Trash Zoo.
There are animals that Tress helps to feed and care for. A zebra, an ostrich, an alligator, a panther, among other things, but her life is extremely hard.
Tress is not cared for as a child should be and becomes a social pariah at school. Literally abandoned by the entire town, she has no one to advocate for her.
Felicity feels guilty for all that has happened to Tress in the aftermath of her parents disappearance. Part of her wants to comfort and care for her ex-best friend, but she doesn't dare. What would people think?
Felicity keeps her true thoughts tucked deep inside her, like she's been taught, all whilst exuding that Queen Bee attitude everyone expects.
She's rich, beautiful, popular and has a secret way to suppress all her negative thoughts and emotions.
Tress has had enough of the Felicity Show, so she develops a plan to get what she wants out of her.
It involves an abandoned home, a crowded costume party, a coal chute, a lot of bricks and some mortar. Felicity is going to talk, one way or another. Tress has nothing to lose.
Alternating between Tress and Felicity's perspectives, this novel follows the girl's friendship from the start to the present, and through the various stages in between.
Both girls keep a lot of things to themselves. There is anger, guilt and plenty of low self esteem to go around.
This story is extremely heavy. There is a ton of baggage between these two girls. Even when they aren't the ones doing things to one another, they are there to bear witness.
They've been intertwined in one another's lives for a long time. As a Reader, you can feel the weight of that history. It's tangible.
I found this entire story to be twisted, unique and completely engaging. Once I started reading, I could not put it down. It's just so well written.
I know that this story will not be for everyone, but I think the people who are going to enjoy it, are REALLY going to enjoy it.
McGinnis was not afraid to go dark and stay dark; just where I like it. There is not one moment of lightness in this novel and I was here for it.
I cannot believe how this one ended up. The final few scenes, my word!
Thank you so much to the publisher, Katherine Tegen Books, for providing me with a copy of this to read and review.
I really, really enjoyed this and cannot wait to see how this duology turns out!!!
January 22, 2022
Giving five stars to this extremely nerve bending, last standing grey cell destroyer book is real insult! It worths more than that!
McGinnis has her own peculiar, truly original style and genius mind perfectly knows how to blow her readers� minds! And this book’s storyline and that freaaaaakinnnggg awesome cliffhanger made you question your own reality were true definitions of perfection!
It’s deadly revenge game:
Two narrators: Tress and Felicity: once upon a time they were best friends and now they are true enemies!
Seven years ago when parents of Tress drove Felicity to her home, something really bad happened! Tress� parents vanished into thin air. Felicity found unconscious and she still insists she doesn’t remember anything about that night.
Tress not only lost her parents that night, she lost her best friend Felicity, her house, her hopes, anything related a normal teenager has in her life: comfort, hygiene , proper house, living conditions, food, clothes etc. She starts to live one eyed, drunken grandfather in a wild animal attraction ( her roommates are a zebra, chimpanzee, a zebra ?!?) people called white trash zoo including her ex best friend Felicity and her new inner circle, rich privileged friends!
Tress gotta do something to learn the truth! Somebody rich and powerful silences the entire town : police officers stop searching for her parents. Everybody pitying her or getting disgusted by her existence! She cannot live like that , she gotta learn what happened to her family. She needs get the information from Felicity even though she has to hurt her till she dies!
This is a cat and mouse game between friends. Felicity is in pain, the secret she keeps is so heavy. She cannot live with that. She needs to comfort of drugs. She is beautiful, she is popular, she has everything Tress tragically lost but everything she has turning into guilt feelings which eat her alive!
If she doesn’t tell the truth, Tress will bury her into her own tombstone! But sometimes there are worst things than dying in the world!
All night long confrontation between ex friends will destroy you, hurt you , frustrate you! But you’ll do curious to know how will conclude!
You get sorry for Tress! Sometimes you get scared of her because she is slowly turning into an animal, losing her humanity! You hate Felicity for the things she has done to her best friend, you resent her for not trying harder, not standing up for her, you also feel sorry for her self destruction!
I need to know when the second book comes out!
I need to know who will laugh less!
I need to know what the hell happened to Tress� parents and who did this to them?
For god’s sake I need second book ASAP!
McGinnis has her own peculiar, truly original style and genius mind perfectly knows how to blow her readers� minds! And this book’s storyline and that freaaaaakinnnggg awesome cliffhanger made you question your own reality were true definitions of perfection!
It’s deadly revenge game:
Two narrators: Tress and Felicity: once upon a time they were best friends and now they are true enemies!
Seven years ago when parents of Tress drove Felicity to her home, something really bad happened! Tress� parents vanished into thin air. Felicity found unconscious and she still insists she doesn’t remember anything about that night.
Tress not only lost her parents that night, she lost her best friend Felicity, her house, her hopes, anything related a normal teenager has in her life: comfort, hygiene , proper house, living conditions, food, clothes etc. She starts to live one eyed, drunken grandfather in a wild animal attraction ( her roommates are a zebra, chimpanzee, a zebra ?!?) people called white trash zoo including her ex best friend Felicity and her new inner circle, rich privileged friends!
Tress gotta do something to learn the truth! Somebody rich and powerful silences the entire town : police officers stop searching for her parents. Everybody pitying her or getting disgusted by her existence! She cannot live like that , she gotta learn what happened to her family. She needs get the information from Felicity even though she has to hurt her till she dies!
This is a cat and mouse game between friends. Felicity is in pain, the secret she keeps is so heavy. She cannot live with that. She needs to comfort of drugs. She is beautiful, she is popular, she has everything Tress tragically lost but everything she has turning into guilt feelings which eat her alive!
If she doesn’t tell the truth, Tress will bury her into her own tombstone! But sometimes there are worst things than dying in the world!
All night long confrontation between ex friends will destroy you, hurt you , frustrate you! But you’ll do curious to know how will conclude!
You get sorry for Tress! Sometimes you get scared of her because she is slowly turning into an animal, losing her humanity! You hate Felicity for the things she has done to her best friend, you resent her for not trying harder, not standing up for her, you also feel sorry for her self destruction!
I need to know when the second book comes out!
I need to know who will laugh less!
I need to know what the hell happened to Tress� parents and who did this to them?
For god’s sake I need second book ASAP!
April 2, 2021
before we start, i need you to understand something. i’m a grown ladyperson who grumbles about semantic bleaching and doesn’t bandwagon onto contemporary youngperson slang unless i’m making a comedic point about how out-of-touch i am. i’m never gonna be modern enough to tweet about literally starving to death waiting for a table at the cheesecake factory. so know that when i say this, it's not some casual colloquialism, but after that ending?
i. am. shook.
i am stomach-dropped awe.
i am, to quote this book, a stinking sack of skin.
mindy mcginnis has written some ballsy-ass YA, but this one takes the don’t back down-ness of to a whole nother level.
to quote this book at greater length:
it is a lot.
and yet that whole basement torture/revenge plot is just one slice of a narrative pie which mishmashes with tiger king and pretty much everything edgar allan poe ever wrote. the biggest players are the cask of amontillado & the masque of the red death, but there are so many little nods to the man in the character names (including a dog named william wilson), and a where’s waldo of poe-symbols: a pendulum, an orangutan, a raven, and a black cat, here taking the form of a panther. and for those of you who prefer poe’s b-sides, the hop-frog/ribbit parallel will be a real treat.
it's not cover-to-cover perfection—some of the poe-winks are a little too winky (tress' parents' names are 'annabelle' and 'lee,' for goodness' sake), and i could have done without the panther's POV, which is in verse. i have a pretty staunch and long-standing aversion to poetry infecting my prose. some of the poems were evocative and lovely, but i had no idea what was going on in at least one of 'em, so it didn't really work for me.
there were also some moves and explanations i found unconvincing—like why tress was sent to live in her weed-farming grandfather's trailer, often forced to sleep outside with all the indifferently-caged apex predators and made to endure his "hold it in" approach to menstruation instead of living in the crumbly house of usher with her aunt and cousin. i mean, when a girl comes to school smelling like a zebra every day, maybe it's time to give cps a ring. there were some assorted odds and ends i didn't really buy, motivation-wise, but in a book where a girl's walling up her former bestie in the basement of an abandoned house while a deadly flu tears through the partygoers upstairs, it's not particularly useful to scrutinize the details. this is where we are because this is where mcginnis wants us.
before i read this i was excited to see there was already a follow-up planned, but now that i’ve finished it, i’m apprehensive. the ending is a searing slap in the face and i don’t want whatever comes next to walk it back into 'jk everything is all right' territory. i trust her to deliver something badass, but i don't want any cold water poured onto this sizzle.
i am, and remain, shook.
*
i. can't.
****
if i didn't already ADORE mindy mcginnis, this paragraph of the synopsis:
woulda made me hit that 'to read' button hard enough to sprain a finger.
i. am. shook.
i am stomach-dropped awe.
i am, to quote this book, a stinking sack of skin.
mindy mcginnis has written some ballsy-ass YA, but this one takes the don’t back down-ness of to a whole nother level.
to quote this book at greater length:
”I’m holding someone captive in the basement,� I tell him, and the ear comes back, cocked. “I hit her in the head with a brick and I chained her to the wall, and I’ve got her halfway sealed into a tomb, and I probably gave her a concussion, and I think she’s got the flu, and I might have fractured her ankle.�
It’s a lot, when you string it all together like that.
it is a lot.
and yet that whole basement torture/revenge plot is just one slice of a narrative pie which mishmashes with tiger king and pretty much everything edgar allan poe ever wrote. the biggest players are the cask of amontillado & the masque of the red death, but there are so many little nods to the man in the character names (including a dog named william wilson), and a where’s waldo of poe-symbols: a pendulum, an orangutan, a raven, and a black cat, here taking the form of a panther. and for those of you who prefer poe’s b-sides, the hop-frog/ribbit parallel will be a real treat.
it's not cover-to-cover perfection—some of the poe-winks are a little too winky (tress' parents' names are 'annabelle' and 'lee,' for goodness' sake), and i could have done without the panther's POV, which is in verse. i have a pretty staunch and long-standing aversion to poetry infecting my prose. some of the poems were evocative and lovely, but i had no idea what was going on in at least one of 'em, so it didn't really work for me.
there were also some moves and explanations i found unconvincing—like why tress was sent to live in her weed-farming grandfather's trailer, often forced to sleep outside with all the indifferently-caged apex predators and made to endure his "hold it in" approach to menstruation instead of living in the crumbly house of usher with her aunt and cousin. i mean, when a girl comes to school smelling like a zebra every day, maybe it's time to give cps a ring. there were some assorted odds and ends i didn't really buy, motivation-wise, but in a book where a girl's walling up her former bestie in the basement of an abandoned house while a deadly flu tears through the partygoers upstairs, it's not particularly useful to scrutinize the details. this is where we are because this is where mcginnis wants us.
before i read this i was excited to see there was already a follow-up planned, but now that i’ve finished it, i’m apprehensive. the ending is a searing slap in the face and i don’t want whatever comes next to walk it back into 'jk everything is all right' territory. i trust her to deliver something badass, but i don't want any cold water poured onto this sizzle.
i am, and remain, shook.
*
i. can't.
****
if i didn't already ADORE mindy mcginnis, this paragraph of the synopsis:
Tress has a plan. A Halloween costume party at an abandoned house provides the ideal situation for Tress to pry the truth from Felicity � brick by brick � as she slowly seals her former best friend into a coal chute. With a drunken party above them, and a loose panther on the prowl, Tress will have her answers � or settle for revenge.
woulda made me hit that 'to read' button hard enough to sprain a finger.
February 7, 2021
ive seen MMs books all over my GR feed, so i cant believe its taken getting an ARC to finally read one of her stories.
and i was excited about this - i love a good revenge story. however, this goes from being a simple story about seeking information to a big mess. everything that happens is so bizarre, i really dont know what else to think.
you have and the kitchen sink.
i mean, some readers may think this makes the story busy and exciting. but for me, all of this nonsense takes away from a really interesting story of a girl burying her friend alive because she wants to know what happened to her missing parents.
such a shame.
PS - if you want to read poes short story that this is based on, you can find it
thanks harper collins for the ARC.
� 3 stars
and i was excited about this - i love a good revenge story. however, this goes from being a simple story about seeking information to a big mess. everything that happens is so bizarre, i really dont know what else to think.
you have and the kitchen sink.
i mean, some readers may think this makes the story busy and exciting. but for me, all of this nonsense takes away from a really interesting story of a girl burying her friend alive because she wants to know what happened to her missing parents.
such a shame.
PS - if you want to read poes short story that this is based on, you can find it
thanks harper collins for the ARC.
� 3 stars
October 8, 2020
�4 𝙄𝙢𝙖𝙜𝙞𝙣𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙫𝙚 𝙋𝙤𝙚 𝙍𝙚𝙩𝙚𝙡𝙡𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙎𝙩𝙖𝙧𝙨! �
Included in this book are a town rooted in history, well-rounded secondary characters, a mysterious illness and a prowling wild panther, but the 💛 of this book lies in the two main characters.
𝙏𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨 - in 4th grade her parents drove her then best friend home and were never seen again. She's sent to live with her alcoholic uncle on his trashy wild life zoo. Now a high school senior, she decides to do whatever it takes to find out what really happened to her parents.
Tress is a nasty little thing! She responds to conflict with either violence or sulking and doesn't care who she hurts to get what she wants.
Most of her grievances are soooo petty - 3 chapters about how sad it made her that she was blamed for having lice in the 7th grade - so obviously I didn't like her. But I'm not sure the reader is meant to, especially knowing the Poe character she's molded after.
𝙁𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙘𝙞𝙩𝙮 - Tress's ex- best friend that was with her parents when they disappeared. She's a complex character who's trying to move on from the past and has secrets of her own. Confident and feisty, she makes an entertaining opponent for Tress.
This book is the first of two and I felt like enough of my questions were answered that I was satisfied with the ending, but also intrigued by the tease of what's to come in the next half!
Also, some seriously racy content for a YA book 😁
Thank you NetGalley for allowing me to enjoy this audiobook.
Included in this book are a town rooted in history, well-rounded secondary characters, a mysterious illness and a prowling wild panther, but the 💛 of this book lies in the two main characters.
𝙏𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙨 - in 4th grade her parents drove her then best friend home and were never seen again. She's sent to live with her alcoholic uncle on his trashy wild life zoo. Now a high school senior, she decides to do whatever it takes to find out what really happened to her parents.
Tress is a nasty little thing! She responds to conflict with either violence or sulking and doesn't care who she hurts to get what she wants.
Most of her grievances are soooo petty - 3 chapters about how sad it made her that she was blamed for having lice in the 7th grade - so obviously I didn't like her. But I'm not sure the reader is meant to, especially knowing the Poe character she's molded after.
𝙁𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙘𝙞𝙩𝙮 - Tress's ex- best friend that was with her parents when they disappeared. She's a complex character who's trying to move on from the past and has secrets of her own. Confident and feisty, she makes an entertaining opponent for Tress.
This book is the first of two and I felt like enough of my questions were answered that I was satisfied with the ending, but also intrigued by the tease of what's to come in the next half!
Also, some seriously racy content for a YA book 😁
Thank you NetGalley for allowing me to enjoy this audiobook.
March 17, 2021
"Apparently I am very bad at picking friends.
Either I try to kill them, or they try to kill me."
Not a book giving me post-traumatic stress disorder. I have to give this five stars simply because this book dares to do what most YA wouldn't even think of. The cheek, the nerve, the audacity, the gall and the gumption.
Now if you asked me to read a book where someone buries their ex-best friend alive behind a brick wall in the cellar of an old mansion while a house party is raging on the floor above and a panther is strolling through the night looking for prey, I'd laugh at you. There's no way anyone can pull that off without it turning out to be absolute bonkers.
No one except Mindy McGinnis.
Because she pulled it off, and this book is proof.
Listen, you're not going to get anything else out of me. You have to find out yourself if she ends up dead and buried or not. If the panther eats every single person at the house party or not. If the suspense doesn't kill you first.
Either I try to kill them, or they try to kill me."
Not a book giving me post-traumatic stress disorder. I have to give this five stars simply because this book dares to do what most YA wouldn't even think of. The cheek, the nerve, the audacity, the gall and the gumption.
Now if you asked me to read a book where someone buries their ex-best friend alive behind a brick wall in the cellar of an old mansion while a house party is raging on the floor above and a panther is strolling through the night looking for prey, I'd laugh at you. There's no way anyone can pull that off without it turning out to be absolute bonkers.
No one except Mindy McGinnis.
Because she pulled it off, and this book is proof.
Listen, you're not going to get anything else out of me. You have to find out yourself if she ends up dead and buried or not. If the panther eats every single person at the house party or not. If the suspense doesn't kill you first.
May 4, 2021
I have to be honest and say that this one didn't really work for me the way that I was hoping it would. Mindy McGinnis (one of my all-time favorite authors) mixed with The Cask of Amontillado (my favorite Poe story) should have been absolutely everything to me, but the writing style of this one felt really... weird? to me and kept pulling me out of the story instead of immersing me further and I am SO bummed about it. I will most likely carry on and finish the duology because I love Mindy's work and I'm curious to see where she's going to take this strange story, but this first installment wasn't quite what I was hoping for.
January 3, 2022
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THE INITIAL INSULT has been chilling on my Kindle for a while but I never actually got around to reading it until now. Apparently it's a retelling of The Cask of Amontillado but there's all sorts of other Poe references too. Set in an Ohio town where last names are everything and reputations are built on decades of heritage and clout, it's told in alternating POVs from two ex-friends, Felicity and Tress
Tress wants to know what happened to her parents, who went missing the night they took Felicity home from a sleepover and ended up in a wreck. Since then, she's tumbled from being the daughter of one of the town founders to being a cast off, living with her grandfather on the outskirts of town, selling drugs for money and helping to run his illicit zoo. Felicity, on the other hand, despite being "new money," is reaping the rewards of being in the center of the social scene. Life seems pretty good until they meet again at a party and Felicity ends up locked in a basement, with her friend slowly building her tomb brick by brick.
There are so many secrets in this book and it is DARK. The pacing is excellent and kept me turning the pages, wanting to find out how their friendship fell apart and what really happened to Tress's parents, all the while being saturated in this sort of Gothic small-town setting where everything is politics. In some ways, this was like a checklist of some of my favorite tropes and it could have easily been a five-star read for me, but there were a few things I didn't really like. (1) The lack of closure (although since this is a duology, I get it, I just don't like it) and (2) Giving the animals its own POV and having it be in poetry. That just felt a bit too gimmicky for me and it pulled me out of the narrative.
This is a pretty solid book, though. Nobody can write female antiheroes like Mindy McGinnis.
4 stars
September 14, 2020
This is an exceptionally well-written YA book that I wholeheartedly recommend. I was a big reader of YA thrillers as a kid (Christopher Pike was my favorite!) and one of the things that was most important to me was that the adult writer not "talk down" to me for being a kid. I wanted my YA books to sound like they were actually narrated by other young adults. McGinnis is *fantastic* at this. She does not underestimate her young readers' intelligence or capability of understanding mature issues. I would have totally devoured this as a kid when I was fully immersed in some of the issues the kids are going through here, and I also really enjoyed it as an adult. Also, it's really great to listen to a book where kids act and talk like kids actually do - sometimes swearing, sometimes talking about sex, sometimes doing other stuff kids do that adults would prefer they not do, and sometimes completely dark, as adults can be. The use of social media was also very authentic and did not have the feeling of "stodgy adult trying to explain how kids use The Face Book." (I am guilty of this sometimes myself...it comes with age, I suppose.)
I don't want to say too much about the plot because I think it's best to let it unfold, but I will say.....
*Stefan voice* YA's hottest new book "The Initial Insult" has everything: a "white trash zoo," secret drug deals, a compelling lead, a potentially shady best friend, missing parents, prose that is almost poetry, a mysterious, moneyed town where everyone has secrets, and a spooky poetic cat narrator. (Wait, what? Yes, seriously. Not for the whole book, don't worry.) As you may gather from the spooky cat, the book is influenced by Edgar Allen Poe, so if you are a Poe fan, you will have some guesses at different directions it could go, but will still be surprised. This is a totally unique and interesting book.
I was not sure how my experience with a synthetic voice audiobook would be, and it was completely fine. I think I was imagining that it would be a TV-robot type voice, but instead the voice sounds more natural. Of course, it does not carry the acting and vocal performance an audiobook reader will give to it, which primarily impacted the end of the book in my opinion - but it was an interesting new way to listen to the book. You have to sort of picture different emotions in your head with the words so it takes a bit more work and may not be for everyone. I predict the actual audiobook will be way more sinister.
I am definitely going to read the second book. The ending was so great and creepy that I can't imagine what might happen next, and will love to see where the series will go from here.
4.5 stars rounded up for the amazing, totally experimental Poe-esque theme and writing. Thanks to Harper Collins, Mindy McGinnis and NetGalley for this totally original and fun YA read.
I don't want to say too much about the plot because I think it's best to let it unfold, but I will say.....
*Stefan voice* YA's hottest new book "The Initial Insult" has everything: a "white trash zoo," secret drug deals, a compelling lead, a potentially shady best friend, missing parents, prose that is almost poetry, a mysterious, moneyed town where everyone has secrets, and a spooky poetic cat narrator. (Wait, what? Yes, seriously. Not for the whole book, don't worry.) As you may gather from the spooky cat, the book is influenced by Edgar Allen Poe, so if you are a Poe fan, you will have some guesses at different directions it could go, but will still be surprised. This is a totally unique and interesting book.
I was not sure how my experience with a synthetic voice audiobook would be, and it was completely fine. I think I was imagining that it would be a TV-robot type voice, but instead the voice sounds more natural. Of course, it does not carry the acting and vocal performance an audiobook reader will give to it, which primarily impacted the end of the book in my opinion - but it was an interesting new way to listen to the book. You have to sort of picture different emotions in your head with the words so it takes a bit more work and may not be for everyone. I predict the actual audiobook will be way more sinister.
I am definitely going to read the second book. The ending was so great and creepy that I can't imagine what might happen next, and will love to see where the series will go from here.
4.5 stars rounded up for the amazing, totally experimental Poe-esque theme and writing. Thanks to Harper Collins, Mindy McGinnis and NetGalley for this totally original and fun YA read.
August 2, 2021
This is a down right brutal and gut wrenching re-imagining of by Edgar Allen Poe!
Mindy McGinnis did an excellent job at retelling The Cask Of Amontillado. I felt that she stuck to the story enough that you were able to pick up on the subtle hints and similarities while also making it very much her own. I will say that this is way more brutal, gory and detailed than the original story though haha. So if those things are something that trigger you, maybe avoid this one.
I personally found it gut wrenching (particularly the end) which isn't necessarily a pleasant feeling. But for any author to be able to make you feel such intense feelings like that, I have to say that it was very well written. Although I found it well written and the retelling well done, there wasn't much about this that wowed me. It was a good book and a book that I'd recommend but I didn't find it anything that was mind blowing. So in that regard, I was a little disappointed.
So as i said, this book is well written, got a back story on the girls friendship and lives... The only real critic that I have of this is that there wasn't a whole lot of dimension to the characters. This is more of a plot based book. And I didn't really understand the point of the cat? I liked the idea of seeing things through a big cats eyes (one that's in a zoo, especially) But I didn't find that he added much to the story aside from just another perspective on how things went down. So I do think that this story would have been just as good with out that character in it.
However this isn't a bad book. This is actually a really good book! There just were some aspects that disappointed me a little. That being said, if this sounds like something that interests you, I highly recommend giving this one a shot!
This was sent to me by Katherine Tegen Books via Netgalley. So thank you so much to them for sending me an audio- arc copy in exchangeneral for an honest review!
Mindy McGinnis did an excellent job at retelling The Cask Of Amontillado. I felt that she stuck to the story enough that you were able to pick up on the subtle hints and similarities while also making it very much her own. I will say that this is way more brutal, gory and detailed than the original story though haha. So if those things are something that trigger you, maybe avoid this one.
I personally found it gut wrenching (particularly the end) which isn't necessarily a pleasant feeling. But for any author to be able to make you feel such intense feelings like that, I have to say that it was very well written. Although I found it well written and the retelling well done, there wasn't much about this that wowed me. It was a good book and a book that I'd recommend but I didn't find it anything that was mind blowing. So in that regard, I was a little disappointed.
So as i said, this book is well written, got a back story on the girls friendship and lives... The only real critic that I have of this is that there wasn't a whole lot of dimension to the characters. This is more of a plot based book. And I didn't really understand the point of the cat? I liked the idea of seeing things through a big cats eyes (one that's in a zoo, especially) But I didn't find that he added much to the story aside from just another perspective on how things went down. So I do think that this story would have been just as good with out that character in it.
However this isn't a bad book. This is actually a really good book! There just were some aspects that disappointed me a little. That being said, if this sounds like something that interests you, I highly recommend giving this one a shot!
This was sent to me by Katherine Tegen Books via Netgalley. So thank you so much to them for sending me an audio- arc copy in exchangeneral for an honest review!
June 6, 2021
Holy shit, this was terrible.
I can’t believe Mindy McGinnis actually wrote this book. It tries so hard to be edgy and obtains the opposite. I hated everything about this, from the quirky atmosphere, to the characters, to the zoo and the party and the flashbacks. It was absolutely not worth my time.
I am so tired of reading about a cliched and standard showdown between a popular girl and an unpopular girl in high school. The thing is, it has been done so many times already you need really good characters and an interesting mystery to pull it off. Otherwise it ends up being just a bunch of boring stereotypes. This book had nothing to add to that.
Both Felicity and Tress were unlikable and got on my nerves. I don’t need to have likable characters to love a book, I actually love reading about unlikable characters more because their flaws make them real. However, these two made me roll my eyes at every paragraph with their complaints, stupidity and contradictory behavior. I hate when Tress pretends she cares about her cousin and then lets the people at the party bully him while drunk. Worldwide. She actually uses him as a distraction to go torture another person in the basement? What the actual fuck.
At the end Tress kills Felicity and at the last moment we as readers are supposed to believe she suddenly cares about her again and loves her as a friend. Bitch PLEASE. That wasn’t smooth at all.
Cat’s chapters were also a pain in the ass. Did they add to the story? No. Did they even make sense? No, they were confusing and out of place. I listened to the first of Cat’s chapters at least three times and then gave up.
This book was repetitive, full of uninteresting flashback, with a boring mystery and annoying characters. How did the author mess up a Poe retelling? How did she write this book after how good Be Not Far From Me was? I’m baffled.
I can’t believe Mindy McGinnis actually wrote this book. It tries so hard to be edgy and obtains the opposite. I hated everything about this, from the quirky atmosphere, to the characters, to the zoo and the party and the flashbacks. It was absolutely not worth my time.
I am so tired of reading about a cliched and standard showdown between a popular girl and an unpopular girl in high school. The thing is, it has been done so many times already you need really good characters and an interesting mystery to pull it off. Otherwise it ends up being just a bunch of boring stereotypes. This book had nothing to add to that.
Both Felicity and Tress were unlikable and got on my nerves. I don’t need to have likable characters to love a book, I actually love reading about unlikable characters more because their flaws make them real. However, these two made me roll my eyes at every paragraph with their complaints, stupidity and contradictory behavior. I hate when Tress pretends she cares about her cousin and then lets the people at the party bully him while drunk. Worldwide. She actually uses him as a distraction to go torture another person in the basement? What the actual fuck.
At the end Tress kills Felicity and at the last moment we as readers are supposed to believe she suddenly cares about her again and loves her as a friend. Bitch PLEASE. That wasn’t smooth at all.
Cat’s chapters were also a pain in the ass. Did they add to the story? No. Did they even make sense? No, they were confusing and out of place. I listened to the first of Cat’s chapters at least three times and then gave up.
This book was repetitive, full of uninteresting flashback, with a boring mystery and annoying characters. How did the author mess up a Poe retelling? How did she write this book after how good Be Not Far From Me was? I’m baffled.
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March 12, 2022
The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could, but when he ventured upon insult I vowed revenge.
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Edgar Allan Poe in Appalachia!? SOLD. Mindy McGinnis knows the weird stories my brain wants before I do.
This did not disappoint. At all. Except that I finished it and now I feel a little shell shocked and a lot impressed. Just. What the fuck is this? What did it do to me?
Possibly her best yet.
I've likely said it before at some point, but I'll reiterate here; is a motherfucking fearless writer. She crafts such well developed characters, but is unfraid to kill or maim her darlings. To plagiarize myself quickly, from when I talked about , "She writes holding nothing back and it will make you simultaneously squirm and cheer."
I would advise going into this without reading into the plot too heavily. I mean, Edgar Allan Poe in Appalachia; what else do you need to know? I will say that a knowledge of Poe might be beneficial and enhance the reading experience, but it's certainly not necessary. Even a skating pop culture awareness is fine.
Because as much as this is inspired and crafted by Poe, it's ultimately its own story of revenge, pain, secrets, and mistakes. Tress and Felicity, our two main characters, are both harboring regrets and fueled by desperation. It's so easy to like them both, even when their motives are in direct opposition. Whether they're cruel or vulnerable, violent or wounded, they are ultimately solid and believable characters, making painful and life altering decisions in a heart rending, captivating story.
I also just found out this is a DUOLOGY?
After that literally breathtaking ending, I have ZERO idea what to expect next. I could write a solid 200 page novella just on the HEART STOPPING conclusion. I'm worried I'm over-hyping it, but at the same time, this book metaphorically punched me in the face.
It's brazenly shocking, but it's earned. Every step taken by the characters in the pages before support what happens. It's a wham moment that's earned, arisen from character and plot and not just wanting a cheap shock to amp up the finale.
I've done nothing in this review but rant about how much I loved The Initial Insult. And I'm okay with that. I just had a heck of a good time reading this. It pushed all the right buttons for me and I loved every bloody page of it.
Thanks to Edelweiss and Katherine Tegen Books for the review copy!
Edgar Allan Poe in Appalachia!? SOLD. Mindy McGinnis knows the weird stories my brain wants before I do.
This did not disappoint. At all. Except that I finished it and now I feel a little shell shocked and a lot impressed. Just. What the fuck is this? What did it do to me?
Possibly her best yet.
I've likely said it before at some point, but I'll reiterate here; is a motherfucking fearless writer. She crafts such well developed characters, but is unfraid to kill or maim her darlings. To plagiarize myself quickly, from when I talked about , "She writes holding nothing back and it will make you simultaneously squirm and cheer."
I would advise going into this without reading into the plot too heavily. I mean, Edgar Allan Poe in Appalachia; what else do you need to know? I will say that a knowledge of Poe might be beneficial and enhance the reading experience, but it's certainly not necessary. Even a skating pop culture awareness is fine.
Because as much as this is inspired and crafted by Poe, it's ultimately its own story of revenge, pain, secrets, and mistakes. Tress and Felicity, our two main characters, are both harboring regrets and fueled by desperation. It's so easy to like them both, even when their motives are in direct opposition. Whether they're cruel or vulnerable, violent or wounded, they are ultimately solid and believable characters, making painful and life altering decisions in a heart rending, captivating story.
I also just found out this is a DUOLOGY?
After that literally breathtaking ending, I have ZERO idea what to expect next. I could write a solid 200 page novella just on the HEART STOPPING conclusion. I'm worried I'm over-hyping it, but at the same time, this book metaphorically punched me in the face.
It's brazenly shocking, but it's earned. Every step taken by the characters in the pages before support what happens. It's a wham moment that's earned, arisen from character and plot and not just wanting a cheap shock to amp up the finale.
I've done nothing in this review but rant about how much I loved The Initial Insult. And I'm okay with that. I just had a heck of a good time reading this. It pushed all the right buttons for me and I loved every bloody page of it.
Thanks to Edelweiss and Katherine Tegen Books for the review copy!
February 1, 2021
3.5 Stars � THE INITIAL INSULT gives a modern YA spin to the imagination of Edgar Allan Poe, taking inspiration from several of his classic tales of suspense. In Amontillado, Ohio, at the condemned Usher House, Tress Montor devises a sinister plan to get information out of her former best friend, Felicity Turnado.
Tress's parents disappeared seven years ago, and the only witness was Felicity, though she's buried any memories of that terrible night in her subconscious. So in The Cask of Amontillado style, Tress plans to wall up Felicity, brick by brick, in Usher House's coal chute, unless she finally admits what happened to Mr. & Mrs. Montor.
This book was strange and dramatic, and gruesome at times. None of the characters were particularly likable, but I'm glad there was a dual narrative between Tress & Felicity, so at least we could hear where both were coming from. There was also a third POV from the character "Cat," whose voice was confusing. I'm not sure that being inside Cat's head was necessary.
Something to note: THE INITIAL INSULT is the first book in a duology, so it's left open-ended in regards to the mystery of the missing parents and other points. There was A LOT of drama going on in this book (drug abuse, animal cruelty, bullying, class struggle, family secrets), so I'm assuming the second book will make sense out of everything, though we'll have to wait until next year to see.
Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Tress's parents disappeared seven years ago, and the only witness was Felicity, though she's buried any memories of that terrible night in her subconscious. So in The Cask of Amontillado style, Tress plans to wall up Felicity, brick by brick, in Usher House's coal chute, unless she finally admits what happened to Mr. & Mrs. Montor.
This book was strange and dramatic, and gruesome at times. None of the characters were particularly likable, but I'm glad there was a dual narrative between Tress & Felicity, so at least we could hear where both were coming from. There was also a third POV from the character "Cat," whose voice was confusing. I'm not sure that being inside Cat's head was necessary.
Something to note: THE INITIAL INSULT is the first book in a duology, so it's left open-ended in regards to the mystery of the missing parents and other points. There was A LOT of drama going on in this book (drug abuse, animal cruelty, bullying, class struggle, family secrets), so I'm assuming the second book will make sense out of everything, though we'll have to wait until next year to see.
Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the publisher through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
November 22, 2020
I’ve read a book by Mindy McGinnis in the past and I was a big fan so I was super excited to get an advanced audiobook from Netgalley for her newest novel!
So the audiobook is told by a synthetic voice narrator until the actual audiobook is published�. I don’t know why they just didn’t wait till they started real production. The voice drove me insane, I felt like Siri was reading to me and it’s not the most enjoyable experience. Hopefully when the final copy is out it will add to the experience because for me, it personally ruined it. I had to start it over three times because I had a hard time paying attention.
Okay now that I got that out of the way, let’s move on to the actual book itself. This reminded me of Tiger King (even though I never watched it) mixed with Edgar Allan Poe. Our main characters Tress and Felicity are ex-best friends. Tress’s parents disappear when they give Felicity a ride home and she has no recollection of what happened to them. Tress lives with her alcoholic grandpa who has a zoo (Tiger King) while Felicity is off living her best life. Tress takes matters into her own hands to try to scare Felicity into telling her what really happened that night by sealing her shut in a basement brick by brick (my worst nightmare).
We get to hear from both girls and while you feel bad for them both, Tress was not that likable. It jumps around from when the girls were friends and what happened for their inevitable break up. Tress is too petty and immature, I know it’s the point to not like her but damn, she’s crazy. They both are messy and complicated so the relationship surrounding them was pretty intriguing. I will definitely continue with the series HOWEVER I will not ever be reviewing a synthetic voice ever again, I have to make sure I look out for that because I think this made it a lot less enjoyable. I tried to not like it affect my review too much but it does, sorry.
The Initial Insult will be published February 23rd, 2021. Thank you to Netgalley, Harper Children’s, and Katherine Tegen books for the advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
So the audiobook is told by a synthetic voice narrator until the actual audiobook is published�. I don’t know why they just didn’t wait till they started real production. The voice drove me insane, I felt like Siri was reading to me and it’s not the most enjoyable experience. Hopefully when the final copy is out it will add to the experience because for me, it personally ruined it. I had to start it over three times because I had a hard time paying attention.
Okay now that I got that out of the way, let’s move on to the actual book itself. This reminded me of Tiger King (even though I never watched it) mixed with Edgar Allan Poe. Our main characters Tress and Felicity are ex-best friends. Tress’s parents disappear when they give Felicity a ride home and she has no recollection of what happened to them. Tress lives with her alcoholic grandpa who has a zoo (Tiger King) while Felicity is off living her best life. Tress takes matters into her own hands to try to scare Felicity into telling her what really happened that night by sealing her shut in a basement brick by brick (my worst nightmare).
We get to hear from both girls and while you feel bad for them both, Tress was not that likable. It jumps around from when the girls were friends and what happened for their inevitable break up. Tress is too petty and immature, I know it’s the point to not like her but damn, she’s crazy. They both are messy and complicated so the relationship surrounding them was pretty intriguing. I will definitely continue with the series HOWEVER I will not ever be reviewing a synthetic voice ever again, I have to make sure I look out for that because I think this made it a lot less enjoyable. I tried to not like it affect my review too much but it does, sorry.
The Initial Insult will be published February 23rd, 2021. Thank you to Netgalley, Harper Children’s, and Katherine Tegen books for the advanced copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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April 10, 2021I think we can all agree that what the actual fuck.
I have such a weird relationship with McGinnis' books. I love that she writes the strangest but often most compelling, unflinching, kind of things. But I seem to either love them, hate them, or not know whether I love or hate them. This is in the last category. And it's a stranger feeling, too, considering this isn't a standalone and there's to be a sequel. Maybe I'll know which camp I fall into after reading book two? Because I will.
I couldn't tear myself away from this, could only stare unblinking as things got weirder and continued to escalate, and then.. that ending. Which we know isn't an ending, but. Wow.
I've read this two months early so I'm going to be incredibly interested to see where this goes, and how people feel, as more readers pick it up. There's really not much more to say! Compelling, yes, but definitely a qu'est-ce-que-fuck kind of read.
** I received an ARC from Edelweiss+ and the publisher (thank you!) in exchange for an honest review. **
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I have such a weird relationship with McGinnis' books. I love that she writes the strangest but often most compelling, unflinching, kind of things. But I seem to either love them, hate them, or not know whether I love or hate them. This is in the last category. And it's a stranger feeling, too, considering this isn't a standalone and there's to be a sequel. Maybe I'll know which camp I fall into after reading book two? Because I will.
I couldn't tear myself away from this, could only stare unblinking as things got weirder and continued to escalate, and then.. that ending. Which we know isn't an ending, but. Wow.
I've read this two months early so I'm going to be incredibly interested to see where this goes, and how people feel, as more readers pick it up. There's really not much more to say! Compelling, yes, but definitely a qu'est-ce-que-fuck kind of read.
** I received an ARC from Edelweiss+ and the publisher (thank you!) in exchange for an honest review. **
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March 31, 2021
I didn't realize that this would end on such a cliffhanger or I might have waited until the next book was closer to release in order to read it. Just a warning for those who are interested, pretty much nothing is resolved by the end, there are so many loose ends.
I loved the homage to The Cask of Amontillado and the various nuances and references to the story. It's a very dark tale, but it's all the better for the darkness. I also was fascinated by the ending and am very curious to see the direction the plot will take now. The idea that Tess's parents disappeared and no one knows what happened to them is one of my catnip plot points, so I know I'll continue with the next book in the series to find out how and what will be revealed. The voices of the teenagers is incredibly authentic and the author does a wonderful job at making them seem very real. Teens reading this novel will appreciate that they say/do/act like real teens and not some adult's version of a teen.
While I overall appreciated everything above, I was also very disappointed to realize that not one single thing was wrapped up in this book. I can be ok with a cliffhanger if I get some resolution, but there is none here. Maybe when I can read the rest of the story I can rate this a little higher when taken as a package, because the writing is good and mysterious and I loved the alternating points of view. I listened to much of this as an audio book and the narrators are wonderful at personifying the characters.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book, all opinions are my own.
I loved the homage to The Cask of Amontillado and the various nuances and references to the story. It's a very dark tale, but it's all the better for the darkness. I also was fascinated by the ending and am very curious to see the direction the plot will take now. The idea that Tess's parents disappeared and no one knows what happened to them is one of my catnip plot points, so I know I'll continue with the next book in the series to find out how and what will be revealed. The voices of the teenagers is incredibly authentic and the author does a wonderful job at making them seem very real. Teens reading this novel will appreciate that they say/do/act like real teens and not some adult's version of a teen.
While I overall appreciated everything above, I was also very disappointed to realize that not one single thing was wrapped up in this book. I can be ok with a cliffhanger if I get some resolution, but there is none here. Maybe when I can read the rest of the story I can rate this a little higher when taken as a package, because the writing is good and mysterious and I loved the alternating points of view. I listened to much of this as an audio book and the narrators are wonderful at personifying the characters.
I voluntarily reviewed a complimentary copy of this book, all opinions are my own.
May 19, 2022
If you ever wanted the POV of a cat (panther), this is the book for you.
June 23, 2021
3.5 stars
I've read a few books by Mindy McGinnis and she proves once again she is a unique storyteller. Her books are never dull, that's for sure. I might not have loved every single aspect of this story but it was an interesting ride.
Essentially the story is about a friendship gone bad. High school senior Tress Montor is desperate to find out why her parents disappeared seven years ago. Her former best friend, Felicity, was the last known person to have seen them. Felicity has always claimed she doesn't remember what exactly happened the night in question. Let's just say Tress has come up with an unusual plan to get her to talk. (If you want to be truly surprised at a pretty wild plot twist, avoid reading the publisher synopsis)
After a sluggish start, I was immediately hooked once I found out what Tress had in store for Felicity. The chapters are short and alternate between past and present events. While I liked hearing both girls' perspectives on everything, I didn't care for the occasional chapters featuring a cat.
The book was a quick read for me as I was so curious where the story was headed given the current situation with Tress and Felicity. I also wanted to know why the parents went missing. The party is something else that I had an inkling would play an important role in the story as well.
The book doesn't end on the most satisfying note and part of the reason for that is it is the first one in a planned duology. So I get that not everything is meant to be wrapped up all nice and neat. However, the ending left me somewhat lost and confused. My first reaction was , "Wait! What?". The execution of the final chapters was slightly off in my opinion.
It's a captivating story and I'll read the second book without a doubt. I literally have no clue where the author will take the story which adds to the excitement and anticipation.
I've read a few books by Mindy McGinnis and she proves once again she is a unique storyteller. Her books are never dull, that's for sure. I might not have loved every single aspect of this story but it was an interesting ride.
Essentially the story is about a friendship gone bad. High school senior Tress Montor is desperate to find out why her parents disappeared seven years ago. Her former best friend, Felicity, was the last known person to have seen them. Felicity has always claimed she doesn't remember what exactly happened the night in question. Let's just say Tress has come up with an unusual plan to get her to talk. (If you want to be truly surprised at a pretty wild plot twist, avoid reading the publisher synopsis)
After a sluggish start, I was immediately hooked once I found out what Tress had in store for Felicity. The chapters are short and alternate between past and present events. While I liked hearing both girls' perspectives on everything, I didn't care for the occasional chapters featuring a cat.
The book was a quick read for me as I was so curious where the story was headed given the current situation with Tress and Felicity. I also wanted to know why the parents went missing. The party is something else that I had an inkling would play an important role in the story as well.
The book doesn't end on the most satisfying note and part of the reason for that is it is the first one in a planned duology. So I get that not everything is meant to be wrapped up all nice and neat. However, the ending left me somewhat lost and confused. My first reaction was , "Wait! What?". The execution of the final chapters was slightly off in my opinion.
It's a captivating story and I'll read the second book without a doubt. I literally have no clue where the author will take the story which adds to the excitement and anticipation.
February 26, 2021
“Welcome to Amontillado, Ohio, where your last name is worth more than money, and secrets can be kept� for a price.�
I listened to this book 5 months ago. I had an early copy from NetGalley; my first ALC with a synthetic voice - not a copy of the official audiobook. I still rated it 5 stars. Mindy is my favorite YA author; her material is definitely on the darker side. The Initial Insult is a Poe-inspired YA thriller that draws from elements of Edgar Allan Poe short stories - The Cask of Amontillado, The Black Cat, and The Masque of the Red Death.
This is the expertly crafted story of Tress Montor & Felicity Turnado and the dissolution of their friendship. The two BFF’s are no longer speaking. It was hard enough to maintain their friendship; one is from an affluent family (Felicity) & the other considered white trash (Tress). One night, Tress’s parents go missing while driving Felicity home. No one knows what happened to them except Felicity, but she doesn’t remember. Tress now has to live with her drunken, one-eyed grandpa at his white trash zoo. There are 3 POV’s: Tress (read by Lisa Flanagan), Felicity (read by Brittany Pressley), and the panther (read by Tim Campbell). Tress engineers a way to get Felicity to finally tell her what happened to her parents. The Initial Insult is graphic & fueled by vengeance. Just imagine the possibilities of what could possibly go wrong at a white trash zoo...(hello Tiger King). My favorite things about it: the retelling aspect had me wondering if Poe came back from the dead to write one more story; the suspense builds at such a great pace; Mindy’s plots are tight, she doesn’t use fodder...the audiobook is only 7.5 hours. I hope this book does well! I highly recommend! 5/5
I listened to this book 5 months ago. I had an early copy from NetGalley; my first ALC with a synthetic voice - not a copy of the official audiobook. I still rated it 5 stars. Mindy is my favorite YA author; her material is definitely on the darker side. The Initial Insult is a Poe-inspired YA thriller that draws from elements of Edgar Allan Poe short stories - The Cask of Amontillado, The Black Cat, and The Masque of the Red Death.
This is the expertly crafted story of Tress Montor & Felicity Turnado and the dissolution of their friendship. The two BFF’s are no longer speaking. It was hard enough to maintain their friendship; one is from an affluent family (Felicity) & the other considered white trash (Tress). One night, Tress’s parents go missing while driving Felicity home. No one knows what happened to them except Felicity, but she doesn’t remember. Tress now has to live with her drunken, one-eyed grandpa at his white trash zoo. There are 3 POV’s: Tress (read by Lisa Flanagan), Felicity (read by Brittany Pressley), and the panther (read by Tim Campbell). Tress engineers a way to get Felicity to finally tell her what happened to her parents. The Initial Insult is graphic & fueled by vengeance. Just imagine the possibilities of what could possibly go wrong at a white trash zoo...(hello Tiger King). My favorite things about it: the retelling aspect had me wondering if Poe came back from the dead to write one more story; the suspense builds at such a great pace; Mindy’s plots are tight, she doesn’t use fodder...the audiobook is only 7.5 hours. I hope this book does well! I highly recommend! 5/5
March 14, 2021
It was such a weird book.
Insult#1: Because it was one of the anticipated releases I was so utterly disappointed with it basically from page 1. The thing is, Mindy's books have always been a hit or miss for me. Unfortunately, this one is a miss. Though it's not as terrible or weir as , for example.
Insult#2: The story itself is very... underwhelming. We have two friends(?) who have been acting weird around each other for years. I can't even call them friends to the full extent of this word. So, one friend decided that the other kept secrets from her, and as a master plan she came up with the idea of mummifying her friend in the brick wall while trying to find out the truth. And the truth that this other friend supposedly knows what happened with the parents of our builder friend. Uh-huh, the problem is, I am not sure either of them knows anything about what happened. It was quite obvious. On top of that, both girls have some serious mental issues.
Sarcasm included, this story would be better if they united together and mummified guys who assault women, for example.
Insult #3: This book was inspired by Edgar Allan Poe's. Well, if you count the Byronic Panther, who roams around expressing its thoughts in verse (I kid you not) and eats people and animals alike, I suppose you can call this book quite creative. But honestly, the whole Wild Cat business made this story even weirder than it initially was.
Insult #4: Now is spoiler time, so I'll put this one in a tag. If you want your curiosity eaten by the cat (pun intended) proceed reading the spoiler
Final insult: This book is weird but it ends in a huge cliffhanger. So if you do not want to involve a curiosity that most probably will be eaten by the Byronic Cat I've mentioned before - do not pick this book up. If you want to start with something saner but written by Mindy, better turn your attention to or .
March 16, 2022
A modern day retelling of by , but with teenagers. You can guess how this is going to go.
Except, it's Mindy McGinnis. So you really can't.
If you've read McGinnis before, you know what to expect, that is, the unexpected, told in a highly personal voice, and with no shortage of often gory details. McGinnis is a writer who you either like or you don't. There's a reason her books tend to be polarizing, and The Initial Insult is no exception.
Personally, I love McGinnis. Her characters tend to be intense and unreliable, often unlikeable, sometimes mentally and emotionally off-balance, but always interesting.
My only complaint is that this is a duology instead of a standalone. Of course it ends with characters left in mortal peril, but I'm not sure that's the best way to present a thriller. The tension will be substantially dissipated by the time the concluding book comes out. One longer book please.
Except, it's Mindy McGinnis. So you really can't.
If you've read McGinnis before, you know what to expect, that is, the unexpected, told in a highly personal voice, and with no shortage of often gory details. McGinnis is a writer who you either like or you don't. There's a reason her books tend to be polarizing, and The Initial Insult is no exception.
Personally, I love McGinnis. Her characters tend to be intense and unreliable, often unlikeable, sometimes mentally and emotionally off-balance, but always interesting.
My only complaint is that this is a duology instead of a standalone. Of course it ends with characters left in mortal peril, but I'm not sure that's the best way to present a thriller. The tension will be substantially dissipated by the time the concluding book comes out. One longer book please.
September 3, 2020
***Thanks to NetGalley for providing me a complimentary audio copy of THE INITIAL INSULT by Mindy McGinnis in exchange for my honest review.***
Small town hi-jinx, secrets and mystery permeate this atmospheric mystery centered around family, friendship and class. Teen girls acting badly, yet they’re portrayed in a sympathetic way that doesn’t excuse their behavior that only Mindy McGinnis can do. “Yes, I can understand why she knocked out her former friend with a brick� is a phrase I never imagined thinking.
I’m usually someone who can only do audio books an hour at a time, but I couldn’t stop listening to McGinnis’s newest masterpiece. I’m usually a creature of habit when it comes to reading. I like my favorite writers� books to feel familiar and don’t usually enjoy when they stray too far from the genres I love. McGinnis has a way of writing truly different books, ones I wouldn’t normally pick up after reading the blurb. But she’s Mindy Friggin McGinnis and I’ll can’t not read.
THE INITIAL INSULT is the first of two in a series, which means readers will get to read (or listen to) more of these flawed, yet easy to root for characters.
I enjoyed THE INITIAL INSULT so much I’m going to purchase the book.
Small town hi-jinx, secrets and mystery permeate this atmospheric mystery centered around family, friendship and class. Teen girls acting badly, yet they’re portrayed in a sympathetic way that doesn’t excuse their behavior that only Mindy McGinnis can do. “Yes, I can understand why she knocked out her former friend with a brick� is a phrase I never imagined thinking.
I’m usually someone who can only do audio books an hour at a time, but I couldn’t stop listening to McGinnis’s newest masterpiece. I’m usually a creature of habit when it comes to reading. I like my favorite writers� books to feel familiar and don’t usually enjoy when they stray too far from the genres I love. McGinnis has a way of writing truly different books, ones I wouldn’t normally pick up after reading the blurb. But she’s Mindy Friggin McGinnis and I’ll can’t not read.
THE INITIAL INSULT is the first of two in a series, which means readers will get to read (or listen to) more of these flawed, yet easy to root for characters.
I enjoyed THE INITIAL INSULT so much I’m going to purchase the book.
May 29, 2022
I don't even know where to start with this one, I've never read anything like it before in my life. It filled the Edgar Allan Poe's Murder Mystery Dinner Party sized hole in my heart, along with a peppering of Black Friday (the musical, not the actual day). The different Poe stories were woven in so well, and although I didn't know much about The Fall of the House of Usher, the little I did know (thanks, Ghost Quartet, specifically Usher, Prt. 3) came in handy. I really felt for both Felicity and Tress, and poor Ribbit too, the way the other kids treated him made my blood boil. There were so many little name-drops and references to various works of Poe's that I caught, and surely some that I didn't. You can tell that this book was written out of a love for his works.
However, the fact that I have to wait a year for the sequel after THAT ENDING is a crime.
However, the fact that I have to wait a year for the sequel after THAT ENDING is a crime.
March 11, 2023
Me at this very moment, having just finished this book:
One thing's for sure, Mindy McGinnis will ALWAYS fuck me up. And while I'm glad for that... part of me is now indescribably angry that I have to WAIT for book 2. Goddammit.
I explained the ending to Husband and equated it to the mindfuck that had to've happened when people saw Romeo & Juliet for the first time and got THAT ending.
I deeply appreciate the references to so many of Poe's works, although I have to say (as I saw noted in another review) that reading this amid a global pandemic is maybe Not the Best Idea. The unpacking-the-former-friendship was brilliantly done. Hugh might be my favorite.
One thing's for sure, Mindy McGinnis will ALWAYS fuck me up. And while I'm glad for that... part of me is now indescribably angry that I have to WAIT for book 2. Goddammit.
I explained the ending to Husband and equated it to the mindfuck that had to've happened when people saw Romeo & Juliet for the first time and got THAT ending.
I deeply appreciate the references to so many of Poe's works, although I have to say (as I saw noted in another review) that reading this amid a global pandemic is maybe Not the Best Idea. The unpacking-the-former-friendship was brilliantly done. Hugh might be my favorite.
Shelved as 'to-read-so-bad-it-hurts'
December 11, 2019'Mindy McGinnis's YA duology, The Initial Insult and The Last Laugh, which blends retellings of Edgar Allan Poe stories in a contemporary Appalachian Ohio setting.'
INTO IT
INTO IT
May 8, 2023
� 4 stars �
“Three years ago, I was dry and warm and safe, dialing the police when I woke up to an empty house. Felicity woke up wet and cold and confused, lying on a riverbank. Now Felicity is the one who is dry and warm and safe and I’m the one soaking wet, wondering what the hell just happened.
What did happen, Felicity?
Exactly what the hell happened?�
If you've read Edgar Allen Poe's 'The Cask of Amontillado', then you should already be familiar with the premise of The Initial Insult. And what amazes me is that despite me not particularly likingeither of the two FMCs - Tress Montor and Felicity Tornado - this was still such a chilling and thrilling YA thriller - where the stakes are literally stacked against you - with Felicity's life precariously hanging on a ticking time clock that the writing kept alive with it's very distinctive choice of words and clear-cut style that made me feel that with each brick Tress laid out for her, was one trapping me alongside with her. 😨😨
It's sad - I didn't quite agree with either of them or their motives - I sympathized with Felicity a bit because most of the situations where Tress was holding her accountable for - wasn't entirely her fault yet blamed with the guise of misconception. And yet, I did feel bad for Tress, because to go from a life of blissful luxury to a life of squalor and pain would take its toll on anyone - and when she lost that one being that meant the world to her - that one last connection to her old life - she snapped.
“A girl’s gotta do what she’s gotta do, but maybe she doesn’t have to do it alone. Like, for her own safety.”�
And what fascinated me even more is how meticulously she laid out her plan for revenge - luring Felicity in - leaving her cousin as a distraction at a high school party heading in a completely dangerous dangerous - not caring in the slightest for what was happening - simply driven mad in order to find out the truth and still recount past grievances - which I admit did feel a tad petty for the extreme measures Tress had resorted to.
“My world can’t be fixed. But maybe it can be put right.�
But, that's the thing about revenge - it's a dish best served cold. 😱😱 And Tress' heart had grown too cold to see light or reason - sense or friendship - even when she's seeing the person she once called her 'best friend' bleeding and breathless - she would not stop building up a brick wall - a wall around her heart - and trap her forever for the secrets and lies she would undoubtedly be buried alive with.
The transitions between the past and the present very very smooth and not at all confusing - even if we're being treated to a dual POV from both girls - which I did appreciate - as we got a glimpse of what their personalities and friendship was like - before and after the accident. McGinnis maintained the pacing for the secrets behind their mysterious history very well and it kept my interest - kept me turning the page - because I was trying to make sense of it all with every meticulous detail revealed - as Felicity tried with all her heart and might to remember exactly what the hell happened the night Tress' parents died and their lives were tragically changed forever.
“But instead she’s just agreeing, like I’m following a script she already had laid out. Like she knew exactly what I was doing.
Tress stands up, selects a brick. “You wouldn’t tell me, because you’re not scared enough yet,� she says, reaching for the mortar pail. “You wouldn’t tell me because fear is a powerful motivator. But you know what’s stronger?�
She comes closer, toes touching the bricks she’s already laid, face close to mine. “Shame,� she says.�
Both girls were disastrously flawed - this may have been a twisted act of retribution based on guilt and shame and even relying on fear -but this really was the perception of not knowing. Tress was so afflicted with her parents just suddenly disappearing - she couldn't make sense of how her own best friend couldn't remember - couldn't reveal what happened that night.
You can hide from the past - but you can't run from the truth.
And this suspense yet twisted tale of a friendship gone horribly awry could suddenly unravel at the seams to such an extent that could lead to death gripped me right from the start. You know you're in too deep when every thud that echoes with each new brick Tress adds to the impending wall, i could hear it in my veins - and as the fear escalates and the pages slowly diminish - you can't help but wonder will Felicity make it out alive...😰😰
“Three years ago, I was dry and warm and safe, dialing the police when I woke up to an empty house. Felicity woke up wet and cold and confused, lying on a riverbank. Now Felicity is the one who is dry and warm and safe and I’m the one soaking wet, wondering what the hell just happened.
What did happen, Felicity?
Exactly what the hell happened?�
If you've read Edgar Allen Poe's 'The Cask of Amontillado', then you should already be familiar with the premise of The Initial Insult. And what amazes me is that despite me not particularly likingeither of the two FMCs - Tress Montor and Felicity Tornado - this was still such a chilling and thrilling YA thriller - where the stakes are literally stacked against you - with Felicity's life precariously hanging on a ticking time clock that the writing kept alive with it's very distinctive choice of words and clear-cut style that made me feel that with each brick Tress laid out for her, was one trapping me alongside with her. 😨😨
It's sad - I didn't quite agree with either of them or their motives - I sympathized with Felicity a bit because most of the situations where Tress was holding her accountable for - wasn't entirely her fault yet blamed with the guise of misconception. And yet, I did feel bad for Tress, because to go from a life of blissful luxury to a life of squalor and pain would take its toll on anyone - and when she lost that one being that meant the world to her - that one last connection to her old life - she snapped.
“A girl’s gotta do what she’s gotta do, but maybe she doesn’t have to do it alone. Like, for her own safety.”�
And what fascinated me even more is how meticulously she laid out her plan for revenge - luring Felicity in - leaving her cousin as a distraction at a high school party heading in a completely dangerous dangerous - not caring in the slightest for what was happening - simply driven mad in order to find out the truth and still recount past grievances - which I admit did feel a tad petty for the extreme measures Tress had resorted to.
“My world can’t be fixed. But maybe it can be put right.�
But, that's the thing about revenge - it's a dish best served cold. 😱😱 And Tress' heart had grown too cold to see light or reason - sense or friendship - even when she's seeing the person she once called her 'best friend' bleeding and breathless - she would not stop building up a brick wall - a wall around her heart - and trap her forever for the secrets and lies she would undoubtedly be buried alive with.
The transitions between the past and the present very very smooth and not at all confusing - even if we're being treated to a dual POV from both girls - which I did appreciate - as we got a glimpse of what their personalities and friendship was like - before and after the accident. McGinnis maintained the pacing for the secrets behind their mysterious history very well and it kept my interest - kept me turning the page - because I was trying to make sense of it all with every meticulous detail revealed - as Felicity tried with all her heart and might to remember exactly what the hell happened the night Tress' parents died and their lives were tragically changed forever.
“But instead she’s just agreeing, like I’m following a script she already had laid out. Like she knew exactly what I was doing.
Tress stands up, selects a brick. “You wouldn’t tell me, because you’re not scared enough yet,� she says, reaching for the mortar pail. “You wouldn’t tell me because fear is a powerful motivator. But you know what’s stronger?�
She comes closer, toes touching the bricks she’s already laid, face close to mine. “Shame,� she says.�
Both girls were disastrously flawed - this may have been a twisted act of retribution based on guilt and shame and even relying on fear -but this really was the perception of not knowing. Tress was so afflicted with her parents just suddenly disappearing - she couldn't make sense of how her own best friend couldn't remember - couldn't reveal what happened that night.
You can hide from the past - but you can't run from the truth.
And this suspense yet twisted tale of a friendship gone horribly awry could suddenly unravel at the seams to such an extent that could lead to death gripped me right from the start. You know you're in too deep when every thud that echoes with each new brick Tress adds to the impending wall, i could hear it in my veins - and as the fear escalates and the pages slowly diminish - you can't help but wonder will Felicity make it out alive...😰😰
May 30, 2021
Overall Rating : A
If I am still and quiet
I can see
other lifetimes, slipping past us,
in a place, where they ended.
The girl does not know
there is a boy above her swinging
from the rafters,
his toes brushing her forehead.
She does not see the woman
sobbing
at the dresser.
Does not hear the baby
screaming
in the corner.
She sees and hears and feels and knows
only now,
in this place.
And I marvel at the limits
of humans.
What would you do if your ex-best friend was the only witness to your parents disappearance? That spiraled to you living with your white trash grandfather working at his "exotic" animal zoo, ostracized by the entire town.
How about BEING the ex-best friend, with no memory of the night except for the guilt of letting down the only person who loved you for you? Trying to portray the perfect girl your family and friends expect you to be?
And then there's the panther.....
Two people, two different stories that all came down to the same question : What happened to Tress' parents that rainy night? And Tress, she's going to get her answer, no matter what.
This story is dark people. And I mean pitch black dark. No light in sight. You feel horrible for both girls, but it really all comes down to the message : how you would act if that one last straw broke? And that's what happened to Tress, and Felicity has to survive her wrath in the end. But, will she be able to handle her own actions in Tress' downfall from society and their view of "morals"?
Fair warning, this ends in a MAJOR cliffhanger that will want to make you throw the book across the room in a rage that the second one is not out to read immediately.
So, in conclusion, : Shitty things turn into a shitty life making shitty people trying to survive. And I loved every minute of it.
If I am still and quiet
I can see
other lifetimes, slipping past us,
in a place, where they ended.
The girl does not know
there is a boy above her swinging
from the rafters,
his toes brushing her forehead.
She does not see the woman
sobbing
at the dresser.
Does not hear the baby
screaming
in the corner.
She sees and hears and feels and knows
only now,
in this place.
And I marvel at the limits
of humans.
What would you do if your ex-best friend was the only witness to your parents disappearance? That spiraled to you living with your white trash grandfather working at his "exotic" animal zoo, ostracized by the entire town.
How about BEING the ex-best friend, with no memory of the night except for the guilt of letting down the only person who loved you for you? Trying to portray the perfect girl your family and friends expect you to be?
And then there's the panther.....
Two people, two different stories that all came down to the same question : What happened to Tress' parents that rainy night? And Tress, she's going to get her answer, no matter what.
This story is dark people. And I mean pitch black dark. No light in sight. You feel horrible for both girls, but it really all comes down to the message : how you would act if that one last straw broke? And that's what happened to Tress, and Felicity has to survive her wrath in the end. But, will she be able to handle her own actions in Tress' downfall from society and their view of "morals"?
Fair warning, this ends in a MAJOR cliffhanger that will want to make you throw the book across the room in a rage that the second one is not out to read immediately.
So, in conclusion, : Shitty things turn into a shitty life making shitty people trying to survive. And I loved every minute of it.
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August 14, 2022I don't know what to say guys. 2.5 ⭐️
I really wanted to love this one because I'm a huge fan of Mindy McGinnis. I also was looking forward to a Poe-inspired YA novel that had me on the edge of my seat with chills and frills.
The pros:
-I loved the premise. I found it so interesting that this poor girl's parent's disappeared and the only person that knows what might have happened to them is her former best friend.
-I also loved gruesome storytelling that Mindy was able to portray with these characters.
-Finally, I love the "white-trash zoo" that was featured and the fact that there was a panther let lose and hunting the humans.
-I appreciated the inspiration that came from Poe. The darkness, the tragedy, and the mystery.
-I also enjoyed the three character perspective---Tress and Felicity, as well as the CAT! So cool!
The cons:
-I felt no connection with any of the characters, which was personally hard for me to relate and/or root for any of them--even the tragic main character, Tress. However, I did feel bad for both her and Felicity because both suffered a trauma that night Tress's parents disappeared.
-I listened to the audiobook through Netgalley and the voice they used for the "ALC" was a synthetic voice, so I felt like I couldn't get the full experience of the audiobook. I think I would have liked it better if a robot wasn't reading the book to me. This book had a lot of emotions, which were not evident from the horrendous synthetic narrator reading the ALC. I WANTED THE REAL NARRATOR--how do you review an audiobook without hearing the audiobook narrator?? ugh!
-I wasn't a fan of the pacing. I felt like the story was jumping around and I honestly couldn't wrap my head around time, person, or even place in which the story was being told. I think reading this book in a visual format would be best.
-There were several moments I was just like "What? Come on! Not necessary!" --especially with the dog dying and all the nonchalant comments about kids using hard drugs/addiction.
-Finally, it ended on a somewhat cliffhanger and I still don't know what happened to Tress' parents, which I don't like. We find out secrets they had, but not really how they disappeared. I also might have missed it, which is why I plan to go back and read again. You really have to pay attention to every detail of this book.
Overall, I wanted to love this book so much more than I did and honestly I might re-read it when it officially comes out--maybe check out the real audiobook so that I can change my review to showcase more positives and a review of the narrator who may make the story better! However, at this time, I don't think I'd continue on with the duology.
I'm still a fan of Mindy McGinnis and can't wait to see what else she comes up with. Not every book from an author you love isn't going to "hit the spot" every time.
Thanks to Harper Audio and Netgalley for giving me this ALC in exchange for an honest review.
I really wanted to love this one because I'm a huge fan of Mindy McGinnis. I also was looking forward to a Poe-inspired YA novel that had me on the edge of my seat with chills and frills.
The pros:
-I loved the premise. I found it so interesting that this poor girl's parent's disappeared and the only person that knows what might have happened to them is her former best friend.
-I also loved gruesome storytelling that Mindy was able to portray with these characters.
-Finally, I love the "white-trash zoo" that was featured and the fact that there was a panther let lose and hunting the humans.
-I appreciated the inspiration that came from Poe. The darkness, the tragedy, and the mystery.
-I also enjoyed the three character perspective---Tress and Felicity, as well as the CAT! So cool!
The cons:
-I felt no connection with any of the characters, which was personally hard for me to relate and/or root for any of them--even the tragic main character, Tress. However, I did feel bad for both her and Felicity because both suffered a trauma that night Tress's parents disappeared.
-I listened to the audiobook through Netgalley and the voice they used for the "ALC" was a synthetic voice, so I felt like I couldn't get the full experience of the audiobook. I think I would have liked it better if a robot wasn't reading the book to me. This book had a lot of emotions, which were not evident from the horrendous synthetic narrator reading the ALC. I WANTED THE REAL NARRATOR--how do you review an audiobook without hearing the audiobook narrator?? ugh!
-I wasn't a fan of the pacing. I felt like the story was jumping around and I honestly couldn't wrap my head around time, person, or even place in which the story was being told. I think reading this book in a visual format would be best.
-There were several moments I was just like "What? Come on! Not necessary!" --especially with the dog dying and all the nonchalant comments about kids using hard drugs/addiction.
-Finally, it ended on a somewhat cliffhanger and I still don't know what happened to Tress' parents, which I don't like. We find out secrets they had, but not really how they disappeared. I also might have missed it, which is why I plan to go back and read again. You really have to pay attention to every detail of this book.
Overall, I wanted to love this book so much more than I did and honestly I might re-read it when it officially comes out--maybe check out the real audiobook so that I can change my review to showcase more positives and a review of the narrator who may make the story better! However, at this time, I don't think I'd continue on with the duology.
I'm still a fan of Mindy McGinnis and can't wait to see what else she comes up with. Not every book from an author you love isn't going to "hit the spot" every time.
Thanks to Harper Audio and Netgalley for giving me this ALC in exchange for an honest review.
March 23, 2022
Mindy McGinnis needs to quit writing for YA and pivot full time into Splatterpunk, a genre with fans that can appreciate her. This is the second of her books I have read and it has so much in common with popular Splatterpunk. The Initial Insult is a zero empathy revenge story and it's creepy as hell.
Overview:
❤️ Friends to enemies
❤️ A tight-nit town
❤️ Novella
❤️ No romance
❤️ Angry women
❤️ Character study
Tress and Felicity live in a town where status is everything- so when Tress's parents go missing and she is forced to live with her mentally unwell grandpa and his collection of exotic animals at the edge of town, her life falls apart. Her best friend Felicity slowly stops hanging out with her and instead hands out with her bullies; but that's not all Felicity is done. Tress is convinced that Felicity knows something about her missing parents, and she's prepared to kill Felicity to get the answers.
This is a VERY loose retelling of The Cask of Amontillado and primarily focuses on the grudges that Tress is carrying around, and how Felicity is at the touchstone of every dark event in Tress's life. It's easy to empathize with both of these characters even in a book this short. Tress is a dark, brooding type, but we quickly see how small town social climbing and abuse have shaped her. Similarly, Felicity seems like a girl who has it all, but she herself lives in a gilded cage.
The tone of the book is dark, slow, and creeping. The tension builds as you start to get a sense of the instability of both girls and find yourself wondering what choices they will make. It's hard to talk about this book without spoiling it, but it's super easy to get invested in. Im shocked the ratings are so low, which I can chalk up to how horribly placed the genre of The Initial Insult is; it feels like something that might go over the heads of a lot of kids, or be too uncomfortable.
I was actually extremely surprised in its brutality and grim dark vibes; like legitimately I kept waiting for the hopeful shoe to drop and it just doesn't. If you want to read some fucked up shit, this is your book.
Overview:
❤️ Friends to enemies
❤️ A tight-nit town
❤️ Novella
❤️ No romance
❤️ Angry women
❤️ Character study
Tress and Felicity live in a town where status is everything- so when Tress's parents go missing and she is forced to live with her mentally unwell grandpa and his collection of exotic animals at the edge of town, her life falls apart. Her best friend Felicity slowly stops hanging out with her and instead hands out with her bullies; but that's not all Felicity is done. Tress is convinced that Felicity knows something about her missing parents, and she's prepared to kill Felicity to get the answers.
This is a VERY loose retelling of The Cask of Amontillado and primarily focuses on the grudges that Tress is carrying around, and how Felicity is at the touchstone of every dark event in Tress's life. It's easy to empathize with both of these characters even in a book this short. Tress is a dark, brooding type, but we quickly see how small town social climbing and abuse have shaped her. Similarly, Felicity seems like a girl who has it all, but she herself lives in a gilded cage.
The tone of the book is dark, slow, and creeping. The tension builds as you start to get a sense of the instability of both girls and find yourself wondering what choices they will make. It's hard to talk about this book without spoiling it, but it's super easy to get invested in. Im shocked the ratings are so low, which I can chalk up to how horribly placed the genre of The Initial Insult is; it feels like something that might go over the heads of a lot of kids, or be too uncomfortable.
I was actually extremely surprised in its brutality and grim dark vibes; like legitimately I kept waiting for the hopeful shoe to drop and it just doesn't. If you want to read some fucked up shit, this is your book.
November 18, 2021
I received an ARC from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. My thoughts and opinions are my own. Any quotes I use are from an unpublished copy and may not reflect the finished product.
The Cask of Amontillado is one of my favorite Poe stories! Mindy McGinnis has written an excellent retelling that kept me on my toes until the very last page. There is so much going on in this book, and I'm not sure where to start! Should I begin with the fact that there's a JAGUAR POV that pops up throughout the book? Because that alone was amazing. It was eerie, haunting, and AHHH! Loved it!
This was also my first experience with a synthetic voice. I didn't hate it, but it was difficult to know who was talking unless I paid really close attention. Normally, I clean the house or do something else that occupies my hands, but the sameness of the voice required me to pay more attention to the chapter changes and what was going on. I saved this audio for when I was alone and painting the new house, so I was able to concentrate more on the story. My overall enjoyment wasn't impacted by the lack of a "real" voice, but I do think this book will be even better when properly narrated.
The Initial Insult is dark, and I don't mean because it takes place at night (which it does). If you don't like it when bad things happen to animals (insert sob here), then you might need to mentally prepare yourself before starting this one. I still can't think about what happened without wanting to cry. I know that means McGinnis is just really good at her job, because she made me feel BIG emotions for her fictional characters and their pets.
If I haven't lost you after that last paragraph, I think it's worth noting that Tress's entire plan is dark and disturbing. I totally understood her motives, but damn. Everyone has secrets in their small town, and she's determined to find out what they know about her parents. Felicity's flashbacks show that even Tress's parents had secrets, and how those may have played a role in their disappearance. It all ties together somehow, but I still don't know the specifics. Apparently, this is going to be a series (I didn't know that at first), so we're left with a pretty big cliffhanger. We learn something massive about Tress's parents, Tress herself makes a huge mess of things, and everyone at the party... just wow. McGinnis did me dirty with that ending, but I can forgive her since this retelling was awesome. I am definitely looking forward to the next one! (★★★★�)
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The Cask of Amontillado is one of my favorite Poe stories! Mindy McGinnis has written an excellent retelling that kept me on my toes until the very last page. There is so much going on in this book, and I'm not sure where to start! Should I begin with the fact that there's a JAGUAR POV that pops up throughout the book? Because that alone was amazing. It was eerie, haunting, and AHHH! Loved it!
This was also my first experience with a synthetic voice. I didn't hate it, but it was difficult to know who was talking unless I paid really close attention. Normally, I clean the house or do something else that occupies my hands, but the sameness of the voice required me to pay more attention to the chapter changes and what was going on. I saved this audio for when I was alone and painting the new house, so I was able to concentrate more on the story. My overall enjoyment wasn't impacted by the lack of a "real" voice, but I do think this book will be even better when properly narrated.
The Initial Insult is dark, and I don't mean because it takes place at night (which it does). If you don't like it when bad things happen to animals (insert sob here), then you might need to mentally prepare yourself before starting this one. I still can't think about what happened without wanting to cry. I know that means McGinnis is just really good at her job, because she made me feel BIG emotions for her fictional characters and their pets.
If I haven't lost you after that last paragraph, I think it's worth noting that Tress's entire plan is dark and disturbing. I totally understood her motives, but damn. Everyone has secrets in their small town, and she's determined to find out what they know about her parents. Felicity's flashbacks show that even Tress's parents had secrets, and how those may have played a role in their disappearance. It all ties together somehow, but I still don't know the specifics. Apparently, this is going to be a series (I didn't know that at first), so we're left with a pretty big cliffhanger. We learn something massive about Tress's parents, Tress herself makes a huge mess of things, and everyone at the party... just wow. McGinnis did me dirty with that ending, but I can forgive her since this retelling was awesome. I am definitely looking forward to the next one! (★★★★�)
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