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Fractured Kingdom #1
In the Shadow of Ruin
King Jide Adelani has ruled the lands of the Yoruba in West Africa for many peaceful years, but now his kingdom is in turmoil and the cold grasp of death's embrace is closing in around everything he holds dear.
Jide spent years garnering the respect and loyalty of the tribes in the hopes of uniting them into one cohesive empire when his half-brother, Prince Olise, returns from banishment to claim the throne as his own.
The offspring of a union between the late King Adeosi and the evil enchantress Ekaete, the bitter Olise has devoted the last decade to one purpose; to seize the throne and rule the kingdom. If he fails, he risks his name being erased from the history of the tribes.
With the support of his mother, a powerful witch whose name is whispered in fear across the lands of the tribes, the outcast Olise now seems unstoppable in achieving his goal.
Facing overwhelming military might and dark forces that he cannot comprehend, Jide must either choose to ignore the warnings of the gods, and seek help from those who also practice dark arts; or risk losing his kingdom.
Jide spent years garnering the respect and loyalty of the tribes in the hopes of uniting them into one cohesive empire when his half-brother, Prince Olise, returns from banishment to claim the throne as his own.
The offspring of a union between the late King Adeosi and the evil enchantress Ekaete, the bitter Olise has devoted the last decade to one purpose; to seize the throne and rule the kingdom. If he fails, he risks his name being erased from the history of the tribes.
With the support of his mother, a powerful witch whose name is whispered in fear across the lands of the tribes, the outcast Olise now seems unstoppable in achieving his goal.
Facing overwhelming military might and dark forces that he cannot comprehend, Jide must either choose to ignore the warnings of the gods, and seek help from those who also practice dark arts; or risk losing his kingdom.
362 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 12, 2021
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Tony Debajo
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Tony’s inspiration for his novel comes from his time spent in Nigeria, where he became fascinated with the culture of his heritage.
His passion for reading was built on tales of ancient civilisations. He was enthralled by their way of life, beliefs, and cultures. He devoured any books he could lay his hands on about the Roman empire, the Mongol empire, ancient Greece, Nordic civilisations, but most of all the mythology associated with these people.
He soon realised that his country of origin was equally rich with traditions, tales of ancient gods and acts of heroism and decided to tap into that world.
Garnering tales and folklore remembered as a child, some of which would have been passed down through generations and typically told around fires, he began writing his debut novel, In the Shadow of Ruin, which grew as he wrote and will now be a series called The Fractured Kingdom. Tony hopes to bring to life his characters and set them free into the world.
Facebook: @DebajoBooks
Tony’s inspiration for his novel comes from his time spent in Nigeria, where he became fascinated with the culture of his heritage.
His passion for reading was built on tales of ancient civilisations. He was enthralled by their way of life, beliefs, and cultures. He devoured any books he could lay his hands on about the Roman empire, the Mongol empire, ancient Greece, Nordic civilisations, but most of all the mythology associated with these people.
He soon realised that his country of origin was equally rich with traditions, tales of ancient gods and acts of heroism and decided to tap into that world.
Garnering tales and folklore remembered as a child, some of which would have been passed down through generations and typically told around fires, he began writing his debut novel, In the Shadow of Ruin, which grew as he wrote and will now be a series called The Fractured Kingdom. Tony hopes to bring to life his characters and set them free into the world.
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May 23, 2021
I would like to thank the Author and Booktasters for this chance to read this amazing book for an honest review.
In the Shadow of Ruin, is an amazing look into Nigerian culture and folklore, which I have never read about before.
The story is told by multiple different people so you get many different perspectives which is interesting and intriguing, as people see the situation different. This can also be confusing for some especially when there are many different tribe names and different people's names. Author did try to help with this by having a lovely glossary right at the start of the book so you could go back and forth. Unfortunately for me I did get lost a lot of the time and had to put down the book because I was getting frustrated as I was going back and forth back and forth.
The way that the author wrote about different places made me want to travel and just see how beautiful they really are. The pace of the book was good and picked up in the right places. And that ending oh my god maybe cry!!!!
I would recommend anyone that loves folklore, different cultures, good vs evil, to give this a go and let it take you somewhere else!!!!
In the Shadow of Ruin, is an amazing look into Nigerian culture and folklore, which I have never read about before.
The story is told by multiple different people so you get many different perspectives which is interesting and intriguing, as people see the situation different. This can also be confusing for some especially when there are many different tribe names and different people's names. Author did try to help with this by having a lovely glossary right at the start of the book so you could go back and forth. Unfortunately for me I did get lost a lot of the time and had to put down the book because I was getting frustrated as I was going back and forth back and forth.
The way that the author wrote about different places made me want to travel and just see how beautiful they really are. The pace of the book was good and picked up in the right places. And that ending oh my god maybe cry!!!!
I would recommend anyone that loves folklore, different cultures, good vs evil, to give this a go and let it take you somewhere else!!!!
May 6, 2021
I received a kindle version of this book from the author and reviewed it on behalf of Rosie Amber’s book review team #RBRT. Thank you Tony Debajo!
In the Shadow of Ruin, the first book in The Fractured Kingdom series, is a fascinating insight into Nigerian culture, history and folklore.
A war is raging between King Jide and his half brother, prince Olise in Yoruba, West Africa.
“There comes a time when every man must stand and fight, discarding all his fears and embracing his fate.�
This novel is written from multiple points of view and each one is engaging and intriguing. There are also many tribes and names to get used to - which I found a little confusing. There is a useful list of the tribes and characters and a glossary at the beginning of the book for the unfamiliar African terms, but I find when I’m reading a digital copy of a book I tend not to refer back to these as often as I might with a print version.
We learn through flashbacks that Jide’s mother, Bunmi, died soon after his birth after making a pact with the river goddess who demanded a life for a life. Following her death King Adeosi hastily married Ekaete who is known to practice occult black magic, known as juju. King Adeosi’s health declined in conjunction with the growth of Ekaete’s baby. She didn’t leave his side until he passed away, which suggests she was poisoning him.
In the present her son, Olise, is now at war with King Jide and Ekaete is using all kinds of black magic to help his cause. Olise, via his mother’s counsel, has taken captive the children of the various tribal leaders in order to force them onto his side in the war. Jide, however, is a respected and merciful king.
“Olise’s birth would henceforth be attributed to the single moment the destiny of the tribes was irrefutably altered.�
Selfish Toju, wise Niran and the youngest Enitan, are King Jide’s three sons and each are written with a distinctly different personality. They managed to escape the palace while Olise’s army sacked their capital city of Ile-Ife. The two eldest are fleeing together at first, later splitting up, along with their blood guards, having seen their mother dying in the palace. They are driven by vengeance for their Mother’s death and a need to keep their bloodline alive and gain followers to take on their uncle Olise. The youngest son, Enitan is traveling in a different direction, towards his mother’s family, unaware that his father and brothers are still alive.
Tony Debajo has a lovely writing style with delightful turns of phrase:
“he looked at his peers hoping that someone would speak up for him, but they all seemed extremely interested in anything else in the room; a lizard scurrying across the floor, a fly buzzing lazily in the room, anything but Soji.�
“The boy took his seat at one side of the fire, his men arrayed about him like the spikes on a porcupine’s back, all bristling with spears.�
When Toju arrives at the lands of the Hausa, the northern horse lords, we are treated to some beautiful descriptions of the palace and the local architecture and the impressive engineering feats of this people. The worldbuilding in this novel is extremely well done and makes for an easy to imagine landscape and immersive experience.
The pace of this novel flows fairly steadily with increases during the fight sequences. I found it difficult to put down and really enjoyed all the lore and back stories that added colour to the misery and determination of the battle scenes. I would recommend it to anyone intrigued by African lore and culture, and the ever present long-feared hint of black magic in the background:
“Others suggested that if you took a cane to a large banana tree in the dead of night during a full moon, witches would spew from the tree and howl into the night skies like birds released from a cage, taking your sight along with them, and henceforth you would live a life of sickness and suffering.�
I would also recommend it to anyone who enjoys a well-written story about the conflict of good vs evil.
In the Shadow of Ruin, the first book in The Fractured Kingdom series, is a fascinating insight into Nigerian culture, history and folklore.
A war is raging between King Jide and his half brother, prince Olise in Yoruba, West Africa.
“There comes a time when every man must stand and fight, discarding all his fears and embracing his fate.�
This novel is written from multiple points of view and each one is engaging and intriguing. There are also many tribes and names to get used to - which I found a little confusing. There is a useful list of the tribes and characters and a glossary at the beginning of the book for the unfamiliar African terms, but I find when I’m reading a digital copy of a book I tend not to refer back to these as often as I might with a print version.
We learn through flashbacks that Jide’s mother, Bunmi, died soon after his birth after making a pact with the river goddess who demanded a life for a life. Following her death King Adeosi hastily married Ekaete who is known to practice occult black magic, known as juju. King Adeosi’s health declined in conjunction with the growth of Ekaete’s baby. She didn’t leave his side until he passed away, which suggests she was poisoning him.
In the present her son, Olise, is now at war with King Jide and Ekaete is using all kinds of black magic to help his cause. Olise, via his mother’s counsel, has taken captive the children of the various tribal leaders in order to force them onto his side in the war. Jide, however, is a respected and merciful king.
“Olise’s birth would henceforth be attributed to the single moment the destiny of the tribes was irrefutably altered.�
Selfish Toju, wise Niran and the youngest Enitan, are King Jide’s three sons and each are written with a distinctly different personality. They managed to escape the palace while Olise’s army sacked their capital city of Ile-Ife. The two eldest are fleeing together at first, later splitting up, along with their blood guards, having seen their mother dying in the palace. They are driven by vengeance for their Mother’s death and a need to keep their bloodline alive and gain followers to take on their uncle Olise. The youngest son, Enitan is traveling in a different direction, towards his mother’s family, unaware that his father and brothers are still alive.
Tony Debajo has a lovely writing style with delightful turns of phrase:
“he looked at his peers hoping that someone would speak up for him, but they all seemed extremely interested in anything else in the room; a lizard scurrying across the floor, a fly buzzing lazily in the room, anything but Soji.�
“The boy took his seat at one side of the fire, his men arrayed about him like the spikes on a porcupine’s back, all bristling with spears.�
When Toju arrives at the lands of the Hausa, the northern horse lords, we are treated to some beautiful descriptions of the palace and the local architecture and the impressive engineering feats of this people. The worldbuilding in this novel is extremely well done and makes for an easy to imagine landscape and immersive experience.
The pace of this novel flows fairly steadily with increases during the fight sequences. I found it difficult to put down and really enjoyed all the lore and back stories that added colour to the misery and determination of the battle scenes. I would recommend it to anyone intrigued by African lore and culture, and the ever present long-feared hint of black magic in the background:
“Others suggested that if you took a cane to a large banana tree in the dead of night during a full moon, witches would spew from the tree and howl into the night skies like birds released from a cage, taking your sight along with them, and henceforth you would live a life of sickness and suffering.�
I would also recommend it to anyone who enjoys a well-written story about the conflict of good vs evil.
May 7, 2021
I received a copy of In the Shadow of Ruin in exchange for an honest review. You can read my full review at
Tony Debajo’s debut novel, In the Shadow of Ruin, is a novel of generations. There is great strength and potency to be drawn from telling family epics, the weight of legacy and the making or breaking of kindred ties are as universal as any story telling tradition from any time or place.
That said, when we’re speaking about generations, readers should be aware that implied in that are many, many characters to keep track of, a half dozen primary characters by my count and each with their own set of secondary characters attached. It's a lot for readers and an author to balance. It's a good thing, then, that Debajo is something of a gymnast with his words, deftly weaving all of his storylines across the sprawling landscape he's built for them to play out on.
The battles, and there are several as an exiled prince seeks to usurp his brother's throne, are as vicious as you would want in a historical epic. The travels, and most everyone in this story is trying to travel somewhere, are arduous. The gods, the Nigerian pantheon or Orisa, are richly drawn and help and hinder all of our characters as gods are wont to do.
An excellent first outing for Debajo and a fabulous book for anyone looking for a family epic, a mythic landscape, and a bloody good time, In the Shadow of Ruin does not disappoint on any level.
Tony Debajo’s debut novel, In the Shadow of Ruin, is a novel of generations. There is great strength and potency to be drawn from telling family epics, the weight of legacy and the making or breaking of kindred ties are as universal as any story telling tradition from any time or place.
That said, when we’re speaking about generations, readers should be aware that implied in that are many, many characters to keep track of, a half dozen primary characters by my count and each with their own set of secondary characters attached. It's a lot for readers and an author to balance. It's a good thing, then, that Debajo is something of a gymnast with his words, deftly weaving all of his storylines across the sprawling landscape he's built for them to play out on.
The battles, and there are several as an exiled prince seeks to usurp his brother's throne, are as vicious as you would want in a historical epic. The travels, and most everyone in this story is trying to travel somewhere, are arduous. The gods, the Nigerian pantheon or Orisa, are richly drawn and help and hinder all of our characters as gods are wont to do.
An excellent first outing for Debajo and a fabulous book for anyone looking for a family epic, a mythic landscape, and a bloody good time, In the Shadow of Ruin does not disappoint on any level.
June 7, 2021
A story set up in a kingdom, will take you to a journey of Nigerian culture, history and pre-existing tales. In the kingdom King Jide and his half brother, prince Olise have tensions in between and there is a situation of a war. This situation is deeply connected to the past, Bunmi was king Jide's mother who died just after his birth after this the king married Ekaete, a woman known as a practitioner of black magic. This black magic resulted lethal for the king himself. Now in the present time Ekaete's son Olise is all set to battle with Jide. Jide is kind but to win the war Olise is taking the local tribes to his side. Further in the story, the readers will witness the initiation of war, three sons of Jide Toju, Niran and Enitan, their behaviour, characteristics and their fate in this war. This is a well developed story which will give you the experience of the past, kingdom life and war between the good and the evil. Turn the pages to witness the war and the various characters performing.
A really happening story, loaded with various characters and a magical background. The author has fantastically developed the kingdom and a historical background. This is a well researched story, which is influencial and engaging throughout. The book is a detailed read and I finished reading it in about four days. I enjoyed discovering the various characters and viewing the situation with different perspectives and getting along with the ancient folklore. The cover of the book is appealing and the whole story is a marvelous read, many thanks to the author for sharing this, I'm all set to land on the next one.
I would recommend you all to read this mind-bending story. This will be a perfect choice for the people of every age group. The readers will enjoy the ancient plot and the nature of the various characters. A real fantastic page turner with unpredictable events at every step!! get your copies now also don't forget to share it with your friends.
A really happening story, loaded with various characters and a magical background. The author has fantastically developed the kingdom and a historical background. This is a well researched story, which is influencial and engaging throughout. The book is a detailed read and I finished reading it in about four days. I enjoyed discovering the various characters and viewing the situation with different perspectives and getting along with the ancient folklore. The cover of the book is appealing and the whole story is a marvelous read, many thanks to the author for sharing this, I'm all set to land on the next one.
I would recommend you all to read this mind-bending story. This will be a perfect choice for the people of every age group. The readers will enjoy the ancient plot and the nature of the various characters. A real fantastic page turner with unpredictable events at every step!! get your copies now also don't forget to share it with your friends.
April 18, 2021
Originally published on my blog
It’s a story of loss and grief, of pride and vengeance, and the question of how far everyone is willing to go to get it.
In the Shadow of Ruin is an action-packed book that is heavily inspired and based on ancient Nigerian folklore and I loved to see these stories through these characters. I’m a big fan of mythology and folklore and love when books take inspiration from them, especially when done so carefully.
Tonys writing style compliments this perfectly. It’s very to the point while still creating this atmospheric vibe that transports you right into the heart of the story and honestly doesn’t let you go. It reminds me a little of the stories of old in that regard. Being relatively clear but capturing one's attention so effortlessly.
I was invested the moment we get introduced to King Jide on his way to the seers and gets a warning from what appears to be a little girl. It was a fantastic way to introduce not only Jide’s character and his current situation with the brewing war but also give us a little backstory about his connection with the gods. Immediately intrigued! That was the moment I knew I would enjoy In the Shadow of Ruin.
It was so easy to feel for the different characters and I was always left wanting more after each chapter and POV ended. I can’t really tell you who was my favourite (Niran) because I loved them all so much (Niran especially though). It was so easy for me to connect with the characters and their journey, so easy to feel for them and since I’m most definitely a character-focused reader � well, I loved it. All of them are so unique and distinct, you could never confuse them even if you forgot whose chapter you are reading you’d recognize them. That is incredibly important for a novel with multiple POVs. I need to know who I’m following even without the chapter title telling me, otherwise, they might just become one big mix in my head. Not happening here though!
The three brothers, Toju, Niran, and Enitan, are the perfect example of it. I loved reading their chapters! In the beginning when the whole plot starts to unravel they each vow revenge but in their own unique ways, with their own reasonings and strategies.
I loved how, even though the main conflict is a war, it is so much more. Simply because of all the various tribes and their beliefs and rituals and all the different gods. It influences how each character reacts and drives the plot forward. It also functions as a way to get to know the different characters more deeply and through a different lens. Each one is well developed, be it a main or side character. Everyone has their own flaws, thoughts and beliefs and inner conflicts and that creates an emotional depth that I love and it adds another layer to the main conflict of the novel.
Another thing I liked was seeing the different strategies in the battle and how they played out! Especially when they were interspersed with the flashbacks and backstory of Jide and Olise and their story. It created such a lovely pace, like a piece of music. Everything flowed together so well. I would have loved to be more involved in that though. We often see only the consequences of said strategies but it was still a part I quite enjoyed.
The battle scenes were brilliantly written and kept me on the edge of my seat and I had to stop myself from jumping ahead to find out how they would play out. It was incredible to read about the determination and resilience of some of the tribes!
This brings me to my last point. There is so much potential in the world and the characters! There are so many characters that I could see having their own book and story. I’d most certainly read them!
It’s a story of loss and grief, of pride and vengeance, and the question of how far everyone is willing to go to get it.
In the Shadow of Ruin is an action-packed book that is heavily inspired and based on ancient Nigerian folklore and I loved to see these stories through these characters. I’m a big fan of mythology and folklore and love when books take inspiration from them, especially when done so carefully.
Tonys writing style compliments this perfectly. It’s very to the point while still creating this atmospheric vibe that transports you right into the heart of the story and honestly doesn’t let you go. It reminds me a little of the stories of old in that regard. Being relatively clear but capturing one's attention so effortlessly.
“He could tell a storm was coming, he smelt it in the air and saw it in the way the clouds moved. He relished the rain to come; it had a purity about it as if it could wash away all his doubts, all his ill intentions and quell his sense of guilt when hard choices had to be made.
I was invested the moment we get introduced to King Jide on his way to the seers and gets a warning from what appears to be a little girl. It was a fantastic way to introduce not only Jide’s character and his current situation with the brewing war but also give us a little backstory about his connection with the gods. Immediately intrigued! That was the moment I knew I would enjoy In the Shadow of Ruin.
It was so easy to feel for the different characters and I was always left wanting more after each chapter and POV ended. I can’t really tell you who was my favourite (
The three brothers, Toju, Niran, and Enitan, are the perfect example of it. I loved reading their chapters! In the beginning when the whole plot starts to unravel they each vow revenge but in their own unique ways, with their own reasonings and strategies.
I loved how, even though the main conflict is a war, it is so much more. Simply because of all the various tribes and their beliefs and rituals and all the different gods. It influences how each character reacts and drives the plot forward. It also functions as a way to get to know the different characters more deeply and through a different lens. Each one is well developed, be it a main or side character. Everyone has their own flaws, thoughts and beliefs and inner conflicts and that creates an emotional depth that I love and it adds another layer to the main conflict of the novel.
Another thing I liked was seeing the different strategies in the battle and how they played out! Especially when they were interspersed with the flashbacks and backstory of Jide and Olise and their story. It created such a lovely pace, like a piece of music. Everything flowed together so well. I would have loved to be more involved in that though. We often see only the consequences of said strategies but it was still a part I quite enjoyed.
The battle scenes were brilliantly written and kept me on the edge of my seat and I had to stop myself from jumping ahead to find out how they would play out. It was incredible to read about the determination and resilience of some of the tribes!
This brings me to my last point. There is so much potential in the world and the characters! There are so many characters that I could see having their own book and story. I’d most certainly read them!
May 25, 2021
A good book is probably the oldest form of escapism, but you would need a great book to get you through this lockdown existence. In The Shadow of Ruin is that great book.
Tony Debajo's debut offering is a well written novel with an immersive storyline and expertly crafted characters that pull you into their world.
It was refreshing to read an African based historical adventure that gives a brilliant perspective on pre-colonial African Kingdoms, their tribes, warriors and how their cultures thrived.
Expertly choreographed battle scenes are described in such detail I often found myself clenching my fist and jaw with baited breath to see who would be the last man standing.
You can't help but admire the determination and resilience of some of the tribes heading into battle in the face of insurmoutable odds, motivated only by blind faith and loyalty to their ruler.
Add to that the fact that both sides have to varying degrees employed the dark arts in the hope of gaining a warfare advantage, you look forward to finding out whose 'juju' is stronger.
By the end of the book, it managed to achieve the rare accomplishment of leaving me wanting more and being content at the same time, needless to say I eagerly await its sequel.
The beauty of this book is you can see the sprawling potential of the Fractured Kingdom series. The back stories of some of the main characters and their tribes are so rich that they could spawn their own stand alone books and I truly hope the author explores this angle.
The depth of this multi-faceted storyline is more akin to the work of veteran authors, so for the fact that this is Tony Debajo’s self published debut makes it all the more impressive.
The author has to be commended for putting Nigerian cultures, folklore and traditions on the literary map, and introducing complex plotlines not often seen in African based literature.
This is a gem of a book that is on course to become an African literature classic. In The Shadow of Ruin is an inspired piece of writing with an unflinching yet gripping storyline and is a must read for anyone interested in historical fiction action adventure. If you haven’t done so already, get yourself a copy, you’re in for a treat.
Tony Debajo's debut offering is a well written novel with an immersive storyline and expertly crafted characters that pull you into their world.
It was refreshing to read an African based historical adventure that gives a brilliant perspective on pre-colonial African Kingdoms, their tribes, warriors and how their cultures thrived.
Expertly choreographed battle scenes are described in such detail I often found myself clenching my fist and jaw with baited breath to see who would be the last man standing.
You can't help but admire the determination and resilience of some of the tribes heading into battle in the face of insurmoutable odds, motivated only by blind faith and loyalty to their ruler.
Add to that the fact that both sides have to varying degrees employed the dark arts in the hope of gaining a warfare advantage, you look forward to finding out whose 'juju' is stronger.
By the end of the book, it managed to achieve the rare accomplishment of leaving me wanting more and being content at the same time, needless to say I eagerly await its sequel.
The beauty of this book is you can see the sprawling potential of the Fractured Kingdom series. The back stories of some of the main characters and their tribes are so rich that they could spawn their own stand alone books and I truly hope the author explores this angle.
The depth of this multi-faceted storyline is more akin to the work of veteran authors, so for the fact that this is Tony Debajo’s self published debut makes it all the more impressive.
The author has to be commended for putting Nigerian cultures, folklore and traditions on the literary map, and introducing complex plotlines not often seen in African based literature.
This is a gem of a book that is on course to become an African literature classic. In The Shadow of Ruin is an inspired piece of writing with an unflinching yet gripping storyline and is a must read for anyone interested in historical fiction action adventure. If you haven’t done so already, get yourself a copy, you’re in for a treat.
June 3, 2021
This book was amazing! I found myself worrying about the characters whenever I wasn’t reading.
Such a great blend of fantasy, kingdom politics, and conflict.
This was a fast paced novel with incredibly well rounded characters. Loved following King Jide as he tried to defeat his brother’s onslaught against his kingdom.
The book flips back and forth between the past and present so well, and was amazing to unpack and find the connections as the story unfolded.
This book is for anyone who enjoys fantasy or historical fiction.
I can’t wait for the next book!
Such a great blend of fantasy, kingdom politics, and conflict.
This was a fast paced novel with incredibly well rounded characters. Loved following King Jide as he tried to defeat his brother’s onslaught against his kingdom.
The book flips back and forth between the past and present so well, and was amazing to unpack and find the connections as the story unfolded.
This book is for anyone who enjoys fantasy or historical fiction.
I can’t wait for the next book!
April 8, 2021
In peace they prosper, in fear they fall. For years, the united tribes of West Africa have enjoyed relative peace and prosperity under King Jide Adelani’s rule. But peace cannot last. Looking to claim the throne, Jide’s half-brother Olise begins his bloody campaign, leaving fear and destruction in his wake. As his people suffer and allies begin to turn against him in fear, Jide knows he must meet the man he once loved on the battlefield. Loyalties and blades will be tested in the great battle that will determine the future of the kingdom.
This culturally rich book made me feel as though I was stepping into a piece of African mythology. Despite military conflict being at the heart of this story, it pays homage to various beliefs and practices that make each tribe unique. The way each character understands and embraces their culture and identity drives their choices and makes them dynamic. I was not only captivated by the story, but also feel I learned a lot on the journey.
Though the reader is led to favor one side of this conflict over another, this book does a good job creating sympathy and understanding for everyone involved. Each character has unique beliefs, flaws, and internal conflicts that drive their choices. This adds emotional depth and complexity to the larger conflict.
In military books, there are often those ‘defining� moments in a battle where a strategy is executed to either great or catastrophic effect. Whether these are spur of the moment or something that is set up over the course of the book, we usually get to see these strategies come together. It is in this process that we become more intimate with how the characters think, what they value, and where they struggle. In this book, we miss a lot of this development. Most of the key strategies are not mentioned until they have already been executed or foiled. Other times, the plans are mentioned or the characters go through the motions of strategizing without sharing much detail. As a result, what might be defining moments for the characters and/or conflict lack the level of impact they could have had if the reader was more invested in the process.
Overall, this book is well worth the read and I recommend it to anyone that likes historical and/or military fiction. Naturally, there is some graphic violence in this book but I do not feel it is gratuitous. Though this book is labeled as “fantasy�, the magical elements are extremely limited and it reads more like historical fiction with mystical elements. Those looking to enjoy a high fantasy read might want to consider other books.
This culturally rich book made me feel as though I was stepping into a piece of African mythology. Despite military conflict being at the heart of this story, it pays homage to various beliefs and practices that make each tribe unique. The way each character understands and embraces their culture and identity drives their choices and makes them dynamic. I was not only captivated by the story, but also feel I learned a lot on the journey.
Though the reader is led to favor one side of this conflict over another, this book does a good job creating sympathy and understanding for everyone involved. Each character has unique beliefs, flaws, and internal conflicts that drive their choices. This adds emotional depth and complexity to the larger conflict.
In military books, there are often those ‘defining� moments in a battle where a strategy is executed to either great or catastrophic effect. Whether these are spur of the moment or something that is set up over the course of the book, we usually get to see these strategies come together. It is in this process that we become more intimate with how the characters think, what they value, and where they struggle. In this book, we miss a lot of this development. Most of the key strategies are not mentioned until they have already been executed or foiled. Other times, the plans are mentioned or the characters go through the motions of strategizing without sharing much detail. As a result, what might be defining moments for the characters and/or conflict lack the level of impact they could have had if the reader was more invested in the process.
Overall, this book is well worth the read and I recommend it to anyone that likes historical and/or military fiction. Naturally, there is some graphic violence in this book but I do not feel it is gratuitous. Though this book is labeled as “fantasy�, the magical elements are extremely limited and it reads more like historical fiction with mystical elements. Those looking to enjoy a high fantasy read might want to consider other books.
May 26, 2021
From the moment I started reading this book it was great. The clashes between brothers is a main factor in the story as it reminds me of the story of Thor and Loke in ancient times. After the death of the King, the kingdom is split between the fight over whom should be the king. Jude and his brother OLise are at odds with each other. This eventually turns into war. Even though out the story there’s a love story to bring the story to see. In the end,I can’t wait for the series part two. I love the characters. The development of each is great. I am hoping to see OLise go down for his crimes.
June 1, 2021
‘Turn away from here, King Jide� � An impressive new author and adventure
British author Tony Debajo earned his degree in civil engineering from the University of East London and now quite successfully enters the literary field with this debut publication IN THE SHADOW OF RUIN - Book 1 in a projected series The Fracture Kingdom. His source for this novel (and series) is based on his time spent living as a youth in Nigeria, hearing about the tales of ancient civilizations in West Africa. His fascination with history and various cultures adds to his vivid recreation of the early tales of his country of origin.
In a nod to the reader’s full appreciation of the content, the book opens with a helpful glossary both of terms and of the tribes and characters � along with correct pronunciations - that will be encountered. The graceful rhythm of his prose in the initial chapter entitled ‘Rituals� provides a prelude for the expansive novel’s adventure: ‘The rain started just as Jide made his way through the forest. He travelled light to move quickly and unencumbered. His only items were a pouch strapped to his back containing the offerings he has been asked to bring and an ornate dagger sheathed at his hip. The blade had been carried by six generations of his line, the Adelanis. Passed from father to firstborn son. It has always been worn or within reach of the bearer and he was loath to leave it behind, despite the misgivings of his counselors. He has been warned that weapons would be perceived as a threat by the seers, but the king did not relish the idea of being completely unarmed in the presence of such men. He had given way to every other concession requested of him, but this would not be one.�
The story is well distilled by the author � ‘King Jide Adelani has ruled the lands of the Yoruba in West Africa for many peaceful years, but now his kingdom is in turmoil and the cold grasp of death's embrace is closing in around everything he holds dear. Jide spent years garnering the respect and loyalty of the tribes in the hopes of uniting them into one cohesive empire when his half-brother, Prince Olise, returns from banishment to claim the throne as his own. The offspring of a union between the late King Adeosi and the evil enchantress Ekaete, the bitter Olise has devoted the last decade to one purpose; to seize the throne and rule the kingdom. If he fails, he risks his name being erased from the history of the tribes. With the support of his mother, a powerful witch whose name is whispered in fear across the lands of the tribes, the outcast Olise now seems unstoppable in achieving his goal. Facing overwhelming military might and dark forces that he cannot comprehend, Jide must either choose to ignore the warnings of the gods, and seek help from those who also practice dark arts; or risk losing his kingdom.�
Discovering a heretofore unknown cultural history is only one aspect for enjoying this well-crafted novel. Tony Debajo makes an impressive debut! Recommended
British author Tony Debajo earned his degree in civil engineering from the University of East London and now quite successfully enters the literary field with this debut publication IN THE SHADOW OF RUIN - Book 1 in a projected series The Fracture Kingdom. His source for this novel (and series) is based on his time spent living as a youth in Nigeria, hearing about the tales of ancient civilizations in West Africa. His fascination with history and various cultures adds to his vivid recreation of the early tales of his country of origin.
In a nod to the reader’s full appreciation of the content, the book opens with a helpful glossary both of terms and of the tribes and characters � along with correct pronunciations - that will be encountered. The graceful rhythm of his prose in the initial chapter entitled ‘Rituals� provides a prelude for the expansive novel’s adventure: ‘The rain started just as Jide made his way through the forest. He travelled light to move quickly and unencumbered. His only items were a pouch strapped to his back containing the offerings he has been asked to bring and an ornate dagger sheathed at his hip. The blade had been carried by six generations of his line, the Adelanis. Passed from father to firstborn son. It has always been worn or within reach of the bearer and he was loath to leave it behind, despite the misgivings of his counselors. He has been warned that weapons would be perceived as a threat by the seers, but the king did not relish the idea of being completely unarmed in the presence of such men. He had given way to every other concession requested of him, but this would not be one.�
The story is well distilled by the author � ‘King Jide Adelani has ruled the lands of the Yoruba in West Africa for many peaceful years, but now his kingdom is in turmoil and the cold grasp of death's embrace is closing in around everything he holds dear. Jide spent years garnering the respect and loyalty of the tribes in the hopes of uniting them into one cohesive empire when his half-brother, Prince Olise, returns from banishment to claim the throne as his own. The offspring of a union between the late King Adeosi and the evil enchantress Ekaete, the bitter Olise has devoted the last decade to one purpose; to seize the throne and rule the kingdom. If he fails, he risks his name being erased from the history of the tribes. With the support of his mother, a powerful witch whose name is whispered in fear across the lands of the tribes, the outcast Olise now seems unstoppable in achieving his goal. Facing overwhelming military might and dark forces that he cannot comprehend, Jide must either choose to ignore the warnings of the gods, and seek help from those who also practice dark arts; or risk losing his kingdom.�
Discovering a heretofore unknown cultural history is only one aspect for enjoying this well-crafted novel. Tony Debajo makes an impressive debut! Recommended
May 31, 2021
The first book in The Fractured Kingdom series, In the Shadow of Ruin, is a rare glimpse at Nigerian culture, history, and mythology. It is a historical fiction novel retelling traditional West African mythology, more specifically, ancient Nigerian.
It’s an engrossing novel of inter-tribal conflict, love, deception, and salvation, laced with Nigerian folklore and a generous sprinkling of witchcraft and magic.
It is a fiction, but the writing and the plot make it all look real and actual.
What to expect?
Warfare
Tribes
Witchcraft
Loss of Loved Ones
Family Separation
Bloodshed
A major plus point of the book is the glossary at the beginning and the breakdown of all the characters are and the pronunciation of their names.
It’s an engrossing novel of inter-tribal conflict, love, deception, and salvation, laced with Nigerian folklore and a generous sprinkling of witchcraft and magic.
It is a fiction, but the writing and the plot make it all look real and actual.
What to expect?
Warfare
Tribes
Witchcraft
Loss of Loved Ones
Family Separation
Bloodshed
A major plus point of the book is the glossary at the beginning and the breakdown of all the characters are and the pronunciation of their names.
June 11, 2021
“In The Shadow Of Ruin� is a story about family rivalry and quest for power. It also tells of a once thriving and successful kingdom shattered and destroyed � brought to its knees, because of thirst of power, pride and shifted loyalties.
It is a story that’s filled with spine chilling acts of war, war, war and so much blood shed. Certainly not for the faint hearted. In it the writer also brings forth the acts of loyalty, love, betrayal, greed, power struggles, forming of alliances, the gods, witchcraft and black magic, and the cold heartedness of some of the characters, as well as courage and bravery. He was able to bring out the raw emotions of each character splendidly.
It is an interesting story that is full of chills, thrills and tension. It is swift pacing, full of anticipation, fear, worry and horror. It captivates and puts the reader on edge from start to end.
The tragic ending is so heartbreaking. I am curious as to know how the story develops in the coming series.
As the book has so many characters, outlining the main ones at the beginning of the book was a great idea. It gives the reader a better and clearer understanding of the characters and the plot. Also placing the map at the beginning enables one to vividly imagine the setting of the story.
Anyone who enjoys war stories and strategies, and action packed content will feel at home with this book. I give it a 5-star rating!
It is a story that’s filled with spine chilling acts of war, war, war and so much blood shed. Certainly not for the faint hearted. In it the writer also brings forth the acts of loyalty, love, betrayal, greed, power struggles, forming of alliances, the gods, witchcraft and black magic, and the cold heartedness of some of the characters, as well as courage and bravery. He was able to bring out the raw emotions of each character splendidly.
It is an interesting story that is full of chills, thrills and tension. It is swift pacing, full of anticipation, fear, worry and horror. It captivates and puts the reader on edge from start to end.
The tragic ending is so heartbreaking. I am curious as to know how the story develops in the coming series.
As the book has so many characters, outlining the main ones at the beginning of the book was a great idea. It gives the reader a better and clearer understanding of the characters and the plot. Also placing the map at the beginning enables one to vividly imagine the setting of the story.
Anyone who enjoys war stories and strategies, and action packed content will feel at home with this book. I give it a 5-star rating!
October 6, 2022
4.25. This is an excellent debut. I’ve been wanting a dark, African inspired fantasy and this is it.
The plot is a simple one but there’s rich building and character work that really takes this book to the next level. There’s also a decent amount of political intrigue, which I was not expecting, and it was done very well. I’m not generally a fan of battle and combat scenes but I have to say, Tony did a fantastic job of making them feel very vivid. As a character driven reader, I’m also very excited to see how the characters develop. I have a feeling we’re going to spend a lot of time with each of the three brothers, which I cannot wait for.
Overall, a fantastic start to what is shaping up to be a great series.
Full review to come on my channel.
PS: Thank you Tony for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review.
The plot is a simple one but there’s rich building and character work that really takes this book to the next level. There’s also a decent amount of political intrigue, which I was not expecting, and it was done very well. I’m not generally a fan of battle and combat scenes but I have to say, Tony did a fantastic job of making them feel very vivid. As a character driven reader, I’m also very excited to see how the characters develop. I have a feeling we’re going to spend a lot of time with each of the three brothers, which I cannot wait for.
Overall, a fantastic start to what is shaping up to be a great series.
Full review to come on my channel.
PS: Thank you Tony for sending me a copy in exchange for an honest review.
July 21, 2022
4/5 Stars
I received an ebook in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
A gripping debut, and first installment in The Fractured Kingdom series. This is a self-published historical fiction, with a hint of fantasy. It brings you into the struggle between two half-brothers, King Jide and Prince Olise and their conflict for the throne of Yoruba.
This retelling is based on a West African folklore, specifically ancient Nigerian, that the author grew up with. The prose captures the tone and the culture beautifully in this story and immerses you within the world.
We follow multiple POVs that give the reader a wide view of the story with lots of political intrigue. There are some jumps from present to past but done in a way that develop the story and the readers understanding with great pacing and timing.
This is rich in political scheming, great action scenes as war breaks out, and a mix of lore that felt well balanced to the story.
It did take me some time to connect with the characters and I found myself more invested in the plotline overall. It wasn’t until the end of the book that I came to care for some of the characters portrayed but ultimately, I found myself invested in the world, and what would happen next in the story.
With many interwoven stories, plots, and schemes, I loved the ���what if’s� that continuously came up for me while reading. The King and Prince’s personalities were distinct from one another, which had impacts on the story and made their characters feel well developed. There is also lots of subtle detail put into this story, which I also appreciated.
The prose was a bit tricky to get used to at first, but it does fit the culture of the story well. In a way that reminded me of The Grace of Kings by Ken Liu, it just took some time to get used to. It took me up to about 25% to really get into enjoying the story as a result.
With plenty of action, battles, betrayals, lore and politics this story immerses you in the traditions, culture and the gods of West Africa.
A great debut! I would recommend In The Shadow Of Ruin for any historical fiction reader looking for their next immersive read.
Trigger Warnings: war, violence and bloodshed
I received an ebook in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
A gripping debut, and first installment in The Fractured Kingdom series. This is a self-published historical fiction, with a hint of fantasy. It brings you into the struggle between two half-brothers, King Jide and Prince Olise and their conflict for the throne of Yoruba.
This retelling is based on a West African folklore, specifically ancient Nigerian, that the author grew up with. The prose captures the tone and the culture beautifully in this story and immerses you within the world.
We follow multiple POVs that give the reader a wide view of the story with lots of political intrigue. There are some jumps from present to past but done in a way that develop the story and the readers understanding with great pacing and timing.
This is rich in political scheming, great action scenes as war breaks out, and a mix of lore that felt well balanced to the story.
It did take me some time to connect with the characters and I found myself more invested in the plotline overall. It wasn’t until the end of the book that I came to care for some of the characters portrayed but ultimately, I found myself invested in the world, and what would happen next in the story.
With many interwoven stories, plots, and schemes, I loved the ���what if’s� that continuously came up for me while reading. The King and Prince’s personalities were distinct from one another, which had impacts on the story and made their characters feel well developed. There is also lots of subtle detail put into this story, which I also appreciated.
The prose was a bit tricky to get used to at first, but it does fit the culture of the story well. In a way that reminded me of The Grace of Kings by Ken Liu, it just took some time to get used to. It took me up to about 25% to really get into enjoying the story as a result.
With plenty of action, battles, betrayals, lore and politics this story immerses you in the traditions, culture and the gods of West Africa.
A great debut! I would recommend In The Shadow Of Ruin for any historical fiction reader looking for their next immersive read.
Trigger Warnings: war, violence and bloodshed
July 7, 2022
I have been searching for an African inspired fantasy that incorporates the Orisa's/Gods and old Africa's rich lore for SOO long!!! And I found it between the pages of this amazing debut!!
'In The Shadow of Ruin' we experience battles politics, and war for the ancient Nigerian Kingdom of Ile-Ife between two brothers. Told through the POVs of King Jide, his sons and Blood Guard's on one side, and wannabe king Olise on the other. There are also flash backs that give us a better sense of the characters and their relationships which I thoroughly enjoyed.
I read along with the audiobook and Elias Khalil did a fantastic job. Every character had their own voice that suited them and the pacing was perfect. I read in 2x speed and it read as fluently as it would in normal speed.
There is a lot of Yoruban lore in this book and is accompanied with a glossary which was really helpful. The Orisha are portrayed so well and true to lore (albeit the limited lore I know) and I really hope we get to see much much more of them as I love interfering gods.
Debajo creates a rich world with a deep history, culture and proud people. I loved King Jide and his sons and am particularly interested in Enitan's arc and can't wait to see what is in store for the young prince.
This book is BRUTAL and though in quite a few cases it doesn't go into explicit details, it doesn't need to. The scene is set so well it doesn't need to, the horrors perceived let your imagination do its worst and was just as powerful.
For readers who loved 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'Gunmetal Gods' I think you will love this.
'In The Shadow of Ruin' we experience battles politics, and war for the ancient Nigerian Kingdom of Ile-Ife between two brothers. Told through the POVs of King Jide, his sons and Blood Guard's on one side, and wannabe king Olise on the other. There are also flash backs that give us a better sense of the characters and their relationships which I thoroughly enjoyed.
I read along with the audiobook and Elias Khalil did a fantastic job. Every character had their own voice that suited them and the pacing was perfect. I read in 2x speed and it read as fluently as it would in normal speed.
There is a lot of Yoruban lore in this book and is accompanied with a glossary which was really helpful. The Orisha are portrayed so well and true to lore (albeit the limited lore I know) and I really hope we get to see much much more of them as I love interfering gods.
Debajo creates a rich world with a deep history, culture and proud people. I loved King Jide and his sons and am particularly interested in Enitan's arc and can't wait to see what is in store for the young prince.
This book is BRUTAL and though in quite a few cases it doesn't go into explicit details, it doesn't need to. The scene is set so well it doesn't need to, the horrors perceived let your imagination do its worst and was just as powerful.
For readers who loved 'A Song of Ice and Fire' and 'Gunmetal Gods' I think you will love this.
August 11, 2024
Sad to say this didn’t live up to my expectations. It was fine. Just fine. A lot of telling instead of showing which I, recently discovered, do not like in books. I didn’t particularly care about the characters which also made me lower my rating. That being said, while I will not be continuing this series, I will read any other projects the author puts out.
August 10, 2021
Wow! I just finished the historical fantasy “In the Shadow of Ruin�, Book One in “The Fractured Kingdom�, and the debut novel by the outstanding author Tony Dejabo! What a rush!
A simply outstanding book, filled with political intrigue, tribal warfare with harrowing battle scenes, mysticism, and lore in the form of African mythology, impressive, atmospheric settings in ancient Nigeria, love, betrayal, and vengeance!
The novel centres on King Jide, who is the ruler of ostensibly all the major tribes in the Yoruba region. The King is desperate because war is brewing, he is outnumbered, and the situation looks dire. The king’s formidable half-brother, Olise, is rebelling against his sibling, attempting to overthrow Jide, and seize power. Olise is bolstered by his mother, Ekaete, a sorceress, who dabbles in the black arts. But in his despair, the King feels compelled to also turn to witchcraft, to prevent the destruction of his kingdom.
The novel takes us to lush locations in West Africa, where brave, compassionate, and beautiful women, proud, fearsome, devoted warriors, and eerie, sinister magicians fill the pages of the heart-pounding tale. If you have not read books with not only flashbacks but multiple POVs, including POVs that can change and transition mid-paragraph, this is not the read for you. I have read several authors now that employ this method, and it takes a lot of skill to pull it off without completely disorienting the reader and detracting from the enjoyment of the novel.
I am pleased to say Dejabo has this type of ability, and it only served to enhance the reading experience, particularly during the fight scenes. We get to hear the voices of Jide, the hero, but also Olise, Ekaete, the sons of Jide (named Toju, Niran, and Enitan), many of the noble chieftains and warriors, and ordinary folk caught up in the titanic struggle for supremacy waged between Jide and Olise. I found all the characters to be very realistic, believable, and driven by their own unique motivations. Toju, one of the least likeable characters, and heir to Jide, I found to be the most fascinating, including his disdain for commoners. I am always drawn to flawed characters and can’t wait to see where Toju’s arc is headed.
Dejabo’s worldbuilding is immersive and will make one want to visit the area he describes with loving detail. He is obviously well-versed and intimately familiar with Nigeria, and his credibility on the subject shines through in his work. Dejabo won big points with me for the exceptional glossary provided outlining the various tribes, characters, and important elements including food, drink, and clothing that those unfamiliar with African culture will no doubt find handy.
The book is very fast paced, and the fight scenes are extremely well done: bloody, frenetic, and not for the faint-of-heart! This is a major strength of Dejabo’s writing. He had me on the edge of my seat, wondering who would live and who would fall, regardless of whose side of the conflict the character was!
“In the Shadow of Ruin� is a powerful first novel that compares favourably to another highly-touted book called “The Rage of Dragons� I have read, by the breakout star author Evan Winter. Lofty praise in terms of a comparator, yes, but Dejabo’s debut lives up to it.
If you like your battle scenes explosive, your outcomes unpredictable, strong, and well-drawn characters, delightful prose, African lore sprinkled with a hint of the black arts as the magic system, then look no further! Dejabo is an author to watch, and I am very much looking forward to the next entry in “The Fractured Kingdom.�!
A simply outstanding book, filled with political intrigue, tribal warfare with harrowing battle scenes, mysticism, and lore in the form of African mythology, impressive, atmospheric settings in ancient Nigeria, love, betrayal, and vengeance!
The novel centres on King Jide, who is the ruler of ostensibly all the major tribes in the Yoruba region. The King is desperate because war is brewing, he is outnumbered, and the situation looks dire. The king’s formidable half-brother, Olise, is rebelling against his sibling, attempting to overthrow Jide, and seize power. Olise is bolstered by his mother, Ekaete, a sorceress, who dabbles in the black arts. But in his despair, the King feels compelled to also turn to witchcraft, to prevent the destruction of his kingdom.
The novel takes us to lush locations in West Africa, where brave, compassionate, and beautiful women, proud, fearsome, devoted warriors, and eerie, sinister magicians fill the pages of the heart-pounding tale. If you have not read books with not only flashbacks but multiple POVs, including POVs that can change and transition mid-paragraph, this is not the read for you. I have read several authors now that employ this method, and it takes a lot of skill to pull it off without completely disorienting the reader and detracting from the enjoyment of the novel.
I am pleased to say Dejabo has this type of ability, and it only served to enhance the reading experience, particularly during the fight scenes. We get to hear the voices of Jide, the hero, but also Olise, Ekaete, the sons of Jide (named Toju, Niran, and Enitan), many of the noble chieftains and warriors, and ordinary folk caught up in the titanic struggle for supremacy waged between Jide and Olise. I found all the characters to be very realistic, believable, and driven by their own unique motivations. Toju, one of the least likeable characters, and heir to Jide, I found to be the most fascinating, including his disdain for commoners. I am always drawn to flawed characters and can’t wait to see where Toju’s arc is headed.
Dejabo’s worldbuilding is immersive and will make one want to visit the area he describes with loving detail. He is obviously well-versed and intimately familiar with Nigeria, and his credibility on the subject shines through in his work. Dejabo won big points with me for the exceptional glossary provided outlining the various tribes, characters, and important elements including food, drink, and clothing that those unfamiliar with African culture will no doubt find handy.
The book is very fast paced, and the fight scenes are extremely well done: bloody, frenetic, and not for the faint-of-heart! This is a major strength of Dejabo’s writing. He had me on the edge of my seat, wondering who would live and who would fall, regardless of whose side of the conflict the character was!
“In the Shadow of Ruin� is a powerful first novel that compares favourably to another highly-touted book called “The Rage of Dragons� I have read, by the breakout star author Evan Winter. Lofty praise in terms of a comparator, yes, but Dejabo’s debut lives up to it.
If you like your battle scenes explosive, your outcomes unpredictable, strong, and well-drawn characters, delightful prose, African lore sprinkled with a hint of the black arts as the magic system, then look no further! Dejabo is an author to watch, and I am very much looking forward to the next entry in “The Fractured Kingdom.�!
April 1, 2022
In the tribal lands of the Yoruba a war of epic proportions is brewing. A battle of brothers who may risk using juju in the pursuit of victory. Great battles and action in this one!!
July 24, 2021
A great first book by Tony Debajo set amid the conflict in an old West African kingdom. I am looking forward to the next book in the series.
July 19, 2022
I wish I remembered who here recommended In the Shadow of Ruin, because this book is incredible! (Also, if anyone has similar recs, let me know!) This is a lush West-African inspired political fantasy with multiple compelling POVs. The writing is evocative and lovely, and it was a pleasure to read even when the story was heartbreaking. Strongly recommend!
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October 17, 2021When I came to know about the existence of In the Shadow of Ruin, the premises intrigued me. I wanted to read a story rich in Yoruba history and this book didn’t disappoint with the lore, extensive world-building and vividness in writing style.
This is the first book in The Fractured Kingdom series and it’s a prime example of the potent and destructive nature that is the unadulterated thirst for power. In the Shadow of Ruin takes its reader on a journey that highlights the devastating effects of two warring brothers, the righteous King Jide, and the vengeance-seeking Prince Olise, his half brother, in their bid to sit on the throne as the rightful king.
As we have all come to know, wherever there is war, there is no peace and where there is no peace, nothing but negativity will prosper. Making use of interesting elements, bringing the deities, juju, good versus evil etc. to play, the story progresses through the eyes of various characters as it is told from multiple points of view, which is even more engaging because of the author’s style of writing.
Personally, this book is a lot and so much is going on, which made it a slow read for me. I could have done without a lot of things I read. I think it’s because for books like this I prefer them fast-paced, although I will give this book big marks, for it is action-packed and the way it’s handled is simply amazing.
My final verdict, this is a beautifully written book. This book is perfect for fans of historical, war and magic realism.
This is the first book in The Fractured Kingdom series and it’s a prime example of the potent and destructive nature that is the unadulterated thirst for power. In the Shadow of Ruin takes its reader on a journey that highlights the devastating effects of two warring brothers, the righteous King Jide, and the vengeance-seeking Prince Olise, his half brother, in their bid to sit on the throne as the rightful king.
As we have all come to know, wherever there is war, there is no peace and where there is no peace, nothing but negativity will prosper. Making use of interesting elements, bringing the deities, juju, good versus evil etc. to play, the story progresses through the eyes of various characters as it is told from multiple points of view, which is even more engaging because of the author’s style of writing.
Personally, this book is a lot and so much is going on, which made it a slow read for me. I could have done without a lot of things I read. I think it’s because for books like this I prefer them fast-paced, although I will give this book big marks, for it is action-packed and the way it’s handled is simply amazing.
My final verdict, this is a beautifully written book. This book is perfect for fans of historical, war and magic realism.
February 16, 2023
When King Jide’s exiled half-brother invades the lands of Yoruba, Jide must rally the tribes to repel his brother’s destructive advance. But his brother is assisted by dark magic and King Jide must turn to dark arts of his own in order to win the war. In The Shadow of Ruin is a Nigerian-inspired historical military fiction novel about two warring brothers.
This book is perfect for those who like their fantasy novels fast paced. Instead of a slow laborious build-up of every plot and character, this book drops you right in the middle of the conflict. It doesn’t take long to get to the hackin� and slashin�. There are some flashbacks scenes, but I thought they were well placed, had relevant information, and did not bog down the pacing.
The book is multi-pov, primarily following the points of view of the two warring brothers and their family. The focus of this book is very tight. It is literally about this war between these two brothers and how their conflict affects everyone around them. This book is only about 350 pages. It’s a short bite-sized fantasy read that doesn’t bog itself down with too much info-dumping or detouring plotlines.
In addition, a lot of Nigerian-inspired fantasy focus on the Yoruba culture and I really appreciated that this novel included other ethnic groups of the region.
If you like reading about large scale battles, warfare, generational family conflicts, and tight focused stories, then this is the book for you. Although featuring a conflict between good and evil, this book does not shy away from the atrocities of war. People are dying everywhere.
This book is perfect for those who like their fantasy novels fast paced. Instead of a slow laborious build-up of every plot and character, this book drops you right in the middle of the conflict. It doesn’t take long to get to the hackin� and slashin�. There are some flashbacks scenes, but I thought they were well placed, had relevant information, and did not bog down the pacing.
The book is multi-pov, primarily following the points of view of the two warring brothers and their family. The focus of this book is very tight. It is literally about this war between these two brothers and how their conflict affects everyone around them. This book is only about 350 pages. It’s a short bite-sized fantasy read that doesn’t bog itself down with too much info-dumping or detouring plotlines.
In addition, a lot of Nigerian-inspired fantasy focus on the Yoruba culture and I really appreciated that this novel included other ethnic groups of the region.
If you like reading about large scale battles, warfare, generational family conflicts, and tight focused stories, then this is the book for you. Although featuring a conflict between good and evil, this book does not shy away from the atrocities of war. People are dying everywhere.
September 1, 2022
Years of peaceful leadership by King Jide Adelani over the Yoruba people's territories in West Africa are now over, and everything he holds dear is being engulfed by the icy embrace of death.
In the face of overwhelming military might and mysterious dark forces, Jide must decide whether to disregard the gods' warnings and turn to people who engage in black arts or risk losing his realm.
This book is the perfect read for anyone who loves fantasy, war and diverse books. This novel takes place in Nigeria and describes the folklore, customs, way of life, and issues of the locals. Now that a battle is going to break out, two brothers must struggle to dominate. It was a great mix of politics, fantasy and family conflict. The moment I started this book I was transferred into a kingdom faraway and caught between the battle of two brothers. The book kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time, making it hard to put it down before I could finish it.
In the Shadow of Ruin is a great blend of fantasy and folklore that introduces readers to a new culture and traditions that will leave you wanting for more especially after *that* ending. A definite read for people who enjoy fantasy, family feud, war, lots and lots of bloodshed and if you like to cry even after the story is over. I absolutely recommend this book and keeping a tissue box within arms reach!
In the face of overwhelming military might and mysterious dark forces, Jide must decide whether to disregard the gods' warnings and turn to people who engage in black arts or risk losing his realm.
This book is the perfect read for anyone who loves fantasy, war and diverse books. This novel takes place in Nigeria and describes the folklore, customs, way of life, and issues of the locals. Now that a battle is going to break out, two brothers must struggle to dominate. It was a great mix of politics, fantasy and family conflict. The moment I started this book I was transferred into a kingdom faraway and caught between the battle of two brothers. The book kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time, making it hard to put it down before I could finish it.
In the Shadow of Ruin is a great blend of fantasy and folklore that introduces readers to a new culture and traditions that will leave you wanting for more especially after *that* ending. A definite read for people who enjoy fantasy, family feud, war, lots and lots of bloodshed and if you like to cry even after the story is over. I absolutely recommend this book and keeping a tissue box within arms reach!
July 29, 2021
I kindly received a copy of this book from the author Tony Debajo.
In the Shadow of Ruin was a really interesting read, full of Nigerian culture, words and history. I found it interesting as I do not know much about African culture/history myself.
The book is a constant battle. Immediately we are thrown into a fight between King Jide and his brother Prince Olise and this continues until the last page. There are several POV's which all add something else to the story. I particularly enjoyed the POV's of King Jide's sons and hearing about their own adventures. The sons go off in different directions so this enables the reader to explore and learn more about the different people and cultures of the kingdom.
I enjoyed learning about the 'evil' Ekaete and finding out that maybe good and evil isn't so black and white in the book. Hearing about the culture of subservient women I could find myself understanding why Ekaete became involved with black magic.
I did struggle slightly with the spacing of paragraphs and am not sure if this is just a digital problem. I found that one sentence we were in one POV and then it suddenly swapped to someone else. I found it hard to keep up with whose POV we had swapped to. A symbol to show we have swapped POV would have been helpful.
All in all an enjoyable read.
In the Shadow of Ruin was a really interesting read, full of Nigerian culture, words and history. I found it interesting as I do not know much about African culture/history myself.
The book is a constant battle. Immediately we are thrown into a fight between King Jide and his brother Prince Olise and this continues until the last page. There are several POV's which all add something else to the story. I particularly enjoyed the POV's of King Jide's sons and hearing about their own adventures. The sons go off in different directions so this enables the reader to explore and learn more about the different people and cultures of the kingdom.
I enjoyed learning about the 'evil' Ekaete and finding out that maybe good and evil isn't so black and white in the book. Hearing about the culture of subservient women I could find myself understanding why Ekaete became involved with black magic.
I did struggle slightly with the spacing of paragraphs and am not sure if this is just a digital problem. I found that one sentence we were in one POV and then it suddenly swapped to someone else. I found it hard to keep up with whose POV we had swapped to. A symbol to show we have swapped POV would have been helpful.
All in all an enjoyable read.
August 3, 2021
King Jide Adelani’s rule over Yorumba in In the Shadow of Ruin was such an enjoyable read, and I could easily imagine this story transferred to the big screen. Debajo is an author I was previously unaware of, but has become one of my favourite modern day writers.
This was a real epic rollercoaster of a novel, with many fantastical elements as well as personal conflicts and war. There is a lot of subject matter in place, lots of names of characters, tribes, etc, so it does need a little focus when getting to grips with all of that, but when the pieces click into place this is such an enjoyable book. I’d love to see a movie version, but in the meantime I may go back and reread this one in a few months.
This was a real epic rollercoaster of a novel, with many fantastical elements as well as personal conflicts and war. There is a lot of subject matter in place, lots of names of characters, tribes, etc, so it does need a little focus when getting to grips with all of that, but when the pieces click into place this is such an enjoyable book. I’d love to see a movie version, but in the meantime I may go back and reread this one in a few months.
July 24, 2021
Through booktasters, I got a copy of In the Shadow of Ruin from the author, Tony Debajo and I must say, it was worth the read. Although it took me a while to finish it but it was truly worth it. I appreciate the author for taking me back to my high school days when I learnt about the Caliphates and the Yoruba Empires.
In the Shadow of Ruins not only took me back in the days but each page came alive, making each character very vivid and somewhat better than the history lessons I got when I was a teenager.
Although it had a tragic ending 😔 I enjoyed every bit of the book. Won't mind watching it as a home video though.
Thank you Tony Debajo and booktasters for this grand opportunity. Looking forward to reading more!!!
In the Shadow of Ruins not only took me back in the days but each page came alive, making each character very vivid and somewhat better than the history lessons I got when I was a teenager.
Although it had a tragic ending 😔 I enjoyed every bit of the book. Won't mind watching it as a home video though.
Thank you Tony Debajo and booktasters for this grand opportunity. Looking forward to reading more!!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 15, 2022
I recommend In the Shadow of Ruin if you like to read battle scenes.
July 12, 2021
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It is a fast-paced, well-written, action-packed story. I enjoyed reading up on the royal family of Ile-Ife as they struggle to grasp their divine purpose in ancient times.
I loved the breakdown of the story. For once, multiple POVs did not bother me. Debajo pretty much kept it consistent with the flow of the story. I also appreciate the backstory chapters. It helped shape how we got to this historical war that the characters got themselves into. Everything was so vivid
This book was a well-thought-out tale, and I can't wait until the sequel comes out.
It is a fast-paced, well-written, action-packed story. I enjoyed reading up on the royal family of Ile-Ife as they struggle to grasp their divine purpose in ancient times.
I loved the breakdown of the story. For once, multiple POVs did not bother me. Debajo pretty much kept it consistent with the flow of the story. I also appreciate the backstory chapters. It helped shape how we got to this historical war that the characters got themselves into. Everything was so vivid
This book was a well-thought-out tale, and I can't wait until the sequel comes out.
October 1, 2023
Re-read in preparation for the second instalment in the series! Beautifully written 👏
July 15, 2021
Loved this story, decided to read this book not knowing what it was all about, but when I started it I get deeper and deeper into the story.
Surprised when I found out this story goes by in Nigeria, it describe their people and Folklore, their traditions and their way to live, including their problems, now with a war about to start two brothers must fight to rule.
To someone interested in different cultures and a intriguing story I really recommend this book, don't be afraid of their tribe names and language cuz there is a glossary included ;).
Surprised when I found out this story goes by in Nigeria, it describe their people and Folklore, their traditions and their way to live, including their problems, now with a war about to start two brothers must fight to rule.
To someone interested in different cultures and a intriguing story I really recommend this book, don't be afraid of their tribe names and language cuz there is a glossary included ;).
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