"Haven't read something as bad as this for a long time. I finished out of pure stubbornness. The author didn't even know how to follow the simple, foolproof scheme of romance novels - they meet, they fall in love, some predicament arises, they overcome it and live happily ever after. Jessica seeing them in a restaurant and calling her fat is the big disaster? Seriously?
Very poor character building, extremely poor. You don't get to know the people, the author tells us about them. People in this book are very dull and flat, down right annoying. Especially the MC. You hate yourself because you're fat. You nail a hot guy. There are only two ways to go from there - either start doing something about your weight and stop freaking out about it, or accept that you're gorgeous just the way you are (at least at the third proof you receive, please) and stop freaking out about it! But constantly whining about low self-esteem and rejecting the guy over and over again and then running back to him, it gets really on my nerves!
I'm not even going to start on Reed and the others. Total waste of time.
Not to mention the awful grammar, spelling mistakes and typos. Argh."