Michigan, 1883 In Her Darkest Hours, Is He the Man She Needs?
Lily Young longs to find her lost sister or will die trying. Heedless of any danger, she searches logging camps and towns, posing as a photographer's assistant. And then she arrives in Harrison, Michigan--and the sights of Connell McCormick.
Connell is determined to increase the fortune of his lumber-baron father and figures as long as he's living an upright life, that's what matters. But when Lily arrives in town she upends his world, forcing him to confront the truth that dangerous men have gained too much power while good men turn a blind eye.
Vexing but persuasive, Lily soon secures Connell's help, drawing them ever closer to each other. Will standing for what's right cost them both everything?
Jody Hedlund is the best-selling author of over fifty books and is the winner of numerous awards. She writes sweet historical romances with plenty of sizzle. Find out more at jodyhedlund.com.
Jody lives in central Michigan with her husband, five busy children, and five spoiled cats. When she’s not penning another of her page-turning stories, she loves to spend her time reading, especially when it also involves consuming coffee and chocolate.
I wanted to give this book five stars, purely because of the importance of its subject matter (fighting sex trafficking and forced prostitution). I saw the book recommended on a blog that I enjoy so I figured I'd read it although these days, I do generally try to avoid romantic fiction, Christian or not. It's set in the late 1800s in Michigan and I did find the historical background of the story quite interesting.
I've been trying to figure out what was wrong with the writing and I think it comes down to this: There's no subtlety. The characters are predictable - the very, very, very bad villian, the heroine (who happens to be gorgeous with long flowing hair) who is determined to solve the problem and protect her purity and chastity at the same time, the hero who isn't such a hero at the beginning but begins to see the light and takes his place in changing the world, etc, etc. There was too much of the, "I really find her sexually attractive but my mama taught me better so I'm going to wrench my eyes away from her bosom even though I want to look longer" kind of talk for my taste. (I'm really not exaggerating here either - that kind of blatant talk is all through the book.) It's telling when even though I agreed with everything the characters were saying in terms of chastity and integrity, I still was annoyed at them and just wanted them to be a little more real and nuanced.
I recently read an Alexander McCall Smith book (who is NOT a Christian writer). In it, one of the characters (who is happily married) sees an old girlfriend of his and fights to push back down images of their lovemaking. Then McCall Smith writes, "It was a vision sent by Eros, who does not ask our permission for his whisperings." This entire passage is far more effective at advancing the cause of chastity than the full-on assault of Unending Devotion. (I doubt that was McCall Smith's agenda when writing the book but it's the lesson I learned from it none-the-less.)
Good fiction doesn't have to sermonize to teach. This book tries too hard to teach and consequently fails, both in teaching and even in being more than a moderately enjoyable story to read.
The fight against evil is a tough one. I like that Ms. Hedlund tackled this difficult topic in Unending Devotion, but the good fight got lost for me. The leading lady was controlling and closed-minded, not to mention bossy and rude and pretty unlikable. The leading man was too passive for seventy-five percent of the story, which always drives me crazy because, biblically speaking, men are supposed to be the leaders of their families and communities.
There was also a lot of muck to wade through to get to the good messages of this story. Prostitution was a heavy theme. I thought it was handled well in the first couple of chapters, but then it took a negative turn. Things became more lurid, suggestive, and indecent, leaving me feeling like my mind had been sullied simply by reading certain scenes. Expletive phrases and a derogatory term were used repeatedly. Immorality was shown as a lifestyle in certain characters, and though the leads fought against the immorality, some other major characters did not repent.
Hope finally did come in the last few chapters, and I was glad about that. I liked that the cover scene was a key point in the story, which is always a fun thing to discover. The leading lady’s passion for fixing injustice was lovely in the few moments when it didn’t come across as being controlling. The character I enjoyed the most was Mrs. McCormick. She was quite a delight.
A sad and haunting tale, this story moved me. I found it hard to like the h in the beginning, but her character definitely grew on me. Despite her judgmental spirit, the reader could see the good intentions in her heart. Likewise with the H, his good heart was masked by his fatalistic outlook and outward apathy. I can identify with both these characters and struggle to find that blessed middle ground where you let God decide how He can use you in His redemption story.
So why not more stars? Again, I didn’t mind the flawed characters but the fact that they started their transformations very late into the book was frustrating. I’d prefer to spend more time reading about how their lives were after that started changing their beliefs. Also, the constant push and pull between the MCs got old pretty fast.
This story was very sad and I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone who avoids sad stories that pivot around potential triggers like prostitution, white slavery, and rape. However, I would recommend this story to more mature readers who are looking for a realistic yet ultimately encouraging story of God’s love. One star for the engaging storytelling, one star for the encouraging message and one star for the rich historical details.
Lily Young would give up her life to save and protect her sister. When she arrives in Michigan, she is close enough to discover what happened to her beloved Daisy, but finding her is not that easy especially if she must fight alone the most dangerous man she has ever encountered. When all hope is lost, will she find any help from the other people of the town? What if it is too late to save Daisy?
If I had to choose a single word to define this book, it would be powerful. A powerful story, a powerful heroine and a powerful writing. Lily is an incredible woman! Some of her choices are debatable, because of her impulsiveness, but she acts by following her heart so I guess her behaviour is understandable. Her actions and beliefs inspire an entire town to stand up against a vicious man and, most of all, her fiery temper helps one man to take action and open his eyes, Connell McCormick.
Connell is a great hero, the one that you see changing in front of your eyes, page after page. He respects women, he protects them against the evil people and he slowly understands what really counts in life. He lives in a place with thousands of temptations and yet, he is a gentleman at heart! I loved to read his banter with Lily, they were lovely and hilarious and I thought it was good to have some light moments throughout the story. Since the themes of prostitution, women slavery and violence are central and heartbreaking, I appreciated the fact that there was another part of the plot more delicate like the growing love between two people punctuated by tenderness and respect, completely different from the reality seen in the taverns and brothels.
After reading the author’s note, I was shocked to learn that some of her characters truly existed. I know that abusive men have always existed and sadly they still do, but to know that all the cruel things the villain of the story did really happened, left me speechless. There should be more women like Lily, more women ready and willing to help others and fight for their rights and happiness.
A beautiful and poignant story of courage, forgiveness and love that will make you think about how terribly modern is the reality described by Jody Hedlund, even though this story is set in 1883. Ms. Hedlund is a great author and I highly recommend this novel, whether or not you are fans of Historical Fiction.
This is my first Jody Hedlund novel and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Her background research on the lumber industry during that time period was excellent and showed throughout the plot. The storyline really captured my attention and the character development was excellent. I really liked how both Lily and Connell grew and changed in their faith as the story developed. I also thought the prodigal ending was very appropriate.
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Unending Devotion is the first of Jody Hedlund's books I've read, but I don't think it'll be my last. After reading it, I now really want to read her previous novels!
I loved how some of the things in Unending Devotion actually took place in real life and that a few of the characters in this book were real people. It added a lot more meaning to the story and I just thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
I found the characters great and, while I did get annoyed a little by Lily when she rushed to do things too quickly (if you read the book, you'll know what I'm talking about), I did still really like her character. My two favorites, though, would have to be Connell and Oren (he made me chuckle with his protectiveness).
Overall, I found Unending Devotion to be an interesting read that helped me to understand how things were in the 1800's (what with sex slavery and logging camps). I recommend it if you enjoy historical romance books with some history.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book for my review. I was not required to give a positive review, only my honest opinion - which I've done. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.*
Where I got the book: review copy provided by publisher. This review first appeared on and in the Historical Novel Review, issue 63.
This inspirational romance is set in the lumber camps of Central Michigan in 1883. Lily Young’s search for her sister Edith leads her to the shanty towns that house the lumberjacks and the brothels that service them. Protected by the friendly photographer, Oren, for whom she works, Lily believes she can cope with shanty boys like handsome Connell McCormick. But Connell turns out to be the boss’s son, and his attraction to Lily doesn’t mean he agrees with her views on cleaning out the brothels and saving the beautiful pine forests from total destruction.
It’s always good to see a Midwest setting, and Hedlund’s vivid descriptions make full use of an underexplored slice of American history, reminding the reader that the swift progress of settlement created sizeable moral problems that had nothing to do with Western gunfights and cattle rustling. I enjoyed the settings in this novel very much.
I had some trouble liking the main characters. We are told Lily is lively and has a great sense of humor, but little of either characteristic shows up, and she comes across as both earnest and foolhardy, a strange combination. Connell’s subordination to his father, his hesitation to fight the villain, Carr, and the way his desire for Lily renders him speechless make him appear weak, particularly compared to Lily’s other suitor, Stuart. While I commend Hedlund for not giving us the conventional alpha male, I find Connell’s softer side � and the overwhelmingly physical nature of his attraction to Lily � a little off-putting.
Some dramatic moments seem contrived; why, for example, in a location so well supplied with prostitutes, should so many men want to rape Lily? And the prostitute Frankie seems to exist merely to further the plot.
And yet my overall impression was of an enjoyable and well-written story, sure to delight Hedlund’s fans.
A thrilling historical drama by a bestselling author and a fabulous storyteller.
“Unending Devotion� is the latest from the pen of a talented author. I found the story unique from her previous two titles in that the themes were almost a bit…darker. But I actually liked the mood of the story. It broods below the surface as Lily fights to save her sister from prostitution.
Lily is a determined heroine. What she wants she sets her mind too and she wants her sister back. She has honorable determination, but how do you save someone who doesn’t want to be rescued?
What I loved the most about this book was the parallels between Lily’s love for her sister and Christ’s love for us. The beautiful weaving of faith and strengthening of that faith pulled at the story’s strengths, weaving the plot completely together.
Connell McCormick is such a fine hero. Not very often do you find a historical hero we get to watch open up before a reader’s eyes. A hero who is silently strong, but also discovering who God wants him to be, instead of the expectations pushed upon him. I loved watching him be transformed. And I loved watching him fall in love with Lily. Oh did their romance sizzle on the page!
All in all, another great addition to my Hedlund collection. I’ve failed to be disappointed.
This review is my honest opinion. Thanks to the publishers through CFBA for my copy to review.
Hard to put this down once I have begun! An interesting setting of the lumber industry back in 1800s Michigan, of the lumber barons and debauchery that goes on when the shanty boys (lumberjacks) are off work. Lily's passion in changing the world is admirable, but I find her a tad too stubborn & self righteous, it would be hard to work with her! (glad she realized she is not-so-perfect at the end of the novel)
Sensual for a christian novel, not one I would recommend to teenage girls, but otherwise this is a satisfying read. I enjoyed it!
Hedlund does a great job addressing a fascinating aspect of history--how the lumber industry in Michigan gave rise to prostitution (some forced) and debauchery in the lumber towns. Not the typical topic for an inspirational fiction story, but Hedlund managed to make it interesting and informative. Lily is a firecracker of a main character, and Connell's struggle to find what his place is in the fight against immortality is so realistic.
Very well written, and stands out from the hundreds of other Christian romances with its depth.
l am fast becoming a fan of Jody Hedlund. This is my 4th book by this author and they've all had strong redemption themes based on love and forgiveness.
Unending Devotion is about Lily and Daisy, sisters who in the beginning of the story are in an orphanage. Lily has decided since she is the older of the two she is Daisy's keeper. She tries her best to get her into the best foster home. When things don't work out according to Lily's plan she just continues to TRY to work things out sometimes to the detriment to all she loves. Will the results of her stubborn streak ultimately bring the love and forgiveness that both girls need?
Lily and her sister Daisy were orphans and was moved from one place to another. Daisy ran away from adoptive family without even telling Lily she was doing so. Lily was heart broken and was determined to find her sister. She knew that her sister had no skills to get a job and she was so very young. Lily feared Daisy had me forced into white slavery to work in one of the brothels in the lumber camps in Michigan.
Lily was fortunate to be living with an older couple that were very kind to her and she was sure she was loved. The man of the house Oren was a photographer and traveled to the lumber camp to take photos of the men working in the camps to send to their family or to keep themselves.
After Oren's wife died Lily traveled with him as his photographer's assistant. This was the perfect opportunity to search for her sister. In the process she found other young girls enslaved in the brothels and she helped some of them escape to return to their families or to a place for a better life.
When Oren and Lily arrived in one of the camps she went into the tavern and was immediately accosted by one of the shanty boys. Connell McCormick could tell she was truly a lady, and not use to being man handled. Connell confronted the shanty boy which ended up in a brawl with Lily right in the middle putting up a good fight. That is until Oren walked in and placed a gun to Connell's head due to the fact that Connell was on the floor with Lily in his lap yet totaly innocent of any fowl play. After the shanty boy was kicked out of the tavern and Lily was safely under Oren's watchful guard she was able to explain what had happened and the gun was taken away from Connell's head.
While Lily stayed at the camp and the tavern not only did she have Oren watching over her Connell was also keeping an eye on her safety. He knew she had sneaked into his hardened heart and he could not help himself for wanting to protect her. When he found out about her crusade to save the young girls enslaved in the brothels he tried to discourage her, telling her it was hopeless in trying to save the girls. But she was determined. Lily had captured his heart and he would not let her be put in harms way. His opinion of the young girls plight eventually crumbled and he was caught up in her crusade. She told him about her life as an orphan along with that of her sister's. He now realized that Daisy was initially the reason for Lily's crusade.
This is not just a story about adventure, romance and intrigue, it is about the horrible life women and children were forced into living. White slavery of women and children has always been a big problem even today. I admire the author for centering this story on white slavery. It is something we should not turn on backs on. We must continue to protect women and children from this horrendous crime.
The real hero in this story was Lily. Due to her strong faith God, He gave her the strength to push forward with her cause. She was persistent in her crusade against white slavery and recruited other people into to her fight against this injustice to human lives.
I challenge you to do a some research on white slavery not just in the past but in our present time. Yes, white slavery of women and children is alive and thriving in this day and age. A lot of people hide from the truth but it does not make it go away!
I highly recommend this book.
I rated this book a 5 out of 5.
Disclosure I received a free copy of this book from Litfuse/Bethany House for review. I was in no way compensated for this review. It is my own opinion.
I read this book in under 24 hours, so that should tell you how interesting and hard-to-put-down it was. :) I have previously read Jody's first book, The Preacher's Bride, and LOVED it. So I was very excited when I found out that I won a copy of Unending Devotion in a giveaway. :) I really, really enjoyed this book, and if it weren't for the large amount of mature content, then I'd give it 5 stars! Jody Hedlund just has a way with her books were you end up reading a lot more that you would think within a certain amount of time, just because you can't put the book down!
This story had a big emphasis on standing up for what's right, even when it isn't easy, convenient or beneficial. I really liked how there was a TON of historical facts found in this book. At the end of the story, Jody shared about the time period which this book is based off of {The lumber era in the late 1800's} and I was pleasantly surprised to learn that almost all the story, even some of the tiny details were based of real historical facts/events! I loved how much history was put into this story, and it was obvious that Jody had done her homework and well-researched the time period for her book.
Another thing I liked...the main male character Connell, was just so pure and righteous. In this story there was a lot of impurity and uncleanliness that surrounded him, but in the book you can see his obvious will do be a god-fearing man and not let everything around him affect his morals or convictions...well maybe except for Lily. :) She did change his mind a bit, but the rest of the characters didn't. In several scenes he showed tremendous self-control and was a good example to the other men in the story who could have learned a thing or two from him. He had his faults like everyone else, but I found him to be an outstanding character.
Another great thing about this book was the ending! I loved it! The only downer with this book was the mature content is had. The time period this book was placed in- the mid 1800's- was a time were prostitution in this part of Michigan was outrageous. So in order to keep it as true to history as possible Jody obviously had to make this a part of her story, but it's not always a pleasant picture. While there were never any "direct view" scenes of this sin, there were parts were it got close, and the prostitution was a major part of this story. So due to the prostitution and a few mildly violent scenes, I'd only recommend it to older mature girls, certainly around the age of 16+. At some parts there was a bit more detail than I'd have wanted, but overall I'm glad I read this book as it exposed me to this horrible truth in this time period. However I will say that I think Jody handled it in a right way, were she made the emphasis that it is wrong and should be stopped, so I appreciated this.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book. It was one of those books were you just can't put it down, and was jammed full of history and had a well written plot. But due to the above things I mentioned, I'd only recommend this book for ladies ages at least 16+.
Again, Jody Hedlund has crafted one of the best books I've read all year–probably since I finished reading her second book, The Doctor’s Lady (last November).
There are books that I can tell are books... and then there are books that simply draw me in so far that I’m right there inside the characters. And I don’t want to leave. There are books that take me long days and even weeks to finish because I know I am reading a book... and that I keep having to read the book to see what happens in the end. And then there are books that I devour in a matter of two days that so envelop me into another world that I can hardly think of anything but opening the pages and finding out more.
Unending Devotion was THIS kind of book. And those two days of devouring Jody Hedlund’s words were not enough. I dreaded getting to the end, though it was all I could focus upon.
I know from attending a small writer’s conference last November, in which Jody Hedlund was the keynote speaker, that this book wasn’t exactly based on the life of one particular strong and courageous young woman’s true story as her two previous novels had been. However in the Author’s Notes at the back of the book she does explain that many of the situations and a number of the characters were part of the real history of the lumber era in Michigan.
Pure enjoyment. Superbly written characters and chapters. There is nothing more I can say to exemplify how pleased I was all the way through and all the way to the very last word of this book. I was already hooked on Jody Hedlund’s writing and story-forming skills after reading her first two books–but now? In the matter of just a few books she’s come to a place in my heart really only one other author has made it to, and that is Julie Lessman. And anyone who really knows me knows that I am completely and utterly in love with Julie Lessman’s books, characters and writing skills. Now I guess I’ll be applauding Jody Hedlund just as much.
But wow. Jody deserves it.
I was given a paperback copy of this book by Bethany House in order to read and give my honest review for this LitFuse Publicity Blog Tour. I give Unending Devotion 5 stars.
Unending Devotion is just that. Lily Young will risk everything to find and rescue her sister. Just when she thought her sister was fine and in a good loving home, she learns that she has run away. Now she is looking everywhere in the Michigan logging towns. When you read that some of the people in this book really existed and were as bad as they are portrayed here as they were in real life. You are looking at the face of pure evil, and the facts that are presented as fiction, some did actually happen. No wonder this book is a real page turner, you can't put it down. There are some real caring folks in this town of Harrison, Michigan and they will warm your heart. Lily has come to town with Oren, to help take pictures at the camps, and to try to locate her sister Daisy. When one rough individual grabs at her she ends up in the lap of Connell McCormick. Another man who is there for her is Stuart, who runs the local paper. They both take a liking to her, and stand up for her on several occasions. Will Lily be able to find her sister, will Stuart or Connell win her heart? The answers are here, you just have to savor this book to the end, and enjoy this historical novel.
I received this book from Litfuse Publicity Tours, and the Publisher Bethany House, and was not required to give a positive review.
I wanted to reread this book for ages because I remember how good the storyline was. I also remembered the content that I've become mindful about staying away from, so I wanted to read it again with different eyes and see where I'd land the second time around.
I still loved the story and world-building (Jody is excellent at that). But the main character Lily is impulsive, lacks nuance, and her character does not develop by the end. The theme of lust vs true romance was pushed pretty hard and I wish there was less focus on how the main characters couldn't stop thinking about each other and had a hard time keeping their hands off each other, as opposed to the actual evil injustice going on in the story.
I found that I am not as impressed with this one as I was with her other two books. I feel like this plot and time period have been done before. Maybe it was just my mood when I read it, but it felt overdone to me. I do really like Hedlund's way of writing though. I think her descriptions are done well and she writes some really fun side characters. I just didn't get into it, so I skimmed till the end. I was more interested in the authors note about the true stories of the lumbering workers and the town than the actual book.
I really enjoyed this historical Christian romance novel. The protagonist, Lily, was also very driven to rescuing and helping women stuck in prostitution. This theme helped the novel have a level of intrigue. In any case, the novel was well-written, and the characters were well drawn. The only reason this novel is on my almost-favorites list rather than my favorites list is because Lily is so annoying in her naive determination to "save the world." Anyhow, I look forward to reading more of the series.
I really enjoyed Jody Hedlund's second novel The Doctor's Lady and looked forward to this one. While I liked Lily and Connell well enough, this wasn't a story that truly resonated with me. Although noble, Lily was little too good to be true. The logging aspect was fascinating. The descriptions were vivid and the story had compelling aspects. Fans of historical fiction and Jody Hedlund especially will enjoy it. I found it a nice diversion and an easy, comfortable read.
The beginning was really good, but as the story went on I realized I was constantly getting board. Even during the “action� scenes I just never got into it. I felt like the relationships of all the characters were constantly on and off as well. Everyone seemed to have mixed emotions about everyone! The writing was good and the story line was good but it put together in the end just wasn’t my cup of tea.
The most annoying, self-righteous, naive heroine I've encountered. That everything works out because of her frustrating willfulness makes this read okay. But just.
I'm going to call this one at 3.5 starts. It's not that I didn't enjoy it. I actually did enjoy it. Didn't love it, but I enjoyed it. What I loved: Jody Hedlund's writing style is beautiful. I love the way she talks about certain things and describes certain things using words that bring beautiful images to life! It was very easy for me to picture Lily and her beauty standing out in a camp of rough and rugged men. I enjoyed her bit of the storyline - trying to rescue her sister from a life of prostitution. And I LOVED the Michigan history and bits. My mother is a Michigan native and took me there once. I never wanted to leave. So reading this book brought those memories to life and I loved reading that. The author's note...guys don't skip out on reading that! I didn't know that there was a bunch of stuff in the book that had actually happened. And I love the way that Jody Hedlund calls us to not stand by and let evil run amuck, but to rise up against it. What I didn't love: I kind of felt like the book followed a troupe formula. I tire of the woman being the one to bring the man in out in the man. Connell stood by, letting evil happen while, well, he wasn't greedy, but his business sure wreaked havoc on the natural beauty. I think I tire very easily of the popular way of when a man first meets a woman, she disagrees with EVERYTHING he does, finds fault with EVERY aspect of his life and finally, he starts to see that she's right. Sure, this happens. A lot. But if I met someone who disagreed with everything I did...to the point of disrespecting me in front of other people...nah, I'm moving on. Whatever happened to gentle correction and exhortation? Lily was not my favorite character. I get Disney princess vibes from her. Two times, she risked her life rather stupidly and yes, she got herself in trouble when she did, but I'd think she might be smarter than that. I'm also team Lily and Stuart. Sorry. :P Despite these, I really enjoyed the novel! Even though Jody Hedlund was writing about the prostitution issue, nothing was ever graphic, save for maybe one scene that took place near the third quarter with a man sitting in front of a woman who had her bodice askew, but it was tactfully done. And it was necessary to this one character's character so it wasn't just "in there." I recommend this for a good read, something to enjoy and as a reminder to stand up in the face of evil and not just sit back and let it happen.
Oh man. Can I not rate this book? I think I am going to go with 2.5-3 stars. A couple things: 1) Mature subject. For older teens and adults. The main plot of this book is rescuing girls out of forced prostitution, and the author spares no expense to make sure the reader gets the full experience with every gruesome detail. None of it was really outright inappropriate, but it was there and it was intense and graphic. 2) Because of the evil schemes of the runners of the brothel, the main characters are very intentional about purity and propriety in their relationship- which I really did appreciate. The romance was beautiful and very well written. 3) Y'all, this was a HARD book to read. I was reading in agony. Literally in agony. There were times that the prostitution scenes made me very uncomfortable and I wanted to stop reading. But the plot reeled me in further, and I kept reading. Now here I am. Done with the book and writing a review to warn my dear followers. If this topic makes you uncomfortable, DO NOT CRACK A PAGE OF THIS BOOK. You will get hooked. Don't say I didn't warn you.
I think I have found a new favorite author. This is only the second book I have read by Jody Hedlund but I am already hooked. I really like her writing style. This book was a lot heavier then the first one I read since it deals with prostitution and white slavery. The villain in this book was actually real, he was not made up by the author. He was evil to the core! He tricked young girls into coming to work in his “hotel� and then would beat them into submission. So so sad! So, this is a Christian romance novel so it maybe too preachy for some people but it didn’t bother me too much. I have read some that were preachier...is that a word? That’s not a word is it?...oh well you know what I mean, right? 😂 Anyway, I enjoyed this book I am looking forward to reading all of Hedlunds books (thank you kindle unlimited).
Loved the strong willed lily character and her drive to make a home and family for herself and orphaned sister. Strong values are displayed in lily as she tries to track down her sister that has been taken in by the brothels in Michigan lumber towns. Connell is my hero. An upstanding man or morals that develops more strength in his convictions to make his town better.