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Antius Ascending #1
Sovereign
Chemical warfare has obliterated most of the world, including America, and the survivors have turned into feral beasts, save one colony, Antius, the last remnant of civilization. Seventeen-year-old Cori (aka Citizen 1206) only longs for wide open spaces and freedom. But Antius has no use for such things, just mindless drones to serve in a place with walls, fences, and laws. A lot of laws, which Cori constantly breaks. So she’s spent years plotting her escape, which is the only thing that will save her from the colony’s deranged leader, Nathan. She isn’t looking to be a hero, and she certainly isn’t looking to fall in love, but she just might do both.
300 pages, ebook
First published October 27, 2012
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E.R. Arroyo
10Ìýbooks160ÌýfollowersE.R. Arroyo is a YA author and plot structure junkie. She writes across multiple genres, both contemporary and speculative, her heroines tend to have attitudes, and she lives for dialogue. In addition to her published novels, she’s participated in two anthologies and co-founded a Facebook group championing the dystopian genre. E.R. is a musician, wife, and mom, and she’s a passionate student of neurodivergence.
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May 27, 2013
Sovereign opens up right in the middle of the action and keeps the pace balanced throughout, but it still somehow managed to constantly take me by surprise.
The world-building was cruel and dark, but so horrifyingly real. Antius is not a place I would like to live in. Adults are drugged into submission and women are penetrated by high-ranked officials and are forced to bear children out of duty. The colony was strict before Nathan succeeded his father, but it's even more ruthless ever since. Cori is sick of Antius' corrupt hierarchy, and her friend Dylan convinces her that the only way out is to gain trust on the inside. Cori agrees to train under Nathan and become a soldier, quickly becoming the best of her group and instantly impresses Titus, a well-respected instructor. Being a soldier brings the perks of mush labeled 'chicken' and hot showers, but Cori soon understands that life is even harder on the inside, and the things she sees will change her forever. Sovereign is filled with chapters with graphic violence and the excitement kept me on my toes.
Cori reminded me of a tougher Katniss Everdeen, if that's even possible. She's been trained to fight by the most ruthless person in Antius, and her own enemy, Nathan through sickening exercises that endangered her life every day. A lot of people have died for her sake and her own childhood was a dark one, making her shudder away from the slightest amount of human touch. Cori isn't just tough, she's also fairly smart and knows how to assess her surroundings and situations properly, and I admire her for that. And if that's not enough, there's also something about her that stops Nathan from killing her at first sight. E.R. Arroyo really created a strong and fierce heroine that everyone could easily look up to.
The world that Cori lives in sounds so cold, but as she goes through hell and back, she manages to find warmth in her best friend and in the people she meets throughout the course of the book. Cori's companions were interesting to read about- there was always something lingering behind the words and they each had a definite purpose. That's the problem I had with Sovereign- the lack of character development. Everyone, even Cori, had their own definite and predetermined purpose and it was like they were pidgeonholed into it. I couldn't sense much of a growth in Cori, either. Another thing was the romance. It was sweet and tender, but I felt like some of the romantic scenes were unnecessary and too convenient considering their situation.
Sovereign is kind of like Hunger Games crossed with Divergent, but it still has it's won unique mark. The characters could use a bit more authenticity, but the world-building is absolute perfection. E.R. Arroyo's writing was beautiful, although I spotted a few typographical errors that could use some editing. The story was thrown to the readers punch-by-punch and I was just as surprised as Cori when some unexpected events took place. Fast-paced and filled with terrifying chaos narrated by Cori's strong yet fragile voice, Sovereign is a young adult dystopian novel worth reading.
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The world-building was cruel and dark, but so horrifyingly real. Antius is not a place I would like to live in. Adults are drugged into submission and women are penetrated by high-ranked officials and are forced to bear children out of duty. The colony was strict before Nathan succeeded his father, but it's even more ruthless ever since. Cori is sick of Antius' corrupt hierarchy, and her friend Dylan convinces her that the only way out is to gain trust on the inside. Cori agrees to train under Nathan and become a soldier, quickly becoming the best of her group and instantly impresses Titus, a well-respected instructor. Being a soldier brings the perks of mush labeled 'chicken' and hot showers, but Cori soon understands that life is even harder on the inside, and the things she sees will change her forever. Sovereign is filled with chapters with graphic violence and the excitement kept me on my toes.
Cori reminded me of a tougher Katniss Everdeen, if that's even possible. She's been trained to fight by the most ruthless person in Antius, and her own enemy, Nathan through sickening exercises that endangered her life every day. A lot of people have died for her sake and her own childhood was a dark one, making her shudder away from the slightest amount of human touch. Cori isn't just tough, she's also fairly smart and knows how to assess her surroundings and situations properly, and I admire her for that. And if that's not enough, there's also something about her that stops Nathan from killing her at first sight. E.R. Arroyo really created a strong and fierce heroine that everyone could easily look up to.
The world that Cori lives in sounds so cold, but as she goes through hell and back, she manages to find warmth in her best friend and in the people she meets throughout the course of the book. Cori's companions were interesting to read about- there was always something lingering behind the words and they each had a definite purpose. That's the problem I had with Sovereign- the lack of character development. Everyone, even Cori, had their own definite and predetermined purpose and it was like they were pidgeonholed into it. I couldn't sense much of a growth in Cori, either. Another thing was the romance. It was sweet and tender, but I felt like some of the romantic scenes were unnecessary and too convenient considering their situation.
Sovereign is kind of like Hunger Games crossed with Divergent, but it still has it's won unique mark. The characters could use a bit more authenticity, but the world-building is absolute perfection. E.R. Arroyo's writing was beautiful, although I spotted a few typographical errors that could use some editing. The story was thrown to the readers punch-by-punch and I was just as surprised as Cori when some unexpected events took place. Fast-paced and filled with terrifying chaos narrated by Cori's strong yet fragile voice, Sovereign is a young adult dystopian novel worth reading.
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December 27, 2015In this first book of the Antius Ascending series, Cori is a fish out of water in post-apocalyptic America. She's an orphan who was brought to the colony of Antius at age seven. No matter how she tries over the next ten years, she doesn't fit in. All she can think about is escaping. But the security to keep the wild things out, keeps her prisoner. So she plans and plots and sneaks out at night with various escape plans, but as bad as it seems, it gets worse when the colony leader dies and his cruel son Nathan takes over.
The conflict between Cori and Nathan is balanced by her friendship with another young adult, Dylan, who is determined to help her escape. Except when Nathan takes over, the rules change. Cori is immediately enrolled in Nathan's militia training, a brutal training camp that's designed to break her. However, as time passes and she out performs her "class" of six, she gets assigned to the trade security line of work. The more she learns about the different layers of society, the more she realizes her chances of escaping are close to zero.
Cori must keep her wits about her to survive in this dystopian world. She's seen firsthand that the smallest of sleights to their Sovereign Nathan is a death sentence. Can she beat this terrible man and save herself?
I admired Cori's character arc, and her unswerving focus. She's gutsy and brave, physically tough and yet emotionally vulnerable, compassionate and resolute - all of this at 17!
ER Arroyo is a fine writer, and this is a story I will read again, which is a high compliment in my world.
Maggie Toussaint and Rigel Carson for Muddy Rose Reviews
The conflict between Cori and Nathan is balanced by her friendship with another young adult, Dylan, who is determined to help her escape. Except when Nathan takes over, the rules change. Cori is immediately enrolled in Nathan's militia training, a brutal training camp that's designed to break her. However, as time passes and she out performs her "class" of six, she gets assigned to the trade security line of work. The more she learns about the different layers of society, the more she realizes her chances of escaping are close to zero.
Cori must keep her wits about her to survive in this dystopian world. She's seen firsthand that the smallest of sleights to their Sovereign Nathan is a death sentence. Can she beat this terrible man and save herself?
I admired Cori's character arc, and her unswerving focus. She's gutsy and brave, physically tough and yet emotionally vulnerable, compassionate and resolute - all of this at 17!
ER Arroyo is a fine writer, and this is a story I will read again, which is a high compliment in my world.
Maggie Toussaint and Rigel Carson for Muddy Rose Reviews
March 30, 2016
My original audiobook review and many others can be found at .
Cori will always be an outsider. ÌýShe thinks and acts differently. ÌýShe is not originally from Antius. ÌýBrought in after her father was killed by "savages" and raised by a benevolent leader. ÌýThis leader suddenly passes and Cori's world is turned upside down. ÌýShe is forced into the military a year before she was supposed to be and pushed almost beyond her limits. ÌýShe has to escape, she must escape, she will escape. ÌýFollow Cori and her closest friends attempt to leave the only place they've ever known for the unknown outside.
Narration was done by the Corinne Bupp (which I thought was awesome because the main character and the narrator had the same first name). ÌýCori (the narrator) absolutely kills it. ÌýShe was able to use the perfect voice for Cori and gives a wonderful performance. ÌýShe gives each new person we meet in the book a new voice so that the reader is not totally confused throughout. ÌýThe production and voice quality were perfect. ÌýNo issues at all.
My first thought post-listen was "Woah." ÌýWhich was quickly followed by "Oh, please tell me the series is written and that there are more audiobooks on the way. ÌýWell Ms. Arroyo, if you are reading this, please know that I (and I'm sure others) would love to hear the second book in this series voiced by Corinne.
The story had the perfect arc. ÌýSometimes with a series the author will leave a lot of things on the table, leaving the reader to feel gipped or like they didn't get the whole story. ÌýThis is not one of those stories. ÌýUpon finishing this, I could theorhetically walk away and be okay. ÌýI know enough of what is going on that I am comfortable with where it was left off. ÌýWith that being said, I do not want to walk way from this series. ÌýI found it absolutely fascinating and interesting.
I love a good dystopian. ÌýOne of my favorite all-time books is 1984. ÌýSovereign was written perfectly. ÌýI rarely say that about books. ÌýI can usually find one flaw, but with this, I really feel like I was given a wonderful story, told perfectly, by a character that I feel for.
Cori is strong, misunderstood, and severely damaged, but that just made me love her more. ÌýI reallyÌýfeltÌýfor Cori throughout this book. ÌýWhen she felt mad, I felt mad. ÌýWhen she was confused, I felt confused. ÌýJust a sign of an incredibly hashed out character and story.
If you like character-driven storylines, you will love this. ÌýIf you were a fan of The Hunger Games and Divergent, I think you just found your next series. ÌýTake some time, read or listen to this story and fall for Cori like I did. ÌýI don't think you'll be disappointed.
Audiobook was provided for review by the author.
Cori will always be an outsider. ÌýShe thinks and acts differently. ÌýShe is not originally from Antius. ÌýBrought in after her father was killed by "savages" and raised by a benevolent leader. ÌýThis leader suddenly passes and Cori's world is turned upside down. ÌýShe is forced into the military a year before she was supposed to be and pushed almost beyond her limits. ÌýShe has to escape, she must escape, she will escape. ÌýFollow Cori and her closest friends attempt to leave the only place they've ever known for the unknown outside.
Narration was done by the Corinne Bupp (which I thought was awesome because the main character and the narrator had the same first name). ÌýCori (the narrator) absolutely kills it. ÌýShe was able to use the perfect voice for Cori and gives a wonderful performance. ÌýShe gives each new person we meet in the book a new voice so that the reader is not totally confused throughout. ÌýThe production and voice quality were perfect. ÌýNo issues at all.
My first thought post-listen was "Woah." ÌýWhich was quickly followed by "Oh, please tell me the series is written and that there are more audiobooks on the way. ÌýWell Ms. Arroyo, if you are reading this, please know that I (and I'm sure others) would love to hear the second book in this series voiced by Corinne.
The story had the perfect arc. ÌýSometimes with a series the author will leave a lot of things on the table, leaving the reader to feel gipped or like they didn't get the whole story. ÌýThis is not one of those stories. ÌýUpon finishing this, I could theorhetically walk away and be okay. ÌýI know enough of what is going on that I am comfortable with where it was left off. ÌýWith that being said, I do not want to walk way from this series. ÌýI found it absolutely fascinating and interesting.
I love a good dystopian. ÌýOne of my favorite all-time books is 1984. ÌýSovereign was written perfectly. ÌýI rarely say that about books. ÌýI can usually find one flaw, but with this, I really feel like I was given a wonderful story, told perfectly, by a character that I feel for.
Cori is strong, misunderstood, and severely damaged, but that just made me love her more. ÌýI reallyÌýfeltÌýfor Cori throughout this book. ÌýWhen she felt mad, I felt mad. ÌýWhen she was confused, I felt confused. ÌýJust a sign of an incredibly hashed out character and story.
If you like character-driven storylines, you will love this. ÌýIf you were a fan of The Hunger Games and Divergent, I think you just found your next series. ÌýTake some time, read or listen to this story and fall for Cori like I did. ÌýI don't think you'll be disappointed.
Audiobook was provided for review by the author.
April 1, 2014
4.5 STARS! Sovereign is set in a time typical Dystopian, Post-Apocalyptic books ignore. No, it's not set in the moment right after a huge apocalyptic world catastrophe or hundreds of years after such an event. Instead, Sovereign follows a rebellious teenage girl, Cori, who is a citizen of Antius, a bunkered up civilization teeming with devious technological terrors and a brutally sick leader, Nathan. Cori, an orphan of Antius, has immunity to the mind controlling techniques and substances used to create a subservient Dystopian society.
The plot was original, fast-paced and intriguing. There were some amazing supporting characters in this book that I would love to continue to follow (if they are still alive), including Titus, Tyce, and Marsi. Cori, although a worthy heroine of dystopia, could have been a little more developed as a character...yes, I know she is rebellious, has difficulty trusting or understanding her feelings and at times is self-sacrificing, but I also found her to be a little cold and selfish. All of the accolades for Cori at the end of the story fell a little short..."we all believe in you Cori," just seemed a little misplaced when there were so many other heroes. I liked Dylan as Cori's love interest, especially as they have been best friends, but I kind of like the sexy Tyce or even the stalwart Titus.
Here's hoping the next book uncovers some of my burning questions and resurrects some of these characters!
The plot was original, fast-paced and intriguing. There were some amazing supporting characters in this book that I would love to continue to follow (if they are still alive), including Titus, Tyce, and Marsi. Cori, although a worthy heroine of dystopia, could have been a little more developed as a character...yes, I know she is rebellious, has difficulty trusting or understanding her feelings and at times is self-sacrificing, but I also found her to be a little cold and selfish. All of the accolades for Cori at the end of the story fell a little short..."we all believe in you Cori," just seemed a little misplaced when there were so many other heroes. I liked Dylan as Cori's love interest, especially as they have been best friends, but I kind of like the sexy Tyce or even the stalwart Titus.
Here's hoping the next book uncovers some of my burning questions and resurrects some of these characters!
July 2, 2018
This was so intense all the way through. It's pretty messed up and the main character has to live through some horrible things. I wish I could give it 5 stars, but unfortunately the ending, how some major plot points were concluded was done way too quickly and I felt very underwhelmed and disappointed. Especially after making my way through the hardcore journey of the first 90%, and then "no boom", like the finale firework that fizzled out and never goes off. I've already read the second book. It's a similar experience. Both books are really good. I just can't reconcile the endings so much with the rest. This is a mixed review, so much is great and worth reading. However, the endings were just lacking enough that I felt confused, maybe a bit cheated? Slightly questioning whether I should have taken the time to read at all.
October 30, 2012
Sovereign is a novel that deals with a question that most young adults grapple with--who am I. Clearly, Cori's question is a little more complicated as she exists in a world she's clearly not from and one that she doesn't easily fit into. She's tougher than a lot of heroines, which only makes the love story in Sovereign that much better. I had a definite soft spot for Dylan, and I think most readers will share in that.
I enjoyed getting lost in Arroyo's world and found myself struggling right there with Cori as her world is turned over many times. The novel is engaging and solid, definitely an interesting place to visit, not that I'd want to live there. Still, I'll definitely be looking for the sequel and other works by this author.
I enjoyed getting lost in Arroyo's world and found myself struggling right there with Cori as her world is turned over many times. The novel is engaging and solid, definitely an interesting place to visit, not that I'd want to live there. Still, I'll definitely be looking for the sequel and other works by this author.
September 4, 2014
Hold Your Breath
E.R. Arroyo details an epic story about a girl named Cori who needs no one. As she plans to escape the encampment she has lived in for ten years since her father's death, she realizes no one deserves to be alone. Non-stop action, including detailed fight scenes maybe this an exhilarating adventure. I can't wait to read the next book!
E.R. Arroyo details an epic story about a girl named Cori who needs no one. As she plans to escape the encampment she has lived in for ten years since her father's death, she realizes no one deserves to be alone. Non-stop action, including detailed fight scenes maybe this an exhilarating adventure. I can't wait to read the next book!
March 13, 2013
Loved this book, I couldn't put it down!! I can't wait for the next!!
February 19, 2016
What a great book!
Lets just say, this book was action packed, full of angst, just all around a really great read. Now on to the next.
Lets just say, this book was action packed, full of angst, just all around a really great read. Now on to the next.
November 12, 2012
4.75 Stars
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***NO SPOILERS***
I have to say I am impressed. This awesome book teetered on the precipice of perfect. The author (Arroyo) brought her A game to the big boy field and almost knocked it out of the park…almost…but this is her first and I say “well done�. I try not to compare books to other works unless they are complete rip-offs. When that happens, I consider chucking the the book across the room until I realize my Kindle warranty doesn’t carry a “broken because of stupid� clause, so I usually end up writing a scathing review on blatant plagiarism. Don’t worry Sovereign didn’t rip off any other stories, but I couldn’t ignore how the emotional and physical strength of the heroine drew a familiar resonance to the lead in Divergent, while the environmental setting and certain scenes (inside a tree trunk with a wounded boy; while trying not to get killed finding him food after he declares love through a drug induced haze) prompted remembrances of the insolvent world created in The Hunger Games. Although at times, it was weaker than those powerhouse gems, I found myself becoming more impressed that Arroyo, sans a big publishing house editor to jazz up the manuscript for mass consumer consumption, actually wrote a pretty damn good book.
Now down to the grit�
The story takes place in a bleak, post apocalyptic world. A nuclear holocaust destroyed everything, leaving only a small colony of humans protected by a rogue government, from mutant human savages who roam earth freely. The protagonist, Cori, is a rebellious 17-year-old constantly searching for more, something bigger than her confines within the captive and chemically lobotomized colony. Unlike others her age that were born into Antius, she was brought there when her dad was killed and never quite felt at home in a world where touching is illegal. But as we know, in the land of make-believe the human spirit cannot be broken without a fight and Sovereign gives you a battle worth every penny.
The story sets off with a frenetic voice, short sentences and frenzied situations. When I began the journey, I felt a little put off with the pacing of the writing. I thought it was better suited for a script, but that feeling faded once I got past the introductions and into a story that has enough action to make Arnold and Stallone run for the chopper.
Much like Divergent, Cori, the protagonist, is a kick-ass chick, that vomits too much and has a penchant for getting into trouble, but she is appropriately naïve based on her lot in life. She is not blind to what is going on around her or to her feelings and she accepts truth when it is proven. She is trusting, but not blind, and that is a quality that I really respect in a female heroine (especially when they are constantly being dumbed-down, while making ridiculous choices…ehem…Katniss Everdeen.) Unlike Divergent, the violence although plentiful, is not graphic, making Sovereign slightly more tolerable for younger audiences. But that doesn’t mean Arroyo pussyfoots around death. She offers it up by the truckload and it isn’t always the bad guys. And that is all I will say about that.
Don’t fret romantics, there is love and it is woven into the story organically. Arroyo doesn’t fill the space with cheesy dialogue and poor character choices, but mums the word because you really have to experience it without interference from a blogger hyped up on a great story and latte’s.
Overall, this is a well written book with plenty of twists and unexpected turns that will keep you up at night reading under the light of the moon. The only reason I didn’t give it a full five stars was I felt some crucial nail-biting moments needed more attention. Plus, It was also a little long-winded in certain areas, but I overlooked that once I got about a quarter way through.The ending implies a sequel is coming, but nothing goes wholly unresolved. I encourage you to check it out for yourself. I don’t promise a life changing experience, but I believe you will, at the very least, have a lot of fun reading it.
I received a copy in exchange for an honest review on my blog - CHECK US OUT
***NO SPOILERS***
I have to say I am impressed. This awesome book teetered on the precipice of perfect. The author (Arroyo) brought her A game to the big boy field and almost knocked it out of the park…almost…but this is her first and I say “well done�. I try not to compare books to other works unless they are complete rip-offs. When that happens, I consider chucking the the book across the room until I realize my Kindle warranty doesn’t carry a “broken because of stupid� clause, so I usually end up writing a scathing review on blatant plagiarism. Don’t worry Sovereign didn’t rip off any other stories, but I couldn’t ignore how the emotional and physical strength of the heroine drew a familiar resonance to the lead in Divergent, while the environmental setting and certain scenes (inside a tree trunk with a wounded boy; while trying not to get killed finding him food after he declares love through a drug induced haze) prompted remembrances of the insolvent world created in The Hunger Games. Although at times, it was weaker than those powerhouse gems, I found myself becoming more impressed that Arroyo, sans a big publishing house editor to jazz up the manuscript for mass consumer consumption, actually wrote a pretty damn good book.
Now down to the grit�
The story takes place in a bleak, post apocalyptic world. A nuclear holocaust destroyed everything, leaving only a small colony of humans protected by a rogue government, from mutant human savages who roam earth freely. The protagonist, Cori, is a rebellious 17-year-old constantly searching for more, something bigger than her confines within the captive and chemically lobotomized colony. Unlike others her age that were born into Antius, she was brought there when her dad was killed and never quite felt at home in a world where touching is illegal. But as we know, in the land of make-believe the human spirit cannot be broken without a fight and Sovereign gives you a battle worth every penny.
The story sets off with a frenetic voice, short sentences and frenzied situations. When I began the journey, I felt a little put off with the pacing of the writing. I thought it was better suited for a script, but that feeling faded once I got past the introductions and into a story that has enough action to make Arnold and Stallone run for the chopper.
Much like Divergent, Cori, the protagonist, is a kick-ass chick, that vomits too much and has a penchant for getting into trouble, but she is appropriately naïve based on her lot in life. She is not blind to what is going on around her or to her feelings and she accepts truth when it is proven. She is trusting, but not blind, and that is a quality that I really respect in a female heroine (especially when they are constantly being dumbed-down, while making ridiculous choices…ehem…Katniss Everdeen.) Unlike Divergent, the violence although plentiful, is not graphic, making Sovereign slightly more tolerable for younger audiences. But that doesn’t mean Arroyo pussyfoots around death. She offers it up by the truckload and it isn’t always the bad guys. And that is all I will say about that.
Don’t fret romantics, there is love and it is woven into the story organically. Arroyo doesn’t fill the space with cheesy dialogue and poor character choices, but mums the word because you really have to experience it without interference from a blogger hyped up on a great story and latte’s.
Overall, this is a well written book with plenty of twists and unexpected turns that will keep you up at night reading under the light of the moon. The only reason I didn’t give it a full five stars was I felt some crucial nail-biting moments needed more attention. Plus, It was also a little long-winded in certain areas, but I overlooked that once I got about a quarter way through.The ending implies a sequel is coming, but nothing goes wholly unresolved. I encourage you to check it out for yourself. I don’t promise a life changing experience, but I believe you will, at the very least, have a lot of fun reading it.
October 26, 2014
3.5 stars. An enjoyable YA dystopian read and definitely value for money since it's free. It handles the usual tropes and trials of the sub genre with energy though not from an especially new angle. It took me ages to get into because I found the first chapter off putting. It seemed jumbled and incoherent and tbh at that point I didn't care about Cori. Once I got past the first few chapters I got sucked in a read it in 24hrs.
As another reviewer has noted, Cori is a bit inconsistent. She pendulums from being shut off, closed down and recklessly fearless to bawling her eyes out. I'm afraid I didn't buy that. The only time when I thought her crying was in character was when she realised what humanity had lost, and what she had missed out on, in the ruined house. Otherwise it seemed as though it was to make her more vulnerable and it didn't come off.
I didn't like Dylan. I didn't dislike him either but he was a chameleonic presence who changed to fit what the plot needed rather than a character in his own right.
There were flashes of really good writing (on the whole it was good throughout) even excellent writing. It's a shame that perhaps a bit more time shaking out the plot wasn't taken. No real holes as such but the pacing is off and there are original ideas in there that didn't get the exploration they merited.
My real niggle was the end though. It felt rushed and facile. Didn't really buy into it especially how Cori reacts to the reappearance of an important character. It just wouldn't be sunshine and rainbows: they wouldn't really know each other after so long. Cori would resent a curb on her decision making, she might resent that this person didn't look for her at the compound, she'd probably regress to a childish role again. It really wouldn't have happened the way it was written - that jarred me out of the whole story.
But I would still recommend this a good read in it's own right especially if dystopian fiction is your bag. A nice, light romp through a post apocalyptic world with an interesting MC.
As another reviewer has noted, Cori is a bit inconsistent. She pendulums from being shut off, closed down and recklessly fearless to bawling her eyes out. I'm afraid I didn't buy that. The only time when I thought her crying was in character was when she realised what humanity had lost, and what she had missed out on, in the ruined house. Otherwise it seemed as though it was to make her more vulnerable and it didn't come off.
I didn't like Dylan. I didn't dislike him either but he was a chameleonic presence who changed to fit what the plot needed rather than a character in his own right.
There were flashes of really good writing (on the whole it was good throughout) even excellent writing. It's a shame that perhaps a bit more time shaking out the plot wasn't taken. No real holes as such but the pacing is off and there are original ideas in there that didn't get the exploration they merited.
My real niggle was the end though. It felt rushed and facile. Didn't really buy into it especially how Cori reacts to the reappearance of an important character. It just wouldn't be sunshine and rainbows: they wouldn't really know each other after so long. Cori would resent a curb on her decision making, she might resent that this person didn't look for her at the compound, she'd probably regress to a childish role again. It really wouldn't have happened the way it was written - that jarred me out of the whole story.
But I would still recommend this a good read in it's own right especially if dystopian fiction is your bag. A nice, light romp through a post apocalyptic world with an interesting MC.
January 17, 2014
This book is definitely beyond your average free ebook. It was compelling to a certain extent, and even though it seemed a little bit lost in the middle, developed towards a satisfying circularity at the end. It presents good values: freedom versus trust and the importance of fighting for justice. This being said, this is more than what anyone hopes for in an easy read. However, some details sort of bothered me throughout:
I did not really like or care for any of the characters. Cori seems to me a bit inconsistent between the I-got-the-girl-power jazz and the I-am-so-fragile-please-save-me-Dylan. The obsession with touch between the two of them didn’t really rub me the right way, I could only imagine two very annoying teenagers stuck inside a world of their own. How they were given any power of decision in making/executing plans is beyond me. Dylan himself is very uninteresting as a love interest. I liked Tyce and his ‘savages�, but hated the implication of sexuality between him and Cori, especially after Cori’s ‘special connection� with Titus as well. Characters such as Cornellius and Cori’s father should have had me feel a little bit more compassion towards them, but they seemed like they were being told rather than existing. Finally, Nathan was so EVIL that it shouldn’t even be fair. And why? I hope we get more disclosure in the next volume of what were the reasons for his being so &%$ mean.
Strong aspects of this story: the world building, the ‘savages�, the ‘It’s personal� speech given by Cori (even if a bit over the top), the beginning, the end.
I will probably be reading the second instalment if it comes out while the plot is still clear in my mind.
I did not really like or care for any of the characters. Cori seems to me a bit inconsistent between the I-got-the-girl-power jazz and the I-am-so-fragile-please-save-me-Dylan. The obsession with touch between the two of them didn’t really rub me the right way, I could only imagine two very annoying teenagers stuck inside a world of their own. How they were given any power of decision in making/executing plans is beyond me. Dylan himself is very uninteresting as a love interest. I liked Tyce and his ‘savages�, but hated the implication of sexuality between him and Cori, especially after Cori’s ‘special connection� with Titus as well. Characters such as Cornellius and Cori’s father should have had me feel a little bit more compassion towards them, but they seemed like they were being told rather than existing. Finally, Nathan was so EVIL that it shouldn’t even be fair. And why? I hope we get more disclosure in the next volume of what were the reasons for his being so &%$ mean.
Strong aspects of this story: the world building, the ‘savages�, the ‘It’s personal� speech given by Cori (even if a bit over the top), the beginning, the end.
I will probably be reading the second instalment if it comes out while the plot is still clear in my mind.
June 14, 2015
This book has to be one the best free books I have read. If you enjoy dystopia, go download it now. It wasn't perfect, but I'm not even going to go into what I feel could be improved, because it'd be nitpicking. So let's jump into the good stuff already!!
Forget love stories and love triangles. For once a YA book that is stepping outside of what's expected! OK there might be a little bit if love in there... But it didn't take over the story. It wasn't forced. And it was realistic!! It blossomed little by little. We could feel Cori's inner battle about it, which is what a 17 years old should feel like being confronted to those feelings for the first time. But enough about love talking now, cuz really, it is NOT what this book was about!! Cori is strong. Independent. Gutsy. She has a mind of her own and doesn't let anyone walk all over her. She is an absolute breathe of fresh air in a world of books where weak and insecure female characters always rely on boys to make it through. I absolutely love her! This is a story about survival. This is a story about freedom. This is a story about hope. This is a story about determination. In a world where everything has been shattered, where everyone is being programmed to be little minions, Cori is determined to make a better life for herself.
Go. Download. This. Book. Now. Its free. There is no excuse not to read this!!!
Forget love stories and love triangles. For once a YA book that is stepping outside of what's expected! OK there might be a little bit if love in there... But it didn't take over the story. It wasn't forced. And it was realistic!! It blossomed little by little. We could feel Cori's inner battle about it, which is what a 17 years old should feel like being confronted to those feelings for the first time. But enough about love talking now, cuz really, it is NOT what this book was about!! Cori is strong. Independent. Gutsy. She has a mind of her own and doesn't let anyone walk all over her. She is an absolute breathe of fresh air in a world of books where weak and insecure female characters always rely on boys to make it through. I absolutely love her! This is a story about survival. This is a story about freedom. This is a story about hope. This is a story about determination. In a world where everything has been shattered, where everyone is being programmed to be little minions, Cori is determined to make a better life for herself.
Go. Download. This. Book. Now. Its free. There is no excuse not to read this!!!
February 23, 2015
Arroyo has written a stellar dystopian adventure novel with robust romantic underpinnings. The adventure plotline holds up really well from start to finish. The book is quickly paced and made for an exciting read. There were few breaks in the action, making it that much harder to put the book down.
The book is a solid 4.5 stars. While it is impressively written, there are a few bothersome little things...of course. That's to be expected in pretty much any book. Overall, it would be much easier to note the things I didn't necessarily like about this book.
It's mind-boggling that Arroyo doesn't have a major publisher picking up this series. Sovereign was the finest indie dystopian book I've ever read, and better than many of the mainstream publisher's too.
Others have gone through their reviews painstakingly noting the bits of plot and characterizations, so I'll keep this brief. To me, if I could convince Arroyo to tweak scenes like the tree, the tap water, the cable bridge, a death or two, and maybe a couple other minor things, this would be a "perfect" book.
As it is, Sovereign is an amazing read.
The book is a solid 4.5 stars. While it is impressively written, there are a few bothersome little things...of course. That's to be expected in pretty much any book. Overall, it would be much easier to note the things I didn't necessarily like about this book.
It's mind-boggling that Arroyo doesn't have a major publisher picking up this series. Sovereign was the finest indie dystopian book I've ever read, and better than many of the mainstream publisher's too.
Others have gone through their reviews painstakingly noting the bits of plot and characterizations, so I'll keep this brief. To me, if I could convince Arroyo to tweak scenes like the tree, the tap water, the cable bridge, a death or two, and maybe a couple other minor things, this would be a "perfect" book.
As it is, Sovereign is an amazing read.
September 26, 2014
I just had a WTF? Moment, Yeah I have had this book for 9 months on my kindle and I actually forgot about it until yesterday. So I started reading this book and I loved it, it just pulled me in, the characters were great, the writing was good, the world building was well done.
Cori lives in Antius this is supposed to be the last colony with people in it. She has a free spirit and dreams of fleeing the camp. One day she escapes with her best friend Dylan and finds out sadistic leader Nathan lied about a lot of things.
I liked Cori she acts like a teen and that fact makes the story so much more real. Cori is strong and kick ass. Dylan is a good guy; he loves and trusts with all that he has and he would follow Cori to front steps to hell and beyond.
I did have one issue with the story but it’s the same problem I see in these books is that the rescue operation always depends a 100% on the teen lead character. That doesn't make any sense why send a child in when you have trained military?
Can’t wait to read the next book.
Cori lives in Antius this is supposed to be the last colony with people in it. She has a free spirit and dreams of fleeing the camp. One day she escapes with her best friend Dylan and finds out sadistic leader Nathan lied about a lot of things.
I liked Cori she acts like a teen and that fact makes the story so much more real. Cori is strong and kick ass. Dylan is a good guy; he loves and trusts with all that he has and he would follow Cori to front steps to hell and beyond.
I did have one issue with the story but it’s the same problem I see in these books is that the rescue operation always depends a 100% on the teen lead character. That doesn't make any sense why send a child in when you have trained military?
Can’t wait to read the next book.
May 30, 2016
I have to agree with all the other reviewers who said this book was the best free eBook so far that I have read. It was engaging and consistently action packed. I saw one review the reader had a hard time getting into the book, I feel quite opposite and it had me sucked in the first few chapters.
The main character Cori is similar to those out of other novels but still different. She was raised by her father to be strong and think on her feet, yet she is special to Antius for reasons your will read about.
Dylan is the second main character. Again I read one review that pin pointed his personality to me perfectly. He’s like a chameleon where his character changes to fit the need of the story. He’s not his own person with any special traits or characteristics.
The story line was good. I do have to say it’s similar to other dystopia novels but the author did a really good job with keeping it her own book, and bringing new ideas to the table. I think the second book has a lot of potential for a more diverse story line.
The main character Cori is similar to those out of other novels but still different. She was raised by her father to be strong and think on her feet, yet she is special to Antius for reasons your will read about.
Dylan is the second main character. Again I read one review that pin pointed his personality to me perfectly. He’s like a chameleon where his character changes to fit the need of the story. He’s not his own person with any special traits or characteristics.
The story line was good. I do have to say it’s similar to other dystopia novels but the author did a really good job with keeping it her own book, and bringing new ideas to the table. I think the second book has a lot of potential for a more diverse story line.
May 10, 2013
Thanks to Gliterary Girl Media for giving me a chance to participate in this tour.
I can't say enough good things about Sovereign! E.R. Arroyo did an amazing job with this book. I normally only read at night before bed. Since I had started this book, I was looking for reasons to go inside and read or couldn't wait for bedtime. The book and characters in particular, stayed on my mind all day. This being post apocalyptic, I normally have trouble with world building. Sovereign changed all that. I actually felt like I was there. And the characters were amazing! There were times that I actually found myself holding my breath waiting to see what happened next. And yes, I did tear up a couple of times. A few surprises too! I wasn't left guessing about anything. It was all pretty much explained. I do caution you though. There is violence and some graphic scenes. Not too horrible though. Overall this book was phenomenal and I can't wait for the sequel!!
I can't say enough good things about Sovereign! E.R. Arroyo did an amazing job with this book. I normally only read at night before bed. Since I had started this book, I was looking for reasons to go inside and read or couldn't wait for bedtime. The book and characters in particular, stayed on my mind all day. This being post apocalyptic, I normally have trouble with world building. Sovereign changed all that. I actually felt like I was there. And the characters were amazing! There were times that I actually found myself holding my breath waiting to see what happened next. And yes, I did tear up a couple of times. A few surprises too! I wasn't left guessing about anything. It was all pretty much explained. I do caution you though. There is violence and some graphic scenes. Not too horrible though. Overall this book was phenomenal and I can't wait for the sequel!!
May 15, 2014
I actually really enjoyed the last two thirds of this book and if it wasn't for the beginning, I think I would have given it a full 5 stars. I had a hard time getting into it at first. I liked Cori and saw her as not just a girl trying to break rules, but as a real fighter. I think it just took too long to go through all of her training and building the story to get to the action. Once I got through the beginning, everything really picked up and I got a lot more engaged in the story.
I really liked seeing Cori and Dylan's relationship develop throughout the book and I'm excited to see where it goes in the next book.
I really liked seeing Cori and Dylan's relationship develop throughout the book and I'm excited to see where it goes in the next book.
July 31, 2015
I love the way this book unfolds slowly, and leaves you asking questions until the end. By that time, you're attached to the characters, especially Cori. She's a great main character. I love the little details about her personality that make you feel for her, and especially the fact that she's fierce! The descriptions of the place they live are chilling, as is the leader of the colony. There are just enough unanswered questions to get you excited about the next book.
December 15, 2015
This story follows Cori though her chapter in life behind the walls of Antius, her every thought is to get out from behind those walls and be free. Relationships are reconnected, some new, some severed for good, some are pushed to the limit. Secrets that Cori did not want to know anything about are surfaced. Lies that she was always told, are not true.
I loved the adventure and twists in the book. It was a great read. .
September 22, 2014
Wow! That was really intense and I was on edge. The story is great. I don't have words but I loved it. Whoever loves Dystopian genre will definitely love this. It's a must read.
Oh! I hate Nathan. I thought as I've read Transgression first, that he may change. I was wrong.
Oh! I hate Nathan. I thought as I've read Transgression first, that he may change. I was wrong.
August 19, 2019
Completely engaging story from the beginning to the end. Lots of action. Well-rounded characters. And characters I want more of in the next installment. Must start the second book soon because I NEED to know what happens!
March 22, 2024
This was another book that was kind of out of my comfort zone when it comes to my recent reading habits, BUT I thought it was an excellent book. If you are a fan of like the divergent series or similar books I would highly recommend this book, because it has the same kind of vibe without being basically the same like some authors like to do. Even though the vibe was the same i was not predictable which I LOVE. It had twists and turns that kept me reeled in but didn’t stray so far as lose my interest or get confusing. One thing I really loved about this book was the progression of the FMC. I love that she learned to work THROUGH her fears and insecurities, and that the things she needed to do and that she witnessed still deeply affected her. In so many books the FMC goes from this insecure shy girl to this BA fighting machine in no time. I love the realism of working through things for the sake of survival but still remaining the same person! This was a well written, very good book. And I am excited to read the next one!
May 24, 2024
In a dystopian world where civilization has been eradicated and only the savages and the harsh colony of Antius is all Cori knows, will she ever find the freedom she craves? The book truly was all about the action and kept me flipping pages as fast as I could!! The civilization of Antius was absolutely awful and I loved the strength of our Cori as she continually tried to be herself in a restricting and oppressive environment. Her strength of conviction was inspiring. The romance seemed a little creepy at first but the rules in their society against physical touch and affection made it completely understandable. I loved watching her relationship grow as the book progressed and absolutely adored all the plot twists and drama! I was constantly surprised by all the twists and turns. I cannot wait to see what happens next!!
June 23, 2019
This is book twelve of my second summer of free amazon books. (2.12)
I really enjoyed this book. It’s exciting and has just enough violence and grit to be interesting, without becoming dark, and the worldbuilding is pretty good.
It’s very typical of the YA Dystopian genre, what with the female hero with almost magical abilities, a set of love triangles, and totalitarian suppression of the population. It’s not groundbreaking, but it’s my jam.
If it’s yours too, you should read it.
It’s a nice summer read, the prose is easy and flows well, and I got through it in less than a day.
I really enjoyed this book. It’s exciting and has just enough violence and grit to be interesting, without becoming dark, and the worldbuilding is pretty good.
It’s very typical of the YA Dystopian genre, what with the female hero with almost magical abilities, a set of love triangles, and totalitarian suppression of the population. It’s not groundbreaking, but it’s my jam.
If it’s yours too, you should read it.
It’s a nice summer read, the prose is easy and flows well, and I got through it in less than a day.
April 2, 2018
This was interesting. A little too yo-yo between a smart, kickass female main character and a damsel-in-distress female main character. An interesting world, a good villain. Enjoyable read. Looking forward to reading more from this author.
September 25, 2017
Interesting
This is a interesting story. Fast read and characters are relatable. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Recommended
This is a interesting story. Fast read and characters are relatable. Looking forward to reading more from this author. Recommended
December 19, 2018
I couldn't put it down!
Great read! Fast pace! Great story line! This one I will read again! Would recommend to anyone who likes dystopian reads.
Great read! Fast pace! Great story line! This one I will read again! Would recommend to anyone who likes dystopian reads.
August 29, 2023
Very good - get the second book
I would happily consider more from this Author
I would happily consider more from this Author
March 23, 2024
I love a good dystopian book and this did not disappoint! It was a fast paced book and kept my interest to where I couldn’t put it down. It gave me Shatter Me series vibes.
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