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Trap Line
A Key West fishing captain takes on Florida’s drug lords in this “splendidly written� crime story coauthored by the #1 New York Times–bestselling novelist (The New York Times Book Review). Though he is one of Key West’s most skilled fishing captains, Breeze Albury barely ekes out a living on the meager earnings of his trade. Meanwhile, Cuban and Colombian drug smugglers thrive all around—and they have their sights set on Albury and his fishing boat. After the smugglers cut his three hundred trap lines and crush his livelihood, Albury is forced to run drugs to survive. But when he gets busted by the crooked chief of police and becomes a target of the drug machine’s brutal hit men, Albury becomes a vigilante on the seas of Florida, unleashing a fiery and relentless vengeance on the most dangerous criminals south of Miami. Along with Powder Burn and A Death in China, this is one of the early suspense thrillers written by Carl Hiaasen and Bill Montalbano, a writing team praised for their “fine flair for characters and settings� (Library Journal). Perfect for fans of the Doc Ford novels by Randy Wayne White, Trap Lineis an action-packed preview of Hiaasen’s stellar Florida-set crime novels including Sick Puppy, Tourist Season, and Razor Girl.
225 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 1982
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About the author
William D. Montalbano
7books9followersWilliam Montalbano was a distinguished journalist and award-winning foreign correspondent. He worked for The Miami Herald and other news organizations.
He wrote three mystery thrillers with Carl Hiaasen which borrowed heavily from their own reporting experiences.
He wrote three mystery thrillers with Carl Hiaasen which borrowed heavily from their own reporting experiences.
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May 2, 2021
Short and sour. 1 of 10 stars
January 25, 2022
Good, fast read and it's impossible to tell where Montalbano turns the typewriter over to Carl Hiassen.
June 1, 2021
‘Trap Line' by Bill Montalbano and Carl Hiaasen is a good crime thriller. It was published in 1982, but I doubt the culture of the Florida Keys has changed very much from how it is presented in the novel. However, there is no satire in this story which experienced readers of books by Hiaasen have learned to expect! The writers have a different kind of tone in mind, a serious one. Lives are changed forever by bad people.
I've copied the cover blurb below because it is an accurate description of the novel:
With its dozens of outlying islands and the native Conchs� historically low regard for the law, Key West is a smuggler’s paradise. All that’s needed are the captains to run the contraband. Breeze Albury is one of the best fishing captains on the Rock, and he’s in no mood to become the Machine’s delivery boy. So the Machine sets out to persuade him. It starts out by taking away Albury’s livelihood. Then it robs him of his freedom. But when the Machine threatens Albury’s son, the washed-out wharf rat turns into a raging, sea-going vigilante.
In Trap Line, Hiaasen and Montalbano pit a handful of scruffy Conchs against an armada of drug lords, crooked cops, and homicidal marine lowlife. The result is a crime novel of dizzying velocity, filled with wrenching plot twists, grimily authentic characters, and enough local color for a hundred tropical shirts. It’s the Key West the tourist brochures won’t tell you about: a place as crooked as Al Capone’s Chicago and as irredeemably violent as Wyatt Earp’s Tombstone.
"Conch" is a term for Key West-born locals.
'Trap Line' is a great beach read, even if that beach is in Florida - unless readers discover themselves in the middle of a gun shootout between drug dealers and honest Florida folk, or get caught up in an arrest by a corrupt police officer fronting for a Florida politician on the payroll of competing local drug lords! Well. I'm sure these novels based on real Florida crime exaggerate...
I've copied the cover blurb below because it is an accurate description of the novel:
With its dozens of outlying islands and the native Conchs� historically low regard for the law, Key West is a smuggler’s paradise. All that’s needed are the captains to run the contraband. Breeze Albury is one of the best fishing captains on the Rock, and he’s in no mood to become the Machine’s delivery boy. So the Machine sets out to persuade him. It starts out by taking away Albury’s livelihood. Then it robs him of his freedom. But when the Machine threatens Albury’s son, the washed-out wharf rat turns into a raging, sea-going vigilante.
In Trap Line, Hiaasen and Montalbano pit a handful of scruffy Conchs against an armada of drug lords, crooked cops, and homicidal marine lowlife. The result is a crime novel of dizzying velocity, filled with wrenching plot twists, grimily authentic characters, and enough local color for a hundred tropical shirts. It’s the Key West the tourist brochures won’t tell you about: a place as crooked as Al Capone’s Chicago and as irredeemably violent as Wyatt Earp’s Tombstone.
"Conch" is a term for Key West-born locals.
'Trap Line' is a great beach read, even if that beach is in Florida - unless readers discover themselves in the middle of a gun shootout between drug dealers and honest Florida folk, or get caught up in an arrest by a corrupt police officer fronting for a Florida politician on the payroll of competing local drug lords! Well. I'm sure these novels based on real Florida crime exaggerate...
February 2, 2017
Hiaasen and his writing partner Montalbano bring readers to Key West, Florida, to experience how the fishing industry is struggling as they present the story of Breeze Albury. Breeze is actually a pretty good fishing boat captain, but like so many, he struggles to make ends meet. That is one reason why he took a risk and got involved with the local pot trade. It ended up with him doing some short time in the clink. Since coming out, he has focused on his fishing career and his son, an all-star baseball pitcher for the local high school team.
Things take a really awkward twist as local drug runners are expanding their business. They want to hire him not to smuggle in drugs, but some people from down south. He is wary, but he also knows he needs the money since someone seems to have stolen all 300 of his lobster traps. He feels just desperate enough to consider the opportunity.
Things in town are made a bit more complex as the local sheriff is a big, tough guy (think Sheriff Arpayo) who has become a national star thanks to his own personal war on drugs. He, of course, will be keeping any eye for any trouble. Of course, that also means hoping hoping no one else notices the trouble he gets into as he take advantage of his position.
In some ways, this book is much like the ones Hiaasen writes all on his own. The books with Montalbano seem to lack the quirky characters, which often add a layer of humor to are quite serious and dark stories/mysteries. That doesn't mean they aren't enjoyable. They just resemble the classical noir mysteries of the 1970s and 1980s more than they do his other works. They are still worth a read, though.
Things take a really awkward twist as local drug runners are expanding their business. They want to hire him not to smuggle in drugs, but some people from down south. He is wary, but he also knows he needs the money since someone seems to have stolen all 300 of his lobster traps. He feels just desperate enough to consider the opportunity.
Things in town are made a bit more complex as the local sheriff is a big, tough guy (think Sheriff Arpayo) who has become a national star thanks to his own personal war on drugs. He, of course, will be keeping any eye for any trouble. Of course, that also means hoping hoping no one else notices the trouble he gets into as he take advantage of his position.
In some ways, this book is much like the ones Hiaasen writes all on his own. The books with Montalbano seem to lack the quirky characters, which often add a layer of humor to are quite serious and dark stories/mysteries. That doesn't mean they aren't enjoyable. They just resemble the classical noir mysteries of the 1970s and 1980s more than they do his other works. They are still worth a read, though.
June 29, 2020
My first encounter with Hiaasen was Razor Girl, which I found to be thoroughly entertaining and very well written. So, when I came across this earlier work, I had a preconceived notion that though it might not be as humorous, it ought to be well crafted.
I was right. Trap Line is a fine book, albeit one lacking in the zany humor for which the author seems well known (in his later works). Nevertheless, the characters are well drawn and interesting, the plot is acceptably constructed (though not particularly complex), and the sense of place is, well, one of the book’s best features. The reader can practically hear the whine of mosquitoes and feel the humidity of Florida’s southernmost Keys. The smell of the ocean and salt in the damp air fill the pages as we follow along with “Breeze� Albury, Captain of a fishing boat who finds himself up to his gunwales in trouble that he did not invite.
Hiaasen has written a clever tale of the underdog who manages to turn the tables on very bad odds and for whom one can’t help but root. This is a solid novel, and one that any fan of the author would likely want to read.
I was right. Trap Line is a fine book, albeit one lacking in the zany humor for which the author seems well known (in his later works). Nevertheless, the characters are well drawn and interesting, the plot is acceptably constructed (though not particularly complex), and the sense of place is, well, one of the book’s best features. The reader can practically hear the whine of mosquitoes and feel the humidity of Florida’s southernmost Keys. The smell of the ocean and salt in the damp air fill the pages as we follow along with “Breeze� Albury, Captain of a fishing boat who finds himself up to his gunwales in trouble that he did not invite.
Hiaasen has written a clever tale of the underdog who manages to turn the tables on very bad odds and for whom one can’t help but root. This is a solid novel, and one that any fan of the author would likely want to read.
September 27, 2012
While teeming with typical Hiaasen elements, Trap Line is a bit more hard-boiled and violent than his usual fair (one can presume this might be a result of the presence of Bill Montalbano, who shares co-authorship, but it's hard to tell where his prose begins and Hiaasen's ends). Some of the transitions are a little shaky, which leads to momentary bouts of confusion in terms of keeping some plot points and characters straight. Speaking on the latter, there's quite a few characters introduced throughout so the reader needs to stay on their toes. A quick, engaging read that's several levels above your average Airport bookstore potboiler.
July 10, 2012
This book was a little different than the other books Hiaasen has written. It lacked a lot of the humor that his other books have; also the environmental aspect. But I still liked it a lot. It was a fun read. By the way, my favorite Hiaasen novel is "Skintight." If you like "Trap Line," check that book out. The heavy is a guy named "Chemo!"
June 9, 2017
Not Carl's usual tongue-in-cheek murder mystery/satire, but a straight-up crime drama. As such, it was just ho-hum. Rather pointless, unless you are really interested in the life of a fisherman in the Florida Keys.
October 18, 2014
Trap Line is the second novel that Carl Hiaasen and Bill Montalbano co-wrote. While it doesn't have the humour of his Skunk books,it is a very enjoyable read!
January 4, 2021
Slow burn
It started slow but kicked up when the character Auggie entered the picture (not that he was an amazing character� but that’s when the book came into its own). Not all of the things in the novel have aged well, but in a time capsule, they can be appreciated.
It started slow but kicked up when the character Auggie entered the picture (not that he was an amazing character� but that’s when the book came into its own). Not all of the things in the novel have aged well, but in a time capsule, they can be appreciated.
March 18, 2021
Who doesn’t love a book taking place in the Florida Keys with lawyers drugs and money? The authors� create a great story loaded with a captain out for revenge after he loses his fishing traps. Highly recommend
July 13, 2013
This was published in 1982; Hiaasen wrote it with Bill Montalbano. It is not at all like Hiaasen's solo novels with laugh-out-loud lines and situations. It does have a complicated plot, very very bad guys, and somewhat suitable revenge upon most of them. However, it has some brutality and violence that would be objectionable to most readers, and is quite over the top on the testosterone scale - not that there's anything wrong with that! It's a worthy genre and sometimes I like it, just as I enjoy "chick lit" as well.
There are dozens of men and only 3 women, one of whom is a wasted wreck and quite dismissible.
I'd like to think I can pick out which sections were written by which author. There was sex told partly from the woman's point of view which was occasionally snicker-worthy, and there was worship-worthy descriptions of the manly, rugged, strong, skillful, intelligent, decent, good-but-so-wronged main character.
One interesting monologue about men and the sea, worth reading twice, fails to tie in with Breeze's (main character) decision.
I give this 3 stars instead of 2 because there are beautiful descriptions of the Caribbean waters and islands - really lovely.
There are dozens of men and only 3 women, one of whom is a wasted wreck and quite dismissible.
I'd like to think I can pick out which sections were written by which author. There was sex told partly from the woman's point of view which was occasionally snicker-worthy, and there was worship-worthy descriptions of the manly, rugged, strong, skillful, intelligent, decent, good-but-so-wronged main character.
One interesting monologue about men and the sea, worth reading twice, fails to tie in with Breeze's (main character) decision.
I give this 3 stars instead of 2 because there are beautiful descriptions of the Caribbean waters and islands - really lovely.
November 23, 2012
I've read all of Carl Hiaasen's other books, so it was fun to look at a book he co-wrote 30 years ago. The authorial voice of his later work is certainly present, but the ridiculous hilarity of his villains—for which he is so well known today—is notably absent. What we're left with is a decent little thriller (albeit a comparatively humorless one), which ain't nothing to sneer at.
An additional oddity: the little anti-gay slurs peppered throughout the text aren't necessarily distracting, but they certainly alert the reader to how much has changed since 1982.
An additional oddity: the little anti-gay slurs peppered throughout the text aren't necessarily distracting, but they certainly alert the reader to how much has changed since 1982.
August 11, 2011
Well crafted, but the Hiaasen humour I've come to know and love merely peeked out from a few characters. What I liked most about this was the length. What ever happened to the 250-280 page novel? The story wasn't lacking, and I wasn't left thinking: "gee, I wish there was another 100 pages of deep reflection and soul searching by the protagonist, or perhaps an increase in lengthy exposition to really make this book worthwhile."
January 30, 2019
I had not read a Carl Hiassen book for about 10:years until this one, and I was a bit hesitant because it was a co-write and I normally avoid those. I really enjoyed this book. It is well written, gallops along at a cracking pace, and has some nicely drawn characters. It has less of the black humour of many of the writers other work, I will not be leaving such a long gap before reading another one.
November 8, 2017
A story of crime and entrapment and how quickly things can go wrong. A good mystery, with corruption, smuggling, and a flawed hero, trying to make the best of his life and take care of his son. This is an early Hiaasen, written with Bill Montalbano, and is more of a crime novel than his later works, but the development of quirky characters is still there. I enjoyed the book.
December 6, 2015
I couldn't believe I found a Carl Hiaasen book I hadn't read. It doesn't have as much wicked laugh-out-loud humor as his later more environmental books do, but it still had the twists & satisfying revenge.
March 17, 2019
I've always been a big Hiaasen fan but ignored these early collaborations with Bill Montalbano. Although they lack the dark humor and wacky characters that typify Hiaasen's solo work, the plot and characters are every bit as compelling as his later novels.
June 11, 2019
As one can see from my rating, I thoroughly enjoyed this book. But then, I’m a real sucker for stories about native Floridians at the end of the their heyday. I hadn’t expected, judging by the first book in this series, that the Hiaasen/Montalbano team would gel so well.
March 17, 2013
It is hard not to like a Carl Hiaasen book in my opinion. This one was very different from the others I have read - more serious than humorous, but a good read.
March 2, 2020
Key West is the locale for this Hiaasen story, with drug running, people smuggling, crooked local politicians and police...and of course ‘the good guy�...in this case, Breeze Albrey, a fisherman. Good, quick read and always fun to read stories based where one happens to be...
August 5, 2021
Not expected.
I love everything Carl Hiaasen writes. My favorites involve the “Captain� as he likes to be called. This is a different genre but still wonderful.
I love everything Carl Hiaasen writes. My favorites involve the “Captain� as he likes to be called. This is a different genre but still wonderful.
June 5, 2022
An early book by Hiaasen and Montalbano. It shows promise, but lacks the punch of later books.
December 20, 2018
Not my favorite book by Carl Hiassen, but as usual he does give the reader many lessons about the Florida ecosystems and environments. This book covers fishing etiquette, and the politics that govern the commercialism of the Florida Keys. He also expounds on the underlying draw or tension to either get out of there for good or to stay on the rock.
I realize that this was written in 1982 and that he co-authored it with Bill Montalbano. It certainly is not like his other books with kooky characters that make me outright laugh. I've always enjoyed his writing style that teaches me to appreciate all of the Florida ecosystems; mangroves, wetlands, mammals, birds, etc. It is always fun to be schooled when the story has the most outlandish characters to accompany the story. This book is more serious and not really a laugh out loud type of book.
Although the gay sentiments in this book were not PC for 2018, it certainly makes me appreciate how far we've come from 1982 when they were more widely accepted.
I can't wait to read another Hiassen book. It's always a fun surprise to see what storyline and characters he will publish next.
I realize that this was written in 1982 and that he co-authored it with Bill Montalbano. It certainly is not like his other books with kooky characters that make me outright laugh. I've always enjoyed his writing style that teaches me to appreciate all of the Florida ecosystems; mangroves, wetlands, mammals, birds, etc. It is always fun to be schooled when the story has the most outlandish characters to accompany the story. This book is more serious and not really a laugh out loud type of book.
Although the gay sentiments in this book were not PC for 2018, it certainly makes me appreciate how far we've come from 1982 when they were more widely accepted.
I can't wait to read another Hiassen book. It's always a fun surprise to see what storyline and characters he will publish next.
June 1, 2017
Carl Hiaasen's 2nd title published with William Montalbano (1982); this is the first one I've read from their collaboration, and so it is the earliest Hiaasen book I've ever read. I can definitely see signs of greatness to come from his later work. Trap Line is a short but fast-paced tale of intrigue in the South Florida world of drugs, kidnapping, shootings, explosions, and romance. Not yet present are Hiaasen's more colorful characters (notably, Skink) nor his environmental awareness. Still, he creates notable, well rounded characters; a relateable, likeable protagonist and his cohorts; despicable, but interesting antagonists. I'm looking forward to reading the other titles in the Hiaasen/Montalbano series.
June 6, 2017
I'm kind of amused at all the reviewers who don't realize this is early Hiaasen, when he was transitioning from crime columns to crime fiction and had not yet developed his unique voice. With one or two small exceptions, it's devoid of the wacky humor and larger-than-life characters that make his solo work so great; worse, it highlights the fact that, once you get past those, his plots aren't all that complex or even memorable. The satirical nature of his solo work more than compensates for these shortcomings. Playing it completely straight, as Hiaasen does here with his co-writer Montalbano, causes this to be little more than run-of-the-mill crime fiction.
June 15, 2022
One of the early (1982) thrillers from Miami Herald investigative journalist Carl Hiaasen, written in collaboration with William D Montalbono, and falling short of the uninhibited exuberance of Hiaasen’s later solo efforts.
This one is more serious in tone, with fewer fantastically colourful amoral bastards on display. It concerns drug and people smugglers standing over local fisher folk and the belligerent reaction of the locals when the baddies just go too far.
The lesson: don’t muck around with a fisherman’s lobster traps.
This one is more serious in tone, with fewer fantastically colourful amoral bastards on display. It concerns drug and people smugglers standing over local fisher folk and the belligerent reaction of the locals when the baddies just go too far.
The lesson: don’t muck around with a fisherman’s lobster traps.
April 24, 2018
This book is about Breeze Albury, a fisherman in the Florida Keys, who runs afoul of a local criminal enterprise. They basically force him to import some drugs using his boat, but they set him up to get caught while other boats complete their deliveries without incident. Albury slides in deeper as their corrupt attorney gets him freed and Albury then is compelled to smuggle some folks into the USA from Columbia. Of course, he is also double crossed on this venture. After all of this, Albury strikes back. This is an easy and enjoyable read.
May 24, 2020
Fast-paced and fun.
March 20, 2020
Trap Line - a review by Rosemary Kenny
A surprisingly good vintage/early Carl Hiaasen novel, that somehow had escaped my 'radar', while I've enjoyed what I thought were all his novels, until now.Trap Line is set in the 1980s Florida, which Hiaasen was clearly well-acquainted with, even then, settingout a fascinating world of corruption, lies, deceit, treachery and general skulduggery, are balanced by resourcefulness, integrity, community spirit and much more, in Hiaasen's collaboration with Bill Montalbano, (a new author for yourstruly to enjoy), that takes you on a wild ride of an adventure.Good characters clash with those of evil intent, who are bent on forcing MC Breeze Albury into risking jail and maybe worse, after his only source of income - 300 lobster pots, (the eponymous Trap Line) - is deliberately sabotaged by agents of 'The Machine' and his son and girlfriend are threatened. Breeze's fishing boat the Diamond Cutter, is only spared because Bolivian cartel bosses want his vast knowledge of the coastline and his boat, used to their nefarious advantage in people-trafficking, in addition to their drug and weapon-smuggling operations. Can Breeze get help from the Governor's investigator?Will he save himself and his loved ones? Will Breeze's son Ricky get to star on the baseball pitch in the end? How does Breeze get revenge on his persecutors?
Only getting your copy of Trap Line will answers these and many other questions you may come up with, while enjoying this great (first) book by Carl Hiaasen and Bill Montalbano, which you're guaranteed to do, without a doubt. Don't delay - get it today, then tell all your friends!
A surprisingly good vintage/early Carl Hiaasen novel, that somehow had escaped my 'radar', while I've enjoyed what I thought were all his novels, until now.Trap Line is set in the 1980s Florida, which Hiaasen was clearly well-acquainted with, even then, settingout a fascinating world of corruption, lies, deceit, treachery and general skulduggery, are balanced by resourcefulness, integrity, community spirit and much more, in Hiaasen's collaboration with Bill Montalbano, (a new author for yourstruly to enjoy), that takes you on a wild ride of an adventure.Good characters clash with those of evil intent, who are bent on forcing MC Breeze Albury into risking jail and maybe worse, after his only source of income - 300 lobster pots, (the eponymous Trap Line) - is deliberately sabotaged by agents of 'The Machine' and his son and girlfriend are threatened. Breeze's fishing boat the Diamond Cutter, is only spared because Bolivian cartel bosses want his vast knowledge of the coastline and his boat, used to their nefarious advantage in people-trafficking, in addition to their drug and weapon-smuggling operations. Can Breeze get help from the Governor's investigator?Will he save himself and his loved ones? Will Breeze's son Ricky get to star on the baseball pitch in the end? How does Breeze get revenge on his persecutors?
Only getting your copy of Trap Line will answers these and many other questions you may come up with, while enjoying this great (first) book by Carl Hiaasen and Bill Montalbano, which you're guaranteed to do, without a doubt. Don't delay - get it today, then tell all your friends!
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