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422 pages, Hardcover
First published February 20, 2018
"Ultimately, government and hypocrisy become synonymous"
DNF.
The premise sounds interesting, as do some of the characters. And the opening action sequence was exciting, perilous, etc. But every page or two I kept bumping into the awkward, odd, and even unsettling character descriptions. “High breasts� was an odd one, but there were also weirdly repetitive descriptions, like saying Perez has “dark eyes� but then a paragraph later clarifying that they’re “sable eyes�. And naming a plant “thorncactus� (really?) is like naming an animal “clawtiger� or “toothbeaver�. Too distracting to keep reading.
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