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In Ora: The Land of the Superior
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In a world divided between the superior and the bereft, a desperate man must find a way to save someone he cares about. But what sacrifice does he have to make?
Luke thought he’d found purpose again. After years of heartache and a devastating loss, his companionship with the strong-willed Ruyi gave him a reason to cherish life, even in a home plagued with poverty and disease, the Origin. But when he learns about Ruyi’s life-threatening and mysterious disease, Luke is prepared to seek help in the only place a cure exists, Ora.
Returning to Ora thrusts him into an intriguing world where everyone has achieved physical superiority and perfection. It has advanced technology and found keys to tailoring genes and eradicating diseases. But Ora’s solution came with an exorbitant tag.
To Ora, Origin is just its arrogant but fallen ancestor, and now, a defective neighbor with nothing to offer. They could save Ruyi, but what is the cost that Luke has to pay?
In a world divided between the superior and the bereft, a desperate man must find a way to save someone he cares about. But what sacrifice does he have to make?
Luke thought he’d found purpose again. After years of heartache and a devastating loss, his companionship with the strong-willed Ruyi gave him a reason to cherish life, even in a home plagued with poverty and disease, the Origin. But when he learns about Ruyi’s life-threatening and mysterious disease, Luke is prepared to seek help in the only place a cure exists, Ora.
Returning to Ora thrusts him into an intriguing world where everyone has achieved physical superiority and perfection. It has advanced technology and found keys to tailoring genes and eradicating diseases. But Ora’s solution came with an exorbitant tag.
To Ora, Origin is just its arrogant but fallen ancestor, and now, a defective neighbor with nothing to offer. They could save Ruyi, but what is the cost that Luke has to pay?
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Published October 1, 2022
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3Ìýbooks31ÌýfollowersHi, I am Sotto.
It is my shadow in my profile picture, taken fourteen years ago. I was around 3000 meters high (approx. 10000 feet) on a mountain called Rinjani. It was near dawn, and I was about to miss the sunrise on the peak as it was still a distance (vertical!) away. The terrain was difficult; I wasn't in tip-top condition since I hadn't been climbing for a long time. Nearing the peak, I slid down two steps for every three steps I took. It was exhausting; I considered quitting and kept questioning my existence and objective.
I didn't quit and reached there in an embarrassing amount of time. I missed the sunrise but, thankfully, also the sunrise crowd and had the peak all to myself. It was awesome. The mountain has a beautiful turquoise-colored lake in the crater with an active volcano at that time. I've climbed many peaks before, but this one was special, as this was the only peak I had reached alone for the journey and the finale. My climbing buddy had given up. Sitting on the mountain ridge in the darkness, I had my prolonged favorite moment, looking at the stars, embracing the peace and silence.
I love nature; going up the mountains, scaling the cliffs, exploring the deep, and chasing the currents. I haven't had chances for those now for many reasons, but I find an equal, if not more, amount of happiness strolling the beach with my loved ones and my dog, baking, and writing.
Writing is therapeutic, personal, and intimate. Climbing Rinjani is the reflection of my writing journey. It's challenging, and I am not in sync with the current, continuously questioning my existence and objective. I change the 'standard' professional author profile to a ramble. It's not easy for me to be out there, but I aspire to make my writing known and take small baby steps each time to come out of my shell. I can't really change. I don't have a bubbly personality to engage with everyone facetiously and prefer to establish genuine bonds instead. Even though it will take forever and is not ideal, I like to be myself.
English is not my first language, but it's the one that I can comfortably use to express myself the most. Sotto Voce is my pen name, and I love the meaning. It suits me the most.
If you are reading this or reading my works, thank you.
It is my shadow in my profile picture, taken fourteen years ago. I was around 3000 meters high (approx. 10000 feet) on a mountain called Rinjani. It was near dawn, and I was about to miss the sunrise on the peak as it was still a distance (vertical!) away. The terrain was difficult; I wasn't in tip-top condition since I hadn't been climbing for a long time. Nearing the peak, I slid down two steps for every three steps I took. It was exhausting; I considered quitting and kept questioning my existence and objective.
I didn't quit and reached there in an embarrassing amount of time. I missed the sunrise but, thankfully, also the sunrise crowd and had the peak all to myself. It was awesome. The mountain has a beautiful turquoise-colored lake in the crater with an active volcano at that time. I've climbed many peaks before, but this one was special, as this was the only peak I had reached alone for the journey and the finale. My climbing buddy had given up. Sitting on the mountain ridge in the darkness, I had my prolonged favorite moment, looking at the stars, embracing the peace and silence.
I love nature; going up the mountains, scaling the cliffs, exploring the deep, and chasing the currents. I haven't had chances for those now for many reasons, but I find an equal, if not more, amount of happiness strolling the beach with my loved ones and my dog, baking, and writing.
Writing is therapeutic, personal, and intimate. Climbing Rinjani is the reflection of my writing journey. It's challenging, and I am not in sync with the current, continuously questioning my existence and objective. I change the 'standard' professional author profile to a ramble. It's not easy for me to be out there, but I aspire to make my writing known and take small baby steps each time to come out of my shell. I can't really change. I don't have a bubbly personality to engage with everyone facetiously and prefer to establish genuine bonds instead. Even though it will take forever and is not ideal, I like to be myself.
English is not my first language, but it's the one that I can comfortably use to express myself the most. Sotto Voce is my pen name, and I love the meaning. It suits me the most.
If you are reading this or reading my works, thank you.
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March 9, 2022
4 stars from me! Why do I sound surprised? Well�
From the outset, I knew I was heading into unknown territory with this one - speculative fiction/dystopian (maybe with hints of science fiction?) is not my usual genre of choice � but have gained a lot from it.
‘In Ora� is an accomplishment on a couple of levels:
English is not the author’s first language. This added to the story’s appeal for me; and
There are mysterious storylines that hold your interest. There is an air of unreality (expected with speculative fiction), but not beyond the imagination of what could actually occur in reality.
Reading it at a time when Russia had invaded Ukraine (March, 2022), and when I felt what I was seeing on the news was steeped in ‘unreality�, this read had more impact on me.
The characters are well-developed and the protagonists, dare I say, likeable, believable, but still show some vulnerabilities. There is a love story of sorts here!
This novel could have benefited from some sharp editing, an outsider’s perspective, to ‘tighten up� the text, but all in all, a work I respected and enjoyed.
From the outset, I knew I was heading into unknown territory with this one - speculative fiction/dystopian (maybe with hints of science fiction?) is not my usual genre of choice � but have gained a lot from it.
‘In Ora� is an accomplishment on a couple of levels:
English is not the author’s first language. This added to the story’s appeal for me; and
There are mysterious storylines that hold your interest. There is an air of unreality (expected with speculative fiction), but not beyond the imagination of what could actually occur in reality.
Reading it at a time when Russia had invaded Ukraine (March, 2022), and when I felt what I was seeing on the news was steeped in ‘unreality�, this read had more impact on me.
The characters are well-developed and the protagonists, dare I say, likeable, believable, but still show some vulnerabilities. There is a love story of sorts here!
This novel could have benefited from some sharp editing, an outsider’s perspective, to ‘tighten up� the text, but all in all, a work I respected and enjoyed.
April 3, 2023
My rating 4.5
The story from the dystopian book "In Ora: The Land of the Superior" by Sotto Voce is set in a futuristic world that is divided into two parts. Many years ago there was a split in society, one part of the population accepted genetic modifications, and the other part of the population did not want to accept it. Two states were created, the advanced Two states were created, Ora and Origin. Over time, due to genetic engineering, Ora became a more technologically advanced country, while Origin, due to government decisions, became a place of corruption and poverty. The book runs through the question of the moral principles of genetic engineering and what would happen if people went in the direction of playing God. Ora is a perfect place at first glance, but beneath the surface lie many secrets that genetic engineering may eventually cause. The book is beautifully written, the characters are well-developed and the descriptions are good.
The book follows Luke who saves a girl Ruyi from a bully. After some time he befriends Ruyi, but at the same time, he finds out that she is suffering from a strange disease that she got while working in the mine. The only way to save her life is to take her to a doctor in Ora for treatment. The doctors in Ora give him a condition to cure Ruyi, which is that they do some tests on him because he has a genetic predisposition for scientific research. Luke agrees to these experiments to save Ruyin's life, but is everything as innocent as the doctors told him, or is there something hiding beneath the surface?
I would recommend the book to fans of sci-fi dystopia and romance.
The story from the dystopian book "In Ora: The Land of the Superior" by Sotto Voce is set in a futuristic world that is divided into two parts. Many years ago there was a split in society, one part of the population accepted genetic modifications, and the other part of the population did not want to accept it. Two states were created, the advanced Two states were created, Ora and Origin. Over time, due to genetic engineering, Ora became a more technologically advanced country, while Origin, due to government decisions, became a place of corruption and poverty. The book runs through the question of the moral principles of genetic engineering and what would happen if people went in the direction of playing God. Ora is a perfect place at first glance, but beneath the surface lie many secrets that genetic engineering may eventually cause. The book is beautifully written, the characters are well-developed and the descriptions are good.
The book follows Luke who saves a girl Ruyi from a bully. After some time he befriends Ruyi, but at the same time, he finds out that she is suffering from a strange disease that she got while working in the mine. The only way to save her life is to take her to a doctor in Ora for treatment. The doctors in Ora give him a condition to cure Ruyi, which is that they do some tests on him because he has a genetic predisposition for scientific research. Luke agrees to these experiments to save Ruyin's life, but is everything as innocent as the doctors told him, or is there something hiding beneath the surface?
I would recommend the book to fans of sci-fi dystopia and romance.
February 21, 2022
Okay, this book was way outside my comfort zone and I loved it.
It's a story that will make you think. We have humanity divided, one claiming to be superior while the other sinks into ruin.. there's no mistake a few parallels with some of our current day events (minus the sci/fi aspects of them)
But this book is more than just that it's an internal journey of our main character, Luke who wants to save his friend and will do so at any cost ..His struggle feels genuine and so relatable.. it could easily be yourself in his shoes.
There's a mix of sci/fi, Biology, and a bit of fantasy in this story and it worked great.. It has a great pacing that will not let you be bored, you'll dive in and finish it in one go..
It's a story that will make you think. We have humanity divided, one claiming to be superior while the other sinks into ruin.. there's no mistake a few parallels with some of our current day events (minus the sci/fi aspects of them)
But this book is more than just that it's an internal journey of our main character, Luke who wants to save his friend and will do so at any cost ..His struggle feels genuine and so relatable.. it could easily be yourself in his shoes.
There's a mix of sci/fi, Biology, and a bit of fantasy in this story and it worked great.. It has a great pacing that will not let you be bored, you'll dive in and finish it in one go..
March 17, 2022
In Ora, is a science fiction novel utilizing subtle social commentary to construct a convincing world and explore its well-rounded characters. It is an intimate character struggle with high stakes and relatable situations. Furthermore, it does not rely on the most common tropes, which classifies it as unconventional science fiction.
From the beginning, the reader is made to ponder what technological advances can do to our species. In a world already divided by our various differences, how much greater would those divisions be in a future of genetic manipulation? The novel makes use of its futuristic ambiance to effectively convey the world building piece by piece and depict an excellent use of techy inventions alongside thought-provoking character interactions.
It is heavy on the dialogue at times, making for dramatic tension throughout leading to climactic moments, but it foremost establishes distinct character voices. I would have liked to gain a better sense of the characters� ages or levels of economic status from the get go, but much context can be gleaned by and by. More humor might have balanced the somewhat clinical tone, but bursts of action and moments of descriptive pause lightened the seriousness of the prose and added sufficient variety.
The reader will pick out the specific constraints of the fictitious society along with social cues and expectations, while Ora and Origin and the principles they embody entertain with intellectual concepts.
It might have been edited down to a slightly shorter length, but there wasn’t an excess of unnecessary material. However, a little trimming here and there could have tightened it up.
This meditation on human nature is a synthesis of many intriguing ideas with much to uncover beneath the surface layer of science fiction staples.
From the beginning, the reader is made to ponder what technological advances can do to our species. In a world already divided by our various differences, how much greater would those divisions be in a future of genetic manipulation? The novel makes use of its futuristic ambiance to effectively convey the world building piece by piece and depict an excellent use of techy inventions alongside thought-provoking character interactions.
It is heavy on the dialogue at times, making for dramatic tension throughout leading to climactic moments, but it foremost establishes distinct character voices. I would have liked to gain a better sense of the characters� ages or levels of economic status from the get go, but much context can be gleaned by and by. More humor might have balanced the somewhat clinical tone, but bursts of action and moments of descriptive pause lightened the seriousness of the prose and added sufficient variety.
The reader will pick out the specific constraints of the fictitious society along with social cues and expectations, while Ora and Origin and the principles they embody entertain with intellectual concepts.
It might have been edited down to a slightly shorter length, but there wasn’t an excess of unnecessary material. However, a little trimming here and there could have tightened it up.
This meditation on human nature is a synthesis of many intriguing ideas with much to uncover beneath the surface layer of science fiction staples.
February 9, 2022
Sotto Voce gives us an exciting, dystopian, and wonderfully strange look at morality with In Ora: The Land of the Superior! Biologic breakthroughs have led to a division in humanity, one species of human falling into ruin while the other claims superiority. In an attempt to save his friend, Luke journeys to the land of the Ora, the supposedly superior race, in a journey of discovery. Voce explores the ups and downs, and the outright strange outcomes of mastering biology. This was a really thought-provoking journey, and one that drew me in by Luke’s very human struggle! Voce really built a world that’s both alien and believable, and it was really fun getting to explore and see what there was to see. If you love speculative fiction or sci fi that makes you think but also moves at a great pace, come find the cure In Ora!
March 16, 2022
One Sentence Summary: When Luke brings Ruyi to Ora from their home in Origin for advanced medical treatment, he’s essentially drafted into being a test subject himself, signing both of them up for more than either expected or wanted.
Overall
In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers a fascinating world where humans can either live with incredible advancements (in Ora) or in a way we are more familiar with (in Origin). It presents some interesting ethical questions, which were explored through the eyes of Luke, a man from Origin who becomes a test subject in Ora in order to be able to afford costly and advanced medical treatment for his dear friend Ruyi. I loved how real he and many of the other characters felt, how their characterizations were so consistent and all of their actions followed logically and within their characterizations. I did wish there were more details and more depth given to the world, but, overall, I found it easy to generally picture. There’s a very sweet love story at the center of this book and I enjoyed how it helped drive everything else that happened. In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers writing that does leave a reader wanting, but I loved the way the characters and story wove together effortlessly and pushed and pulled each other so naturally.
Extended Thoughts
In Ora: The Land of the Superior presents a fascinating world with an all too real and possible history. One half is Ora, home to the medically advanced where genetic changes and enhancements are the norm. Deficiencies can be edited out and enhancements can be put in to make the Orans superior humans. The other half is Origin, where humans are humans but life is hard.
Luke and Ruyi are from Origin, but Ruyi is very sick, prompting Luke to bring her to Ora, where his late father used to go for work periodically. The treatment is expensive, but, by becoming a test subject himself, Luke will have the means to afford Ruyi’s treatment. But there are things under the surface in Ora and things are not as perfect as they seem.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers an all too realistic look into the ramifications science can have. Ethical questions are raised, and ultimately answered by splitting the world in half. But it also tells the story of the grass not always being greener on the other side and, with the ability to change everything for more advantages, dark things can still lurk under the surface. While the writing did leave a little to be desired, the story itself offered a great deal of food for thought as well as events that always have the potential to lie in our future.
My favorite part of this book were the ethical questions, both the ones the story brought up and the ones it brought to my mind. The story and tension both rely on the differences between Ora and Origin. On the surface, Ora seems wonderful with all the advantages a human could want and the freedom to do and feel as they please. But with those kinds of advantages comes a serious cost. On the other side is Origin, which is far, far less advanced and deals much more with the unsavory parts of humanity. The history of how both sides came about was chilling, but I really loved how the author handled it, clearly presenting both sides with seemingly no leanings one way or the other. Instead, as the reader, I felt like I was given the chance to decide for myself, to determine for myself whether what the people chose to do was right or wrong. I loved how I wasn’t led one way or the other and that the pros and cons of both were so clearly laid out, yet also so intricately woven into the fabric of the story. It definitely made me come away from the book with a lot to think over.
I really enjoyed the divide between Ora and Origin and getting to see Luke and Ruyi in both settings, but I did wish for deeper world building. Ora gave me the impression of being very high tech like a city one might read about in a sci-fi story while Origin felt kind of like a backwater place. I really liked how different they were, how both had wonderful points of interest, but also how the history of this world fed directly into what is presented in this book. At the same time, I wished for more detail, for more descriptions to make the world more vibrant.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior is told from Luke’s perspective. As he grew up in both Ora and Origin, I found his perspective and narrative to be unique. There’s a lot he knows about and a lot he doesn’t, but his curiosity helps fill in a lot of gaps. It did seem a little convenient that he was so talented at making things, though. Still, he felt very real and I really loved how much he cared for Ruyi. It was fun, at first, when he had difficulties figuring out when women were interested in him, but it quickly became a little old and the love triangles that formed weren’t exactly my cup of tea. I did like that he was very capable, but also flawed, and that he had strong motivations and ethics. Luke really is one of the good guys, and I loved how consistent his characterization was.
As a matter of fact, all of the characters were extremely consistent. All of their behaviors followed from their initial characterizations and only seemed to develop further from it. They did sometimes feel a little one note because of it, but I liked that nothing they did came out of left field. Everything felt natural and carefully calculated, and the story fell into step with them. It was wonderful to see how the characters and plot worked together, how it all flowed logically and naturally. While the writing did make me stop to connect the dots now and then, it wasn’t often and it was always easy for me to piece it together. The interactions between Luke and the doctors testing him, Nioby, in particular, were a lot of fun and Nioby very quickly grew on me. As an Oran, I expected her to be as one note as all the other Orans, but there was a great deal of depth to her and her story line pained my heart a little.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior is a moderately paced book that offers some food for thought. It did take me some to figure out where the story was going, but, once it got going, it really went. After a slower start, the last half almost felt like a roller coaster with emotions and events happening left and right. At it’s heart is a tender love story and everything else kind of felt like a whirlwind around it. But it was a fun ride even though I wished for more detail and more depth. Overall, this was a truly thoughtful read with great characters and an interesting world.
Thank you to the author, Sotto Voce, for a review copy. All opinions expressed are my own.
Overall
In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers a fascinating world where humans can either live with incredible advancements (in Ora) or in a way we are more familiar with (in Origin). It presents some interesting ethical questions, which were explored through the eyes of Luke, a man from Origin who becomes a test subject in Ora in order to be able to afford costly and advanced medical treatment for his dear friend Ruyi. I loved how real he and many of the other characters felt, how their characterizations were so consistent and all of their actions followed logically and within their characterizations. I did wish there were more details and more depth given to the world, but, overall, I found it easy to generally picture. There’s a very sweet love story at the center of this book and I enjoyed how it helped drive everything else that happened. In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers writing that does leave a reader wanting, but I loved the way the characters and story wove together effortlessly and pushed and pulled each other so naturally.
Extended Thoughts
In Ora: The Land of the Superior presents a fascinating world with an all too real and possible history. One half is Ora, home to the medically advanced where genetic changes and enhancements are the norm. Deficiencies can be edited out and enhancements can be put in to make the Orans superior humans. The other half is Origin, where humans are humans but life is hard.
Luke and Ruyi are from Origin, but Ruyi is very sick, prompting Luke to bring her to Ora, where his late father used to go for work periodically. The treatment is expensive, but, by becoming a test subject himself, Luke will have the means to afford Ruyi’s treatment. But there are things under the surface in Ora and things are not as perfect as they seem.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior offers an all too realistic look into the ramifications science can have. Ethical questions are raised, and ultimately answered by splitting the world in half. But it also tells the story of the grass not always being greener on the other side and, with the ability to change everything for more advantages, dark things can still lurk under the surface. While the writing did leave a little to be desired, the story itself offered a great deal of food for thought as well as events that always have the potential to lie in our future.
My favorite part of this book were the ethical questions, both the ones the story brought up and the ones it brought to my mind. The story and tension both rely on the differences between Ora and Origin. On the surface, Ora seems wonderful with all the advantages a human could want and the freedom to do and feel as they please. But with those kinds of advantages comes a serious cost. On the other side is Origin, which is far, far less advanced and deals much more with the unsavory parts of humanity. The history of how both sides came about was chilling, but I really loved how the author handled it, clearly presenting both sides with seemingly no leanings one way or the other. Instead, as the reader, I felt like I was given the chance to decide for myself, to determine for myself whether what the people chose to do was right or wrong. I loved how I wasn’t led one way or the other and that the pros and cons of both were so clearly laid out, yet also so intricately woven into the fabric of the story. It definitely made me come away from the book with a lot to think over.
I really enjoyed the divide between Ora and Origin and getting to see Luke and Ruyi in both settings, but I did wish for deeper world building. Ora gave me the impression of being very high tech like a city one might read about in a sci-fi story while Origin felt kind of like a backwater place. I really liked how different they were, how both had wonderful points of interest, but also how the history of this world fed directly into what is presented in this book. At the same time, I wished for more detail, for more descriptions to make the world more vibrant.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior is told from Luke’s perspective. As he grew up in both Ora and Origin, I found his perspective and narrative to be unique. There’s a lot he knows about and a lot he doesn’t, but his curiosity helps fill in a lot of gaps. It did seem a little convenient that he was so talented at making things, though. Still, he felt very real and I really loved how much he cared for Ruyi. It was fun, at first, when he had difficulties figuring out when women were interested in him, but it quickly became a little old and the love triangles that formed weren’t exactly my cup of tea. I did like that he was very capable, but also flawed, and that he had strong motivations and ethics. Luke really is one of the good guys, and I loved how consistent his characterization was.
As a matter of fact, all of the characters were extremely consistent. All of their behaviors followed from their initial characterizations and only seemed to develop further from it. They did sometimes feel a little one note because of it, but I liked that nothing they did came out of left field. Everything felt natural and carefully calculated, and the story fell into step with them. It was wonderful to see how the characters and plot worked together, how it all flowed logically and naturally. While the writing did make me stop to connect the dots now and then, it wasn’t often and it was always easy for me to piece it together. The interactions between Luke and the doctors testing him, Nioby, in particular, were a lot of fun and Nioby very quickly grew on me. As an Oran, I expected her to be as one note as all the other Orans, but there was a great deal of depth to her and her story line pained my heart a little.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior is a moderately paced book that offers some food for thought. It did take me some to figure out where the story was going, but, once it got going, it really went. After a slower start, the last half almost felt like a roller coaster with emotions and events happening left and right. At it’s heart is a tender love story and everything else kind of felt like a whirlwind around it. But it was a fun ride even though I wished for more detail and more depth. Overall, this was a truly thoughtful read with great characters and an interesting world.
Thank you to the author, Sotto Voce, for a review copy. All opinions expressed are my own.
October 16, 2023
Honestly, I have a difficult time with sci-fi that leans heavily into futuristic themes. I think my Asperger's brain just won't accept certain things, I can't fully grasp the whole picture at times. That being said, this was a rather interesting read. I feel like it's one of those books that Lovecraft fans will quite enjoy. The entire concept is intriguing and the storyline doesn't let up. There's tons of action, emotion, and some really deep stuff once you sit and think on it for a bit. Overall, it's unique, which is something I definitely appreciate in a good book.
January 11, 2023
A new genre and a new author at the same time. What a read, felt like you were really there, did remind me of sweet tooth combined with fallout 4, a good scientific read with a fantasy twist
May 30, 2022
In Ora presents a fascinating world with a central debate that has plagued scientists since the late twentieth century: we may be able to edit our own DNA, but should we? Set in the near future, one civilisation has been torn in two by the availability of scientific advances, leaving Ora, home to the rich and enhanced, racing ahead of Origin. Our main characters, Luke and Ruyi, travel to Ora to try and find a cure for Ruyi's mysterious ailment, but in exchange Luke must submit himself and his non-modified genome to experimentation.
The world itself was so intriguing. There are little bits of the history sprinkled in to the narrative, which we learn at the same time as Luke. Interestingly, the source of this history has been edited for propaganda purposes and so we only get glimpses of true, darker events that left me wanting more. Both Ora and Origin were fascinating in their own ways.
There were a few things that let the novel down. One of them were the grammar and spelling mistakes; I got used to it after the first few chapters for the most part, but occasionally I would notice something and it pulled me out of the story for a minute or two. Another aspect I didn't particularly enjoy was the portrayal of the female characters. There were four or five named female characters and all of them bar one wanted to sleep with Luke. Their characterisation wasn't as strong as it could have been and, overall, they felt like they were only there to serve as motivation or distraction for the protagonist. At times, Luke's characterisation felt a little over-the-top and as though he could do no wrong, which occasionally made the story a little boring as there was no true conflict.
With that in mind, I did enjoy Luke and Ruyi's relationship. It was incredibly refreshing to read about a relationship that slowly grew into a romance. In the beginning, the connection between the two of them felt like found family, as they both found each other at their lowest points when they had no one else, which was an interesting place to start. Luke's devotion to Ruyi served as strong motivation to drive the rest of the plot. I just wish Ruyi had had a little more agency.
Overall, In Ora: The Land of the Superior had a fascinating setting and some original relationships, but I felt it fell short of its potential.
I was offered a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
The world itself was so intriguing. There are little bits of the history sprinkled in to the narrative, which we learn at the same time as Luke. Interestingly, the source of this history has been edited for propaganda purposes and so we only get glimpses of true, darker events that left me wanting more. Both Ora and Origin were fascinating in their own ways.
There were a few things that let the novel down. One of them were the grammar and spelling mistakes; I got used to it after the first few chapters for the most part, but occasionally I would notice something and it pulled me out of the story for a minute or two. Another aspect I didn't particularly enjoy was the portrayal of the female characters. There were four or five named female characters and all of them bar one wanted to sleep with Luke. Their characterisation wasn't as strong as it could have been and, overall, they felt like they were only there to serve as motivation or distraction for the protagonist. At times, Luke's characterisation felt a little over-the-top and as though he could do no wrong, which occasionally made the story a little boring as there was no true conflict.
With that in mind, I did enjoy Luke and Ruyi's relationship. It was incredibly refreshing to read about a relationship that slowly grew into a romance. In the beginning, the connection between the two of them felt like found family, as they both found each other at their lowest points when they had no one else, which was an interesting place to start. Luke's devotion to Ruyi served as strong motivation to drive the rest of the plot. I just wish Ruyi had had a little more agency.
Overall, In Ora: The Land of the Superior had a fascinating setting and some original relationships, but I felt it fell short of its potential.
I was offered a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
November 26, 2023
In Ora is an ambitious novel that contains Sci-Fi, Romance, and Thriller elements.
I found the story to be charming, and it quickly pulled me in. Luke and Ruyi live on Origin and have recently met. Both Luke and Ruyi have experienced adversity in their lives and find themselves drawn to each other. Luke and Ruyi’s romance blossoms slowly throughout this story.
One day, Luke encounters Ruyi, who is shaking and having seizures, and he learns of Ruyi’s sickness. After discussing all the options, Luke and Ruyi travel to Ora to seek treatment for Ruyi. Ora is a more advanced society with medical treatments that do not exist in Origin.
The details of Ruyi’s illness are released to the reader slowly. Along the way, we are given glimpses of life in Ora that are less than ideal.
Luke discovers the Ora doctors are more interested in him and are willing to treat Ruyi if they can study him. He doesn’t understand what they are looking for from him, but as the story unfolds, he begins to see cracks in the perfect Ora life.
An incident occurs in an Ora medical lab where Luke protects one of the doctors from a patient who goes berserk. Luke begins to understand why the Ora doctors are so interested in him. Later, the doctor that he saved reveals that the Ora doctors are keeping Ruyi sedated because they want to keep Luke in Ora.
The Author increasingly reveals differences between Origin and Ora, with Luke deciding that he wants to return to Origin with Ruyi to live.
The Author presents a side-by-side comparison of Ora and Origin, giving the reader a fascinating look at how the utopian world of Ora is not all that it appears to be. The surveillance of people in Ora is constant and overreaching.
Near the end of the story, Luke begins to plan his escape, and the novel becomes more of a thriller. Luke rescues Ruyi, and, with the help of one of the Ora doctors, they make their escape back to Origin.
The Author cleverly integrates science fiction, romance, and thriller genres in her novel, making for a compelling read.
English is not the Author’s first language and presents some challenges for the reader. I found this added to the charm of this novel.
I found the story to be charming, and it quickly pulled me in. Luke and Ruyi live on Origin and have recently met. Both Luke and Ruyi have experienced adversity in their lives and find themselves drawn to each other. Luke and Ruyi’s romance blossoms slowly throughout this story.
One day, Luke encounters Ruyi, who is shaking and having seizures, and he learns of Ruyi’s sickness. After discussing all the options, Luke and Ruyi travel to Ora to seek treatment for Ruyi. Ora is a more advanced society with medical treatments that do not exist in Origin.
The details of Ruyi’s illness are released to the reader slowly. Along the way, we are given glimpses of life in Ora that are less than ideal.
Luke discovers the Ora doctors are more interested in him and are willing to treat Ruyi if they can study him. He doesn’t understand what they are looking for from him, but as the story unfolds, he begins to see cracks in the perfect Ora life.
An incident occurs in an Ora medical lab where Luke protects one of the doctors from a patient who goes berserk. Luke begins to understand why the Ora doctors are so interested in him. Later, the doctor that he saved reveals that the Ora doctors are keeping Ruyi sedated because they want to keep Luke in Ora.
The Author increasingly reveals differences between Origin and Ora, with Luke deciding that he wants to return to Origin with Ruyi to live.
The Author presents a side-by-side comparison of Ora and Origin, giving the reader a fascinating look at how the utopian world of Ora is not all that it appears to be. The surveillance of people in Ora is constant and overreaching.
Near the end of the story, Luke begins to plan his escape, and the novel becomes more of a thriller. Luke rescues Ruyi, and, with the help of one of the Ora doctors, they make their escape back to Origin.
The Author cleverly integrates science fiction, romance, and thriller genres in her novel, making for a compelling read.
English is not the Author’s first language and presents some challenges for the reader. I found this added to the charm of this novel.
April 1, 2023
A hidden gem; just hidden a little too well for my tastes.
In Ora is a science fiction dystopian novel exploring a world where human genetic manipulation is a reality. A world divided into two factions � those who have and those who have not had such manipulation, Ora and Origin. That leads to manipulation of a different kind as our main protagonist from Origin seeks medical help from Ora for the woman he loves.
I wanted to like this more than I did, because the core concept is great and the story is a strong one. Unfortunately, there’s a problem. It is clear that the author’s first language is not English, but that doesn’t necessarily have to be an issue. I’ve enjoyed other books by people for whom English is a second language. Sadly, in this case, I really struggled with the prevalence of incorrect words and sometimes whole sentences that didn’t make sense to me.
With an editor, or at least a bit of help from an English-speaking friend, I’m convinced there’s a hidden gem buried underneath the prose of this book. Sadly, like all buried treasure, it takes a lot of work to reach it.
At times � often for long periods � the effort was worth it and I found myself absorbed into the story. As I began to suspect, along with the protagonist, that certain people were not telling the truth and the proverbial walls had ears, the story had me on the edge of my seat.
There’s some strong characterisation and excellent worldbuilding, here. The love story helped to ground the narrative in something real and identifiable, while the futuristic technology seemed entirely believable. Another thing I enjoyed was that the author did not turn this into a morality tale as in ‘DNA manipulation = bad� which you often see with these kinds of storylines, so there really was much to enjoy, here.
In summary: In Ora is a hidden gem, and if the author could seek some help in uncovering it, it has the potential to shine.
3.5 stars
In Ora is a science fiction dystopian novel exploring a world where human genetic manipulation is a reality. A world divided into two factions � those who have and those who have not had such manipulation, Ora and Origin. That leads to manipulation of a different kind as our main protagonist from Origin seeks medical help from Ora for the woman he loves.
I wanted to like this more than I did, because the core concept is great and the story is a strong one. Unfortunately, there’s a problem. It is clear that the author’s first language is not English, but that doesn’t necessarily have to be an issue. I’ve enjoyed other books by people for whom English is a second language. Sadly, in this case, I really struggled with the prevalence of incorrect words and sometimes whole sentences that didn’t make sense to me.
With an editor, or at least a bit of help from an English-speaking friend, I’m convinced there’s a hidden gem buried underneath the prose of this book. Sadly, like all buried treasure, it takes a lot of work to reach it.
At times � often for long periods � the effort was worth it and I found myself absorbed into the story. As I began to suspect, along with the protagonist, that certain people were not telling the truth and the proverbial walls had ears, the story had me on the edge of my seat.
There’s some strong characterisation and excellent worldbuilding, here. The love story helped to ground the narrative in something real and identifiable, while the futuristic technology seemed entirely believable. Another thing I enjoyed was that the author did not turn this into a morality tale as in ‘DNA manipulation = bad� which you often see with these kinds of storylines, so there really was much to enjoy, here.
In summary: In Ora is a hidden gem, and if the author could seek some help in uncovering it, it has the potential to shine.
3.5 stars
August 5, 2023
Great read, with an original storyline.
In Ora: The Land of the Superior, follows the story of Luke and Ruyi, Origin residents who travel to Ora for medical treatment for Ruyi, which they get in return for Luke being part of some ‘experiments.�
I immediately felt connected to the two main characters, Luke and Ruyi. Both were likeable and I rooted for them. The supporting cast were also done very well; the development of Nioby was excellent.
I liked the worldbuilding, and the details about the history of Ora; the whole concept of the ‘experiments� was dark but very good. I spent the book trying to guess what was going on, and who was crossing who, as the stakes slowly built up. The only criticism is that the dialogue often feels clunky and at times incorrect words / phrases are used which was a little jarring.
Overall, a great read for Dystopian (and Romance) fans.
Content warnings:
In Ora: The Land of the Superior, follows the story of Luke and Ruyi, Origin residents who travel to Ora for medical treatment for Ruyi, which they get in return for Luke being part of some ‘experiments.�
I immediately felt connected to the two main characters, Luke and Ruyi. Both were likeable and I rooted for them. The supporting cast were also done very well; the development of Nioby was excellent.
I liked the worldbuilding, and the details about the history of Ora; the whole concept of the ‘experiments� was dark but very good. I spent the book trying to guess what was going on, and who was crossing who, as the stakes slowly built up. The only criticism is that the dialogue often feels clunky and at times incorrect words / phrases are used which was a little jarring.
Overall, a great read for Dystopian (and Romance) fans.
Content warnings:
April 7, 2022
Thanks to the author for a gifted copy of this book in return for an honest review.
I was really impressed with this book. Speculative fiction can be a bit hit-and-miss but I felt this hit the right mark. There are some spelling and typo issues, but I don’t believe English is the author’s first language so this is understandable, and you do soon start to gloss over the.
It is true that, whilst this is a fictionalised book in a fantasy world, there are many aspects that are a bit too close to home. It’s a future that is getting closer and closer to being our reality. It feels like fantasy but the topic of border lines and differing cultures is very topical.
I think it could benefit from being tightened up here and there to make it a more seamless read, but it doesn’t fell too long or waffly, everything has its place.
This book flits between the Ora (the new world) and the Origin (the old world), and whilst I appreciate the scenes in Origin are required to give the new world some context, I found myself enjoying the Ora scenes more. I really liked the descriptions of the outside space as well as the clinical locations. The relationship between Luke and Ruyi was really interesting too and kept me invested in the story. The main characters are well developed and very human and relatable.
There are two covers for this book and I think they work equally well. The old cover represents the relationship between the two main characters, whereas the new cover presents more of a link to the scientific background.
I think this is a love story between Luke and Ruyi, and between the dystopian and utopian worlds; it’s not necessarily a romantic love, but it’s a powerful love all the same. Overall, it could do with a bit more editing and tidying up, but it is an interesting topic with an important message and was enjoyable to read.
I was really impressed with this book. Speculative fiction can be a bit hit-and-miss but I felt this hit the right mark. There are some spelling and typo issues, but I don’t believe English is the author’s first language so this is understandable, and you do soon start to gloss over the.
It is true that, whilst this is a fictionalised book in a fantasy world, there are many aspects that are a bit too close to home. It’s a future that is getting closer and closer to being our reality. It feels like fantasy but the topic of border lines and differing cultures is very topical.
I think it could benefit from being tightened up here and there to make it a more seamless read, but it doesn’t fell too long or waffly, everything has its place.
This book flits between the Ora (the new world) and the Origin (the old world), and whilst I appreciate the scenes in Origin are required to give the new world some context, I found myself enjoying the Ora scenes more. I really liked the descriptions of the outside space as well as the clinical locations. The relationship between Luke and Ruyi was really interesting too and kept me invested in the story. The main characters are well developed and very human and relatable.
There are two covers for this book and I think they work equally well. The old cover represents the relationship between the two main characters, whereas the new cover presents more of a link to the scientific background.
I think this is a love story between Luke and Ruyi, and between the dystopian and utopian worlds; it’s not necessarily a romantic love, but it’s a powerful love all the same. Overall, it could do with a bit more editing and tidying up, but it is an interesting topic with an important message and was enjoyable to read.
May 31, 2022
This could be a really good, interesting story! It has great ideas & the basis for that! Unfortunately it needs a lot of polish! A proof reader & editor for sure. I did wonder if it had been translated as it seems wrong words & bad grammar are standard. It is a shame as it has the framework of a great story.
May 17, 2022
This one broke my heart. Really, its been a long time since I have gotten so emotionally attatched to characters. I laughed, I cried - alot, I was angry, I was shocked from time to time but mostly I suppose considering the world we live in today I see it as a real possibility. This is great movie making material. I would highly recommend.
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November 12, 2022
In Ora: The Land of the Superior presents a micro-chasm of a world divided in two - on the one hand, you have Origin, which is aptly named, personifying, in some symbolic sense, the basic impulses we, as humans, carry and come from. Ora, on the other hand, represents the future - an evolved, seemingly immaculate manifestation of our future selves, which eschews the imperfections of our animal histories.
Luke, a resident of Origin, must trek to Ora in order to save the life of Ruyi, with her in tow, in order to cure her of a life threatening disease. However, as they embark on this journey, succumbing to the expectations and costs imposed on them within Ora, it becomes clear that the seemingly beautiful and Eden-like realm is not as pristine as it seems, and that there are human costs involved in the technological advantages that it provides.
Voce has done a tremendous job of keeping the narrative unbiased, and as close to the telling of a story that was (or will be) without stifling it with personal agenda. The world-building is fantastic, and it is evident that a reader that enjoys dystopian science fiction will yearn for more, learning about both the worlds of Origin and Ora, and how they came to be. The ability to traverse between the philosophical and ethical, while keeping the reader engaged within the juicy futuristic world they find themselves in, is exquisitely done. Overall, a thoroughly enjoyable read that will immerse any fan of speculative science fiction into hours of thought-provoking escape.
Luke, a resident of Origin, must trek to Ora in order to save the life of Ruyi, with her in tow, in order to cure her of a life threatening disease. However, as they embark on this journey, succumbing to the expectations and costs imposed on them within Ora, it becomes clear that the seemingly beautiful and Eden-like realm is not as pristine as it seems, and that there are human costs involved in the technological advantages that it provides.
Voce has done a tremendous job of keeping the narrative unbiased, and as close to the telling of a story that was (or will be) without stifling it with personal agenda. The world-building is fantastic, and it is evident that a reader that enjoys dystopian science fiction will yearn for more, learning about both the worlds of Origin and Ora, and how they came to be. The ability to traverse between the philosophical and ethical, while keeping the reader engaged within the juicy futuristic world they find themselves in, is exquisitely done. Overall, a thoroughly enjoyable read that will immerse any fan of speculative science fiction into hours of thought-provoking escape.
October 8, 2023
In the book "Ora: The Land of the Superior" by Sotto Voce, the concept of human evolution diverging between those who have and those who do not is explored. One man witnesses a woman being attacked and comes to her aid, forming a close bond with her. To help her heal, he takes her to the land of the elites, but he ends up trading himself in exchange for her treatment. As he realizes that the elites are keeping him to delay her healing, he plans an escape for both. This captivating novel blends light thriller and romance with a modern and cosmopolitan approach. It features futuristic technology such as robotic arms, floating cars, and hidden pathways requiring access permission. Although three medical concepts are introduced in the story, they remain vague and do not detract from the overall enjoyment of the book.
The second book in the series is coming in November.
The second book in the series is coming in November.
March 14, 2024
In Ora: The Land of the Superior
A very powerful story that combines several elements.
The disparity between the haves and the have nots. The power and the healing nature of love. The selfish obsession of people and the lengths that they will go to to maintain their status quo.
It is a moving story that also examines the interrelatedness of one with the people around and how our own behaviour reflects both on them and back on ourselves.
A very powerful story that combines several elements.
The disparity between the haves and the have nots. The power and the healing nature of love. The selfish obsession of people and the lengths that they will go to to maintain their status quo.
It is a moving story that also examines the interrelatedness of one with the people around and how our own behaviour reflects both on them and back on ourselves.
May 27, 2022
I loved the premise of this book and the way the story was told. It was different from most of the dystopian novels I’ve read recently, which was a refreshing change.
There were some grammatical errors that meant I found the story a little confusing at times, but I would still be happy to read more by this author due to the freshness of their approach to the genre and plot.
There were some grammatical errors that meant I found the story a little confusing at times, but I would still be happy to read more by this author due to the freshness of their approach to the genre and plot.
October 25, 2023
There are many parallels in this novel with our own reality, where the privileged look out for themselves with little regard for the common man. It draws you in. It could even be a forecast of a possible future for mankind.
July 3, 2023
Luke needs to find a cure for Ruyi and Origin is no longer a place to stay in. The writing style is unusual and the dialogue is rigid. Nonetheless, there is plenty of adventure as Luke explores Ora.
I received a free copy and am leaving a review voluntarily.
Thank you to StoryOrigin and author.
I received a free copy and am leaving a review voluntarily.
Thank you to StoryOrigin and author.
August 31, 2023
The idea of human evolution diverging between the haves and have-nots, the elite and the left-behinds, is a popular enough premise to almost be its own sub-genre. HG Wells dramatized the idea in “The Time Machine� with the Eloi and the Morlocks. The film Elisyium offers proletariat Matt Damon fighting to gain access to the orbiting space city of the elites (he’s been poisoned by radiation on the job, and needs to use their advanced med-beds). Sotto Voce’s “In Ora� offers the split society idea as well, but its story takes place very close to the time of the split. One society is embracing technological subservience (and extras, like gene modification), while the other is rapidly degrading into a wasteland.
In that wasteland, one man witnesses a woman being attacked and comes to her aid. The man and the woman form a bond, and as it is revealed that the woman is sick, the man takes her to the land of the elites (Ora) to try and get her healed. He has only himself to trade, and the elites involve him in some medical trials and tests (they have a developing medical problem of their own and think this man can help lead them to some answers). After some time, it becomes apparent that the elites are delaying the woman’s healing in order to hold on to the man, and the man plans an escape for them both.
The book works as a light thriller. It has a good progression of story events and keeps the reader interested. Voce writes like a person to whom English is a second language, but that can be charming in its own right.
The book strives for a balance between innocent love scenes and oppressive surveillance-state menace, with quite a few fun sci-fi notions thrown in as well: a robot arm that cooks all meals; some nicely described floating pod-cars that are also nicely used for different dramatic purposes; early on, they help establish the feeling of an advanced society. They are sleek and glamorously reflective. Later, they are used well for thriller purposes, reacting to body weight as characters jump onto them for last-second escapes. There is also a great visual motif where very sparse office spaces display lit trail lines in their floors and walls to show people where they are intended to go—doors open in blank walls, and you get the idea that the entire building is a rubic’s cube of invisible pathways that are only revealed with the proper permissions—cool!
Of the three main characters, I found the lonely scientist the most believable, but I was rooting for all the main characters and enjoyed watching them make their way through the story. The events of the novel center around three major medical ideas: what is wrong with the woman, what is valuable about the man, and what is breaking down for the elites, and the book is overly vague about all of them. As a whole, the book has a very cinematic feel, and in a movie, you could race past medical vagaries. It’s harder to get away with non-specifics in a novel, but the absence of specifics didn’t stop me from enjoying the book. I just kind of chuckled and kept moving on.
This is a sci-fi thriller with a sweet, romantic vibe and a cosmopolitan delivery. The factor that sets it most apart is the steadfast innocence of its love story, and if that is an idea that intrigues you, you should definitely check out this book.
In that wasteland, one man witnesses a woman being attacked and comes to her aid. The man and the woman form a bond, and as it is revealed that the woman is sick, the man takes her to the land of the elites (Ora) to try and get her healed. He has only himself to trade, and the elites involve him in some medical trials and tests (they have a developing medical problem of their own and think this man can help lead them to some answers). After some time, it becomes apparent that the elites are delaying the woman’s healing in order to hold on to the man, and the man plans an escape for them both.
The book works as a light thriller. It has a good progression of story events and keeps the reader interested. Voce writes like a person to whom English is a second language, but that can be charming in its own right.
The book strives for a balance between innocent love scenes and oppressive surveillance-state menace, with quite a few fun sci-fi notions thrown in as well: a robot arm that cooks all meals; some nicely described floating pod-cars that are also nicely used for different dramatic purposes; early on, they help establish the feeling of an advanced society. They are sleek and glamorously reflective. Later, they are used well for thriller purposes, reacting to body weight as characters jump onto them for last-second escapes. There is also a great visual motif where very sparse office spaces display lit trail lines in their floors and walls to show people where they are intended to go—doors open in blank walls, and you get the idea that the entire building is a rubic’s cube of invisible pathways that are only revealed with the proper permissions—cool!
Of the three main characters, I found the lonely scientist the most believable, but I was rooting for all the main characters and enjoyed watching them make their way through the story. The events of the novel center around three major medical ideas: what is wrong with the woman, what is valuable about the man, and what is breaking down for the elites, and the book is overly vague about all of them. As a whole, the book has a very cinematic feel, and in a movie, you could race past medical vagaries. It’s harder to get away with non-specifics in a novel, but the absence of specifics didn’t stop me from enjoying the book. I just kind of chuckled and kept moving on.
This is a sci-fi thriller with a sweet, romantic vibe and a cosmopolitan delivery. The factor that sets it most apart is the steadfast innocence of its love story, and if that is an idea that intrigues you, you should definitely check out this book.
January 27, 2023
Ora and Origin—a world split in half with two distinct peoples. Origins are those left behind when the Orans use genetic engineering to enhance their lives. It starts as a means to cure cancer and prevent inherited diseases, but then it expands with genetic modifications to enhance selected features—to perfect humanity. Orans decide this path is ethically reasonable, even desirable, while Origins resist this path and protest. Orans become a master race superior to Origins, and fighting ensues. To keep the peace, Orans and Origins sign a treaty allowing each other to co-exist, but in different territories, with little intermingling. While the Orans surge forward, the Origins regress. On the surface, Ora has achieved perfection, while Origin has become an impoverished, violent and dangerous society. Luke’s father was a brilliant man who could have been an Oran but chose to remain in Origin. Luke inherited both his father’s intellect and his strong moral fiber. His convictions motivate him to endanger his own life to rescue Ruyi from three attackers on Origin and bring her to Ora when she became deathly ill due to long-time exposure to environmental toxins where she worked. Unable to afford the medical fees in Ora, he offers himself for human experimentation in exchange for her treatment. While his strong ethical principles bring him to Ora to save Ruyi, his intellect allows him to see that Ora is not as perfect as is projected. The premise for this novel is nothing short of brilliant, with side-by-side dystopian and utopian worlds and the near future explanation of how we got there. The overarching plot and moving dialogue give us good reason to care deeply about the characters, whose motivations, fears, and aspirations are clearly defined. Yet uneven pacing and repetitive actions sometimes let down the strength of the premise and the protagonists� robust characters. Head on his chest, intertwining fingers, and flipping hair off her face tend to get tired when often repeated. While it is in keeping with Luke’s strong ethical nature to protect Ruyi, it seems unrealistic that a couple that cares so deeply about each other would take so long to kiss. And that Luke would continue to act like a monk, despite at least three other women throwing themselves at him. Also, while Luke spends considerable time learning about how Ora splits from Origin, it is less clear the purpose of the human experimentation that he allows himself to be subjected. Given all the mishaps occurring with other subjects, it seems this would be a more significant concern to him. Perhaps because the author’s first language is not English, there are too many instances of poor word choice, wrong pronouns, and singular words that should be plural and vice versa. These errors too often take the reader out of the story and beg for intensive editing. Still, the story is riveting and will be enthusiastically embraced by lovers of dystopian fiction that raises serious ethical questions about medical science and where humanity might be headed.
January 25, 2025
In Ora takes place in a dystopian future. In this future there are two nations, Ora, where genetic engineering prevails, there is a race of super tall and intelligent humans, and Origin, where humans are, well, more natural.
The differences between the two nations continue from there. Ora has a sophisticated healthcare system, at least for those who can afford it, and naturally the protagonist of the story cannot. However, another option is presented to him: be a subject to an experiment and in exchange, your friend will be treated. This is the dilemma presented to Luke, the main character.
He seeks treatment for Ruyi, a friend/love interest. The two start their relationship rather platonically. Luke saves Ruyi from three attackers and after some slightly awkward encounters with each other (Ruyi may have thought Luke was homeless), and they become inseparable.
As the book progresses, so does their relationship. The pair faces all kinds of obstacles, from Ruyi’s health, to other suitors trying to wedge themselves between them.
The story really picks up pace in the final third of the book, as the action of the story crescendos into its exciting conclusion. One can argue, the book is exposition but until this point, setting the stage for the dramatic conclusion. Indeed, the book uses a history book within to provide flashbacks to the creation of Ora and Origin.
At times, I think the writing wasn't quite as punchy as I had hoped. Trigger warning as this next scene is quite gruesome.
A man attempted to rape a women. Luke stops him and beats him, but not to death. Luke returns to find the man gone. Another man, Arthur, is there and explains that “he[the would-be rapist] will not repeat what he did…� I think that could be a good ending to the scene, perhaps with one other clue as to the would-be-raper’s fate. Rather, Arthur continues to say, “I castrated him�. The author does a much better job building up this scene than my clumsy retelling. My point though, was I think the last comment rather over explains the situation. Leaving this strongly implied rather than explicitly stated results in a better scene.
Overall the future portrayed is interesting, the characters good and the book enjoyable. The pacing is a bit slow at times, but I really enjoyed the last 3rd of the book.
The differences between the two nations continue from there. Ora has a sophisticated healthcare system, at least for those who can afford it, and naturally the protagonist of the story cannot. However, another option is presented to him: be a subject to an experiment and in exchange, your friend will be treated. This is the dilemma presented to Luke, the main character.
He seeks treatment for Ruyi, a friend/love interest. The two start their relationship rather platonically. Luke saves Ruyi from three attackers and after some slightly awkward encounters with each other (Ruyi may have thought Luke was homeless), and they become inseparable.
As the book progresses, so does their relationship. The pair faces all kinds of obstacles, from Ruyi’s health, to other suitors trying to wedge themselves between them.
The story really picks up pace in the final third of the book, as the action of the story crescendos into its exciting conclusion. One can argue, the book is exposition but until this point, setting the stage for the dramatic conclusion. Indeed, the book uses a history book within to provide flashbacks to the creation of Ora and Origin.
At times, I think the writing wasn't quite as punchy as I had hoped. Trigger warning as this next scene is quite gruesome.
A man attempted to rape a women. Luke stops him and beats him, but not to death. Luke returns to find the man gone. Another man, Arthur, is there and explains that “he[the would-be rapist] will not repeat what he did…� I think that could be a good ending to the scene, perhaps with one other clue as to the would-be-raper’s fate. Rather, Arthur continues to say, “I castrated him�. The author does a much better job building up this scene than my clumsy retelling. My point though, was I think the last comment rather over explains the situation. Leaving this strongly implied rather than explicitly stated results in a better scene.
Overall the future portrayed is interesting, the characters good and the book enjoyable. The pacing is a bit slow at times, but I really enjoyed the last 3rd of the book.
January 28, 2023
Five stars for this nostalgic storytelling.
The characters are unique and engaging in their own right from the get-go. They establish themselves quickly on the page and are easy to like or dislike. We spend time with Luke, a good-hearted man. He is caring for Ruyi, a sick woman, and more broadly wrestling with the future of humanity.
The story could stand on a shelf next to LeGuin and Butler, but there’s also a modernity in terms of theme, the human condition and exploitation, compassion vs rationality. As we as a species reach to be more, what might be lost?
I loved the pacing, the set-up, the tension, the stakes. In days of yore, this is the kind of writing that would have found an enthusiastic acquisitions editor. The author has a self-discipline in the construction of story, using tightly defined parameters. No rambling, no extraneous ‘pantsing,� just clear vision. It’s easy to see why a writer would go straight to self-publishing with a work like this—it’s strong enough to stand. I do recommend the author hire an editor (or at least use a program) to clean up punctuation and grammar, but otherwise “Bravo� on the story.
The storytelling is great. This author will go far. No reservations on five stars.
The characters are unique and engaging in their own right from the get-go. They establish themselves quickly on the page and are easy to like or dislike. We spend time with Luke, a good-hearted man. He is caring for Ruyi, a sick woman, and more broadly wrestling with the future of humanity.
The story could stand on a shelf next to LeGuin and Butler, but there’s also a modernity in terms of theme, the human condition and exploitation, compassion vs rationality. As we as a species reach to be more, what might be lost?
I loved the pacing, the set-up, the tension, the stakes. In days of yore, this is the kind of writing that would have found an enthusiastic acquisitions editor. The author has a self-discipline in the construction of story, using tightly defined parameters. No rambling, no extraneous ‘pantsing,� just clear vision. It’s easy to see why a writer would go straight to self-publishing with a work like this—it’s strong enough to stand. I do recommend the author hire an editor (or at least use a program) to clean up punctuation and grammar, but otherwise “Bravo� on the story.
The storytelling is great. This author will go far. No reservations on five stars.
July 25, 2023
The premise of this story is exciting and intriguing. Luke is the main protagonist. We see almost all the action through his eyes. Ora is a dystopian world where genetic engineering has run amok. Promising improved quality of life, it instead has created a mess, dividing society into two factions, natural humans, and genetically modified humans. Clashes, and even bloodshed happen because of the division of classes and political leanings.
While the premise of the story is well thought out, the writing is very poorly done. There is far more telling than showing, for one. Along with that, transitions and pacing are not smooth or clear. Because of that, reading the story was extremely difficult and confusing. My frustration was high. Much of the frustration though, was because the underlying story was interesting. I wanted to care about the characters and what was happening. But the poor writing hindered that.
There really is a hidden gem here though, a thought provoking story that could be dug out. The author would do well to pay a professional editor to go over the story for both line and content. That could help bring out and polish an exciting story that is hidden in here somewhere.
While the premise of the story is well thought out, the writing is very poorly done. There is far more telling than showing, for one. Along with that, transitions and pacing are not smooth or clear. Because of that, reading the story was extremely difficult and confusing. My frustration was high. Much of the frustration though, was because the underlying story was interesting. I wanted to care about the characters and what was happening. But the poor writing hindered that.
There really is a hidden gem here though, a thought provoking story that could be dug out. The author would do well to pay a professional editor to go over the story for both line and content. That could help bring out and polish an exciting story that is hidden in here somewhere.
April 25, 2024
Review
This is a meandering tale that jumps timelines and can't seem to keep itself in order. Despite its jumping times it was an interesting story about what makes us human. The author weaves an tale of two people broken but inherently good. Although the story itself left much to be desired as did the writing, the characters were the real champions of this book. Luke and Ruyi are fantastically drawn with an edge of realness that bites just right. Luke it trapped between worlds but driven by a single purpose: Save Ruyi. He treats her like a bird that's fallen from the nest but also depends on her in a way that's endearing. It was heartening to see the way they interacted and grew. Pushing and exploring boundaries while staying consistent. The more I read the more I felt this story would have benefited from a different format - web-comic or even a show. For some reason the telling notion of the story felt as though it should been seen, not just read to really capture the full storytelling.
Rating
3.5 Stars (rounded down)
A stellar cast of characters with a fascinating start to a dystopian/sci-fi series. The story bounces too much at the start before settling in, taking much of the air out of the sails early on, but worth the continued effort.
This is a meandering tale that jumps timelines and can't seem to keep itself in order. Despite its jumping times it was an interesting story about what makes us human. The author weaves an tale of two people broken but inherently good. Although the story itself left much to be desired as did the writing, the characters were the real champions of this book. Luke and Ruyi are fantastically drawn with an edge of realness that bites just right. Luke it trapped between worlds but driven by a single purpose: Save Ruyi. He treats her like a bird that's fallen from the nest but also depends on her in a way that's endearing. It was heartening to see the way they interacted and grew. Pushing and exploring boundaries while staying consistent. The more I read the more I felt this story would have benefited from a different format - web-comic or even a show. For some reason the telling notion of the story felt as though it should been seen, not just read to really capture the full storytelling.
Rating
3.5 Stars (rounded down)
A stellar cast of characters with a fascinating start to a dystopian/sci-fi series. The story bounces too much at the start before settling in, taking much of the air out of the sails early on, but worth the continued effort.
November 5, 2023
Thought-provoking sci-fi with love at its core
Two hurting souls stumble across each other one day, at a time when the world isn't doing so good. They've both hit rock bottom, but in each other, they find a reason to carry on. Hope buds afresh with each smile. But as their tender love grows, it becomes obvious that Ruji's ill health is only deteriorating. Luke and Ruji are both originals who live in Origin - a messy and rather forlorn place.
There is only one hope for them, to take Ruji to Ora where the Orans (DNA-enhanced generation) will be able to cure her. But medical care is expensive, and so Luke makes a bargain to become a guinea pig in their new experiments in exchange for her healthcare.
As English is not the author's first language there is a certain choppiness to the writing style, however, once I'd settled into the story I didn't really notice it. The flow of the story is very steady and slowly builds to a gripping ending. What I enjoyed most about this story is the debate about whether having empathy and feelings is beneficial or not. The story, in that aspect, offers a lot to think about.
A rather sweet and endearing romantic sci-fi.
Two hurting souls stumble across each other one day, at a time when the world isn't doing so good. They've both hit rock bottom, but in each other, they find a reason to carry on. Hope buds afresh with each smile. But as their tender love grows, it becomes obvious that Ruji's ill health is only deteriorating. Luke and Ruji are both originals who live in Origin - a messy and rather forlorn place.
There is only one hope for them, to take Ruji to Ora where the Orans (DNA-enhanced generation) will be able to cure her. But medical care is expensive, and so Luke makes a bargain to become a guinea pig in their new experiments in exchange for her healthcare.
As English is not the author's first language there is a certain choppiness to the writing style, however, once I'd settled into the story I didn't really notice it. The flow of the story is very steady and slowly builds to a gripping ending. What I enjoyed most about this story is the debate about whether having empathy and feelings is beneficial or not. The story, in that aspect, offers a lot to think about.
A rather sweet and endearing romantic sci-fi.
November 16, 2023
Luke MacQuoid is a grieving well-to-do man who meets Ruyi, a woman with a tragic past, and they slowly fall in love in a world divided into Origin and Ora, basically the have-nots vs. the haves, genetically-enhanced humans. Ruyi is sick, so Luke takes her from Origin to Ora to find a cure. To pay for the cost of her treatment, Luke makes a dangerous deal with the lead scientist and becomes a test subject for Ora. At first things go great, but nothing is what it seems.
The characters were well-written and the love story burns slowly in a rewarding way, even though at times the writing got confusing, and hearing the strangely clueless Luke go on about Ruyi felt too drawn-out. I was more invested in Nioby than Ruyi because Nioby just has more depth and one of the more important questions is embodied in her character. Is it better to have loved and lost and remember what you’ve lost, or to have loved and lost but forgotten both the good and bad of what you lost?
In Ora is a sweet love story immersed in a believable sci-fi world that skillfully mirrors the hypocrisies of real-life divisions. Voce leaves much to think about and this was an enjoyable read.
The characters were well-written and the love story burns slowly in a rewarding way, even though at times the writing got confusing, and hearing the strangely clueless Luke go on about Ruyi felt too drawn-out. I was more invested in Nioby than Ruyi because Nioby just has more depth and one of the more important questions is embodied in her character. Is it better to have loved and lost and remember what you’ve lost, or to have loved and lost but forgotten both the good and bad of what you lost?
In Ora is a sweet love story immersed in a believable sci-fi world that skillfully mirrors the hypocrisies of real-life divisions. Voce leaves much to think about and this was an enjoyable read.
December 16, 2023
When genetic engineering reached its heyday, humanity split between the haves and the have-nots. Also between those worried that going beyond eradicating disease was a mistake, and those who had never heard the phrase "slippery slope." The closer the Ora got to perfection, the less human they became, and they've lost something they desperately need to get back. Luke, an unmodified Origin, holds the key to their salvation, and they will do anything to secure his cooperation. The story is about Luke navigating the treacherous Ora's culture, and his equally dangerous Origin one, while trying to protect the woman he loves.
I hate harping on the editing for a self published work, but dang it, that's the only real problem here. It doesn't have typos or need a thesaurus, it just has a slightly stilted pattern that will be a problem for some english language natives. Some contractions in the dialogue would work wonders, at least for the characters that aren't Oran scientists.
The story is there and I'm looking forward to reading the second book, but I found it difficult at times to maintain a good reading flow. I'm going to call this a 3.5 stars, but I'm keeping an eye on this author.
I hate harping on the editing for a self published work, but dang it, that's the only real problem here. It doesn't have typos or need a thesaurus, it just has a slightly stilted pattern that will be a problem for some english language natives. Some contractions in the dialogue would work wonders, at least for the characters that aren't Oran scientists.
The story is there and I'm looking forward to reading the second book, but I found it difficult at times to maintain a good reading flow. I'm going to call this a 3.5 stars, but I'm keeping an eye on this author.
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