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This fic gave me glorious dark circles. It's like crack. I had hard time putting the book down and found myself reading past midnight hours. I am still very much puzzling over why since the book is not without its flaws. Perhaps it is simply because the author is a great storyteller. Not every author is good at telling stories. That's why some books turns out mediocre or unoriginal and readers had hard time trying to finish it.
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Parts of it made me "hmm" out loud, but overall, I did rather enjoy it.
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Jun 17, 2018
Nemesis
marked it as dropped-dnf
Well-written, but the rape scenes are too much.

This story was really well written, but it was also really depressing. As I'm someone who's sensitive to certain content, it really got me down. Terrible things kept happening to the MC and the world itself was such a terrible place that everything felt hopeless. If mind control rape and depressing content doesn't bother you, I recommend this story. If it does, I suggest steering clear.
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Gyvareva
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Wren
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Marwa
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Feb 06, 2014
Maiko-chan [|]
marked it as probably-not_uninterested_never
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Mar 27, 2014
Alex
marked it as dnf

Nov 16, 2014
Cuppachar
marked it as to-read

May 28, 2015
Nastassia
marked it as to-read

Jul 20, 2016
Elle
marked it as to-read