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This sounds like a fun read. I probably would get a kick out of it, it sounds like fun.
UNFORTUNATELY, I CANNOT STAND the DOLLS. And the ones on this "cover" ruin any image I might create of the characters. I always thought Asian ball joint dolls would be gorgeous; I see that some of them are quite ridiculous looking. I wish I had never seen these--I am too visual to erase them from my mind.
Yes, this is ridiculous, but then, so is putting extremely!!! silly looking dolls on a book cover--even for ...more
UNFORTUNATELY, I CANNOT STAND the DOLLS. And the ones on this "cover" ruin any image I might create of the characters. I always thought Asian ball joint dolls would be gorgeous; I see that some of them are quite ridiculous looking. I wish I had never seen these--I am too visual to erase them from my mind.
Yes, this is ridiculous, but then, so is putting extremely!!! silly looking dolls on a book cover--even for ...more

The "cover image" is really damn weird and a large part of why it took me so long to get to this one.
3.5/5
Uhh...
I actually quite liked it. The mpreg elements had me looking askance at this a lot, but ignoring that, the cultures Locke creates are quite good. I like that there's actual character evolution, too.
Parts of it are a bit awk and there are some grammatical issues floating around, but, hey. It's free online lit.
I actually rather disliked it when it went into other POVs - as in, other than ...more
3.5/5
Uhh...
I actually quite liked it. The mpreg elements had me looking askance at this a lot, but ignoring that, the cultures Locke creates are quite good. I like that there's actual character evolution, too.
Parts of it are a bit awk and there are some grammatical issues floating around, but, hey. It's free online lit.
I actually rather disliked it when it went into other POVs - as in, other than ...more


Jul 14, 2011
LenaLena
marked it as mm-to-read

Jul 18, 2011
Alarik
marked it as to-read

Sep 15, 2011
Eisheth
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Feb 18, 2012
Imogen
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Oct 20, 2012
Tami
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Feb 02, 2016
Cuppachar
marked it as to-read
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Jun 20, 2016
Maiko-chan [|]
marked it as probably-not_uninterested_never
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