Edited 7/17 - So I decided to read this for myself... all the love and fangirling for this book made me think maybe the quotes were not indicative of Edited 7/17 - So I decided to read this for myself... all the love and fangirling for this book made me think maybe the quotes were not indicative of the full story.
Approximately 3 page in:
I'm in the minority in my feelings about this apparently:
Here's the thing... not a single thing about this story was sexy to me. In fact, the majority of the time I spent like this:
and like this:
and like this:
And at one point, The first lemon had me doing this:
The writing itself was so ridiculous to me. The clenching, the quivering, the GOD DAMN SCENTING.... I mean:
I will be leaving all these quotes below for everyone to enjoy. And TBH this is all the time I'm going to put into a review for this thing. I just can't take anymore time away from quality stories and writing to put much more effort into it.
to Cosmogirl for reading this and supplying the quotes from the book. I appreciate you taking one for the team!! And thanks to Bri for compiling them!
"...and he keeps making sexual foreplay to my ear."
"So we're in the presidential suite with what feels like a thousand strangers, but of course, there can't possibly be so many for real."
"...my breasts feel so heavy and painful I swear to god I can't imagine what it will feel like when I'm lactating one day."
"I may be fucked up, but that guy eats virgins and spits them out like snake vomit."
"...a deep, soul-shattering need to lean over and suck it in my mouth. Not the water. His nipple."
(my personal favorite): "...at the first scrape of my nubbin against the rock-hard quad muscle of his thigh, I explode."
"His butt defies gravity it is so perfectly tight round and muscular. Every time I see it it any kind of clothes I drool about a small ocean."
"He buries his face in my neck and scents me..."
"All of my desire for him has not been appeased, and it had morphed into this sort of anger that will probably give me a disease and kill me."
"I eagerly push my breasts to his chest and anxiously rub my pained nipples against his diaphragm."
"...his cock gut-wrenchingly hard and sexy, rubbing all over my body and smearing his semen on me."
"I feel like he's a lazy lion, bathing me with his tongue, licking and nuzzling me."
"...still have the energy to position me in a way where he can spoon me or hold me and do all his manly, possessive, lion-like OCD things."
"Sometimes he washes his semen off my skin, but other times he gives me a series of slow, drugging kisses as he reaches between my thighs and fingers his semen back into my pussy like he always wants to be there."
"...I can roll to my side and drape myself all over him like a warmed gummy worm."
"Do you like it when I smear your skin with me?" God I love it when he calls his semen "him."
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