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Need a quick beta read on sci-fi/love story short (about 5,000 words)
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Phil comforts Lois as she is birthing something unnatural, and their brief love story is told.
I need feedback on pacing, plot, characterization. If there's anything that confuses you, or distracts you from the story I want to know.
I have .docx, .mobi, PDF and ePub available. Let me know your preference.