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Hey everyone!

I am new to this site, but I have been working on revising a novel.

The genre is probably something along the lines of psychological drama. The story itself centers around a man who unintentionally pits an assassin against another killer.

So far (as far as revision), I have the first chapter ready to be looked over. It's roughly 6 pages in length. I probably need to work on pacing and dialogue, but I am open to any suggestions. I am just curious to see if I am off to a good start.

If you are interested, then please let me know and I can send it to you.

Thank you!

I.R.

You can send this one chapter to me either in Word or pdf if you like.

[email protected]

Put "Requested chapter from I.R" in the subject line so I'll know what it is.

Diana

Thank you so much for looking it over! It means a lot!

Can you copy and paste your first chapter into an email and send it to me?

Of course, I would love to! What is your e-mail address?

[email protected] Would you be interested in doing a swap and seeing my first chapter?

Iliff

Did you receive my beta feedback for your novel? I sent it yesterday.

Michelle wrote: "[email protected] Would you be interested in doing a swap and seeing my first chapter?"

I would love to do a swap. I will e-mail you shortly. Thank you!

Diana wrote: "Iliff

Did you receive my beta feedback for your novel? I sent it yesterday."

Sorry I was late in replying! I just sent you a response e-mail. Again, thank you so much for your help!

no problem

Diana wrote: "You can send this one chapter to me either in Word or pdf if you like.

[email protected]

Put "Requested chapter from I.R" in the subject line so I'll know what it is.

Diana"
Diana, you are so nice to help others !
Dr. Bonnie Vause, Author of Fast Escape

Hello everyone. I thought I'd let you know about another group that can be of some use to you. "Indie Author Central" is a new group whose purpose is to provide everything indie authors need, including beta's that come to you. If you have a manuscript that you want to have a beta reader for, all you have to do is follow the instructions under the beta readers corner tab called betas and writers. You'll just need a brief description of your book and the first three pages. Our betas want to get a taste for the quality of your work before committing to the project. By showing the first three pages, they can make the decision to work with you or not, and you don't have to worry about any rejection emails after you've already sent the whole manuscript.

If your manuscript is already published and you need a few reviews, there is a place for that as well. We also do an indie book of the month, where we select an author out of the read to review program, and the group members read the book, promote the author, and have book discussion. Of authors are willing, there will also be a Q&A session.
We just started the group last week and no one has posted in the read to review section, so you won't be competing with hundreds of others, so hop on the opportunity before there is a lot of competition. Best of luck.