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groups yeah, but i dont know the names

Well, that's a lot of help to her.

oh YAY look leah's here *sarcasm*
with that oh so joyful attitude ^_^

Ikr. I'm so happy.

Hello Leah

Hi Julie! I like ur profile pic.

gtg

C ya.

Thanks Leah!<4 Gtg bye

HELLO :D
i forgot what the topic was.. oops.
so i'll just talk about..
i dunno eh.

The topic is allegiant but I think we've exhausted almost everything there is to talk about short of rewriting the entire book.

yea

But seriously, I would like to rewrite this book, take out Tobias' POV and have tris survive.

yeah sameez

Yep. Let's rewrite the book!!

Together!
*raise fist in air*

Oh yeah. So what character's fate shall we change??

Let's do this!!

So... Tris first?? Or Four?? Or anyone else??

I know its weird but... Al

Umm... Okay, so what should happen to Al??

Al?

I dunno. Teresa...?

Are we making up new characters?

Let's stick to the official characters for now and then maybe after we could make some up. That ok??

Ok so how much do we actually want to change?

As much as we want.

I want Al to live .. That doesnt change the fact that he betrayed tris but i wanted him to make up for it by helping tris later on ... Without her knowledge ..kind of like the traitor who became the unsung hero later on because generally he want a bad character

Wasn't""

Ok, so, Al lives. I think that meant something to tris though, it kinda changed her. I think ALs death was important so does anyone else want to comment??

Maybe she doesn't have to know.. Maybe she could go on thinking he was dead but he want .. Just have to change that death scene .. Someone else could have died but the body was too contorted and resembled als build .. Al meanwhile could disappear and live outside dauntless with the factionless till the uprising

Wasnt""""

If that were to happen then it would probably make more sense for him to go to the Bureau or somewhere, but then everyone's there so that'd be too cliché a place for the characters to go.

Hmmm yes... The thing is though that if tris were to survive that would be a cliched ending ..sometimes books are better without a happy ending

Sometimes the "what if" feeling makes the book that much better.

I WANT URIAH TO LIVE TOO. :'(

YEAH ^ Uriah has to HAS TO live-i mean his death was un-nessecary

Teresa: i think you have a problem with "Wasn't" ;D

maybe Al went to the Bureau, and he and Tris meet when they escape outside the fence

and maybe Marlene and Lynn could have survived, maybe even get together *wink wink, nod head is agreement*

Al goes to candor (his family hides him, maybe?)

Yeah. I like that ending. His family smuggles him!! We have to do that.

Uriah was my fav :( He shouldn't have died. I'm not saying that just because he's my fav. I'm saying that because... okay I don't know why I'm saying that but he did make the book interesting!

YAS AL GETS SMUGGLED :D
aaand uriah doesn't die because i agree, that was SO unnecessary!
it was! did she really have to kill marlene, lynn and uri?! and tris and al and will?
who else did i forget? please, delight me -_-

Tris' mom and dad....

oh, well i don't think anyone cared about them

But her mom! She was so awesome!

I liked Tris' mom.

i didn't. the only part in which she was interesting was in Fours point of view in the book. the part where she tells him she know he likes Tris after the Visiting Ceremony

In a way, don't scream at me guys, I think maybe Uriah should die, not coz I want him to, I loved Uriah, but kinda coz it would make it more emphatic and meaningful, if he had a more tragic/meaningful/less unnecessary death, just sow it's better, but don't get me wrong, I don't want him dead.

I think he should go into his coma thing and then at the last second wake up. Predictable I know but I think Uriah needs to get hurt so that Tobias can realize what he's doing is wrong but I don't want him to die.

yeah, i guess that's true
at least zeke lived.
right?! unless i forgot .. but i really really liked zeke as well, he was nice.

Yeah. And if Uriahs gonna come close to death, can we at least give him a better near death. The coma things a bit...