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message 1: by Aurora (new)

Aurora (aurora_the_lycan) | 121 comments I've recently drafted up a new story and I'm struggling to come up with a name, it's primarily about fallen angels vs guardians, guardian being sorta half angles. Anyone got any ideas


message 2: by Amy (new)

Amy Of Tarth | 129 comments Can you post what you've written so far so I can read it then think?


message 3: by Amy (new)

Amy Of Tarth | 129 comments I've been thinking. I don't know if it's already been used, but 'before the fall' ?


message 4: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments Would love to help Aurpra, but I'd Need a Little more to go on


message 5: by Aurora (new)

Aurora (aurora_the_lycan) | 121 comments Um i can post the first paragraph but it doesnt really help...


message 6: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments Can you give a more in depth description?


message 7: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments I just don't really get much from what you posted. Like What Genre, Horror, Adventure, SciFi Fantasy. Is it Adult, Middle Grade or Young Adult. Where does it take place. Who are the main characters. What is the time period? Stuff like that. Personally though, I don't think you really Need a title yet, if your only just now drafting, I'd just wait for a title to come to you.


message 8: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments I'm jjust saying that whatever you coe up with now might not end up matching the final product, but if you really want a Name then I will do my best to help you.


message 9: by Aurora (new)

Aurora (aurora_the_lycan) | 121 comments It focus's around 2 main characters, a guardian called Michael and a fallen angel called Lilith. Michael's parents killed Lilith's when she was 8 years old so from then on it has been her goal to kill him, so she causes the pain she felt to the parents. Michael doesn't like killing fallen angels because he believe's they shouldn't be held responsible for their parents sins that got them cast from heaven. Lilith doesn't like killing anyone, and Michael would be her first kill.

9 years in training Lilith makes herself able to withstand holy water etc. and manages to infiltrate the guardian's school, pretending to be one herself to get close to and kill him.

9 years for Michael he is now the most promising student the academy has ever had due to him being slightly more angel than normal.


message 10: by Aurora (new)

Aurora (aurora_the_lycan) | 121 comments That help?


message 11: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments Yup a few ideas


Redemption
Slain
To be a Killer
The Fallen


message 12: by Aurora (new)

Aurora (aurora_the_lycan) | 121 comments I quite like Redemption actually... as you said it doesn't really need a title as a draft so I could always change it if the plot line alters,
Thanks :D


message 13: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments |No Problem, Redemption is my fav aswell


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Redemption and To be A Killers are such good ideas!


message 15: by Kiersten (last edited Jan 24, 2016 08:35AM) (new)

Kiersten (trouble-in-paradise) | 1 comments Black and White? License To Kill? Teasing Hell\Death? I think License To Kill is kind of funny, and it was always going to be a name for my story but then i realized it wouldnt really fit my type of writing


message 16: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 0 comments To Be or Not To Be: A Killer's Story


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