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Me:set in a utopian future. so bright white buildings that are sky high. neon lights and such. sort of like this
and this

with a little places of the old world still left that are hidden. this would be the nightlife. it could be a girl/boy in this underground world of lquiar and rebelish behavior and that they sericely want to leave but since they are so close to this world they but cant leave.
There will also be their friend in that world that have been buddie since they were young and have never left each other side (again chacarter can be male or female.) then there is the outside charatcer that show them (the charcter from above) what the world outside theirs is like and gives a further reason (again can be fem/m) this can also be where a possable romance thingy can happen
(sorry for the poop spelling i had to get this down)
so this is a 3 person thing

Also look for crazy hair colours.

Like purple? >:D

yes >;D

I want to be the male character. I feel comfortable writing male characters after writing 3 roleplays with male characters.

go for it. which role do you want to do

Daniella go to this thread!

Right, so are characters?

1. The person living in the rebel group
2. The friend of the person in the rebel group
3. The person from the outside world

yes

okay

who am i and also i want to be female don't ask why i'm just feeling it in this story

okay. :D

Shall I be the person from the outside world? Or already living in the dystopian world? Choose your character, whoever you want.
And then we just fill out a character profile and then start writing from our character's point of view.

thats okay. i made it so anyone can be what ever gender they want.
You have three to chose from. (maybe we aslo think of a more richer storyline, but yeah)
1. the person that is both the underground world and the clean 'utopain world'
2. You have the friend that is in the underground world
3. you have the character who meets character 1 and shows then the 'untopain' world they aren't used to.

but could that utopian world be very fragile and rely on the existence of the dystopian world? that would be a cool twist.
not like hunger games where everyone knows, but like a mix of divergent and matched and maybe disruption as well idk.

oooooh can we have like, addiction? Like, all these people in the dystopian world rely on something to survive which maybe....*gasp* the utopian people make for them so it's kinda like, disguised slave labour and addiction at the same time. (Think Opium den from TID as well)

some kind of drug that makes your brain have better capacity and be able to be smart and stuff but it takes away your ability to be creative? and maybe to understand emotion?

what?

read woman!

I did, but it like when you talk fast and you don't hear everything. (I'll most likely re-read it again later tonight)

LOLz!

Like a classing system where the richest live in the uptoian parts of the town, that has control over the poor parts which haven't caught up to the rest of the world. The older parts are kept because they have to do certain things for the utopian world in order to keep that part of their world alive. Most of the Utopian would also be genetically prefect as that can be afford by them.
(also pick a character you two)

okay, can I be the friend in the underground world? Also I'm going to be a guy.

okay yeah sure.

YAY! Shall I make a profile for myself? Or start it at least?

yeah start on the profile, ill try and get daniella to chose

Daniella, you chose the Untopain character, yeah

yes i'll be the utopian chracter
female

yeah go for it. now its time for character profiles

Also what are the ages of these people?

Name: Leaira Calypso Connolly
Age: 19

Appearance:


Personality/Background:
- Last name is an older world type last name
- Third born generation in the city (Grandparents moved to the city 60 years ago)
- Good Sense of Humor
- Sassy
- quick to Smile
- Very Curious, and this as gotten her in trouble with the Enforcers (which like the city's police, but better and efficient.)
- Loves to tinker with electrical objects
- Know Alistair since they were children and are very good friends.
- Loves the old world flowers
- Failed at school but that doesn't matter.
- Has four other siblings, Three older and one younger
- Lives in a house under a trail line
- Has a family pet by the name of Ozzio, Ozz for short.(an American Eskimo Dog)

meh about our age or early twenties? If they are older then they don't have to worry about school, if there even is school and can focus more on the rebellion and stuff and being badass like Maggie from Disruption. >:D

Name: Alistair Knowles
Age: 20
Appearance:


Personality/background:
- He's gay
- He is part of a rebel group in the dystopian sector
- Flunked school with his friend Leaira
- Owns 6 guns
- Is an orphan, his dad left when he was 2 and his mother was killed by Enforcers in an uprising 8 years ago. Part of the reason he failed high school was because he was planning revenge on the Enforcers and because he was trying to survive.
- Was taken in by the Connolly's and lives in a little section under the railway next door to them.

thats fine I only have a name

Renée wrote: "meh about our age or early twenties? If they are older then they don't have to worry about school, if there even is school and can focus more on the rebellion and stuff and being badass like Maggi..."
Yeah okay, that would be nice, it doesn't have to be anything to do with school (well can but there are two different cultures so school may no matter to the underground, old world, but matters to the Utopian world, because of genetic perfect, ect.

I also just realized that they can drink because they ae old enough to. Ha lets write some drunken characters.

hold up

okay so what is it you want from me again ha

@Lys, YES! OMG HA HA HA HA!!!! Can do that. >:D

and you need to choose a character. Didn't you want to be the utopian person? Guy or girl doesn't matter, although I think you said you wanted to be a girl....?

Daniella what we need you to do it to create a character profile. If you look up above I have started one and we can copy what is there (but you change the image for your character) and this will help with writing her character and yes Renee Danielle is the Utopian character.

okay wait so who are you then?

Im the character in both worlds

1. the person that is both the underground world and the clean 'utopain world' Me
2. You have the friend that is in the underground world Renee
3. you have the character who meets character 1 and shows then the 'untopain' world they aren't used to. Daniella

okay, so I'm going to be a leader in the rebel group of the dystopian world. And I know you Elyssa, but not Daniella?

yes and Daniells character doesn't know you. But my character will know both of you.

kay. :D

:D

XD HE'S SO HOT!

haha. okay i can see that

Can I please start? I have a really good opening line. No wait, Daniella's charrie darn. I'll post but no one respond yet.




There was a test. Your results were determined by your potential, and your potential was determined by your actions and your reports. This Potential Test reckoned whether you were worth sending to the major academies, and whether you were going to be useful to society. There were cheats of course, for those who could afford them. It wasn't like if you were bad at school it meant you weren't worthy. All the information in the world was available to everyone, sciences, history, geography and general defence, all through one little chip provided by the government.
And that chip, was your access key to everything you could ever want in life.
For the rest of them, they weren't so lucky.
Alistair knew this and had known it since he first, two years ago, took his test.
He had expected his result and accepted the fake plastic smiles of polished white uniformed humans who lead him back to the holding room while the girls with perfect hair an uniform, all signs of money and connection was taken through another door, through a door which he would never enter.
But it was better this way. At least he knew who he was. He was able to be creative and wonder about things, make mistakes and accept that as part of his life. His mind was his own and he wasn't being force fed regulation information like the rest of the upper society, the society they worked for and replied on.
This was his life, and he planned on doing the best he could with it.

OKAY CHARACTERS HELL YEAH

Name - Thomas Fornix
Age - 22 years old
Appearance -









*LOUD STROKE* HOT DAMN

facts and figures -
- gay
- has had to care for his older autistic sister (26) becuase everryone else doesn't want anything to do with her
- his parents have gone off to a council meeting and left them alone in their house

is that what you two wanted? okay? okay.

You have done are good start but your character live in the brighter world where you have no problems where the enforcers.. just think of the hunger games, you character lives in the capitol and believes in the capitol hands down. So i means that your character parents dont need to fight them per-say as they have a more perfect life.
You great start (AND YOU HAVE FINALLY COME ONLINE :D, YOU MAKE MAMMA PROUD) ((just ingore what we did up there with the write thing, we just did a little backstorish type thing.))