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Hey guys! I have a fun and cheesy idea! We could make one of those stories where one person says something and we all add on! Our group is really smart, so we should be able to make the story exciting instead of weird, unless u want to make a funny weird one! Try to use small lines and not paragraphs, and we can keep adding on! I'll start for us!

There was once a kid who had special powers! He went to school like a normal kid, cause he didn't know he had these powers. The kid's name was..........

Logan who in time will have the power to control objects with his mind. He was sixteen years old when trouble struck at his school in the middle of the year. Little did he know that his powers can save himself and the student body. It began during his English class, fourth period, when the lights shut off while the doors and windows locked. There was a fog mist that entered the room underneath the door at the scene. Logan got up from his desk and tried to walk to the front of the room when out of the fog came . . . .

His mother. But she had died, two years ago in a horrible fire that had taken the lives of both of his parents. Logan was an orphan; or so he had thought. His mother, wearing a long white dress and with her blonde hair wavy around her shoulders, walked slowly to her son. Her blue eyes sparkled as she said to him. . .

"Logan, I've come to warn you! We don't have much time as it is coming!"
"What is coming?"Logan said
"The creature!" His mother said." Now listen, we must get you ready! Go to our old house and meet your father, he will guide you to your next step!"Logan's father was also dead so he was very confused and scared! As his mother reached out to hug him, rattling and banging came from the hallway!
"You have to go!" His mother said. She disappeared and everyone in the class was unconscious. Logan jumped out the now unlocked window and ran till he arrived at his old house! When he was there.........

He wished he wasn't! The minute he arrived at his old house, he started tearing up! The outside was full of thorny brambles, and the outside was dirty and run down! The grass was overgrown, and the front steps in front of the door weren't even there! He jumped up into the house, and the old creaky door slammed shut! He saw forest animals that wandered into the house run around in terror as fog crept through the cracks in the walls! He saw the forest animals clump to the floor as if they just fell asleep, and an image appeared near the old kitchen! As it got closer, he saw it was his dad! As he heard a bit of banging in the woods, his dad said.............

Let me just correct my first sentence. He wished he wasn't there, is what I meant. Sorry.

"Logan, it's so good to see your face for one last time! But we must hurry! Take these!" Logan's dad handed him a nap sack and a charm bracelet that glowed gold with ruby charms of the moon, sun, stars, and others.
" A charm bracelet?" He said.
"You will know what it's for when you need it. Now, go to this location and talk to the woman reading the book in the rocking chair, and say that that I've sent you!" His dad handed him a map with a planned out route to a town called Arentown. The rustling in the woods got very loud and then a small tree toppled over." You must go,"his father said. " Now run!" Logan took off! He didn't know how he would get to the town, but he took the nap sack and the charm bracelet and ran as a giant tree crashed on his old house!

A silver colored owl bursted out of a tree, took the charm bracelet, and flew down the path! Logan followed it until it flew in a town and perched on a lamppost! Logan looked at a sign that said, Arentown bookstore, and then the owl flew in the open window of a bookstore next to the sign. He rushed in and looked for the owl, but the bookcases were like a maze! He found the front desk, bathrooms, tables, computers, and when he reached what he thought was the back corner of the room, he saw an old woman reading a book with the owl on her shoulder as she rocked in the rocking chair she was in. As she noticed Logan she said,"Hello there dear! What brings you here?"
"My father Chris Marongiza." Logan said.
"Oh,"she said. Her voice turned into a whisper as she said, " I will guide you, for a price". She was staring at the bracelet in her owl's talons.
"Oh, the bracelet?" Logan said. "Well, I guess you could. But, I guess, maybe ummm. Alright, you........

can take it but first can you tell me what it would be used for?" Logan looked at her with his curious blue ocean eyes.
"Well if you must know," she said with her opened hand out to Logan. So, he dropped the bracelet watching it fall into some else's hands. "This bracelet contains the elements such as fire, air, water, and earth. But you will not need this bracelet with the power that you already have in you." She spoke glancing at the bracelet every once in a while.
"Why? What power could I possibly have inside of me?" Logan yelled wanting to know more about his life. Then all of a sudden, the bookcases banged together and fell before them. None of the cases hit them since Logan finally said,"STOP!" Then, the bookcases froze from where they were, stopped in mid air.
"Now, child do you realize your power?" The woman asked as she used the charm bracelet to put everything in order. The air element glowed from the charm bracelet and worked it's magic controlled by the woman. " Now that that was settled, follow me." As she took Logan by the hand, his mouth was open wide. She took him to the back of her store near a empty room. The woman chatted something and the ground began to shake. Logan fell to the ground as the floor was sinking deeper into the ground. "By the way, my name is Siranna and I am your Godmother."
As soon as the floor stopped moving, Logan got up and . . . . .

Fell over again as the ground started shaking for a different reason!"It's coming,"his godmother said!"Goodbye child," she said as the ceiling collapsed and Logan blacked out.
When he woke he saw his godmother's owl on his stomach. It looked starving! He wished he had an apple for himself and the owl! Just then, the owl climbed into his nap sack which apparently was next to him. The owl rolled out two apples, and bit into one. Logan was shocked! He thought about a nice delicious bucket of fried chicken, remembering he hadn't eaten since yesterday, reached into the sack, and a bucket of chicken came out! Logan laughed, as his owl took off over a hill. He followed it until.........

Logan reached a crystal blue waterfall. The owl flew toward the waterfall gracefully and enter a cave. Logan was shocked and followed the owl more to continue to uncover more surprises. Inside that waterfall cave was treasures and bookcase shelved with books. Logan pick a book off the shelf as the owl sat on a pedestal. The title of the book was . . .

The journey of the mind! He barley made out the title cause it was so dark! But then he remembered something! He reached into his sack and a reading light came out! He turned it on opened the book, and.......

he began to read the first page.
THE DARK FORCES ARE CLOSING IN AND THE LIGHT WILL NEVER CEASE TO WIN
Then the candles in the cave lit up and a sudden chill came into the present. Logan continued to read on to see if anything else would happen.
A CREATURE THAT HAS BEEN ALWAYS FEARED REACHES THE TOP OF MT. BEARD. TO SEARCH FOR A MAN THAT PROMISES TO PROTECT THE LAND. AND KEEP THE DARKNESS AWAY USING THE PALM OF HIS HAND.
"What is this trash talking about? Could this be a prophecy for what is happening now? Who is the man?," Logan asked being so curious.
"Maybe if you keep reading and shut your trap you will find the answers to all your questions. Jeez!You think you read properly at the title," the owl spoke to him. "Do not even question me talking right now young man!" Logan was caught off guard being surprised but he continued to read in order for the owl to be quiet.
IN A CAVE HE WILL PLAN AND COMBINE ALL ELEMENTS AT DEMAND. FOR THE CREATURE IS CLOSE, FOR YOU FEEL THE CHILLS THE MOST. GET THE BAG AND IN IT YOU WILL FIND WHAT YOU THOUGHT WAS NORMAL IN YOUR MIND.
Logan turned the page and it showed the picture of the bracelet he gave to his Godmother. Then, right away charged at the ground to find in the bag the bracelet and a note.
"Logan,
If you are reading this note then you found the prophecy book, The Journey of the Mind. Yes, you are the man that is going to lead us out of the darkness when the creature arrives. My owl will teach you the ways of magic, it requires three things. One: An open mind that is on guard. Two: Control. Three: Faith and love. Once you have got those steps down, Hoot can take it from there. I wish you good luck and I will always be in your heart. Take good care of the charm bracelet.
Godmother Siranna"
Logan flipped through the next couple of pages to find the creature that he has to go up against. He thought he saw it before, maybe in his nightmares when he was young. "Okay Hoot, what is it going to take in order to help my family and the people of this town?"
"We first start to learn to be wise, to control and have trust in your magic." Hoot flew in circles around Logan to make sure he thought she was not playing any games. "Let us begin, shall we?" Logan nodded his head and put on the charm bracelet. Then Hoot transformed into a human girl holding a wand that was made of diamond using light magic. "Create a ball of fire a throw it toward me." She said that was no longer her loud owl voice but of silk and calming words.
"Uhhhh . . ." Logan tried to speak but nothing came out. Of course he didn't know how to be wise and think to create a ball of fire but that wasn't what was stopping him. Hoot was a beautiful girl with her brown soft hair and green eyes.
"Come on, clear your mind and just imagine a ball of fire coming out of your hands." Hoot said waiting to get a chance to finally use her abilities to fight someone. Then, a huge ball of fire came out of Logan's hands and rushed toward Hoot. The flames were hot but did not touch Hoot for she made a force field around her. "Now it is my turn." She said with a bright smile. Out of her wand blasted . . .

A sphere of magic! Logan ducked but then saw the sphere zoom past him all the way to the entrance of the cave where the waterfall was. Then, the cave shook, and water shot through! It was coming right at him!"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!!!!! He shouted! STOP"! The water slowed down." My magic is too strong for your powers!" Hoot said."Try again!" The water was getting really close to Logan! All he thought was to find some way to push the water back! He closed his eyes, got ready for impact, but he didn't see the air charm on the bracelet glowing! He felt a huge gust of wind, opened his eyes, and a super strong gust of wind was blowing the water out of the cave! He was doing it! But just then, he heard a loud roar outside! The cave shook roughly! Logan stumbled over as Hoot said," We must go! I'll do it this time but its up to next time," she said. Logan stuffed the book in his sack as Hoot castes dust over him and herself. The disappeared and reappeared in the middle of a..........

Field of daisies. To their right, far in the distance, was Arentown; now it was nothing more than a crumbled and seemingly abandoned city, all the buildings destroyed by the earthquake. To their left was a beach bordering an ocean. Logan glanced at Hoot curiously. "What are we doing here?" he asked. "Here is where we will REALLY start your training. If you are going to beat...it...then you must learn to truly trust yourself and your powers. And maybe one day you'll learn to trust me as well." Logan dropped his sack to the ground. "If I am going to be fighting this 'thing', don't I at least deserve to know who or what this creature is?" Hoot shook her head defiantly. "You will find out in due time," she said vaguely. "Now, I want you to hit me with all you've got! I need to know how you work when you're not under pressure...then we can really begin to see your true potential." Logan shrugged, closed his eyes, and concentrated. He held his palm out in Hoot's direction. Out of his hand came a. . .

Spark! A little tiny SPARK! That was it? Logan thought." Oh dear", Hoot said. He got frustrated, as a hot blazing ball of fire came out if his hand! It flew towards Hoot as she made a sphere of water even bigger than his fire. After they collided and were both put out, Hoot said," Oh we have a lot of work to do! Follow me," she said as she walked into the trees. As she went deep into the trees, a huge rumbling came from right in front of her! Logan couldn't see anything with all the plants and trees, but he heard Hoot say,"Oh no! How was it quiet?! Logan, GET OUT OF HERE!!!!!!" Logan couldn't remember which way he came! He felt like crying as he heard hoot scream! He wished he was anywhere but here, in this situation, as he saw himself disappearing, realizing he was teleporting himself! He heard Hoot scream one more time as he saw the world shift around him! He reappeared in front if a sign that said, Welcome to Colorado! WHAT?!!! He thought. He lived in California! He noticed his sack next to him, which was weird, but then the four charms on his bracelet started glowing and were trying to pull themselves of the bracelet to the top of the Mountain he was in front of! He picked up his sack, and started walking to the mountain (still embarrassed to be wearing a charm bracelet).

Once he came close to the mountain, he heard a shriek coming from a bounder that was on the side of where he was standing.
"What in the name could that be? Hello is anyone there?" Logan searched the bounder but nothing was there and once he continued to walk again, he heard another sound. This time is was not coming from the bounder but above it, the creature stood before him.
"Logan can you hear me. It is Siranna, your Godmother remember? Listen, I am contacting you through her head so you could hear me and no one else can. Do not question anything right now about he like where I went or what is going on with Hoot. Just go through your head real quick and use the water element on the charm bracelet to protect. I will guide you through this battle even though I am not physically here with you. Understand?" Siranna spoke inside the brain of Logan in a soft toned voice.
"Yes I understand," Logan said out loud and the creature heard him. The creature flew down from above and landing right in front of Logan. "Uhmmm..." He quickly remember what his Godmother said and summoned the water from the lake below the mountain. It came up rising to the mountain fast, there was an unlimited supply by the looks of the water. Right when the creature was about to attack, Logan shielded himself using the water and blasted the creature at the head. The creature was pushed far away from Logan but got anger and tried to walk with the water pushing him.
Then, Logan summoned the earth element, which began to glow on the charm bracelet and the earth began to shake. Vines grew out of the ground and wrapped around the creature's big hair feet. The creature looked more like a combination of a wolf, bat, lion, and bear. All of those animals were considered dangerous according to Logan and VERY dangerous combined together to create such a monster. Who would do that, Logan thought.
Once the vines trapped the creature from leaving it's spot, Logan kept one hand controlling the water and the other summoned the fire element. Fires were lite on the vines that wrapped around the creature. At this point he stopped the water, flames were bursting out of his hands toward the monster's face. This was it, Logan thought, I could really beat this boss once and for all. But the creature was moving for the vines being flamed with fire were breaking.
"Help me Godmother Siranna!" He yelled toward the shy as if something extraordinary was going to happen.
"Summon everything you got in you, boy. Think of all the people you could save. This creature trapped your parents in the shadow land for such a long time making you think that they were dead. Remember that feeling of being loved and loving others. Save everyone because you are the chosen one from the prophecy. Defeat this evil!" That was the last comment Siranna said to Logan in his head. He had a plan for once and saw that they were near a cliff, if he could get the creature close enough. Maybe, he thought.
"Hey you monster! Come and get me if you can." Logan knew just the perfect plan. He needed to take off those bat wings the creature had. The creature was free from the fire burning vines and charged at Logan who summoned the air element to make him fly. Still holding onto the charm bracelet with his hand he took it off. It turned into a sword with the symbols for the elements going down the sharp steel weapon. He took a swing at the monster but missed and cut off one of this lion ears. This made the monster weep at the moment and charge Logan with more determination. The creature crawled at him and gave me a cut. But his sword fell giving him no control over the elements.
As he was falling, he straightened himself and headed for the sword but the creature was coming at him fast. Just before he hit the ground, below the cliff, he grabbed the sword and motioned up. The creature was shocked at this and landed on the ground hurt from the hard landing. Stilling have it's wings it continued to go toward Logan. Just when Logan was giving the idea that the creature had him, Logan whipped around the back and cut off both of his strong wings. The creature cried out and was falling fast to the ground.
Summoning all of the elements in his sword, it glowed bright as the North star, he charged the creature. BOOM! The creature was dead and had not a breath to be taken. A few moments later, while Logan was trying to catch his breath, the creature disappeared. Why? Logan thought, I just defeated him what is happening. Then appearing where the creature died was his mother and father along with Godmother Siranna and Hoot.
"We are so proud you son. I was always watching over you along with your mother. I was so worried about you thinking of us being gone, we tried to summon all of our strength to contact you. You know what, just come over here mister." Logan's dad hugged him so tight that Logan was almost not able to breath.
"We will always love you no matter what. I hope you know that sweetheart." She also gave him a hug and kissed the top of his head.
"Yes, I know and I love you guys too. I think you should make up for all of the years that you were not here with me." Logan looked at his parents speaking in a joking kind of way. His parents looked at each then at Logan and just nodded.
"Great job! I am so proud of you and that you clearly followed my notes. The creature saw me and took me to the shadow land along with Hoot over here. That is where I explained to your parents that you were fine an that I trusted you to make good choices about this battle of our." Godmother Siranna said to him looking at his sword that turned back into a charm bracelet. "Maybe I could do you a favor and make the disguise of the charm bracelet more appealing. How about a necklace?" She asked and turned the charm bracelet into a stunning necklace that was just about Logan's style. Logan nodded and look toward Hoot who turned into a human to congratulate Logan.
"Nice job! That was pretty impressive of what you did, I never doubted you once during the battle." She gave him a kiss of the cheek and then continued to stand on the shoulder of Godmother Siranna, in owl form.
The five of them went back to the house in the woods and rebuilt it. From then on Logan went to school like a regular teenager but did magic lessons with Godmother Siranna after school. As for his parents, they went flying over the cliff with Logan right after the magic lesson. He knew that this was a new beginning toward his life and would use that as a gift. Flying into the night was fun for the family, since Logan loved flying, he felt that he could do more of them. So he made the water on the river they were flying above dance in the moonlight. It was a beautiful sight, not only did Logan end the day great but he ended the separation between the normal world with himself. He was the chosen one and was proud.

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I LOVE your ending! I would have never thought of that!

Thank you! I just thought that since this discussion was not being looked at and posted for a while, I thought that I could finish the story. I so told you that I am a writer.

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