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I've just found out that there is a recently-discovered longer version of this story published as Frozen Hell. As I understand it, this longer version adds a few extra chapters at the beginning, and then is basically the same afterwords. Read whichever version you prefer.

Thanks, Ed. Is this version linked here as well? I'll plan to read that one.
I have good memories of John Carpenter's classic film "The Thing," which I saw on the Wide Screen in Stillwater, Okla when I was just starting to read this stuff.
Did the group ever read Campbell's "The Cloak of Aesir"?
VERY atmospheric proto-hard SF tale by JWC. Those rustling atomic wall-torches! Pretty sure I have a hc copy of this from a library discard-sale. Those old greenback library-binding special eds! Might be worth $$$ now . . . 😇


The Walking Head! I'd forgotten that part. 1982 movie. That can't be right? Much later than I thought....
Peter wrote: "...Is this version linked here as well?.."
Yes, there is a link to Frozen Hell in my message above, and again in this sentence.
"Frozen Hell" was published from a Kickstarter project, btw.
I think I will read the standard version. It is a classic and I'd like to experience it the same way most people have. But if you read the longer version, let us know what you think!
Yes, there is a link to Frozen Hell in my message above, and again in this sentence.
"Frozen Hell" was published from a Kickstarter project, btw.
I think I will read the standard version. It is a classic and I'd like to experience it the same way most people have. But if you read the longer version, let us know what you think!




Thanks. Maybe I'll stick to re-reading the classic!

The first 3 long chapters of "Frozen Hell" were condensed using a flashback format in the first 2 chapters of ""Who Goes There?". From that point the story is pretty much the same as I can tell without comparing them line by line. I liked the edited version much better. Those 3 extra chapters didn't add anything for me and just slowed the story down.

I agree.


I found the first chapter a bit of a drag and the characters are all hard to differentiate. Pretty much the only thing that sets them apart for me is the association with their live-action incarnations. It's easy to see why this material would have been cut, although I did enjoy the 2nd and third chapters. There are some good moments that I think are effective in developing a bit of dread for what's to come. What's interesting is there are several portions that to me feel very reminiscent of The Thing from Another World, since these chapters focus on (view spoiler) - all of this reminds me of the original film. There's also a speculative line about it being "a perfect imitation" which reminded me of Blair's speech in the Carpenter movie. Unless this stuff was repeated or reincorporated in the later portion/originally published version, the association is uncanny.
It is clear to me why all this would have been cut though, as the writing is indulgent with a bit of unnecessary technobabble. There's also (view spoiler) . I read the two introductions that come with the edition, one by Silverberg, and it's funny how they both more or less say "the new material is inferior" without outright saying it. I think the most positive thing Silverberg says is something like "comparing the two is an interesting insight into Campbell's growth as an editor" (paraphrase).

About the book: I could not help comparing it to Carpenters movie the whole time I was reading. Because of that it was hard to judge the book as a work on itself. Characters are flat or non existent, and there was a lot of things I missed or could have added something in the description of events. The ending was a bit sudden. Despite all that the book created the haunted atmosphere that I thought it should have with the events happening. It is great to have read this original story.

About the book: I could not help comparing it to Carpenters movie the whole..."
I echo Leo's sentiments. I found it very uneven and the language stilted and unclear. It was very good in terms of ideas, but he wasn't real adept at getting them across.

WGT had a bit of an info-dump explaining a bit about the back story, but I felt it lacked a lot of the character development.
I'm not really a fan of horror, but I do like action/adventure stories - maybe why I liked FH.
I felt he may have cut out the first three chapters to get the word count down. It's something I have done when writing essays - just pick whole paragraphs and delete them.




Yes. I liked it too


Cordelia wrote: "I read them both. Frozen Hell first. I liked the Frozen Hell best . It gave a really good intro to the characters and how they found the spaceship etc. ..."
I read the original story. This is my first time to experience any version of the story. I've never seen any of the films.
The characters were flat and hard for me to tell apart. So I might have appreciated having some introductory chapters to help me know who was who.
I got confused also with some of the action. Not sure exactly why, but several times I had to stop and re-read a few paragraphs.
I really didn't like the prose style. Too many unnecessary adjectives, for one thing.
The science parts were unconvincing. Does anyone know whether a blood test such as described here would work? Can you really see a reaction quickly with just your bare eyes?
The scientists jumped to conclusions pretty quickly. The idea that (view spoiler)
With all that said, I still like the idea of the story and the atmosphere of fear an paranoia. I've seen later SF shows play with this idea. So, 4 stars for the idea. Not so much for the writing.
I read the original story. This is my first time to experience any version of the story. I've never seen any of the films.
The characters were flat and hard for me to tell apart. So I might have appreciated having some introductory chapters to help me know who was who.
I got confused also with some of the action. Not sure exactly why, but several times I had to stop and re-read a few paragraphs.
I really didn't like the prose style. Too many unnecessary adjectives, for one thing.
The science parts were unconvincing. Does anyone know whether a blood test such as described here would work? Can you really see a reaction quickly with just your bare eyes?
The scientists jumped to conclusions pretty quickly. The idea that (view spoiler)
With all that said, I still like the idea of the story and the atmosphere of fear an paranoia. I've seen later SF shows play with this idea. So, 4 stars for the idea. Not so much for the writing.

I think that after finishing "Who goes There?' some of you might be interested in the short story that tells it from alien's POV.
Jim wrote: "... some of you might be interested in the short story that tells it from alien's POV. ..."
Thanks for that!
I didn't really like it, and it seems to refer to events that are not in the story (but maybe in the movies?). Even so, thanks for alerting us.
I did like this line: "I can still feel joy, should there be sufficient cause." Me, too!
And I liked the description of the brain as "thinking cancer".
Thanks for that!
I didn't really like it, and it seems to refer to events that are not in the story (but maybe in the movies?). Even so, thanks for alerting us.
I did like this line: "I can still feel joy, should there be sufficient cause." Me, too!
And I liked the description of the brain as "thinking cancer".

I believe Carpenter has also teased coming out of retirement for a sequel previously. Who knows if that would ever happen (or should happen) though.

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I didn't mind the prequel at all. But the 1982 version is still my favorite. The original black and while film is a kick because it was directed by Howard Hawks, but he wouldn't take credit because Sci-Fi films were poorly looked upon in those days. If you watch the film, you can see his hands all over it, especially in the snappy dialogue.

Christian Nyby directed it. It was produced by Howard Hawks. Although there is some debate as to how much control he exercised and whether or not there was some backseat directing.

Christian Nyby directed it. It was produced by Howard Hawks. Although there is so..."
I found this from the L. A. Times.
A ‘Thing� to His Credit
By Henry Fuhrmann
May 25, 1997 12 AM PT
“The Thing� was produced by Howard Hawks and supposedly directed by his editor on “Red River,� Christian Nyby. . . . Howard Hawks was listed as “presenting� the film, with Christian Nyby listed as director, but chances are that Hawks also had a sizable share in the directing. . . . Ostensibly directed by Christian Nyby but generally considered the work of its producer. . . . Many consider [Nyby’s] contribution to “The Thing� to be minimal.
You’re no doubt familiar with the Hollywood blacklist. Let me introduce you to the Hollywood hacklist, unjustly headed by one Christian I. Nyby, the late editor, director and--not incidentally--younger brother of my father’s mother.
To many film historians and fans of the science fiction genre it helped begat, my Uncle Chris did not actually direct “The Thing,� simply because there’s no plausible reason to believe that he could have. (And the above-cited quotations are some of the more measured criticisms that have appeared in print.)
“The Thing (From Another World)� (1951) was his feature directing debut, and although he went on to direct a handful of other features and several hundred hours of television, nothing he did afterward quite approached that film’s brilliance.
Nyby had served Hawks admirably on a number of films--editing “To Have and Have Not,� “The Big Sleep� and “Red River�--but the relationship was clearly that of protege and mentor. Hawks directed “The Thing,� the argument goes, and gave Nyby the credit; this was Hawks� way of thanking him for salvaging other editors� botched first cut of “Red River� (an effort that earned Nyby an Oscar nomination) and launching him on a new career as director.

Nyby was credited as the director but many of the actors on set considered Hawks the director and some have characterized Hawks the "director on the side." One actor said Hawks directed every scene except one. Cinephiles can see Hawks' fingerprints all over the film. You can read the Wikipedia entry for the film or the article above to learn more.

To my mind the evidence that Howard Hawks was the true director of The Thing is fairly minimal and circumstantial. The insistence by some of the film’s aficionados that Hawks rather than Nyby directed reminds me a bit of those “anti-Stratford� theorists who, because of his relatively humble origins, are skeptical of William Shakespeare’s authorship.

Rosemarie wrote: "I found it hard to tell the characters apart."
I agree! I think the author succeeded at creating tension but the story seems to be more about conveying the concept of an evil alien taking over.
I agree! I think the author succeeded at creating tension but the story seems to be more about conveying the concept of an evil alien taking over.

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This Wildside Press edition is the only ebook version of this classic story authorized by the Campbell estate.