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Brandy wrote: "Hello everyone!

I am offering my services as a beta reader. Just for background:

I am a freelance ghostwriter with two Masters degrees (and another one I will finish in the fall). I am also a lib..."

Hi, Brandy! Would you be interested in Beta Reading an 80,000 word Adult Sci-Fi Horror novel?

The premise is essentially Alien if Ripley was the captain and chose to not go toward the distress signal. My main character Niamh Blainey is a captain of a commercial cargo ship that picks up a distress beacon in the outer rim and initially chooses to ignore it when they discover it's coming from what they assume to be an alien vessel. Unfortunately, her first officer who is also her sister decides they should check it out. Niamh wakes up the next day and finds half of her crew missing and has to go find them on the Alien vessel.

I'm pretty casual when it comes to beta
reading. Any and all criticism is appreciated: The Good, The Bad, and The Ugly.
Please tell me what works, what doesn't, what you like, what you don't like,
any and all suggestions, how the story flows, grammar mistakes, etc.

I'd like comments back to
me by May 9th, but I understand that April is Tax Month and Life Happens. If
you decide you'd like to, just keep me updated, and let me know if I need to be
flexible on the reading time.

Brandy wrote: "Hello everyone!

I am offering my services as a beta reader. Just for background:

I am a freelance ghostwriter with two Masters degrees (and another one I will finish in the fall). I am also a lib..."

Hey Brandy!
I'm currently looking for beta readers for my book titled "MAXUM." It is a YA romantasy. Here is the blurb :)

Advice: Never fall in love with your best friend’s girlfriend.

Seventeen-year-old, confident Zach Taylor was born and raised in poverty in the small town of Maryfield, Oregon. As the bank is about to foreclose on his mother’s home, he hatches a plan to get funding for a Memory Insertion company that his father tried to start before he died.

Zach’s friend Jason sneaks him into a secret event called the Masked Investor, held at an abandoned mansion on the outskirts of town. But something is off that night. First, a brown-masked investor says the word “human� like it's an insult. Then, Zach finds Jason having a whispered discussion in a conservatory “off-limits� to guests. He thinks the strangeness of the night is over when he arrives home, but Jason texts him a dropped pin—along with three of his friends—asking to meet on the same gravel road as the Masked Investor.

By the time Zach arrives� Jason’s car is at the bottom of a cliff.

That’s when Sarah lays her head on Zach’s shoulder.

But it was wrong. He shouldn’t have feelings for her.

For Jason’s girlfriend.