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Hi everyone

I’m looking for volunteers to read the first few chapters of my upcoming sci-fi/alternate history story, The Ronin, and give me feedback. The story blends cyberpunk and samurai themes, set in a futuristic, reimagined 17th-century Japan. Just honest opinions to help me improve the beginning of the story.

Luke wrote: "Hi everyone

I’m looking for volunteers to read the first few chapters of my upcoming sci-fi/alternate history story, The Ronin, and give me feedback. The story blends cyberpunk and samurai themes,..."

I might be interested. I love doing beta reading, even though sci-fi isn't really my thing. How many pages? If you want to respond, you can send me a message through Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ, or respond here.

Dwayne wrote: "Luke wrote: "Hi everyone

I’m looking for volunteers to read the first few chapters of my upcoming sci-fi/alternate history story, The Ronin, and give me feedback. The story blends cyberpunk and sa..."

Hey thanks for answering.

I only want around the first 3 chapters look at for now, as I am still going over the rest of the story again, but chapter 1 is only 4 pages, chapter 2 is about 5 pages, but chapter 3 is the long one with 26 pages. does that sound ok with you?

I did try and message you, on goodreads but it was saying error user not found.

Luke wrote: "I did try and message you, on goodreads but it was saying error user not found."

I wonder if you need to enable messages or something. I looked at your profile and I don't see a way to message you.

Luke wrote: "I did try and message you, on goodreads but it was saying error user not found."

I've sent you a friend request. NO PRESSURE but if you accept it, I'll see if I can message you then.

I did accept it, so let's hope that works.

Luke wrote: "I did accept it, so let's hope that works."

It did. I messaged you my email address.