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Hi everyone!

This is my first time seeking beta readers, and my first attempt at writing a full novel. I've written fanfiction before, but this is my first fully original work, and I’d love some fresh eyes on it.

I’ve re-read my story so many times that I’m starting to lose perspective (relatable, right? 😅), so I’m looking for honest feedback on pacing, character dynamics, and overall readability. I'm already working on eliminating redundancy, so that’s on my radar, but I’d love insight into anything that feels off or needs refining.

If you're interested in reading a contemporary romance with a paranormal twist, I’d be incredibly grateful for your thoughts. Thanks so much!