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Hi everyone. I just completed this short story of a serial killer trying to alleviate his inability to find a good victim by writing about his killings.

What I’m looking for:
Does it seem real?
Can it really be from a real serial killer and if not, why?
Is he someone that deserves any sympathy?
Is it too over the top?
Is something missing?

Thank you