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I have a completed novel, approximately 111,000 words. Category is chick lit/women's fiction. Trigger warnings included for domestic violence, SA, etc., so this may not be your thing if that's a problem. I am primarily looking for general feedback, but line edits and summary suggestions would also be greatly appreciated. I'm happy to send the first couple chapters, then the whole thing upon request. Thank you in advance for considering my work!

Blurb:

A young woman’s desperate quest to escape her domestic hell launches her into a glittering world of money, sex, and privilege. But when Gemma’s past comes back to haunt her in brutal fashion, she must find a way forward for herself and her young daughters.

Jesse is a police detective who is determined to keep Gemma safe, and preferably by his side, at any cost. Jackson, the son of a wealthy and powerful family, feels the same. Tempers and egos flare as they compete for Gemma’s heart.

Through heartbreak, trauma, and betrayal, Gemma is determined to find a way to step into her own power and control her destiny on her own terms.

Thank you, Hayley! I'll send you the first four chapters now. Looking forward to your feedback.