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Hello,

I'm entering a writing competition that only requires the first chapter and would love some help refining it!! It is only 3k words.

I would love advice on the hook, the prose, and how invested you are in the rest of the story.

Thank you so much!

Hi Vyn,
I'd love to beta read your story, feel free to contact me on my Fiverr () or email me [email protected]