Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ

Hi everyone, I was wondering what you think about my story's: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
(This I am going to do a revise, so I will fix all the mistakes. And it might be a little different so keep checking)

thanks

I read forest and I'll read more ASAP!! like the idea a lot!

thanks

Just to warn you, 'Forest' fell apart near chapter 20 to me. So sorry if it seems like it's kind of odd

ok, I made an other chapter on Wast Land

One time when I was walking to the Hard Rock (in DC) it was like almost nine at night and this guy comes at my friends and me yelling "THIS IS A THREAT FROM THE NSA! THE PEN. . .IS MIGHTIER THAN THE SWORD!!" And he kept shouting this at us until we started to walk away where he then changed everything. "YOU ASSHOLES! THE PEN IS MIGHTIER THAN THE SWORD!"

Yup. I thought I would share that with you because of your screen name, it just made me think of it. But that story I told you, I was pretty freaked out. The guy even had a pen on him.

Lou wrote: "One time when I was walking to the Hard Rock (in DC) it was like almost nine at night and this guy comes at my friends and me yelling "THIS IS A THREAT FROM THE NSA! THE PEN. . .IS MIGHTIER THAN T..."

ummmm ok, thanks for sharing

It's crazy living in a city haha XD Dunno if you do or not though.

City life, FTW.

yep, living in the city sounds crazy

Ok I just redid Wast Land, I felt like it was a little boring. It also had a lot of mistakes
I will post more chapters once I get the time

Chapter 2 of Wast Land is ready

^_^

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

my new story: The Climb

thanks

Ingrid wrote: "Yea. I too am trying to complete all of my unfinished or unrevised stories, all of which I have started and have barely finished:(

You are a good writer. Keep up the good work."

I don't like it when that happens, it gets annoying.

Thanks :)

Ok, a few months ago I entered a home school contest for writers and I sent in my short story. It's the same one that I already showed before but now it's completely proofread (even has a better ending!):

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...

This mini short story is about war, and how good things come from the worst of events.
Tell me what you think and like if you like it! :)

what's N.S.A writing mean? o.O

its my name.