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message 51: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 30, 2008 02:40PM) (new)

i like happy endings when im reading, but they are SO hard to write!


message 52: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i know. XD it's so easy to just write "and then everybody died" than it is to come up w/a way to end it happily. lol



message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

yep. like when i write stories i always write stinkish endings cuz they are just so hard!!!!!! BLAH!!!!!!!!!! GggggggggggggggggggRRRRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr


message 54: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah .... endings are hard. i never like my endings. i always cry. haha. okay, i take that back. i only cried when i was writing the end of soul stealer. and when i was writing the end of reborn, although it wasn't exactly sad. just ... part of it seemed sad. idk; it was complicated. i was like "OMG WHY AM I CRYING?!" lol


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

i totally know! Ggggggggggrrrrrrrr


message 56: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
XD


message 57: by [deleted user] (new)

☺☻


message 58: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I disagree...for me, it's easier to write a happy ending, harder to write a sad ending. I mean, a GOOD sad ending. Of course it's easy to write a sad ending, but an actual GOOD one is another matter.

I personally like reading happy endings, but writing sad endings. I don't know why, it's just that way. Plus, if I write a happy ending, I feel like nothing really has changed from beginning to end, so that there's no point. That's why its hard for me to write happy endings. But when I read happy endings, I like them. :D lol.

And yeah, I really like bittersweet endings. Where it's half sad, half happy. Those are the ones I write usually. Like, the main conflict got worked out, but the main character had to sacrifice something to solve the conflict, or had to pay the price for the solution. That's how it ends for me every time. LOL XD


message 59: by Brigid � (last edited Dec 09, 2008 05:57PM) (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
Yeah bittersweet endings are probably the best. I guess it's either easier to just have either a "happily ever after" ending or a "doom and gloom; everybody dies" ending, and hardest to have something in between.


message 60: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Not really. I mean, it's actually hardest to have a happy ending because life doesn't work that way, and we all know it. Also, it can be difficult to have a finality to the story unless you do it right.

I mean, there are basically 3 endings (epilogues and sequels tend to blur the boundries, but whatever)

I'm not talking about the happy, bittersweet, and depressing, I'm talking about three different ones:

MC/everybody dies. The story stops. Nothing can happen afterwards, because they are, you know, dead.
Then there is the everything continues as it it (aka, the happily ever after, but it doesn't always have to be happy). The story comes to a conclusion, and life falls into a definite pattern, and there are no more adventrues. Unless, of course, adventures are normal for your characters.
And then there is the life continues on as it normally should thing. This usually applies to books with children or teenagers as the main characters, as they are the ones who would change. What happens with these endings is simple: the problem comes to a resolution, and then the main character slowly grows up, just as a normal person would.

And that's it. most endings can fit into those three categories. There are a few exceptions, particularly in the stories that last for, oh, twenty or thirty books, and are a series written just to make money. But just ignore those ones. :D


message 61: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
Well, what I meant was that it can be easy to have a happy ending if you, say, solve all the problems by having a magic fairy come down out of the sky and magically fix everything. You know what I mean?


message 62: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (last edited Dec 09, 2008 06:29PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Yeah, true. But its hard to write a GOOD happy ending, because its hard not to make the happy endings cheesy. Then again, its hard to write a good sad ending too, because you have to avoid it being TOO depressing and full of tragedy, because then it's not good either. That's why I think bittersweet endings are the best. Although, all endings in general are hard...


message 63: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
true. i hate endings. i always hate my endings. aaaggggh. i don't even want to think about it ... O.o


message 64: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
omg i hate endings too!! i hate my endings especially!! i always end it the same way, it drives me crazy. ever story ive ended always ends in a bittersweet way, with the main characters getting over the conflict, but suffering some kinda loss because of it. even my nano ending is going to be like that!! ugh. i think i'm going to challenge myself to write a happy ending once...


message 65: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i hate the end of soul stealer. oh my god. it's, like, gut-wrenching. maybe that's supposed to be a good thing. i have no idea. i just know that every time i read it i start crying and i feel like such an evil person. but i can't change it cuz the uber-depressing ending was kinda inevitable.

although in a way it was sort of happy in a romeo-and-juliet kind of way.

urrgghh idk.


message 66: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (last edited Dec 09, 2008 06:43PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
awww man, now you're making me wish i read it more!! *sniffs and then starts bawling* WHY did you delete it before i could read it?!?! NOOOOO!!!! :'(

lol, i have an ending like that...whenever i think of the ending that im going to write for my nano story, i always cringe because i think it's going to be really cheesy. but i can't think of any other way to end it. ugh.


message 67: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
I'M SORRY!!!! but you didn't miss much. basically: everybody dies! the end!
WAAAH I'M SORRY EVA AND DAVID I'M SORRY DON'T ATTACK ME AND KILL ME IN MY SLEEP!!!!


message 68: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
oooh nozies...im sure it isnt as bad as you make it seem, though. thats what writers all do (me included); we're our own worst critics.


message 69: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah ...
well i guess i could email i to you. i trust that you're not an evil plagiarizer ... XD but i apologize that it sucks ...


message 70: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
oh cool, could you? i could give you constructive critism. (except, just warning you; i think the kind of constructive critism you're going to get from me will be the kind that goes "OOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGG TTTTTTHHHAAAAAAT WAS AMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGG!!!!" just a precaution) lol XD


message 71: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
okay i'll do it right now ...


message 72: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
yay XD

except..i might not be able to read it for a bit, since im procrastinating my hw and probably should get to it...lol XD


message 73: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
mmkay ... well i sent it anyway. have fun. you have, like, half of it left to read, btw. lol


message 74: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
oh, okay, thanks!! ill read it when i have time. yay, now im excited!! XD


message 75: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller cool.


message 76: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller that just felt like the thing to say, you know?


message 77: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
lol


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


message 79: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
yeah...lol XD soul stealer was amazing. XD don't listen to brigid, people. the ending was amazing, NOT bad like she said. XD


message 80: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller I'm glad you liked her ending even if she didn't. The story I'm writing right now is irritating me so much.... UGH!!!!!!! WHY WHY WHY????????????


message 81: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
okay but i axed the epilogue. i read a few times and i was like "I HATE THIS!!! DELETE!!! BWA HAHA!!!" So, bye-bye epilogue. It's a lot better now. More depressing, maybe, but better. Actually, idk. I don't think the epilogue made a difference. Well, it's gone now.


message 82: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
i know, i'm glad you axed the epilogue...it makes the ending better, more mysterious, and leaves more of it up to the reader, which i like. plus, i like the last line now...its very powerful and dramatic. lol. XD


message 83: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
ah yes. tis a good last sentence. a depressing last sentence, but it sounds cool ...


message 84: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
yes it does. woohoo!! XD


message 85: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller --------------------
good to know


message 86: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i'm gonna edit soul stealer over vacation i think ... gaaah it's gonna be so hard ...


message 87: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller I hate editing. It's probably the worst part.


message 88: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
ugggh. tell me about it.


message 89: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments I know! I just re-started editing Finding My Father, it's driving me crazy!


message 90: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
you know... when I'm down,

I SIMPLY REMEMBER MY FAVORITE THINGS AND THEN I DON'T FEEL SO BAD!!!1


I love that song and I'm listening to it right now. :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D


message 91: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! I � that song. My fav. from the movie. �


message 92: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
yeah, but the version i was listening to is sung by a dude.


message 93: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Oh. Really? That's weird. I can't imagine anyone but Julie Andrews (WOW I ACTUALLY REMEMBERED HER NAME!!!) singing that song.


message 94: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments I'm gonna laugh when I got the name wrong. XD


message 95: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Nope. You have no reason to laugh. Because you got her name right.

That's how I felt the first time I heard a dude singing the song.


message 96: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Nope. You have no reason to laugh. Because you got her name right.

That's how I felt the first time I heard a dude singing the song.


message 97: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Wow, you must have felt VERY strongly about that.

YES! I got it right!

Is it awkward?


message 98: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
umm, it was quite bizarre the first time. but now it's just like YAYS I LOVE THIS SONG AND I DON'T CARE WHO IS SINGING IT!!!!!


message 99: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments HA HA. Well, at least it's not a BAD thing.


message 100: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
INDEED!!! NOW LET'S HAVE A RANDOM PARTY!!!


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