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I have read it but it was so short and it left me cold. I think you pretty much covered it in your post:)

Bring on the next story - hopefully it will be better.

Yuck, a nasty, pointless story with no substance. I didn't even get a chance to get interested in the characters, or care about them at all. Shan't be reading any more like that !

Kerry wrote: "Yuck, a nasty, pointless story with no substance. I didn't even get a chance to get interested in the characters, or care about them at all. Shan't be reading any more like that !"

I agree - the new story is much better but needs some emotional detachment from the offset!