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Okay, so here is the things I need help w/:

1. Okay, so the resurrecters make special nail polish that makes people come back to life. What should be the main conflict:

A. When they come out w/ a new nail polish that is clear, (to be more inconspicuous) and it kills people instead of bringing them back from the dead OR

B. It turns out that it was never really a job, it was just so that they bad guy could have an army of dead people.


One of them is about to come up in the story, but I can't figure out which! HELP ME!

hmmmm...you could combine the two somehow. idk, im conflustered.

i like A...

That is the problem! There isn't a way to combine them! Its horrible! Just PICK one! I NEED to write more!!!

that was to Mimi, btw.


A? kay, ill put that on the tally :P

uh, wait, how is there no way to combine them?

why would he come out w/ a new nail polish that kills people when he wants an army?

it could be an accident

but if they are brought back to life, they arent really dead are they??

no, they aren't. but the clear nail polish would kill them

exactly.

what?

um he could have made the nail polish to be more inconspicuous and give them more power because he wanted an army of dead people but it it brings them back to life and sets them on killing everything in sight or something like that idk...

so the clear nail polish would fix the mistake and kill all the dead army, but they have to make it themselves in a certain amount of time, otherwise they cant be killed??

okay, i think taht make sense

you think??

Or, what if they made the clear nail polish so it killed people, but then they woke up a week later?

Then there could be his dead army!

I like the first one.

How about the hero of your story finds out that the bad guy is making his own dead army, so he creates the clear nail polish to try to foil the bad guy's plans?

All of the above sound like good ideas, but if you still think that the two cant be combined, then i would seriously go for option B.

:|

Hmmm..I dont really have a comment....

I'm fairly certain that he's solved the problem.

lol Seth

wow i miss nanowrimo ... XD