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Help!- Can't Write More Of Nano Story Until This Is Resolved

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message 1: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
Okay, so here is the things I need help w/:

1. Okay, so the resurrecters make special nail polish that makes people come back to life. What should be the main conflict:

A. When they come out w/ a new nail polish that is clear, (to be more inconspicuous) and it kills people instead of bringing them back from the dead OR

B. It turns out that it was never really a job, it was just so that they bad guy could have an army of dead people.


One of them is about to come up in the story, but I can't figure out which! HELP ME!


message 2: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) hmmmm...you could combine the two somehow. idk, im conflustered.


message 3: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
i like A...


message 4: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
That is the problem! There isn't a way to combine them! Its horrible! Just PICK one! I NEED to write more!!!


message 5: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
that was to Mimi, btw.


A? kay, ill put that on the tally :P


message 6: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) uh, wait, how is there no way to combine them?


message 7: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
why would he come out w/ a new nail polish that kills people when he wants an army?


message 8: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1074 comments it could be an accident


message 9: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) but if they are brought back to life, they arent really dead are they??


message 10: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
no, they aren't. but the clear nail polish would kill them


message 11: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) exactly.


message 12: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
what?


message 13: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1074 comments um he could have made the nail polish to be more inconspicuous and give them more power because he wanted an army of dead people but it it brings them back to life and sets them on killing everything in sight or something like that idk...


message 14: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) so the clear nail polish would fix the mistake and kill all the dead army, but they have to make it themselves in a certain amount of time, otherwise they cant be killed??


message 15: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
okay, i think taht make sense


message 16: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) you think??


message 17: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Or, what if they made the clear nail polish so it killed people, but then they woke up a week later?

Then there could be his dead army!


message 18: by Catamorandi (new)

Catamorandi (wwwgoodreadscomprofilerandi) I like the first one.


message 19: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
How about the hero of your story finds out that the bad guy is making his own dead army, so he creates the clear nail polish to try to foil the bad guy's plans?


message 20: by Josh (new)

Josh | 83 comments All of the above sound like good ideas, but if you still think that the two cant be combined, then i would seriously go for option B.


message 21: by J. (new)

J. | 9 comments :|


message 22: by Alhana (new)

Alhana | 8 comments Hmmm..I dont really have a comment....


message 23: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
I'm fairly certain that he's solved the problem.


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

lol Seth


message 25: by Brigid � (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
wow i miss nanowrimo ... XD


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