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Hi JackieI cast a quick eye over your romance Halfway There, as you can see your have a few grammatical, punctuation and spelling errors, starting with the title, halfway is one word. Sorry but it stopped me from continuing.
I suggest you go through the piece with the aid of microsoft works and a dictionary, put the errors right and then put it back up and I will be happy to read it through again.
I could have just done what other people may do and do nothing other than 'great piece' or 'keep up the good work' but that won't help you in the long run.
The errors I found were all in the first couple of paragraphs mostly lack of apostrophes or the same in the wrong place. If you look on word on tools and scroll down to options you will find all kinds of stuff to help with grammar problems and the Flesch Kincaid readability study switch it on it will help, I promise.
Talk to you later! Sarah
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