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Hi all! Here is some of my writing. In the middle of writing a fantasy trilogy (possibly more books) :) Critique is wanted. http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...

I read Heavenly waves of Gravehook: It was very good. There are just a few things I would suggest: Maybe work on description a little more. I know, it is a short story, and it had some, but just maybe if it had a tiny bit more. Other than that I loved it. It was a very good story! xD

Ali wrote: "I read Heavenly waves of Gravehook: It was very good. There are just a few things I would suggest: Maybe work on description a little more. I know, it is a short story, and it had some, but just ma..."

Thanks! :) I didnt work on it long been busy with my book :) was just something short for people to read :)

I really liked it, and other people might not think that way. It was just my opinion. It was really, really good. I enjoyed it!

:D thanks!

Your stories are stories have great ideas. They aren't as long as they could've been. The potential for the stories could be packed full of description and words. Otherwise, I loved them. Especially the Heartful Harp.

God's Swordmaiden (lerv) Sam Mikulak wrote: "Your stories are stories have great ideas. They aren't as long as they could've been. The potential for the stories could be packed full of description and words. Otherwise, I loved them. Especiall..."

Thank you! My main books arent on the website :) I just post short stories. :)

Cool! If your books are on a Word document or something, you should definitely post them.

God's Swordmaiden (lerv) Sam Mikulak wrote: "Cool! If your books are on a Word document or something, you should definitely post them."

I was saving them for publication :) I just published a new short story and I'm posting a poem now

Cool! Can you give a small excerpt or description of your novel?

sure thing I had a poem for it published so no one could take it (phew) here it is The Final Guardian:

I have tons of poems from my novels on there :) I thought itd be good so my ideas wouldnt be stolen I hope you enjoy it! Illustrations are by me but the final guardian one isnt finished yet :3

Here is the link to the other novel poems: The Guardian of Grasash:

DragonHeart:

The Dark Hunters:

Nice, Luxterra. Would that mean Light Earth in Latin? I like the plot also. All in all well written and creative. Keep working!

God's Swordmaiden (lerv) Sam Mikulak wrote: "Nice, Luxterra. Would that mean Light Earth in Latin? I like the plot also. All in all well written and creative. Keep working!"
Why yes it does :) Most of the names are in latin or greek :) Thank you! Its almost done and almost ready for publication :) The other novels I will start planning more when I'm finally done with that series