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Demon in the Machine
At the height of Britain's Industrial Revolution, steam power and magic join forces to create wonders the world has never seen. But those wonders have a dark side--one that will soon force a reckoning few could have anticipated.
Half-demon Briar is content with her structured life as an archivist, a far cry from the chaos of her background and upbringing. Briar's simple and predictable existence is rocked when she discovers something sinister powers one of the grand, new inventions of her era.
Isabella Castel, the only daughter of Viscount Sherard, is far from the brainless socialite she pretends to be. Isabella is everything Briar is not: passionate, creative and impulsive, but with secrets to rival even Briar's own. Two more unlikely partners should not exist, yet if the women cannot find a way to work together, they will lose far more than their reputations.
Can a half-demon and a debutante work past their secrets before all hell breaks loose?
Genre: Fantasy, Steampunk
Editor: Medora MacDougall
Cover Designer: Sandy Knowles
Half-demon Briar is content with her structured life as an archivist, a far cry from the chaos of her background and upbringing. Briar's simple and predictable existence is rocked when she discovers something sinister powers one of the grand, new inventions of her era.
Isabella Castel, the only daughter of Viscount Sherard, is far from the brainless socialite she pretends to be. Isabella is everything Briar is not: passionate, creative and impulsive, but with secrets to rival even Briar's own. Two more unlikely partners should not exist, yet if the women cannot find a way to work together, they will lose far more than their reputations.
Can a half-demon and a debutante work past their secrets before all hell breaks loose?
Genre: Fantasy, Steampunk
Editor: Medora MacDougall
Cover Designer: Sandy Knowles
340 pages, Paperback
First published June 14, 2018
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June 6, 2018
4.5 Stars. This was a really good steampunk/paranormal romantic adventure book. This is the second book I have read by MacTague. I have realized that I really like her writing style. She also has an unbelievable imagination which really helps. If you are a steampunk of paranormal fan, I think you will enjoy this.
During England’s Industrial Revolution magic, from the demon realm, is being used to create better inventions. But that kind of magic comes with a price, one that the world might just have to pay. The only thing standing in the way is two women hell bent on stopping it. Briar, an archivist and Isabella, an inventor know they must do everything to fight the evil coming their way. Can these two women, both hiding huge secrets, save England and possibly the world?
I’m a steampunk story fan and this just fit that bill perfectly. This was filled with great inventions, dirigibles and annoying women’s clothing. I also enjoyed how MacTague seamlessly joined the magic and paranormal aspects perfectly together. I know I’m being pretty vague here but I don’t want to give any spoilers away.
I loved the two main characters. Both women have the side that society sees, than they have their big secrets. The characters had dimension which I really appreciated. I easily connected with them and cared about what was going to happen to them.
Besides the great imagination MacTague has for the main storyline, I was impressed with the romance. A lot of times stories that involve saving the world, authors don’t spend as much time developing their characters feelings. These characters definitely had chemistry together. I loved watching them go from annoyance to actual attraction. The pace worked for me and the sex scenes were pretty well done too.
My only real small complaint is I felt the ending was a little abrupt. This is not a short story, I enjoyed every bit of the almost 350 pages, but still the ending wasn’t long enough. I want to know more. I’m hopeful the ending was like this because MacTague is planning a sequel. The characters stories feel like they are just beginning so I absolutely hope there will be another book.
If you are a steampunk or paranormal fan definitely grab this one. I don’t think you will be disappointed. Also, the book having a good romance is a nice bonus. I have wanted to read MacTague’s sci-fi series for almost two years now. This month I’m finally going to do it. Her writing is too good to miss.
An ARC was given to me by Bella, for a honest review.
P.S. For some reason the date of release on this books page says July. I know it is available on Bella's website on June 14th.
During England’s Industrial Revolution magic, from the demon realm, is being used to create better inventions. But that kind of magic comes with a price, one that the world might just have to pay. The only thing standing in the way is two women hell bent on stopping it. Briar, an archivist and Isabella, an inventor know they must do everything to fight the evil coming their way. Can these two women, both hiding huge secrets, save England and possibly the world?
I’m a steampunk story fan and this just fit that bill perfectly. This was filled with great inventions, dirigibles and annoying women’s clothing. I also enjoyed how MacTague seamlessly joined the magic and paranormal aspects perfectly together. I know I’m being pretty vague here but I don’t want to give any spoilers away.
I loved the two main characters. Both women have the side that society sees, than they have their big secrets. The characters had dimension which I really appreciated. I easily connected with them and cared about what was going to happen to them.
Besides the great imagination MacTague has for the main storyline, I was impressed with the romance. A lot of times stories that involve saving the world, authors don’t spend as much time developing their characters feelings. These characters definitely had chemistry together. I loved watching them go from annoyance to actual attraction. The pace worked for me and the sex scenes were pretty well done too.
My only real small complaint is I felt the ending was a little abrupt. This is not a short story, I enjoyed every bit of the almost 350 pages, but still the ending wasn’t long enough. I want to know more. I’m hopeful the ending was like this because MacTague is planning a sequel. The characters stories feel like they are just beginning so I absolutely hope there will be another book.
If you are a steampunk or paranormal fan definitely grab this one. I don’t think you will be disappointed. Also, the book having a good romance is a nice bonus. I have wanted to read MacTague’s sci-fi series for almost two years now. This month I’m finally going to do it. Her writing is too good to miss.
An ARC was given to me by Bella, for a honest review.
P.S. For some reason the date of release on this books page says July. I know it is available on Bella's website on June 14th.
August 22, 2018
Demon in the Machine is bursting with nail biting action, lots of Steampunk goodness, capable and clever women, crazy inventions and more demons than you can shake a stick at.
Lise MacTague delivered a strong and imaginative plot with plenty of intrigue and twists and even a nice hot romance to boot. You get your money’s worth in this 371 pages, 44 chapter magical extravangaza. It's a rollicking adventure!
“I am Briar, daughter of Carnélie, Fourth Minister of the Council of Lust.� How’s that for an introduction.
f/f
Themes: great world building, runes, Mirabilia Carriageworks, lots of imps, euronyms, polyglots and a few behemoths come to a messy end, and that’s the way we want it, Beruth Prince of Pain wants to end the world as we know it� all 4 feet of her, yes! there was a trip by dirigible, a half demon and a debutante walk into a bar�..
4.3 stars
Lise MacTague delivered a strong and imaginative plot with plenty of intrigue and twists and even a nice hot romance to boot. You get your money’s worth in this 371 pages, 44 chapter magical extravangaza. It's a rollicking adventure!
“I am Briar, daughter of Carnélie, Fourth Minister of the Council of Lust.� How’s that for an introduction.
f/f
Themes: great world building, runes, Mirabilia Carriageworks, lots of imps, euronyms, polyglots and a few behemoths come to a messy end, and that’s the way we want it, Beruth Prince of Pain wants to end the world as we know it� all 4 feet of her, yes! there was a trip by dirigible, a half demon and a debutante walk into a bar�..
4.3 stars
September 25, 2018
4.5 - Excellent steampunk adventure with plenty of heat!
Demon in the Machine by Lise MacTague is a steampunk adventure that takes place in Britain at the height of their Industrial Revolution. MacTague has crafted a world of magic and steampunk aesthetic round the realistic backdrop of London in the 1800’s. We see two protagonists, who begin the book as enemies of a sort but as the situation develops so too does their relationship to each other. Briar is a half-demon and content to live a quiet, nondescript life cataloging books and other documents for the Earl of Hardwicke. Isabella Castell lives nearly the opposite life, playing the part of a flashy and spoiled socialite while at night working diligently to preserve her family from ruin. The young women seem very opposite from each other but perhaps that is why it works so well. It’s only when their secrets are revealed to each other that they see how much they have in common.
Again, I love the imagery that MacTague creates for me, the way she puts me into each scene until my heart is pounding just like the main characters. I also like the fact that you don’t just need blood to work infernal magic, that the novel works under the notion that all bodily fluid is sacred. Briar licking her finger to write in her own saliva was an interesting addition and I think helps display the level of imagination and detail needed to make a good story great.
My only complaint (and it really isn’t) is that the ending was satisfying but slightly abrupt. There was no long wrap up, just a “hey, now that’s done� kind of vibe. I mean, Briar IS half succubus…a proper celebration would be nice. But anyway, because of the quality of the book and the ending, I’ll definitely be checking out the next novel in this series. Excellent job, and what an adventure!
This ARC was given to me in exchange for an honest review.
Demon in the Machine by Lise MacTague is a steampunk adventure that takes place in Britain at the height of their Industrial Revolution. MacTague has crafted a world of magic and steampunk aesthetic round the realistic backdrop of London in the 1800’s. We see two protagonists, who begin the book as enemies of a sort but as the situation develops so too does their relationship to each other. Briar is a half-demon and content to live a quiet, nondescript life cataloging books and other documents for the Earl of Hardwicke. Isabella Castell lives nearly the opposite life, playing the part of a flashy and spoiled socialite while at night working diligently to preserve her family from ruin. The young women seem very opposite from each other but perhaps that is why it works so well. It’s only when their secrets are revealed to each other that they see how much they have in common.
Again, I love the imagery that MacTague creates for me, the way she puts me into each scene until my heart is pounding just like the main characters. I also like the fact that you don’t just need blood to work infernal magic, that the novel works under the notion that all bodily fluid is sacred. Briar licking her finger to write in her own saliva was an interesting addition and I think helps display the level of imagination and detail needed to make a good story great.
My only complaint (and it really isn’t) is that the ending was satisfying but slightly abrupt. There was no long wrap up, just a “hey, now that’s done� kind of vibe. I mean, Briar IS half succubus…a proper celebration would be nice. But anyway, because of the quality of the book and the ending, I’ll definitely be checking out the next novel in this series. Excellent job, and what an adventure!
This ARC was given to me in exchange for an honest review.
Shelved as 'did-not-finish'
August 13, 2021DNF 42% in.
What annoyed me at this point was the ridiculous 'sex while another is recovering from injury' trope.
Beforehand I was already not understanding the sudden attraction that came about between the two. It seemed to come from nowhere, while they were working together, but with no real thoughts except arousing ones - which made the whole thing ridiculous, in my view.
Also it seemed to take me ages to slog through the very detailed plot, that I was interested in but somehow so very drawn out but in a way that seemed to suck any real fun or uniqueness out. It's like an amusing story that gets told by someone who is otherwise dour, so it no longer becomes entertaining.
Maybe I am just in a mood, all my reads lately are making me feel this way, so perhaps it is me that is the problem.
What annoyed me at this point was the ridiculous 'sex while another is recovering from injury' trope.
Beforehand I was already not understanding the sudden attraction that came about between the two. It seemed to come from nowhere, while they were working together, but with no real thoughts except arousing ones - which made the whole thing ridiculous, in my view.
Also it seemed to take me ages to slog through the very detailed plot, that I was interested in but somehow so very drawn out but in a way that seemed to suck any real fun or uniqueness out. It's like an amusing story that gets told by someone who is otherwise dour, so it no longer becomes entertaining.
Maybe I am just in a mood, all my reads lately are making me feel this way, so perhaps it is me that is the problem.
August 27, 2018
Oh my gosh I just love Isabella and Briar! Of course you know I had to have a good chuckle at the differences between both women because they are like oil and water yet they are awesome when they put their minds together! I got sucked into the world of powerful horseless carriages and magical inventions in the bustling city of London. I am really sad that the story had to end so I am going to keep my fingers crossed with the hope that a sequel to this awesome story will be on the horizon soon!
January 2, 2019
Loved this steampunk, save the world from demon take-over, adventure, romance.
It’s my first venture into the world of steampunk so I haven’t a clue what’s in this story that’s typical and what isn’t. Set in Victorian London we enter a fun world of contraptions, harvesting of demoniac energies and meet a great cast of characters. It took me a while to learn all the names and relations because characters are referred to by their given names and titled names (Joseph Castle/ Earl of Sheridan) interchangeably which put quite a strain in my ageing memory.
Briar is a half-demon succubus and an archivist of demoniac energies. Isabella is an aristocratic debutante but also a kickass inventor, engineer and cat burglar. I was torn throughout the book which one of them I fancy more. I still haven’t decided so I’m hoping there’s a sequel.
The book is mainly adventure. And secondly romance. The romance is incredibly tender and sweet (with some heat, too). A well-written and very imaginative book. A pleasure to read.
It’s my first venture into the world of steampunk so I haven’t a clue what’s in this story that’s typical and what isn’t. Set in Victorian London we enter a fun world of contraptions, harvesting of demoniac energies and meet a great cast of characters. It took me a while to learn all the names and relations because characters are referred to by their given names and titled names (Joseph Castle/ Earl of Sheridan) interchangeably which put quite a strain in my ageing memory.
Briar is a half-demon succubus and an archivist of demoniac energies. Isabella is an aristocratic debutante but also a kickass inventor, engineer and cat burglar. I was torn throughout the book which one of them I fancy more. I still haven’t decided so I’m hoping there’s a sequel.
The book is mainly adventure. And secondly romance. The romance is incredibly tender and sweet (with some heat, too). A well-written and very imaginative book. A pleasure to read.
May 3, 2022
Loved this! The details and story telling was perfect. I was never bored. The characters were really well written. I really could not get enough of this.
With how much I enjoyed this, I really expected to have so much more to say, but I’m just sort of speechless.
My only complaint is how suddenly the book ended. Abrupt as it was, is wasn’t bad. It was quite fitting really. I think I really just wanted more.
With how much I enjoyed this, I really expected to have so much more to say, but I’m just sort of speechless.
My only complaint is how suddenly the book ended. Abrupt as it was, is wasn’t bad. It was quite fitting really. I think I really just wanted more.
July 29, 2020
4.25 stars. This was the last book by MacTague that I hadn’t read yet, why did I wait this long? I guess I was savoring it for a nice quiet moment and yes, I had a blast reading it. MacTague’s imagination keeps amazing me. There is some cool worldbuilding, largely set in a London workshop and factory, with a steampunk vibe mixing mechanical and demonical powers (magic). And between all adventure there is a romance with good character development that could hold on its own without all the action.
It’s a rather long book and I did have a bit of trouble getting sucked into the story at the beginning. I didn’t understand Briars reasoning. Her character is kept vague for a long time which adds to the mystery surrounding her character, but because of this I did not grasp the danger. Later on, when I had a better insight in her character and the danger that loomed the story clicked for me.
Another thing was the ending. I noticed that more people experienced this, but I did not pay attention to the pages and while I thought to have at least another chapter the book was suddenly finished. Everything was wrapped up nicely so no complaints there, but I would have liked a bit of cooling down or something.
I can easily recommend this book if you’re looking for a book with lots of action combined with a steampunk vibe and magic.
It’s a rather long book and I did have a bit of trouble getting sucked into the story at the beginning. I didn’t understand Briars reasoning. Her character is kept vague for a long time which adds to the mystery surrounding her character, but because of this I did not grasp the danger. Later on, when I had a better insight in her character and the danger that loomed the story clicked for me.
Another thing was the ending. I noticed that more people experienced this, but I did not pay attention to the pages and while I thought to have at least another chapter the book was suddenly finished. Everything was wrapped up nicely so no complaints there, but I would have liked a bit of cooling down or something.
I can easily recommend this book if you’re looking for a book with lots of action combined with a steampunk vibe and magic.
July 2, 2018
Lise MacTague has written yet another incredible novel. This one involves Jolly Ol’England,magic and demons. The story is riveting. The action keeps your nose buried deep in the novel. The characters leapt off the page and buried deep into my imagination. I was riveted.
Demon in the Machine is a bit of a swashbuckler in the deep heart of the story. I applaud Ms MacTague for veering from her usual mysteries and intrigue.
I was not give this book as an arc.
Demon in the Machine is a bit of a swashbuckler in the deep heart of the story. I applaud Ms MacTague for veering from her usual mysteries and intrigue.
I was not give this book as an arc.
July 25, 2018
Wow. This was such an amazing book! It's def one of my favorites of the year! I can't believe I never heard of it before ( found it thanks to Lex Kent ). I REALLY hope there is a sequel!
This book is totally ok for YA readers tho there is some sex between the main characters. The demons are more like aliens that are badly behaved then the demons you read about in horror stories. Everyone is very polite :)
The story is a romance and it's steampunk and I guess it's a bit paranormal because, like the title says, there are demons. I really loved the two main characters in this book, Briar and Isabella. They were both unique, super likable and interesting. I thought the pace of the book was great and I was so interested it was hard to put this book down and go to sleep. The romance was very sweet and you could really feel the two girls getting closer to each other and becoming very emotionally attached.
The book is set in a steampunk Victorian England where they use demon magic to power some of their machines. The two main characters are Isabella, who is a young, gay socialite who also happens to be a jewel thief to support her family, and Briar who is young but very accomplished scholar who is secretly, a half-demon. The story is mostly about how the demon magic is being misused to the detriment of society and the girls are in the middle of that and have to figure it out. It's also also about the girls meeting, becoming attracted to one another, and ultimately starting a relationship. There is a happy ending but it's very abrupt which is the only bad thing. I REALLY hope there is a sequel!!
I really loved how unique and interesting the characters are. Their personalities were very different, not just from each other but from the usual characters in GYA romances. And even tho they had some quirks they were both warm and sweet and very likable.
I really liked that the romance is slow and smart and mature. There isn't the usual 'omg! am I gay?!?' or 'what will people think if I am with a girl?' stuff. I also like that there isn't any 'society versus gay' people stuff even in stuffy old Victorian England. Instead the girls just meet and are attracted to each other and start a relationship, on the dl admittedly, but still.
I also really though the world was great, or at least the circles the girls were in, and so I REALLY hope there is a sequel!!!
This book is totally ok for YA readers tho there is some sex between the main characters. The demons are more like aliens that are badly behaved then the demons you read about in horror stories. Everyone is very polite :)
The story is a romance and it's steampunk and I guess it's a bit paranormal because, like the title says, there are demons. I really loved the two main characters in this book, Briar and Isabella. They were both unique, super likable and interesting. I thought the pace of the book was great and I was so interested it was hard to put this book down and go to sleep. The romance was very sweet and you could really feel the two girls getting closer to each other and becoming very emotionally attached.
The book is set in a steampunk Victorian England where they use demon magic to power some of their machines. The two main characters are Isabella, who is a young, gay socialite who also happens to be a jewel thief to support her family, and Briar who is young but very accomplished scholar who is secretly, a half-demon. The story is mostly about how the demon magic is being misused to the detriment of society and the girls are in the middle of that and have to figure it out. It's also also about the girls meeting, becoming attracted to one another, and ultimately starting a relationship. There is a happy ending but it's very abrupt which is the only bad thing. I REALLY hope there is a sequel!!
I really loved how unique and interesting the characters are. Their personalities were very different, not just from each other but from the usual characters in GYA romances. And even tho they had some quirks they were both warm and sweet and very likable.
I really liked that the romance is slow and smart and mature. There isn't the usual 'omg! am I gay?!?' or 'what will people think if I am with a girl?' stuff. I also like that there isn't any 'society versus gay' people stuff even in stuffy old Victorian England. Instead the girls just meet and are attracted to each other and start a relationship, on the dl admittedly, but still.
I also really though the world was great, or at least the circles the girls were in, and so I REALLY hope there is a sequel!!!
July 1, 2020
This book was a strange rollercoaster. It started slow and I had a hard time investing in the characters. Their backstories were detailed and drawn out at the start, and it took a while for the characters to team up.
Once they did though, I became interested. Unfortunately the title is quite literal, and the characters are investigating an issue with cars and the answer is, well, the title of the book. That definitely took away a lot of the suspense.
The book ended very suddenly. I agree with another reviewer, it almost feels as though a chapter were missing. There is a huge battle and as soon as the battle concludes, while the characters are still laying injured surrounded by debris, the book ends. Unnerving, and left me feeling unsatisfied.
If you're looking for lesbian steampunk fantasy, you likely don't have many options and this could fit the bill. Otherwise, I'd recommend skipping.
Note: The font was really small. It made the book feel dense and slow-moving, perhaps more so than in reality.
Once they did though, I became interested. Unfortunately the title is quite literal, and the characters are investigating an issue with cars and the answer is, well, the title of the book. That definitely took away a lot of the suspense.
The book ended very suddenly. I agree with another reviewer, it almost feels as though a chapter were missing. There is a huge battle and as soon as the battle concludes, while the characters are still laying injured surrounded by debris, the book ends. Unnerving, and left me feeling unsatisfied.
If you're looking for lesbian steampunk fantasy, you likely don't have many options and this could fit the bill. Otherwise, I'd recommend skipping.
Note: The font was really small. It made the book feel dense and slow-moving, perhaps more so than in reality.
June 10, 2019
An excellent read. Steampunk lesfic with a dash of demon - how could you go wrong? Will write a longer review shortly - but for now I'll just say that I liked it a lot!
January 13, 2022
SAPPHIC BOOK BINGO: unusual job, non-human characters, not a romance, out of your comfort zone, possibly more categories.
I loved this book! I don't get the chance to read much Sapphic steampunk, but this had so much more. There was action, intrigue, jewel thievery, intelligent women, mechanical science, demons, magic, and wlw romance. I highly recommend it.
I loved this book! I don't get the chance to read much Sapphic steampunk, but this had so much more. There was action, intrigue, jewel thievery, intelligent women, mechanical science, demons, magic, and wlw romance. I highly recommend it.
July 18, 2018
Thanks to Karin Kallmaker‘s enthusiastic plug (plus that very fetching, very cool gothic cover & excerpt revealing a ninja nerd at play!) that pushed me curiosity all the way to reading this book, my first ever by Lise MacTague is in the bag! And was I glad I read this because�.WOW! Never read anything like it before! Whilst I’ve always been a big fan of the steampunk genre, my enjoyment of it was limited to films only as I never felt any inclination to read it. Until now.
“Demon in a Machine,� imho, is one hell of a rousing, rip-roaring, swashbuckling Victorian-era steampunk perfection filled with heart-pounding, action-packed scenarios, and a whirlwind of an adventure! The BEST thing about this is that it’s led by TWO phenomenal female characters. One, a half-demon hiding in plain sight, and the other, a gobsmackingly gifted, creative genius (with “catlike� AND ninja moves to boot!) hiding behind her airhead socialite public persona. I instantly dubbed her a “ninja nerd� because she is, really. And curiously, me mind kept screaming, “The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen!� as I read on. Well, it fits, particularly the steampunk feel, the outfits, the supernatural powers, the industrial-like design. I then retrained me mind to say “The League of Extraordinary GentleWOMEN!!� Yup. Briar and Isabella were a couple of gentlewomen. They were extraordinary. They fought like heroes. They were heroes. Superheroes. In my book.
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“Demon in a Machine,� imho, is one hell of a rousing, rip-roaring, swashbuckling Victorian-era steampunk perfection filled with heart-pounding, action-packed scenarios, and a whirlwind of an adventure! The BEST thing about this is that it’s led by TWO phenomenal female characters. One, a half-demon hiding in plain sight, and the other, a gobsmackingly gifted, creative genius (with “catlike� AND ninja moves to boot!) hiding behind her airhead socialite public persona. I instantly dubbed her a “ninja nerd� because she is, really. And curiously, me mind kept screaming, “The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen!� as I read on. Well, it fits, particularly the steampunk feel, the outfits, the supernatural powers, the industrial-like design. I then retrained me mind to say “The League of Extraordinary GentleWOMEN!!� Yup. Briar and Isabella were a couple of gentlewomen. They were extraordinary. They fought like heroes. They were heroes. Superheroes. In my book.
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July 14, 2018
This book is an exquisite foray into a world where bourgeoning technology mingled with daemonic magic threatens to shake industrial Britain to the core! It is a captivating story with interesting twists and complex and unforgettable characters. MacTague manages to weave together mystery, romance, paranormal, and steampunk elements into a heart-pounding tale harder to resist than the seductive wiles of a succubus. This book exudes strong writing, strong plot and strong women! Demon in the Machine is hands down my favorite book of the year, I highly recommend it!
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April 8, 2020
Unless i missed my mark... the author skipped a final chapter.
The rest of this book was great - but there was so much to be resolved.
The rest of this book was great - but there was so much to be resolved.
August 25, 2021
So this is far from the worst book I’ve ever read. And I want to be clear that I’m not saying the book is “bad� in any way. With the right reader, I’m sure this hits a lot of high notes (my review here is in the minority for sure), but this book was not for me. At all. And I want to be up front about that—that everything I write below has more to do with this book and me just not hitting it off.
Okay, I should probably state at the outset, to be fair, that I didn’t go into this reading experience expecting to love this novel (hurray for reading challenges that force us to read outside our comfort zones?). I have a pretty good idea of what I will probably like/not like and I would not ordinarily choose this book to read, but I’ve been surprised before (looking at you, One Last Stop) and the reviews were quite good. And also queer ladies! But nope. Definitely not for me.
It took forever to get any traction to the plot and the main characters, and once everything came together I just didn’t care? And all those descriptions of runes and imps� Meh. This would probably be better as a movie so that I don’t have to spend so much effort trying to imagine what any of that looks like, but it’s still a film I wouldn’t see. It’s also really long (at least for the genre; it’s not War and Peace long. Lol). And I didn’t get a super satisfying ending, which after pages and pages and days of torture was such a bummer.
So if you like the Streampunk aesthetic mixed with a heavy amount of magic and fantasy, with a queer-lady romance on the side, this may be for you. But apart from the ff romance, you literally could not write a novel I’d want to read less.
Okay, I should probably state at the outset, to be fair, that I didn’t go into this reading experience expecting to love this novel (hurray for reading challenges that force us to read outside our comfort zones?). I have a pretty good idea of what I will probably like/not like and I would not ordinarily choose this book to read, but I’ve been surprised before (looking at you, One Last Stop) and the reviews were quite good. And also queer ladies! But nope. Definitely not for me.
It took forever to get any traction to the plot and the main characters, and once everything came together I just didn’t care? And all those descriptions of runes and imps� Meh. This would probably be better as a movie so that I don’t have to spend so much effort trying to imagine what any of that looks like, but it’s still a film I wouldn’t see. It’s also really long (at least for the genre; it’s not War and Peace long. Lol). And I didn’t get a super satisfying ending, which after pages and pages and days of torture was such a bummer.
So if you like the Streampunk aesthetic mixed with a heavy amount of magic and fantasy, with a queer-lady romance on the side, this may be for you. But apart from the ff romance, you literally could not write a novel I’d want to read less.
November 9, 2018
Quite good in places, somewhat mediocre in others. The first half of the book is the strongest part, having a slow build of intrigue and romance that has a lot of little moments that slowly build into a collision around the halfway point which was very well written.
Unfortunately after that, the book loses steam and starts getting lost. The climax has an action focus that feels very out of place with the rest of the book, the middle of the book is riddled with plot detours that don't really matter, and showing events from the main antagonist's point of view felt very unnecessary, especially when one of the protagonists already has explicitly established an ability to read memories and emotions of objects that could've substituted for those chapters far better without breaking the flow of the primary characters.
However, even these asides have their own flair which works surprisingly well; in the hands of a less talented author I might have found the plot dull or cliched, but the author has a style that propels the story forward on the back of well written action moments and dialogue that strikes a good balance between natural and witty. There's an attention to detail, but restraint to prevent unnecessarily purple prose, and that style makes the world feel very lived in and the characters a part of it.
That cover art is baffling though and it's easily the worst part of the book, and when that's the worst thing about it, the rest is pretty good.
Unfortunately after that, the book loses steam and starts getting lost. The climax has an action focus that feels very out of place with the rest of the book, the middle of the book is riddled with plot detours that don't really matter, and showing events from the main antagonist's point of view felt very unnecessary, especially when one of the protagonists already has explicitly established an ability to read memories and emotions of objects that could've substituted for those chapters far better without breaking the flow of the primary characters.
However, even these asides have their own flair which works surprisingly well; in the hands of a less talented author I might have found the plot dull or cliched, but the author has a style that propels the story forward on the back of well written action moments and dialogue that strikes a good balance between natural and witty. There's an attention to detail, but restraint to prevent unnecessarily purple prose, and that style makes the world feel very lived in and the characters a part of it.
That cover art is baffling though and it's easily the worst part of the book, and when that's the worst thing about it, the rest is pretty good.
September 27, 2023
This was a pretty decent book. However there were a few misses that made it fall into an "average" score for me.
There was lots of action throughout the book and it felt like a constant adventure. The pacing of the romance between the two leads did not slow down the actual story and there was no silly breakup or miscommunication plot!
The biggest issue I had was that it did not feel like a Victorian Steampunk setting as much as I wanted. The few Victorian references felt very pop culture, even the language of the book itself was a bit too modern that I would forget the setting. The other gripe I had was there was that the mothers of the two leads were underutilized. One was despicable only seen two times and another was supposed to be nice but ended up overly controlling. The mothers' could have added a really interesting element but it was never pushed to that level.
A decent read but just missing a little more to make it really special in my mind. With some of the misses I do wonder if there was originally plans to make this a series. This book would be great for lesfic fans that do not like a lot of high fantasy like descriptions. There were fantasy elements but they were more succinct.
There was lots of action throughout the book and it felt like a constant adventure. The pacing of the romance between the two leads did not slow down the actual story and there was no silly breakup or miscommunication plot!
The biggest issue I had was that it did not feel like a Victorian Steampunk setting as much as I wanted. The few Victorian references felt very pop culture, even the language of the book itself was a bit too modern that I would forget the setting. The other gripe I had was there was that the mothers of the two leads were underutilized. One was despicable only seen two times and another was supposed to be nice but ended up overly controlling. The mothers' could have added a really interesting element but it was never pushed to that level.
A decent read but just missing a little more to make it really special in my mind. With some of the misses I do wonder if there was originally plans to make this a series. This book would be great for lesfic fans that do not like a lot of high fantasy like descriptions. There were fantasy elements but they were more succinct.
August 24, 2020
Rollicking good read. A slightly different paranormal take on Steampunk than I'm used to (and all the more refreshing for it having read a large number focusing on vampire/werewolves of late). I have one teeny irk, and thats the romance seemed to get started with such speed that I got whiplash (I may need to re-read the start again since I was pretty sure they hated each other right up to the moment they suddenly didn't).
The fusion of magic with steampunk in this book was something I'd not seen before and that had me hooked on the mechanics from the beginning. It was great to see that neither lead was a simpering stereotypical Victorian woman, and each had her own strengths (as well as vulnerabilities) that left me feeling there would be something for every woman reading.
It was one of those books I mourned the ending, feeling bereft - wanting to straight away download book 2, only to find there is no book 2... least, not yet (ever hopeful).
The fusion of magic with steampunk in this book was something I'd not seen before and that had me hooked on the mechanics from the beginning. It was great to see that neither lead was a simpering stereotypical Victorian woman, and each had her own strengths (as well as vulnerabilities) that left me feeling there would be something for every woman reading.
It was one of those books I mourned the ending, feeling bereft - wanting to straight away download book 2, only to find there is no book 2... least, not yet (ever hopeful).
September 1, 2020
Por mais que eu seja fã de sci-fi, sou mais de viagem no tempo e espaço. Então esse foi o primeiro steampunk que li.
O livro consegue equilibrar muito bem o romance das duas com a aventura do livro. É bem feita a transição entre uma ser forçada a trabalhar com a outra para fazer por vontade própria. E se apaixonar no meio do caminho.
Por Briar ser uma meia succubus, no começo fiquei sem saber o que era sentimento e o que era influência. Mas fica mais claro com o desenvolver da história (e é até fofo).
Como dito, foi meu primeiro steampunk, então não tenho muita referência. Mas acho que foi bem feito a maneira como a autora integra os demônios e as máquinas.
A motivação do vilão não é a mais forte, mas é até bem humana.
No geral, foi um bom livro, interessante e que te deixa intrigado.
O livro consegue equilibrar muito bem o romance das duas com a aventura do livro. É bem feita a transição entre uma ser forçada a trabalhar com a outra para fazer por vontade própria. E se apaixonar no meio do caminho.
Por Briar ser uma meia succubus, no começo fiquei sem saber o que era sentimento e o que era influência. Mas fica mais claro com o desenvolver da história (e é até fofo).
Como dito, foi meu primeiro steampunk, então não tenho muita referência. Mas acho que foi bem feito a maneira como a autora integra os demônios e as máquinas.
A motivação do vilão não é a mais forte, mas é até bem humana.
No geral, foi um bom livro, interessante e que te deixa intrigado.
July 7, 2023
4.5 stars
A very enjoyable historical romance, filled with mechanical inventions and demons. Strange elements to mix you might think, as I did before I read it, but Lise MacTague certainly mixes them effectively. The romance was nicely done if a little rushed and the plot was straightforward but interesting. One thing I didn't really like was the ending. I mean it was a good, solid ending but too abrupt. The story would have definitely benefitted from another chapter or an epilogue. Or even better another book. I'd really like it if that'd happen. Overall, a thoroughly entertaining story.
A very enjoyable historical romance, filled with mechanical inventions and demons. Strange elements to mix you might think, as I did before I read it, but Lise MacTague certainly mixes them effectively. The romance was nicely done if a little rushed and the plot was straightforward but interesting. One thing I didn't really like was the ending. I mean it was a good, solid ending but too abrupt. The story would have definitely benefitted from another chapter or an epilogue. Or even better another book. I'd really like it if that'd happen. Overall, a thoroughly entertaining story.
December 29, 2018
This was an amazing steampunk paranormal adventure with a goodbit of romance thrown in. The characters were well developed and just got better as the story went. The action just kept moving with twists and turns. My only complaint was there was no falling action. It went from climax to resolution. Otherwise it was a magnificant read.
February 27, 2019
Great story
Let's start out with the statement : I need more books with these two women! This was an absolutely fun lesbian bodice ripper steampunk story! I would have love a bit of a epilogue just to calm the rush of the climax. And there were some good climaxes...wink wink...nudge nudge.
Let's start out with the statement : I need more books with these two women! This was an absolutely fun lesbian bodice ripper steampunk story! I would have love a bit of a epilogue just to calm the rush of the climax. And there were some good climaxes...wink wink...nudge nudge.
May 30, 2019
Great story! I loved the steampunk/supernatural setting. The characters were engaging. I thought the end was a little abrupt. There were some minor loose ends but nothing major. I would really love to see a continuation of the story and see where these ladies go.
January 3, 2021
Yes, Steam punk.
Great characters, and a lovely new world superimposed on Industrial Age London.
I found the characters delightful and the roles interesting.
A prim and proper demon and a butch British socialite.
Great characters, and a lovely new world superimposed on Industrial Age London.
I found the characters delightful and the roles interesting.
A prim and proper demon and a butch British socialite.
December 1, 2020
I'm not overjoyed nevertheless it was a good engaging read.
February 23, 2020
4.2 Stars
Briar:
3rd Person POV. Half-demon. Structured. Reserved. Rigid. Brunette. Age: 20-30s
Isabelle Castel:
Daughter of Viscount Sherard. Socialite. Pretty. Impulsive. Intelligent. Brunette. Femme. Age: 20s-30s.
Romance:
Explicit. Opposites Attract.
Sub-genre:
Steampunk. Demons. Industrial Revolution.
Briar:
3rd Person POV. Half-demon. Structured. Reserved. Rigid. Brunette. Age: 20-30s
Isabelle Castel:
Daughter of Viscount Sherard. Socialite. Pretty. Impulsive. Intelligent. Brunette. Femme. Age: 20s-30s.
Romance:
Explicit. Opposites Attract.
Sub-genre:
Steampunk. Demons. Industrial Revolution.
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