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This Place
…If not for the memory
of this place-
with metal swings
echoing a to-fro song,
and slides white-hot
burning as you go along
down, sweet sweat
dripping
albeit, better than
sitting any where
claustrophobically cool;
as if: anything unnatural
could be toxin to my chi;
as if: the AC could drain me
of my energy; hot potentiality
need not be cooled;
that is: air pumped out sucks in
my productivity: to compose,
certainly, this epic explanation
of a summer home vacation-
then without any hesitation, I would go home.
As it is,
there is a charm about being
isolated from the consistent whirl
and buzz of constant corporation;
while here, in
this place, there is moderation;
that is: a sensation to clear
the senses, and be yourself
entirely free of expectation;
as it is: there is an ease
about dedication;
as if: one could reach the clouds
in supple strides,
to hide among the heavens,
where even drone planes cannot see;
at last, free to move, to breathe about
without fear; perseverance:
just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…�
This Place
and then there is:
MI Life Book 1
When you receive perfect love,
there is no fear;
when you experience no fear,
there is understanding;
when you submit to understanding;
there is discipline;
when you suffer for discipline,
there is wisdom;
when you labour in wisdom,
there is fulfillment;
when you thrive in fulfillment,
there is peace;
when you stand in peace,
there is perfect love.
MI Life Book 1
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Miranda Innaimo

"just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…�
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Books mentioned in this topic
This Place (other topics)MI Life Book 1 (other topics)
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