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Virtual | 435 comments Mod
Share your written reviews here.


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Kerry Taylor (KerryT2012) | 56 comments Sarwah Osei-Tutu
Asking authors and fellow ŷ to review my book please.


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Miranda Innaimo (miranda_innaimo) | 2 comments Two poetry books worth reviewing if you enjoy these lines:

This Place

…If not for the memory
of this place-

with metal swings
echoing a to-fro song,
and slides white-hot
burning as you go along
down, sweet sweat
dripping

albeit, better than
sitting any where
claustrophobically cool;
as if: anything unnatural
could be toxin to my chi;

as if: the AC could drain me
of my energy; hot potentiality
need not be cooled;
that is: air pumped out sucks in
my productivity: to compose,
certainly, this epic explanation
of a summer home vacation-

then without any hesitation, I would go home.

As it is,
there is a charm about being
isolated from the consistent whirl
and buzz of constant corporation;

while here, in
this place, there is moderation;
that is: a sensation to clear
the senses, and be yourself
entirely free of expectation;

as it is: there is an ease
about dedication;
as if: one could reach the clouds
in supple strides,
to hide among the heavens,
where even drone planes cannot see;

at last, free to move, to breathe about
without fear; perseverance:
just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…�

This Place

and then there is:

MI Life Book 1

When you receive perfect love,
there is no fear;

when you experience no fear,
there is understanding;

when you submit to understanding;
there is discipline;

when you suffer for discipline,
there is wisdom;

when you labour in wisdom,
there is fulfillment;

when you thrive in fulfillment,
there is peace;

when you stand in peace,
there is perfect love.

MI Life Book 1

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Thank you, and with infinite gratitude,
Miranda Innaimo


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Tina Wilson  (tinawilsonauthor) | 1 comments What a lovely pen!
"just an attitude of altitude
of adherence to the laws
written upon the heart;
where the Source of the start
concludes His finished work in me…�

Perfect free verse and similes...your form is impeccable. I'm new to GoodReads, as far as commenting on Poets. Looking forward to purchasing your works.


message 5: by Muriel (new)

Muriel Boven Hi 😊
Get a free copy of my self-published E-book from 22th till 25th of october 2023. Your one-way ticket to love is more than a poetry collection about love, trauma and womanhood. It’s a faithful companion on your journey towards healing and self-love. Enjoy here : ⭐️


message 6: by DesiMusing (new)

DesiMusing | 2 comments Good Afternoon,

I am looking for some review and thoughts on my poetry blog:


Please let me know your inner musings :)


message 7: by C. (new)

C. Martins | 2 comments Hello!

Anyone interested in reading and reviewing on Amazon my debut poetry chapbook titled Empty your cup?

It's a collection of rhyming poetry that is thought-provoking and questions habitual ways of thinking, including themes like the impact of memory on our thoughts and beliefs.

It was recently reviewed by Emma Lee on her blog:

Let me know and I'll send you a free copy of my book via email: [email protected].


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