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message 1: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Michelle | 450 comments Mod
So last night my writer friends and I (who have way too much time on our hands) came up with a random game. We would pick a random page number, paragraph, and sentence #, and then read it aloud from our in-progress novels. It was entertaining to us, at least haha

But I thought, hey, why not try and adapt this for the Bisky’s Scribblers? :D So, here’s how it’s gonna work:

Someone suggests a page number (and if you haven’t written that many pages take off a couple digets ;p), paragraph, and sentence number and then we all copy and paste that sentence.

For example, one would suggest page 234 (if you haven’t written that much, then perhaps pg 34, or 4), paragraph 3, sentence 2. If you only have like one sentence in that paragraph then just read that one, ya know adjust accordingly (not rocket science haha). Make sure to add the title of where you’re pulling the quote from :D

My friends and I were really entertained by this last night, but we could be just weirdo writers :x (<= good selling point? Xp) I’m interested to see if it’s as fun over the internet lol.

Okay! Here we go, I’ll start: Page 113, paragraph 3, last sentence (of that paragraph).


“You would never have allowed me to speak with you if you didn’t trust me.� :o => A line of dialogue, from ReiHana, book 1.


message 2: by Mark (new)

Mark Bordner " Admiral, we read a contact bearing aft, range four-two-five, and closing. " From The Mighty First, Episode 1, page 113, p-3, last sentence.


message 3: by Brian (new)

Brian Basham (brianbasham) | 390 comments Interesting game, but the app I use on my tablet doesn't give me page numbers. Maybe I'll do chapter numbers instead?


message 4: by Kamil (new)

Kamil | 187 comments Page 113, paragraph 2, sentence 4
Sille could see the pyre's raging flames become larger as the distance became smaller. Just one little push and she would join the king. = a small part from "The queenslayer"


message 5: by Kelly (new)

Kelly | 27 comments She could not trust the words Rayne spoke to her, but cradled in his arms, she would have to trust his strength for now.- From Enchantress's Daughter
page 13, paragraph 3, last sentence.


message 6: by Agustin (last edited Feb 28, 2014 11:11PM) (new)

Agustin Guerrero (agustinguerrero) | 37 comments "The last of these triplets was not expected to survive,� the machine answered. - From Tether

Page 17, paragraph 2, first sentence


message 7: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Michelle | 450 comments Mod
Oooh these are all so good ^^ I'm having a lot of fun with this lol. It's cool to see just random snippets of writings ^^

@Brian I suppose that would work, and then pick a random spot haha Or maybe you could use the percentages vs pg numbers?


Should we try a new random spot? Everyone look at page 77 (or 7, or 7%), last paragraph (on the page), 1st sentence :D What does it say?


"Ashley looked at him skeptically and thought, I’m not telling you my name." -ReiHana, book 1.


message 8: by Kelly (last edited Feb 28, 2014 11:56PM) (new)

Kelly | 27 comments "Ana had to bite back a scream, as the Captain gripped her hair, yanking it back to expose her throat to his knife." Enchantress's Daughter, book 2


message 9: by Mark (new)

Mark Bordner Sergeant Major Ford was satisfied with their progress, and decided that the next phase of their training could begin.


message 10: by G.G. (new)

G.G. (ggatcheson) | 1053 comments Mod
"We don't fare well 'round dogs."

Hmm that little game makes me re-think my book... every sentence taken out randomly sucks. :/


message 11: by Barbara (new)

Barbara Garren (barbara_garren) | 18 comments "I felt so out of place." Phasms: Infinite Potential


message 12: by Brian (new)

Brian Basham (brianbasham) | 390 comments "James is back on his feet shaking the cobwebs out of his head." - Virtual Wars

Good action spot in the book. That's from the first fight between the MC and antagonist. :D To make this game flow better we should have each person post their line, and then put a new number/spot. That way we don't have to wait for a new spot if we've already posted on the last one.

page/percent/chapter 10
Paragraph 3
sentence 2


message 13: by Carl (new)

Carl Darielle looked away from Eleni toward the wall and began to cry.


message 14: by Bisky (new)

Bisky Scribbles (bisky_scribbles) | 2536 comments Mod
She felt terror shiver over her, but her motherly instinct turned it into rage.


message 15: by Karey (new)

Karey Would it be tacky of me to pull rank and demand his gloves?

Chapter 15
Paragraph 1
Final Sentence


message 16: by Brian (new)

Brian Basham (brianbasham) | 390 comments � that Karey! I'll have to respond once I get home to my WIP!


message 17: by G.G. (new)

G.G. (ggatcheson) | 1053 comments Mod
After reading all of your wonderful sentences, it feels quite inadequate to post mine. :(
Oh well...

It slowly came back to me—the cell, the two men and their mysterious employer.

(From yet unpublished The Legacy: Destiny)


message 18: by David (new)

David Thirteen (davidjthirteen) "He delicately took the tire iron from her and continued on, heading for Market Street, like their sudden, intimate contact hadn't happened." -Mr. 8 P113 p3 last sentence.


message 19: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Michelle | 450 comments Mod
Woo! Okay, let's switch it up a little shall we? Now let's do

Page 75, Last paragraph, second sentence

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Mine:

"She stepped back somewhat startled by the man’s stare."

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These are all awesome ^^ @GG I love it ^^ So mysterious :3


message 20: by Brittany (new)

Brittany Willows (brittanymwillows) Totally forgot about this! I meant to join in a while back; looks like fun! c: Lovely stuff so far.


Here's mine from page 75:

"Her heart started to pound, and suddenly the shadows seemed far more intimidating."


message 21: by David (new)

David Thirteen (davidjthirteen) Love your game, Nicole!

"One of the card players was laughing."


message 22: by Karey (new)

Karey Brian wrote: "� that Karey! I'll have to respond once I get home to my WIP!"

I'm off to work, so if you DO respond, I won't see it until this evening. Thank you for the compliment!!!!


message 23: by Karey (new)

Karey G.G. wrote: "After reading all of your wonderful sentences, it feels quite inadequate to post mine. :(
Oh well...

It slowly came back to me—the cell, the two men and their mysterious employer.

(From yet unpu..."


Some sentences have the job of leading you into the next. Don't knock yourself. You're a very good writer :D


message 24: by Bisky (new)

Bisky Scribbles (bisky_scribbles) | 2536 comments Mod
“I have made it dirty inside the box.�


message 25: by Kelly (new)

Kelly | 27 comments "Rumors had cast him in an unsavory light and ruthless in every aspect of his life"


message 26: by G.G. (new)

G.G. (ggatcheson) | 1053 comments Mod
@Bisky That NEEDS more explanations! lol Are you talking about a cat? /ducks


message 27: by Nicole (new)

Nicole Michelle | 450 comments Mod
I picked a good one lol love it


message 28: by Bisky (new)

Bisky Scribbles (bisky_scribbles) | 2536 comments Mod
Haha :P It's so deliciously vague, isn't it >:3

(No its not about cats, LOL)


message 29: by Harmony (new)

Harmony Kent (harmonyk) "‘Okay, here goes.� Sarah took a deep breath in, and kept her eyes locked on the lake."

Page 75 ... last para

From 'Elemental Earth' which is my latest work.

This is a great game :3


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