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message 1: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments Hello everyone, I had this idea: We'd make up a story and we'd do that by adding a line or two to build that story (a little bit like 'the first word followers group') It could be a dialogue or... Anything. The challenge is to keep building up the story no matter how (challenging) it gets! :P In other words, GET CREATIVE!

For example:


Person1: "Mary loved books.."

Person2: "Who liked making friends.."

Person3: "Who had a dark side to her.."

Person4: "She kept it a secret.."


(Err.. Something like that :P)

I'll start: The house at the end of the street...


message 2: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments That was the rumor..


message 3: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments But it was false.....


message 4: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments that a guy and his family were eaten by his 4 year old children.....


message 5: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments Because the family was made up of chocolate.............


message 6: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments Because the children's uncle was Mr. Willy Wonka (owner of The Chocolate Factory)..


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

'Some people are sweeter than chocolate' said willy every time he ate one.


message 8: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments these rumors were all around that house but one brave girl set out...


message 9: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments The girl decided it was time to put all these rumors to an end!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

So,she planned to go to that house.


message 11: by Rao (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments She opened the door of the house and it made a cracking sound.


message 12: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments she went into the foyer but, there was something dark spilled on the floor...


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments as she entered someone said bhuuuuuuuuu :D


message 14: by Rao (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments Suddenly a bullet came from nowhere and she died. THE END :-D


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments and then people start clapping. play OVER XD


message 16: by Rao (last edited Feb 11, 2016 10:10AM) (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments NEW STORY:

Once there as a boy name Rao and he was awesome.


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments AND Then from nowhere suddenly a girl named preha throw a tomato on him :D


message 18: by Rao (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments He caught the tomato and ate it then he said thank you to Preha.


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments And then she made a disgusted face to him!!!! and strom out of the room !!


message 20: by Rao (new)

Rao Javed | 713 comments But he followed her and he started singing behind her:

"Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon To Main Zara Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha Paas woh aaye to chhooke main dekhoon zara."


message 21: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments Hmmm.. Looks like some people have given up.. The challenge was to keep the story going.. There wasn't going to be an end (at least not that soon!)


message 22: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments Rao wrote: "But he followed her and he started singing behind her:

"Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane Poochhoon To Main Zara Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha Paas woh aaye to chhooke main dekhoon zara.""


and then aeron comes from behind and says "stop being CHEESY RAO!!" :P


message 23: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments Then a film director who was directing this all the time said "RETAKE".


message 24: by Shahid (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments The Door behind the waterfall


message 25: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments Leads to Hogwarts


message 26: by Shahid (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments Flying Books in the forest


message 27: by Shahid (last edited Feb 12, 2016 02:59AM) (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments boy want's to use that hidden door but he can't fly


message 28: by Shahid (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments the door is up in the high mountain


message 29: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments The mountain being as high as the Mount Everest! ;)


message 30: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments There is a sale on the mountain,So every girl rushes to buy shoes.


message 31: by Shahid (last edited Feb 12, 2016 05:40AM) (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments the secrets of climbing the mountain is hidden in the waterfall


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Sheets of water, which curtain the secret, make an impermeable wall that can only be collapsed by a witty proverb.


message 33: by Ayesha (new)

Ayesha | 975 comments The witty proverb is (view spoiler).


message 34: by Shahid (last edited Feb 12, 2016 05:42AM) (new)

Shahid Rehman (shahidurrehman) | 11 comments three secret ways will be apply the by the three different people


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Different yet same -- all three should belong to the same family.


message 36: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments and the witch of the mountain selects triplet sisters to do this task...


message 37: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments The triplet sisters took ghoulish delight in the boy's troubles..


message 38: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments they all agreed to help him but played pranks on him again and again


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Despite of boy's funny accent, his voice was confident. It hid something great; something that not many can get.


message 40: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments The boy almost lost his will as he slipped and stumbled on the gleaming rocks that led to the waterfall, the rocks made all the more sleek and slippery by the triplet sisters as part of their brutal pranks..


message 41: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments all but one of the triplets recognized it and were compelled by it...


message 42: by Sia (new)

Sia (slayqueen) | 317 comments the boy got up again,not losing his determination and kept walking


message 43: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments and the three sisters followed him without a word; surprised by his determnaion


message 44: by Sia (new)

Sia (slayqueen) | 317 comments he kept walking.He was not going to let them think that he was a coward.


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments but in his heart he was trying to prove himself that he is something!


message 46: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments one of the triplets knew that he had to prove him self in the trials that were beyond the waterfall and suggested


⊱ Poppy ⊰ (poppyreadsalot) | 484 comments that they should try to hep him, without him knowing!!


message 48: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments and the three girls agreed and set out to do the impossible to help the moody and broody boy


message 49: by Midhat (new)

Midhat | 117 comments At last he reached the waterfall, gushing down relentlessly as it was, beating down at him, the boy tried to push through the impossible wall of white, cascading water..


message 50: by Aeron (new)

Aeron Trahaearn | 529 comments but failed. he turned to the girls for counsel...


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