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message 1: by Lara (new)

Lara Zuberi (larazuberi) | 571 comments Chand lafzon mein aap ki tareef samaayay gee kaisay
Kuch bhee kehna samandar mein qatra ho jaisay
Jin Yateemon Kay sarparast banay aaj tak
Un ki hansi kaanon mein goonjthi ho jaisay

Puri kaainaath Kay liyay tuhfa thay jaisay
Insaan Kay roop mein farishta thay jaisay
Jin buzurgon ka sahaara banay aaj tak
Un ki duaaein do haathon mein simtein gee kaisay

Insaaniat ko is waqar tak ab pohonchaaeingay kaisay
Mulk ko sartaan say shifa thak lay jaaeingay kaisay
Jin begharon ko panaah Dee aaj tak
Un Kay liyay ghar ab banaaeingay kaisay

Huqooqul ibaad ka silsila chalay ga kaisay
Aap Kay baad koi aur Edhi aayay ga kaisay
Naseeb hai hamara Keh aap ki misaal samnay hai aaj tak
Apnay andar ek Edhi magar paida karengay kaisay


message 2: by Thall (new)

Thall (recantrecantrecant) | 599 comments >Apnay andar ek Edhi magar paida karengay kaisay

Nice allusion to Iqbal. I wish I could write stuff too. Everything sounds so awesome in my head (because it doesn't have a voice) but as soon as I put it into words... *pukes*


message 3: by Sara (new)

Sara Saif | 630 comments That's a beautiful tribute.
Go ahead, Genio. Sucking at something is taking a step towards being good at it.


message 4: by Thall (new)

Thall (recantrecantrecant) | 599 comments Actually, I have written something I'm quite proud of. It was a treatise on the similarities between farts and humans. Following the format of Wittgenstein's Tractatus, I named it 'Tractatus Fartaco-Bombacus'. Wanna read?


message 5: by Sara (new)

Sara Saif | 630 comments Yes, please.


message 6: by Thall (new)

Thall (recantrecantrecant) | 599 comments Sara wrote: "Yes, please."

How do I send it to you..hmmm?


message 7: by Sara (new)

Sara Saif | 630 comments Post it here.


message 8: by Thall (new)

Thall (recantrecantrecant) | 599 comments It's too long.


message 9: by Sara (new)

Sara Saif | 630 comments Post it in parts.


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message 11: by Q.M. (new)

Q.M. Sidd (qmsidd) | 35 comments My humble eulogy for the man I once met by chance called

Edhi's Dream- a humble eulogy




message 12: by Lara (new)

Lara Zuberi (larazuberi) | 571 comments Q.M, enjoyed reading Edhis dream, thanks for sharing


message 13: by Q.M. (new)

Q.M. Sidd (qmsidd) | 35 comments Thanks for reading Lara and I am glad you liked it.


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