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message 51: by Juan (new)

Juan Zapata | 66 comments I took a leap of faith hiring Shalini to beta read the second book of my trilogy. My traditionally published novel, Golden Skies, debuts June 12th, and I wanted to find absolute quality. I found a diamond.

Shalini delivers extremely detailed feedback - she responds quickly to author inquiries via email and has no problem answering a writer's endless tirade of questions to be able to fix mistakes (we probably had like 70 emails between the both of us). But what is most striking about Shalini is her willingness to sit down and brainstorm with writers to find solutions to those mistakes.

I feel that Shalini strengthened my book with reinforced concrete. I will definitely be mentioning her in my acknowledgements and hire her for all future projects - her insight is too valuable to ever throw away. This woman is marvelous <3.


message 52: by LRW (new)

LRW (slw3) | 3 comments Great feedback, delivered much faster than expected! Shalini was not only very detailed, but she gave me consistent feedback on my pacing. Ultimately, this led me to the conclusion that I should rethink splitting the story into two books. I truly appreciate the advice.


message 53: by Priya (new)

Priya Guns | 1 comments I was very lucky to find Shalini's Beta Reading services. Shalini is a meticulous and thorough Beta-Reader. Even on her rapid service, she delivered detailed and honest feedback after reading my manuscript three times, in a week! Her live commentary whilst reading alleviated all of my concerns, providing insight into what readers may be speculating. Her notes on each character, and writer's craft, as well as her suggestions, were precisely what I needed to polish my manuscript. I appreciate the time and thought Shalini put into my work, as if it were her own, with absolute honesty and with much consideration. She kept communication with me constantly and was always quick to respond. I felt I could really trust Shalini and her expertise. I would highly recommend Shalini for authors looking for an honest, concise and thorough beta-read. She went above and beyond what I had expected, and her fees are reasonable and well worth it! I will be using her services in the future and am sincerely grateful for the TLC she gave my work. Thank you Shalini! xx


message 54: by Camilla (new)

Camilla Monk (camilla_monk) | 3 comments What a surprise and pleasure! I didn't expect such a detailed report and level of insight. As I told Shalini in an email, this is borderline developmental edits.
Shalini not only shared her impressions throughout the reading, but also did multiple reads to provide an overall analysis of plot and characters arcs, and point out what she did or didn't enjoy.


message 55: by Janelle (new)

Janelle Trees | 18 comments I had a great experience with Shalini as my Beta reader. She is highly intelligent, honest and critical, but also will sincerely express moments when she is emotionally moved or intellectually stimulated by the writing.
Like any first draft, mine had problems. I knew it, but could no longer see the work as a whole. It's a massive project, five years in the writing and 137k words long.
Shalini took it on. Her honest comments helped me to see where the problems lie.
She was my dream beta reader and I am keen to use her again, perhaps for the final copy of this book or for my next book.
My book is very unusual--I know every author thinks that--but it is hard to classify. It's about encountering non-physical beings that wanted to have a voice through my wife. It's metaphysical and supernatural and also a down-to-earth memoir.
Shalini is open-minded enough to take it all in her stride. Her honest response was very valuable to me.


message 56: by Gill (new)

Gill Fernandez | 33 comments Shalini has just completed the beta read on the first book in a series that I am writing. I have nothing but good to say about her work. Thorough and efficient, she provided a full report plus inline notes which were fully justified, explained well and extremely useful. We all know that stage when you really can't see the wood for the trees in your own creation and having an intelligent and thoughtful reader like Shalini is essential. She is brilliant. Thank you, Shalini.


message 57: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments Shalini has done it again! Three times now, three separate novels, and she has helped me polish up each manuscript, pointing out issues with plot or characterization that need improvement, helping me to make each book the best it can be. I highly, highly recommend her services to every author. You can't go wrong with Shalini. She is absolutely amazing! I will continue to hire her as long as she continues to offer beta reading services. I can't say enough good things about her. Thank you, Shalini! You rock, girl!


message 58: by Tim (new)

Tim Patch | 5 comments Great. Third party testimonials are always very helpful for someone like me struggling to obtain reliable beta readers. I'll contact Shalini for help with mine. Thanks for sharing Leslie!!


message 59: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments Tim, you can't go wrong with Shalini. She's not only honest and reliable, she's also fast and very affordable! I spent years trying to find a reliable beta reader, and was so happy when I finally found Shalini. She's definitely one of a kind. Good luck!


message 60: by Kat (new)

Kat Devitt (kat_devitt_author) | 103 comments Shalini is an excellent beta reader. She took the time to read a short story of mine, and she gave a quick turnaround. I had her feedback within an afternoon, which is amazing! I've never had a beta reader get back to me so quickly, even for a short story. It usually takes at least a few days to a few months. On top of this, Shalini's attention to detail in her feedback were really helpful. I learned what the issue with my manuscript was, and I will be working on fixing it within the next few days. She's excellent! I highly recommend her.


message 61: by Thomas (last edited Sep 12, 2018 02:22AM) (new)

Thomas Zman | 7 comments I cannot imagine completing a manuscript and then not having Shalini read through it for me. I have just had her beta read through my third book now, and it is plainly evident to me that through her critical analysis of my works that she has helped improve my writing multifold. She is so perceptive. From what I can see of her busy life, especially the awesome website she has created, her blogging, book reading, and reviews -- not to mention she is also a doctor -- I find her to be a Superwoman. It has been a Godsend that I, and many others who use her talents, have established a working relationship with such a unique individual. Her honesty, coupled with her talents are what brings to her to the top of Beta Readers. As can be attested by all the positive reviews ahead of mine, she is the best. I can only hope and pray that she will stay in this line of work, helping beginning authors better polish their manuscripts, for truly there must be large publishing firms out there who would pay top dollar for a talent such as hers. I truly believe this woman has only just begun to explore her genius. As stated: "The sky has no limits." Shalini has no bounds! Thank you, Shalini.


message 62: by Leslie (last edited Sep 25, 2018 04:33PM) (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments This is my fourth time using Shalini as a beta reader. Why do I keep coming back to her? Because she is simply AMAZING. I somehow screwed this manuscript up worse than the others, but thankfully, Shalini was there to point out all the problems and even offered possible fixes. Where, oh where would I be without her? Thank you once again, Shalini! Words truly cannot express my heartfelt gratitude for all the time and effort you put into each beta read. You are so awesome, girl! :-)


message 63: by Maksim (new)

Maksim Malik | 4 comments I've hired Shalini once for beta reading and I was simply blown away by the insight and detail she provided. The turnaround time was fast, and she helped me understand not only what needed work in the manuscript but also what parts were good and why. Would I hire her again? Absolutely, no question. Thank you, Shalini!


message 64: by Alicia (new)

Alicia Mayberry-Fitch (goodreadscombj_mcdade) | 2 comments I have used Shalini twice and am amazed at the service she offers. She is exceptionally professional, knowledgeable, and inspirational, providing so many excellent suggestions to improve an MS. I am grateful to Shalini for her generosity and for the value she gives which is exceptional. I can recommend her services wholeheartedly.


message 65: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments And I'm back for more! After the fifth book, Shalini has definitely become a valuable member of my writing team. I can't imagine publishing any more books without her feedback. I keep telling her she needs to write a novel herself, because it would be simply amazing.

Thank you for going another round with me, Shalini! I look forward to working with you on the next one. :-)


message 66: by Natalie (new)

Natalie (redsharpie) | 2 comments Shalini is so incredibly thorough and detailed in her feedback that it may as well have been its own novel. She was very fast, considering my book was 144k words and she went through it at least three times before giving her feedback. She's also more than willing to be incredibly positive about things that she loved, which is nice, as I have also had experiences with overly-negative betas that leave a bad taste in your mouth. I liked how she gave an overview, but also gave a lot of her thoughts as she was reading. I will definitely be making use of her on future books.


message 67: by Kat (new)

Kat Devitt (kat_devitt_author) | 103 comments Shalini is the second set of eyes my stories often needs. She's read four manuscripts for me, all short stories, and she solidifies my respect for her beta reading skills each time. She's wonderful at identifying character flaws, symbolism, and grammar. Even more so, she can point out plot flaws. I'll definitely have Shalini read my next manuscript.


message 68: by Victoria (new)

Victoria Bell (victoria_bell) | 1 comments I *cannot believe* how lucky I was to find Shalini (thanks to this group!). She read my 86K-word novel super fast but so, so thoroughly -- she understood exactly what I was trying to do with it, and her feedback is going to help me strengthen it so much. She is a generous, deep reader, who gave me tons of enthusiastic, kind and supportive notes. She zeroed in on the things I was worried about in the manuscript and found other things besides (in the best way), not hesitating to tell me where she got lost or what wasn't working for her, while also telling me exactly what is working. I will definitely be working with Shalini again!


message 69: by Marshaun (new)

Marshaun Olaniyan | 1 comments Shalini was an awesome Beta Reader. She went over and beyond the call of duty! She was extremely fast with an edited document and a finished manuscript. This is my first book and I'm so glad she was recommended to me! She even made the book sound like me without all the repeated phrases. I would highly recommend her and her editing skills. She responded quickly whenever I had a question or concern! If you want your manuscript looked over and meticulously edited, choose Shalini. I'm currently working on my 2nd book and I will use Shalini and her professionalism again for sure.


message 70: by Ed (new)

Ed Zukusky | 18 comments Looking for a a beta reader for an adventure novel Part 1, 60K words.


message 71: by Nila (new)

Nila (digitalcreativepages) (digitalcreativepages) | 126 comments Ed wrote: "Looking for a a beta reader for an adventure novel Part 1, 60K words."

Ed, please mail me on [email protected]
Shalini


message 72: by Griselda (new)

Griselda Puspa (griseldapuspa) | 6 comments I used Shalini's Alpha Reading service because I read the comments on this Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ post. Shalini gave an excellent service that gave both the comprehensive report and detailed comments. If you want to know what works in your manuscript what doesn't, then ask Shalini's service. I highly recommend Shalini.


message 73: by Josh (new)

Josh Torres | 21 comments Shalini's feedback was concise and on point. From her report, I understood what sort of big-picture changes I needed to make to my novel and from her side comments on the novel, I was able to see what worked and what didn't on a smaller scope. She is very helpful and was willing to go over how I could fix my novel and give feedback and suggestions based on my ideas. I would recommend the service to anyone. It's clear Shalini knows what she's talking about when it comes to character development, pacing, and plot as she's read so many books, so her feedback is the best it can be.


message 74: by [deleted user] (new)

Shalini is an amazing beta reader. She's very thorough with both the strengths and weaknesses of your manuscript. She's precise and thoughtful and always delivers earlier than expected. She's very quick to answer my follow-up questions (does she ever sleep? :)) and gives me great suggestions on how to fix the problems. I would highly recommend her service to anyone.


message 75: by Raul (new)

Raul Quintana (raulqs) | 5 comments Shalini was a joy to work with. She edited my manuscript and fleshed out some scenes. Very responsive and professional; I'd recommend her without hesitation.


message 76: by [deleted user] (new)

I hire Shalini again to read some problematic scenes she pointed out. Once again, she gave amazingly detailed critique and nuanced feedback. And she was super fast!!! Will hire her again for my next book.


message 77: by Gen (new)

Gen Ramsay | 3 comments Shalini just did an amazing beta- read of my manuscript. Her feedback was concise and positive. I still have a lot of work to do however I know where I need to go thanks to Shalini!


message 78: by Carissa (new)

Carissa Atrianty | 19 comments My best friend, who's also an aspiring writer, recommended me to Shalini. I can't stress enough just how fantastic Shalini is as beta reader! I'm satisfied with the results she delivered. She truly invested herself into my manuscript, having felt the characters inside and out: such traits you don't often find in every beta reader. She's also very generous in giving feedback and pointed out what works, what doesn't work, and how to improve the manuscript to make it in a way more presentable for publication. I love the quick turnover rate, which is helpful especially for writers who are on deadlines. I'd highly recommend Shalini and I always look forward to working with her again.


message 79: by J.D. (new)

J.D. Beedle | 5 comments Shalini is an excellent beta reader, perfect in fact. She is conscientious, thorough and honest. I felt Shalini really wanted to help make my work the best it could be. Thank you so much for all your feedback! J


message 80: by Hakun (new)

Hakun (hakun_k) | 1 comments Shalini was a proper god-send.

After anguishing over a series of books that went well beyond my initial estimate she pointed out swathes of prose that had little or no bearing on the plot; she exposed actors that were either unnecessary or too stereotypical and all wrapped up in a very detailed summary.


message 81: by Cassie (new)

Cassie W | 6 comments If you need feedback FAST, Shalini is the way to go. Before I knew it, she had my entire book done in a matter of days. The only thing holding her back was me! Don't believe me? Try emailing her. She got back to me within an hour of initially contacting her, waaaay faster than any other beta-reader I contacted.

And the quality of her input was very extensive. She not only goes through the manuscript making in-line comments and fixing obvious grammatical errors, her critique report goes over all the major points in your book, such as initial hook, the MC and other characters, plot, pace, world-building, dialogue and much, much more!

She went above and beyond all my expectations and I will undeniably be working with her for future projects.


message 82: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments I made an amazing discovery when I found Shalini here on Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ about a year and a half ago. She has helped me polish each of my manuscripts, pointing out any issues with plot, characterization, dialogue or internal monologue...In short, she is by far the best beta reader I have ever worked with. She has also become a dear friend who has greatly enriched my life. I highly recommend her to everyone who has written a book. So before you publish, contact Shalini. She'll help you to make sure your book is the best that it can be. I promise you won't be disappointed!


message 83: by Samscript (new)

Samscript | 3 comments I signed up for Å·±¦ÓéÀÖ to find Beta Readers. I'm very happy that I found this thread full of praise for Shalini's reading service. I have nothing more to add that hasn't been said here already. She's excellent. Very thorough, very fast, very affordable. I don't know of many beta readers who will read your novel multiple times at her price. I was very pleased with the service, and I highly recommend her.


message 84: by Alicia (new)

Alicia Mayberry-Fitch (goodreadscombj_mcdade) | 2 comments When I first contacted Shalini G. I was not sure what to expect. I had paid more to professional editors previously and had not found them very helpful. I was blown away by Shalini’s detailed feedback, in depth analysis and her generous and professional advice.
I find myself, after reviewing my work a dozen or more times, unable to see the wood for the trees. Shalini's detailed and in-depth feedback, allowed me to add depth to my story, and to clarify points that would otherwise have been unclear and confusing to the reader.
I am now working on my second novel and of course asked Shalini to Beta read it for me. Using her feedback, I have improved and added so much to a story I thought was complete.
I am truly grateful to Shalini who provides feedback with such a positive and caring attitude � while not sparing necessary criticism! I would never think of finalising a work without her input.


message 85: by Aya (new)

Aya DGH | 6 comments Highly recommended! Shalini was one of the best editors I've ever hired. She's passionate, precise and did an incredible job editing and proofreading my novel. She spotted many errors and wrong sentence structures other editors didn't notice and I'm forever grateful for her amazing suggestions and helping me polish the novel to perfection. She is very responsive and delivered the manuscript on time as she promised. I'm very happy that I found her and will definitely rehire her again.


message 86: by Gill (new)

Gill Fernandez | 33 comments Very fast, very thorough. A top-notch beta reader. Thanks, Shalini.


message 87: by Isabella (new)

Isabella Modra (isabellamodra) | 5 comments I was thoroughly impressed with Shalini's beta read of my novel. Not only was she extremely quick and updated me on the progress of her reads, she also came back to me with a dozen pages of detailed revision and had carefully placed comments throughout the manuscript to provide immediate feedback on scenes and dialogue. I would definitely recommend Shalini for an affordable beta read if you have a developed manuscript but need an overseeing eye on major plot and subplot questions that may be difficult to see as the author. I will absolutely contact her for further readings.
Thank you Shalini!


message 88: by Ashleigh (new)

Ashleigh | 7 comments Shalini helped a great deal in helping me figure out where my first book needed improving. She is very respectful and clear in her critiques. I'll be sure to use her again with my next draft.


message 89: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments Criticism. Yeah, we all hate it. But what's important is what we DO with it. Hiring an honest, reliable beta reader like Shalini who is not afraid to offer her feedback has helped me tremendously as an author. She points out issues I never noticed, and I take each and every one of her suggestions seriously. Sometimes I might feel hopeless after reading her comments, and think I've made such a mess of the manuscript that I can't possibly fix it. But then my rational brain kicks in and reminds me that ANYTHING is fixable. And after some consideration, I always come up with new ideas to make the book better. I highly recommend Shalini's services to both published authors and aspiring writers. Shalini makes books better!


message 90: by Ezarah (new)

Ezarah | 6 comments Hello, I was wondering if you beta read formatted comic books scripts?


message 91: by Nila (new)

Nila (digitalcreativepages) (digitalcreativepages) | 126 comments Rue wrote: "Hello, I was wondering if you beta read formatted comic books scripts?"

Yes. Could you please mail me [email protected]?


message 92: by Gail (new)

Gail Griffiths | 12 comments Shalini is a true treasure. Her critique was brilliant. I saw my story in a whole new light and rewrote a good portion of it coming out with a story of which I am proud. I will employ her for my next book, without question.


message 93: by Charlotte (new)

Charlotte Phillips | 9 comments Shalini did a great job on the chapters I sent her.

She gave very clear and detailed feedback, both in comments on the text and in a separate document. She also edited a problem section for me, which goes above and beyond the remit of a beta read.

Well worth the money, I will be using her again.


message 94: by Chino (new)

Chino (chinochakanga) | 3 comments As always it was a pleasure to work with Shalini. Her feedback is always thorough and insightful.

I would highly recommend her services.


message 95: by Asiel (new)

Asiel Lavie | 18 comments Whatever I will say about Shalini it will not be enough. I was struggling with my 100k novel because English is my second Language and I needed a lot of help. I was so fortunate to come across her page, and she literally saved my novel. I found Shalini so professional and accurate. Her editing was up and beyond, her ideas were so helpful, and she never hesitated to provide helpful thoughts and suggestions. For beta reading; she provided me with a detailed feedback, in-line comments, pointed out the unclear points, and suggested alternative solutions to improve the prose. Shalini is so friendly, generous and intelligent. She worked with the novel as it was her own, took great care about details, gave much attention to each line and every scene. She is an honest human being, and it was an honor to know her and work with her. I definitely recommend her services and will work with her again. Thank you Shalini.


message 96: by Alex (last edited Feb 05, 2020 11:23AM) (new)

Alex  Jones | 2 comments Shalini did a beta reading for my short story submission and I was just blown away with the level of detail that was put into it. I had some really honest feedback, both positive and negative as well as some really strong pointers that I can work on with making this a really strong piece.

She was so quick with getting the feedback to me and read my short story very quickly and was so responsive. I had thoughts she had when she was reading as well as more thoughts when the story was done. Because of Shalini I know where I was weak on and where I was really strong, and know where I need to work on getting my story up to good quality reading to submit to my competition.

I really look forward to working with Shalini for the second and third draft as needed, as well would love to work with her on future projects. Just the beta reader I have ever worked with hands down.


message 97: by Loren (new)

Loren Teese | 1 comments Shalini has worked on three stories of mine, so far. She is very professional, and takes extreme care to understand your work, and to try to adapt to your style as much as possible.
A very good service that I'll happily continue using in the future.


message 98: by Stjepan (new)

Stjepan Cobets | 12 comments Shalini has done a great job with my new novella and will be confident that our collaboration will continue.


message 99: by Casey (new)

Casey Bering (caseybering) | 3 comments Shalini did a fantastic job beta reading my 87k word novel. I have read and reread her feedback, and I'm making several changes based on her observations. The story is already so much better, and my mind is racing with new ideas.

Her comments were straightforward and easy to understand, and she commented on areas she liked and areas that needed work.

I still have a ways to go, but I just wanted to jump on here and give her a shout out. Shalini has been an enormous help, and I truly appreciate her kindness and thoroughness in her feedback. I'll definitely contact her again in the future when my next story is ready for betas.


message 100: by Leslie (new)

Leslie Georgeson (lesliegeorgeson) | 4 comments I highly recommend Shalini's beta reading services. She is always very thorough and detailed in her feedback. Her rates are very affordable, so even those on limited budgets won't suffer any hardships by spending the little bit she charges for her exceptional work. She is more than worth it! I have lost count of the number of times I have hired her to help polish up my manuscripts, because she is now an integral part of my writing team. Thank you once again, Shalini!


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