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Hello,

I'm seeking professional beta readers for my cozy mystery with paranormal and fantasy elements.

This novel is the first in the series and is currently 91,568 words. This is too high for the genre but I'm having trouble cutting down the word count and would like some beta readers to tell me what works and what doesn't as well as point out any plot holes, or boring parts.

Blurb:

When Clementine (Clem) Cooper’s long lost Aunt Maple is murdered in the quaint New England town of Misty Cove, Clem is called upon to leave her unsatisfying life behind in DC to organize the funeral.

Staying in the house where the murder took place is not for the faint of heart, but Clem isn’t afraid of much. Unfortunately, when the local police captain, and Aunt Maple’s boyfriend, is arrested for her murder, it becomes clear that Aunt Maple’s spirit is not going to sit by and let it happen. But Clem doesn’t need to be haunted by Maple to be convinced. Her intuition, and her investigative skills tell her that the captain is innocent and Clem is the only one who can prove it.

While Clem has never believed in ghosts, it seems that Aunt Maple wasn’t just any middle-aged woman. She was a gypsy, and a sorcerer to boot. As much as Clem refuses to believe in magic, she can’t help feeling that magic is the only way to find Aunt Maple's killer.

Please let me know if you are interested.

Hi Jessica,
I just you a PM.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!

Have a nice evening!
Tina

Hey Jessica! I've sent you a DM :)

Hi Jessica. I am interested. I will send you a PM.
~Ayesha

Hi Jessica! I specialize in fantasy and mystery and am very interested in reading this. I'll send you a PM. :)

Hello! I am interested in beta reading your work.
Here is the link to my Fiverr account, where we can handle the logistics. I look forward to hearing from you!

Hi, Jessica! I can beta read your manuscript as I really enjoy reading fantasy and paranormal books. Fantasy happens to be my favorite genre and from your blurb, I think the plot is very interesting and well thought into, and can already tell it'll be an interesting read. Please click the link below to get a briefing of my work process and what I specifically look out for and take into consideration while beta reading:



I will also write a beta reading report for you that will summarize your book's strengths and weaknesses in various elements like plot, characterization, pacing and flow, spelling and grammar etc.

I hope to help you make your book better than it already is with beta reading. Contact me through the link or through email: [email protected]. thank you!

Hello Jessica! I'd love to work with you and beta read your novel!

What I provide:
- general reactions and impressions
- chapter wise notes and feedback
- notes on pacing and interest level at different points in the book
- an overall analysis based on characters, character relationships, plot, pacing, dialogue and world building, etc. (depending on type of novels)

My feedback is active and as I am reading the book I pose various questions to myself when providing you with these comments such as: Am I invested in the story? Can I predict what will happen next? Is there any character/event which is boring me? and so on.

Let me know if you would like to work with me! You can email me ar [email protected] and we can discuss further details!

Hi! I'd be interested in reading for you. If you'd like to discuss it, please email me at [email protected].

Hi! My name is Aest. I recently finished college doing my English Major. And I'd like to help Beta Reading and Editing your stories.

If you are interested in any of this, please give me a personal message. I have reviewed and a non-disclosure document, so all of your work is kept safe.

You will be given an edited version of your work, as well as a document with the following:
Personal questions (set by you)
The Opening
The Characters
Plot & Confliction
Dialogue
Setting
Pacing
Visual (setting)
The Middle
The End
A character development document
Summary

Email: [email protected]
Instagram: AestDoes <3

Hi Jessica

I provide free beta reads.

Check out The details on my web page:

From there you can email me directly.

Best, Nathan

Hi Jessica,
Are you still looking for betas for this book? I <3 cozies and fantasy/paranormal elements together; additional love of New England, since I grew up there! :)

You can review what I offer here:

All the best!

Beth wrote: "Hi Jessica,
Are you still looking for betas for this book? I <3 cozies and fantasy/paranormal elements together; additional love of New England, since I grew up there! :)

You can review what I of..."

Hi, Beth. I looked through your site, and as a fellow editor and beta reader, i really love the layout of the website. Would you mind telling me the software you used to design your site?

I sent you a direct message I believe!

Ernestine wrote: "Beth wrote: "Hi Jessica,
Are you still looking for betas for this book? I <3 cozies and fantasy/paranormal elements together; additional love of New England, since I grew up there! :)

You can rev..."

Hi there, sorry I am just seeing this. Thanks so much for your compliments about my site design. I used Google sites to create it. It's free and easy to use. All the best!

If you're still looking for beta readers, I'm available!
I particularly enjoy writing notes within the document containing the manuscript in addition to any specific questions/requests you have.
Feel free to contact me at [email protected]

-I look forward to working with you!