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Hi everyone,

I am in later stage drafts of my novel, Digital prison. I am looking for beta readers to assess the first three chapters only.

What I need to get a better understanding on is the following
1. Is the speed of the worldbuilding overwhelming or just right? I have heard mixed feedback depending on the geography of the beta reader and so I would like to invite readers from EUROPE or AMERICA Only
2. How much of a hook is the first three chapters
3. one page of high level feedback

The blurb is here:
*Digital Prison is set in 2084, where the US government is overseen by the Board, a collection of mega-corps who have the final say on every government decision.*

*Our protagonist, Quill Killian has seen his family business confiscated via the Preference Act, a law that allows mega-corps to take ownership of any company that they deem a competitive threat. Now destitute; he has four weeks to escape the government's euthanasia program. Unbeknownst to Quill, millions of entrepreneurs have suffered the same fate.*

Relevant chapters are here


This is 2,500 words only and so I am happy to pay $20 for a 24-hr turnaround to help me answer these questions (4 readers needed)

Hi Jordan,
I am interested in beta reading for you. I can manage the 24-hr turnaround also. My website is and email is [email protected]

Hello! I am interested in beta reading your work.
Here is the link to my Fiverr account, where we can handle the logistics. I look forward to hearing from you!

Hi, Jordan! Here I am again. I can beta read your first three chapters within a day. I think the plot is very interesting and well thought into, and can already tell it'll be an interesting read. Please click the link below to get a briefing of my work process and what I specifically look out for and take into consideration while beta reading:



Though my rates are already stated there, I will make you a custom offer for you specific to your needs: beta reading 2,500 words in a day for $20. I will also write a beta reading report for you that will summarize your book's strengths and weaknesses in various elements like plot, characterization, pacing and flow, spelling and grammar etc.

I hope to help you make your book better than it already is with beta reading. Contact me through the link or through email: [email protected]. thank you!

Hi Jordan! I'm located in the US, and I can definitely manage the 24-hour turnaround -- my email is [email protected], if you'd like to work out logistics. Thanks!

Hi! I know 4 people have volunteered, but if something happens and you need another reader, I'd be happy to do this. My email is [email protected].

Hi! My name is Aest. I recently finished college doing my English Major. And I'd like to help Beta Reading and Editing your stories.

If you are interested in any of this, please give me a personal message. I have reviewed and a non-disclosure document, so all of your work is kept safe.

You will be given an edited version of your work, as well as a document with the following:
Personal questions (set by you)
The Opening
The Characters
Plot & Confliction
Dialogue
Setting
Pacing
Visual (setting)
The Middle
The End
A character development document
Summary

Email: [email protected]
Instagram: AestDoes <3

Is this still open? If so, I'd love to offer my services!

My original post with detailed experience and such is here or at my website, !

In addition to that, I'll mention here that I've lived in America all my life and have obtained a college minor in Anthropology, due to my natural interest in studying and understanding culture. I've also work with many people that were not born in America, and they appreciated my well-rounded understanding of the country to help them navigate it culturally.

Let me know if this is still open and if you'd like me to help you out!