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Hello. I am searching for a few Beta readers for my manuscript. My novel is titled Love By Illusion, as mentioned it is a historical romance.

I have also added a brief synopsis:

A member of the Knights of Atonement, a secret organization designed to abolish cults and root out corruption; Persephone St. James was a master of illusion and ready to retire. After her final, and disastrous assignment, Persephone is forced to accept a mission to the Kingdom of Enfield. A treacherous country; full of luxury, debauchery, and cruelty.

Her mission is to hunt the Typhonic Order, a cult that controls Enfield and participates in ritualistic sacrifice. Under the guise of searching for a husband during the infamous social season, Persephone, along with her team infiltrate Enfield.

If not for the Duke of Percy, Weston Percy, Persephone would have no problem manipulating and seducing the aristocracy. Handsome, charismatic, and possible cult member; Persephone can’t help but find Weston irresistible. A man who threatens Persephone’s illusion, her safety, and her very heart.

As Persephone and her team uncover the secrets of the Typhonic Order, a series of brutal murders begin to plague the city. Is it just a coincidence that all the murder victims resemble her? Persephone will have to risk life, limb, and sanity to uncover the truth. And it may just corrupt her soul.

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Fanna

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Lisa

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Hi, Giovanna. Here is the link to my website:

I am a professional developmental editor. While I specialize in Sci-fi and Fantasy, this book seems similar to works I've examined in the past, and your blurb has captivated me. I am intrigued by the concept of your novel, as well as its capacity for worldbuilding and interesting character relationships.

I would love to complete a beta read to your specifications or provide an Editorial Assessment for your piece. Like all of my developmental editing services, this low-cost option is designed for authors. It examines how your use of characterization, plot, setting, and other literary elements engages the reader and propels the story and theme.

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Hi Giovanna,
I am interested in beta reading for you.
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Ayesha
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Hello, Giovanna!

I'm a passionate beta reader providing my services on Fiverr; while new on there, I hold considerable experience in commenting on manuscripts as a reader. I would love to provide a detailed feedback on your historical romance.

Here's a link to my gig on Fiverr!

For 97K words, my beta read would be extremely affordable at $50 & a five-day turnaround time. Hoping to work with you soon!

Hey there!

I know you’ve had quite a number of replies but if you’re still looking I can get your MS back to you in as little as 7 days.

I want to offer you:
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- Notes on what works and what doesn’t, what is attention grabbing and what need tidying up.
- Assurance that your manuscript will be polished for all agents and publishers

Hello! I am interested in beta reading your work.
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Hey, since you have already got so many replies but you are still looking for a beta reader then I would happily read your work.
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Ayushi

Hello!

I would love to Beta Read your historical fiction work. I’ve been beta reading for a few years now, and I have a history degree. My favourite genre is historical fiction!! You can find out more info on my services here:




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Hello Gigi,

Sounds like a great read.
If you still need beta readers, I am available.

I am also an audiobook narrator and bring a unique perspective to the read.
Contact me anytime.
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