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I'm looking for a beta reader for the third book in my mysteries series, which is written under my other pen name (Claire Kells). Feel free to search for my books on ŷ������ - it's the National Parks Mystery series.

I just completed Book #3 and would love an avid beta reader to give me some feedback before I turn it in. I am looking for a fairly quick turnaround since my deadline is 12/1.

The short blurb - Two Investigative Services Branch agents take on the baffling case of a murdered man and his vengeful wife at a new hike-in lodge in Pinnacles National Park.

Thank you!

Hi Sawyer! My turnaround time is 1��3 weeks but if it's a priority, I can have this back to you in under a week. I'm a certified editor who has been beta reading for over 7 years. My beta reads always include in-line comments and a detailed summary of my thoughts.

You can check out a handful of testimonials on my website:

If you think we’d be a good fit, email me at [email protected] and we can discuss further details :)

Cheers!

Hello Sawyer!

I can have feedback prepared and sent in less than a week. I pride myself on always giving honest, constructive, and in-depth feedback on every manuscript I read. From the blurb you've given, your book sounds very interesting and I'm keen to see how the story develops and all the mystery is unfolded.

Here's a snapshot of what I do when I beta-read a manuscript.
1. Spotting plot holes and inconsistencies.
2. Gauging the readability of the manuscript from the viewpoint of an everyday reader.
3. Critique of word choice, use of literary devices, and voice and tone consistency.
4. Assessment of world-building, pacing, flow, sequence, and character development.
5. Flagging stilted/unnatural dialogue.
6. Determining its suitability for the supplied genre and providing useful comp titles.

The deliverables include a well-annotated manuscript; a report detailing my impressions and suggestions; and a filled questionnaire with more than 50 questions on every aspect of your manuscript. Here's a link to some testimonials from authors I have worked with:

Please message me here (my account is open) if you feel I'll be a good fit for your book, or send an email to [email protected] and I'll get back to you promptly. 

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Sawyer wrote: "I'm looking for a beta reader for the third book in my mysteries series, which is written under my other pen name (Claire Kells). Feel free to search for my books on ŷ������ - it's the National P..."

Hello Sawyer,
Good morning.
I would like to read your story
Kindly go through the terms on my website
So are the testimonials.
If you find I can be helpful for your book and you would like to have discussions post receiving the feedback to make the book stronger, kindly mail me at [email protected] or via the form on the page.
Keep writing.
Be safe always
Shalini
Digital Reads Media

Hi Sawyer,
I am interested in beta reading for you. I can do a two week turn-around depending on your word count.
My website, has more information about my services, examples of my commenting style, and testimonials. There are also more testimonials from past clients on my ŷ������ thread: /topic/show/...


Thanks,
Ayesha
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Hello Sawyer,
I will like to beta read your manuscript. It sounds thrilling, just the kind of book I love to read. I have a turn around time of 10 days for a full novel. Feel free to message me here
Thanks,
Helen

Hello Sawyer,

The blurb sounds intriguing; just right up my alley!
As a murder mystery, it's very likely to be a page-turner. According I can finish reading the manuscript and provide comprehensive feedback before November. My reader reports contain chapter-by-chapter analysis detaining my thoughts and actionable suggestions on every aspect of a manuscript.
You can Contact me on my Fiverr.



I set up this account recently, though
I have been beta reading for a long time.
And I will be honored to work with Claire Kells as an adventure-mystery nut!


Best regards,
Jakia

Hi Sawyer Hall! Your blurb sounds interesting to me.

I provide top to bottom feedback report on all aspects of your story.
Overall View - First Impression - Plot Holes - Pacing - Writing Style - Flow - Plot etc

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✔️Answering your unlimited concerns and questions.

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Hello Sawyer,

I love a good mystery.

[email protected]

Your timeline is fine. I am available to start right away.

My fee is based on word count. Send a message and lets begin.

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Hi!

Feel free to take a look at my fiverr. I can definitely meet your turnaround time.

What you'll get:

HONEST but kind In-line comments.

Real-time reactions

Corrected dialogue tags/action beats

Corrected grammar/syntax (if I spot them)

Suggestions for improvement

5+ page reader report.

Someone willing to answer your questions and brainstorm long after you've accepted my order.

Hello!
I would be able to beta read your work in the time frame you're looking for!
Here is the link to my Fiverr account. I look forward to hearing from you!

Hi Sawyer!

I am an experienced writer, who enjoys beta reading and editing in her free time. I specialize in reading speculative fiction, including thrillers & mysteries and would love to read and provide feedback on your mystery novel.

Hope to work together!


Feel free to get in contact with me in ŷ������ messages, or on Fiverr.

Check out my Fiverr profile/reviews:
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Take care!
Katelyn

Hi Sawyer, I would love to beta read your novel.
References and sample work are available upon request.
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Here are my rates and what I promise. 

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I am reading. (a reader report)
I will focus on:
- the characters (are they likable, enjoyable, did you manage your goal of making them awful ...)

- the story (pacing, great moments, twists, dead ends, dragging parts...)

- is your world believable? Is it detailed enough, or too detailed. 

-repetitions, beautifully written parts, quotes I loved.

$10 for 10000 words (2 days delivery)
$40 for 50000 words (7 days delivery)
$80 for a 100000 words (12 days delivery)

My email is [email protected]

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Sawyer wrote: "I'm looking for a beta reader for the third book in my mysteries series, which is written under my other pen name (Claire Kells). Feel free to search for my books on ŷ������ - it's the National P..."
Hello, Sawyer! My turnaround is usually a week, sometimes less, depending on word count. I give a detailed beta report as well as proofread as I go. Feel free to email me at [email protected]

I would love to offer a free service for the first 5k words, and if you like my work, would be offering a paid service for a full book ranging from $20-100.(email: [email protected])

Hey Sawyer!

My name is Ackash and I am a university student. I also write short stories, books and poems. Some of my work can be viewed here:

I have about 3 or so years of experiece beta reading, editing and proofreading for budding authors on ŷ������. I also have been taught English by my mother (who is an English lecturer) and am an avid reader (since the tender age of 2!). Needless to say, I am experienced in reading fiction in many of it's forms.

I can give you assistance in terms of the plot, grammar or whatever you need checking. As of now, I am on semester break so my commission box is open until October! Hence, if you wish to ask for my services (generally, I charge about $1 for the first chapter and so forth), please do DM me on ŷ������ for more information. I hope to provide the best possible service!

Hello! I would love to work with you; feel free to reach out on fiverr!