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I started on the This Body's Not Big Enough for Both of Us today. Really liking the self-aware [if that's the right way to describe it] writing style. That intro alone is fabulous!
"Elmore Leonard said it’s bad style to open a novel with the weather. Well, fuck him—it was a blazing red-hot August morning." Classic.

Th language is great, style, sarcasm, loved it. The plot is interesting and engaging.



I'm also really enjoying the metafictional conceits. What's especially interesting about them is that Cantero is not doing so in a heavy-handed way by addressing the reader directly, as is typical. He is having another off-screen fictional character address the fictional author, or having a character from the story address the author at other times. Afterwards the story will usually be rewritten slightly and then pick up from where it left off before the interruption. I don't think I've ever seen this before. No, that's not true, come to think of it. Carrie Laben used similar technique in A Hawk in the Woods, a group read of ours from a few years back. I didn't consider her effort to be entirely successful because it so confused the plot. I wonder if Cantero will pull it off in better style.
Cantero's version comes across as kind of light-hearted jazzing around. It can be hard to signal the parameters for who is addressing who and what the limitations are, all while telling a story with its own interest going, but his technique is intriguing and working so far.


Books mentioned in this topic
Over the Edge: Stories to Freeze Your Blood (other topics)A Hawk in the Woods (other topics)
This Body's Not Big Enough for Both of Us (other topics)
Koko (other topics)
He wrote two novels in Catalan, then two novels in English. This, his fifth novel, was written in Catalan and has since been translated. By whom, I don't know. I imagine the overwhelming majority of us will be reading the English translation. Purchasing the book brand new costs $15.25 (hardback) or $16.00 (paperback). You can Kindle it for $6.99 and I found some used copies that include tax and delivery (via post) for less than $5 total.
The book is on the surface a parody of the film noir genre. We have private eyes in an office and a client wanting to hire them. But there is more going on, of course; otherwise, it wouldn't belong to the weird genre. Please feel free to start reading and commenting to this topic right away. Spoilers behind tags, as always. I have a hardcover of Cantero's book on order, which for me is fine because I am almost halfway through Koko by Peter Straub right now anyway, a slow but good read, and I want to finish it before starting this one. I will join in the Cantero fun after a week or so when my copy arrives.
Merry New Year all!