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Hello Beta Readers, I am seeking developmental feedback on an 80K MS from those experienced in the THRILLER/SUSPENSE genre. Your feedback on the Character Building, Plot, Pacing, etc would be invaluable. Optionally, spot any obvious Plot Holes as you go along. I don't need line editing or proofreading (spelling, grammar, etc.) I just want help with the big-picture story.

The book:
FORGOTTEN SELVES is a thriller noir set in postmodern San Francisco. The story follows Grayson, a disgraced former investigative reporter, who becomes entangled in a dark conspiracy involving a memory-capture device called ClairIQ. Grayson's journey takes him through a web of danger, addiction, and moral dilemmas as he tries to thwart the nefarious plans of the device's creator.

If you are interested in taking on this role as a beta reader, please email me at CHRIS(dot)A(dot)TUBBS(at)GMAIL(dot)COM with your brief credentials (do you read or write a lot of suspense? have testimonials or examples of your work?) along with your rates, availability, and timeline.

If we agree to work together, will provide you with the manuscript for your review.

Thank you for considering my request, and I look forward to hearing from you!

Chris Aaron

Hi Chris, I just sent you an email.

Hey Chris,

Sending you an email.

Thanks,

Lisa

Hi Chris,

Would love to help out on your project - here's my website and you can reach me on [email protected]

Thanks!

email sent.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Anna
ARWheelerVoice

Hey Chris! I just sent an email. I look forward to your response!

Hello Chris,

Have you found your Beta reader already?

sent an email!

here is my fiverr, i’d love to beta read for you! Feel free to reach out for any present or future projects!