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Five (Elemental Enmity #1)
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Rayla has a few big surprises in store when she sneaks off to the college of HER choice. She doesn't know she has been protected all this time from what she really is and who will come to get her. What is she? I'm not telling you that. But there's more to it than meets the eye.
It starts out kind of slow, but as soon as she heads off to college, you are reeled in with wanting to know who the (bad guys...maybe good guys...who can tell when they are that gorgeous...and who cares, right?) are!
Zach...Ahhhh!
Luke...Hmmm!
Finn...so sweet!
Jett...I'm not sure.
I forgot the other one's name, but he's hot and full of sarcasm like the rest.
I loved the set up with finding out the whole plot. That was my favorite tie in.
The book does have a few quirks here and there. It jumps from scene to scene three times as in they were sitting in the diner but the next paragraph they are standing in her dorm door. So it needs a few transition sentences.
One part has Zach shirtless, then in a sweater that he never put on. (He could have just gone shirtless the whole book. Rayla wouldn't have minded.
The only element I didn't like is Luke. I can't say much, but I didn't like the tie in reference to Jacob in Twilight and her falling for a second dude. Not sure where that is headed, but I can't wait to read book to and find out.
Overall, it was a new storyline. Not sure about the God and chruch references yet and how they will "save them all" but will not pass judgement until I see the end result.
It starts out kind of slow, but as soon as she heads off to college, you are reeled in with wanting to know who the (bad guys...maybe good guys...who can tell when they are that gorgeous...and who cares, right?) are!
Zach...Ahhhh!
Luke...Hmmm!
Finn...so sweet!
Jett...I'm not sure.
I forgot the other one's name, but he's hot and full of sarcasm like the rest.
I loved the set up with finding out the whole plot. That was my favorite tie in.
The book does have a few quirks here and there. It jumps from scene to scene three times as in they were sitting in the diner but the next paragraph they are standing in her dorm door. So it needs a few transition sentences.
One part has Zach shirtless, then in a sweater that he never put on. (He could have just gone shirtless the whole book. Rayla wouldn't have minded.
The only element I didn't like is Luke. I can't say much, but I didn't like the tie in reference to Jacob in Twilight and her falling for a second dude. Not sure where that is headed, but I can't wait to read book to and find out.
Overall, it was a new storyline. Not sure about the God and chruch references yet and how they will "save them all" but will not pass judgement until I see the end result.
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March 19, 2013
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June 5, 2013
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June 5, 2013
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June 5, 2013
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June 9, 2013
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Quirks of being a writer or movie director, however you see it.
Anyway, worth reading.