I saw this cool game on and thought I'd play along since I'm a huge offender of overusing the word LOOK
Do a search of your current wip to find the word look, then post a few paragraphs around that word.
Oy, I use that word too much!
here's my excerpt:
I peeled out of my sopping clothes, then wrapped myself in the blanket. It was silver. And crinkly. Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Dig offered his coat, but since he's sized like a twig, I couldn't even fit both arms in it and still drive. Which I had to do because Dig is a horror show of driving, putting everyone's life at risk. Trust me on that point. Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â So I ended up wearing the jacket like a cape with it flapping out behind me as we sped down the trail back home. Did I mention I was draped in a silver blanket? Wearing my helmet with star stickers? And that's where we met Grandpa Morris coming toward us on his quad. Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Curses. I'm so busted. "Grandpa, this isn't how it looks ... " I trailed off when I saw his face. Anyone want to play, leave me a comment if you are going to post so I can read yours!
Published on August 23, 2012 13:19