The premise was interesting but the writing style did not connect with me. 2/3rd of the story is a conversation between three people which had no flowThe premise was interesting but the writing style did not connect with me. 2/3rd of the story is a conversation between three people which had no flow and an absence of descriptive language. It possibly makes sense since we are thrown into the story at the flip of a switch, together with the baby. The reason I gave the story 2 stars is because I did like the more descriptive part at the end.
Also, this annoyed me to no end: (view spoiler)[ Dr. Ying: I shook my head and told your mother, “You won’t be giving birth to a child; instead, you’ll be giving birth to”�
Fetus: —“to yourself.� That’s what you said.
and shortly after: Dr. Ying: But you won’t be. From what we know now, you are pregnant not with yourself but a child, a child with all your memories. (hide spoiler)]...more
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