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PAID services requested > Fantasy Beta Reader Needed in May (26k total wordcount)

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message 1: by Laura (new)

Laura Anne | 25 comments Looking for beta reader feedback on a 13k novelette. I plan to publish a novelette duo (each between 12-15k) this summer (Recasting Fate & Djinn Swarm) and am looking for feedback on the second story (Djinn Swarm). However, because they are in a volume, I need the beta to be willing to read the first story (13,160 words), although comments/reactions on the first story are not expected.

The stories are set in my existing series' world (an alternative modern Earth with magic), but introduce new characters & a new culture. The first story is a "prequel" that takes place around 1910, and the second story (that I need feedback on) takes place in 2023.

I am looking for a beta read primarily because I pulled this 2nd story out of my forthcoming novel and I'm not sure how well it does on its own (even paired with the first story).

This is not action/adventure fantasy -- it's more of a character-study with some political drama, spells, and a faerie game thrown in. While this is not a romance per se, the story is all about a character who is grappling with the discovery that he's head-over-heels. So if you love romantic fantasy or Goethe's Sorrows of Young Werther, this might be a good fit.

Please send me a message with your offer if you have time/interest. Also, if you have any sample feedback you've sent another writer, would love to see it.

Thanks!
Laura


message 2: by Khalishah (new)

Khalishah | 6 comments Hi, are you still looking for betas to read your story? I have experience providing feedback to writers and I would be happy to work with you. What prices are you negotiating?

Please let me know what we can do. Thank you!
Khalishah


message 3: by Preye (new)

Preye (preyereads) | 131 comments Hello!

This sounds exciting, and I'm more than happy to read the first book in the series. I can start immediately, I have a quick turnaround time, and I'll love to send some samples your way so that you can get a feel for my type of feedback. Here's a link to testimonials from other authors I have been privileged to work with in the past:

Please message me here if you feel I'll be a good fit or if you'd like some more information. Alternatively, please email me at [email protected] and I'll get back to you immediately with a condensed service sheet, samples, and other information.

I look forward to hearing from you!

� Preye


message 4: by Helen (new)

Helen Odey | 121 comments Hi Laura,
I will love to beta read your story if you would have me. If you're interested in my services contact me at or send me a message at [email protected] to get a sample of my report.
Thanks,
Helen.


message 5: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer | 19 comments Hi Laura,

I would also be interested in beta reading your stories. If you are still looking, or are interested in multiple perspectives, please get in touch.

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Best of luck!
Jennifer


message 6: by Liz (new)

Liz (joycecarolnopes) | 158 comments Hey Laura,

I'd love to beta for you. I tried to message you on here but I think you may have that feature turned off. If interested, please PM me here on goodreads or send me an email at: [email protected].

Have a good one,

Lisa


message 7: by Anna (new)

Anna (andzela) | 73 comments Hi Laura, I would love to read your novelette.

Here are my rates and what I promise. 

I will read your story and send you very detailed feedback, often times specifying what are my reflections as I am reading. (a reader report)
I will focus on:
- the characters (are they likable, enjoyable, did you manage your goal of making them awful ...)

- the story (pacing, great moments, twists, dead ends, dragging parts...)

- is your world believable? Is it detailed enough, or too detailed. 

-repetitions, beautifully written parts, quotes I loved.

$20 for 10000 words (2 days delivery)
$60 for 50000 words (7 days delivery)
$100 for a 100000 words (12 days delivery)

My email is [email protected]
References and sample work are available upon request.
Martin Brisebois [email protected]
Tammy Euliano [email protected]
Jaclyn Warren [email protected]
Maggie Shaw [email protected]
Guy Boutin [email protected]

𲵲,
Anna


message 8: by Ashley (new)

Ashley Peltier | 16 comments I would be interested in reading both book if you are still searching for a beta reader! Here is the link to my fiverr account if want more information about me!




message 9: by Emmanuel (new)

Emmanuel Odey | 100 comments Hello Laura,
I'm reaching out to offer my beta reading services for your manuscript. As an avid reader and writer myself, I understand the importance of feedback in the writing process, and I'd be honored to help you improve your work. Contact me at if you are interested!
Regards,
Emmanuel


message 10: by Emma (new)

Emma (readwithemmalou) | 10 comments Hi Laura! If you're still looking for beta readers, I'm definitely interested. I specialize in fantasy, and I particularly love character-focused stories, so your novelettes sound right up my alley.

My rate is $50 for anything under 50K words, and you can find out more about my beta reading service, and find client testimonials, on my website: .

Feel free to reach out through the website or email me at [email protected] if you're interested in working together. And best of luck with publishing!


message 11: by Sara (new)

Sara Davil (httpswwwinstagramcomsaradevil290) | 11 comments Hi there!
Are you still looking for beta readers? Well I love book focused on character development and fantasy is like
my most favourite genre. I would love to read your book . I only charge $10 for a word count of upto 15,000 [Currently, I'm offering 50% for first-time orders till 20th of June]. My package includes; inline-comment, sample edit and reader's report. I have worked in fantasy genre a month before (cultivation fantasy).

Testimonials:
Paul Brackley: "Great detailed feedback and delivered earlier than expected! Thank you!"
Patricia Angeles: "Nazra is an excellent beta reader! If I ever write another novel, I will be sure to contact her again for a thorough beta read."
Charles Pendelton: "Nazra combed through each chapter, providing insightful comments on my writing abilities and the story's progression. Highly recommended!"

Contact me on or [email protected].
Looking forwards to hearing from you soon!
Have a nice day!


message 12: by elle ☕️ (new)

elle ☕️ | 83 comments Hello! I would love to work with you on any current or future projects in which you need. I read all genres and try to price reasonably. Feel free to reach out on my fiverr.




message 13: by Jo (new)

Jo Laura wrote: "Looking for beta reader feedback on a 13k novelette. I plan to publish a novelette duo (each between 12-15k) this summer (Recasting Fate & Djinn Swarm) and am looking for feedback on the second sto..."

Hi Laura, I'd love to help on the project if you're still looking for readers :) here's my website - - and you can reach me on [email protected] :)

Thanks!


message 14: by Melinda (new)

Melinda  Taylor (mtaylor67) | 92 comments Hi, I am interested in beta reading your book. It sounds like an amazing story. I am trying to get back into beta reading after a hiatus and this would be a wonderful start. I have beta reading experience with a variety of genres and would love to find out if we are a good fit. I have worked with authors on ŷ, Amazon, and Upwork. I am excited to get started since I love to read and review books. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you all the best in your book's success whether you choose me to work with or not.


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