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Notes:
(1) "Abstinence" is the new common room password. Sneaky, having students recite it repeatedly.
(2) Harry: "Hermione, can’t you [make up with Ron]?"
Hermione: "No, I can’t... So don’t even ask."
- Can't or won't?
(3) "The contents proved difficult to empty into the Pensieve, as though they had congealed slightly; did memories go bad?"
- Eh, only the regrettable ones.
— Jul 13, 2020 12:30AM

Notes:
(1) "Abstinence" is the new common room password. Sneaky, having students recite it repeatedly.
(2) Harry: "Hermione, can’t you [make up with Ron]?"
Hermione: "No, I can’t... So don’t even ask."
- Can't or won't?
(3) "The contents proved difficult to empty into the Pensieve, as though they had congealed slightly; did memories go bad?"
- Eh, only the regrettable ones.
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Notes:
(1) '"Snape!" ejaculated Slughorn, who looked the most shaken, pale
and sweating. "Snape! I taught him! I thought I knew him!"'
- I sincerely hope that "ejaculated" means something different in British English.
(2) Fleur snatches ointment from Molly and takes over dabbing Bill. Ah, the symbolic passing of the ointment.
(3) Six down, one to go. I'll see you next book!
— Aug 02, 2020 12:30AM

Notes:
(1) '"Snape!" ejaculated Slughorn, who looked the most shaken, pale
and sweating. "Snape! I taught him! I thought I knew him!"'
- I sincerely hope that "ejaculated" means something different in British English.
(2) Fleur snatches ointment from Molly and takes over dabbing Bill. Ah, the symbolic passing of the ointment.
(3) Six down, one to go. I'll see you next book!

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Kicking another wizard's wand must be akin to spitting in their face. At least Snape didn't snap Harry's in half.
(2) Gee, I haven't heard of the Hand of Glory since Book Two. That's a deep call back.
(3) Fleur: "You thought I would not weesh to marry him? ... What do I care how he looks? I am good-looking enough for both of us, I theenk!
- Haha! Nice one, Fleur.
— Aug 01, 2020 12:15AM

Notes:
(1) Kicking another wizard's wand must be akin to spitting in their face. At least Snape didn't snap Harry's in half.
(2) Gee, I haven't heard of the Hand of Glory since Book Two. That's a deep call back.
(3) Fleur: "You thought I would not weesh to marry him? ... What do I care how he looks? I am good-looking enough for both of us, I theenk!
- Haha! Nice one, Fleur.

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) On one hand, Harry should be less repetitive with spells. Petrificus Totalus over and over gets boring. On the other hand, if it works, why change?
(2) '"DON’T �" screamed Snape, and his face was suddenly demented, inhuman ... "CALL ME COWARD!"'
- A regular Marty McFly right there: "Nobody. Calls me. Chicken!"
(3) "I, the Half-Blood Prince!"
- Like "I, Claudius"?
— Jul 31, 2020 12:20AM

Notes:
(1) On one hand, Harry should be less repetitive with spells. Petrificus Totalus over and over gets boring. On the other hand, if it works, why change?
(2) '"DON’T �" screamed Snape, and his face was suddenly demented, inhuman ... "CALL ME COWARD!"'
- A regular Marty McFly right there: "Nobody. Calls me. Chicken!"
(3) "I, the Half-Blood Prince!"
- Like "I, Claudius"?

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Amycus calls Dumbledore "Dumby." I imagine a green stick of plasticine with a horse named Pokey.
(2) Fenrir: “I wouldn’t want to miss a trip to Hogwarts ... Not when there are throats to be ripped out... Delicious, delicious.�
- Can werewolves be cannibals? Or does it only count in human form?
(3) "Severus... please."
- Ah... reminds me of many a chatroom debate.
— Jul 30, 2020 12:10AM

Notes:
(1) Amycus calls Dumbledore "Dumby." I imagine a green stick of plasticine with a horse named Pokey.
(2) Fenrir: “I wouldn’t want to miss a trip to Hogwarts ... Not when there are throats to be ripped out... Delicious, delicious.�
- Can werewolves be cannibals? Or does it only count in human form?
(3) "Severus... please."
- Ah... reminds me of many a chatroom debate.

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Malfoy: "He’s a double agent, you stupid old man, he isn’t working for you."
Dumbledore: "We must agree to differ on that, Draco. It so happens that I trust Professor Snape."
- I use "agree to disagree" a lot too.
(2) Malfoy: "I got the idea... from the Mudblood Granger."
Dumbledore: "Please do not use that offensive word in front of me."
- Total boss to the end.
— Jul 29, 2020 12:30AM

Notes:
(1) Malfoy: "He’s a double agent, you stupid old man, he isn’t working for you."
Dumbledore: "We must agree to differ on that, Draco. It so happens that I trust Professor Snape."
- I use "agree to disagree" a lot too.
(2) Malfoy: "I got the idea... from the Mudblood Granger."
Dumbledore: "Please do not use that offensive word in front of me."
- Total boss to the end.

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Draco disarms Dumbledore... the significance of which is yet to be known. I love how Rowling seeds plot points in deep cuts.
(2) Dumbledore: "Killing is not nearly as easy as the innocent believe... So tell me, while we wait for your friends... how did you smuggle them in here?"
- The old "I'm going to die anyway, so tell me your plan" trick! Bond would be proud.
— Jul 28, 2020 12:30AM

Notes:
(1) Draco disarms Dumbledore... the significance of which is yet to be known. I love how Rowling seeds plot points in deep cuts.
(2) Dumbledore: "Killing is not nearly as easy as the innocent believe... So tell me, while we wait for your friends... how did you smuggle them in here?"
- The old "I'm going to die anyway, so tell me your plan" trick! Bond would be proud.

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Harry needs blood to open the archway. Luckily, he was already cut whilst fighting Inferi. Even zombies have a silver lining.
(2) '"It’s going to be all right, sir," Harry said over and over again ... "Don’t worry..."
"I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you."'
- Hits me right in the feels.
— Jul 27, 2020 12:20AM

Notes:
(1) Harry needs blood to open the archway. Luckily, he was already cut whilst fighting Inferi. Even zombies have a silver lining.
(2) '"It’s going to be all right, sir," Harry said over and over again ... "Don’t worry..."
"I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you."'
- Hits me right in the feels.

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) How is Harry shocked that blood magic is a thing? Voldemort was revived by his blood!
(2) Dumbldore: "You are underage and unqualified. Voldemort would never have expected a sixteen-year-old to reach this place: I think it unlikely that your powers will register compared to mine."
- So... Harry should be glad the alarm can't detect his negligible amount of magic.
— Jul 26, 2020 12:20AM

Notes:
(1) How is Harry shocked that blood magic is a thing? Voldemort was revived by his blood!
(2) Dumbldore: "You are underage and unqualified. Voldemort would never have expected a sixteen-year-old to reach this place: I think it unlikely that your powers will register compared to mine."
- So... Harry should be glad the alarm can't detect his negligible amount of magic.

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Notes:
(1) Perhaps Harry's grown too used to magic. He's fine charging headlong into danger, but a short swim in cold water totally freaks him out. Who is he? Film-Ron?
(2) "Harry had long since learned that bangs and smoke were more often the marks of ineptitude than expertise."
- I wonder if he's referring to Seamus, who's gimmick is he often accidentally blows things up?
— Jul 25, 2020 12:20AM

Notes:
(1) Perhaps Harry's grown too used to magic. He's fine charging headlong into danger, but a short swim in cold water totally freaks him out. Who is he? Film-Ron?
(2) "Harry had long since learned that bangs and smoke were more often the marks of ineptitude than expertise."
- I wonder if he's referring to Seamus, who's gimmick is he often accidentally blows things up?

Jayson
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Notes:
(1) Ginny: "All Romilda Vane does is ask me if it’s true you’ve got a hippogriff tattooed across your chest ... I told her it’s a Hungarian Horntail ... Much more macho."
- Harry's already kinda got a lightning bolt tattoo, and on his face too! I'd guess that's be even more macho.
(2) "Rage and resentment fought shock and excitement."
- Fight it! Angst was so Book 5.
— Jul 24, 2020 12:10AM

Notes:
(1) Ginny: "All Romilda Vane does is ask me if it’s true you’ve got a hippogriff tattooed across your chest ... I told her it’s a Hungarian Horntail ... Much more macho."
- Harry's already kinda got a lightning bolt tattoo, and on his face too! I'd guess that's be even more macho.
(2) "Rage and resentment fought shock and excitement."
- Fight it! Angst was so Book 5.
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Possibly there's something to that. Ironically this one mentioned was the freshest memories that Dumbledore showed Harry.
Alexandra Elend Wolf wrote: "And how do they know the memory isn't bias? Not a lie like the first version they got, but bias. Humans remember stuff based on what impacted us most, our mood and perspective so a memory isn't necessarily true or false."
I agree. Though it seems in the series, as with portraits being accurate representations of personalities, that memories are records of fact unless they're tampered with. There would be no point in following a trail of memories toward solving a mystery if misremembering, forgetting, and bias had to be taken in account in every instance.

Possibly there's something to that. Ironically this one mentioned was the freshest memor..."
Exactly. It wouldn't work in Rowling's world and, after all, they are kids books that aren't supposed to be so deeply considered. That being said, I would have appreciated more consistency and complexity in some of the plots. Like the memories here explained and the time travel that she uses.


That makes no sense? Because if the person doesn't remember what happened exactly where would teh pensive put that memory from? And why wouldn't it do the same with a memory where the person wanted to lie about it?

I assume Slughorn tampered with the memory after pulling it out of his brain.

I think that would be beneficial too. Though, look too deeply at certain aspects of the magical world and you might get hung up on the imperfections. Not everything looks better in HD, so to speak, and I suppose many things might seem less magical if subjected to greater scrutiny. Magic by definition defies logic, and while well-considered magical systems are great, they're never going to be perfect, in which case it might benefit the story to just gloss over minor flaws. With that said, I do agree with you that there is room in Harry Potter for greater complexity.


Here's how I logic it all out. I can accept that memories, in their pure form, can be accurate records of fact, in the same way that things that happen around us actually happen as facts, It's the human process of making sense of everything that applies bias and misremembering and etc. Once the memory is removed and separated from the human element, it's once again an accurate record of fact. Sort of like cleaning a window with Windex will remove the human element that dirtied it.

I guess I would consider memories like files stored away in a filing cabinet. People, being imperfect, may misread them, forget where they put them, or may not have the capacity to interpret them correctly. But the memory itself, once removed from human fallacy, is just as good as it was when it was stored.

Dumbledore said that Slughorn did try to obliterate the memory, but that the real memory is still there beneath the alterations. So, in my file analogy, it'd be like redacting information on a photocopy, and giving it to Dumbledore, where the original still exists unaltered within Slughorn.

Ultimately, there's a lot of good faith built up with the series, and I don't think people mind too much letting things like that slide.

Here's how I logic it all out. I can accept that memories, in their pure form, ..."
I think that's what it's supposed to be like. I just wonder how far one can wander in the memory. A few feet? A few miles?

Well, I'd assume it would have to be within visual and auditory range, regardless of whether the person in question was actively watching or listening. I'd think of it like a tape recorder. You'd need to be relatively close to a sound to record it onto a cassette, even with the best microphones.

Dumbledore said that Slughorn did try to obliterate the memory, but that the real memory is still ther..."
That's a great way to see it. I suppose it could work. If you purposefully concentrate that file can be altered and impossible to clean-up, kind of like a redacted file, and you would have to go to the person for them to provide the un-redacted file.
Not everything looks better in HD, so to speak, and I suppose many things might seem less magical if subjected to greater scrutiny. Magic by definition defies logic, and while well-considered magical systems are great, they're never going to be perfect, in which case it might benefit the story to just gloss over minor flaws.
Yeah, you're right. Magic it's not supposed to be logical or believable but consistent on itself. It's just sometimes it's hard to ignore those details. At least the whole time-travel thing needs to be somewhat finessed for me in anything I read.

I think the whole time travel thing was one of the big mistakes of the series. There's a lot of alternative creative ways to save the day in that book, and time travel just opened up a can of worms that's been left lingering ever since. It's the blame for The Cursed Child being as ridiculous as it was.

Oh my God, don't get me started in the Curse Child. People say it works a lot better in the play but the whole plot is just... *sighs* Maybe if it hadn't been so rushed it would have been at least a bit better but it was just such a mess of a story.
Time travel is a real can of worms that most of the time is better left alone. Unless you want to expend a lot of time figuring it out and going over it because otherwise is better left alone.

My opinion about time travel is that unless a book's specifically about time travel, it shouldn't be introduced as an element of the story. If it's just a plot device, then there's no real room to lay out and expound on the mechanics of it in any satisfactory way.
Having said that, The Cursed Child was more or less a time travel book, but it was one based on time travel in Prisoner of Azkaban. which was simply a plot device there. The Cursed Child didn't clarify or expand on anything, it just muddied the waters and confused things from earlier.

A sound idea indeed. Also, if you don't use the time travel ever again it really just makes the solution too convinient.
And how do they know the memory isn't bias? Not a lie like the first version they got, but bias. Humans remember stuff based on what impacted us most, our mood and perspective so a memory isn't necessarily true or false.